Hidan no Aria - Character Creation Thread

[Saint X]

Originally Posted by YoakeNoHikari

Spoiler for Volume 7:

Reki is no longer in contact with Ririirokane, yet she hears it as a voice in her head, giving her orders, manifested as "the wind". Whether this is the case with all Irokane is unconfirmed.

I meant addiction / withdrawal - must have some brainfart that managed me to type in a completely different word.

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Her name is taken from the Ar Tonelico series, where girls have magic in their voices. I was thinking of Fragarach, but it's background it too dry.

Right...Fragarach's abilities vary depending on the story, from making those who have its blade pointed at their neck tell the truth, to being unstoppable by any armor, or even being able to control the wind.
As for owners, Lugh and Cú Chulainn are the ones I know of.

Well, there's always the sword of light, Claíomh Solais, which belonged to Nuadha the Silver Arm

Also, given this last episode, which revealed Jeanne D'Arc...makes one think what happened to Gille de Rais in that universe
Did he know? Or was he fooled like everyone else? Eventually driven to madness and committing all those crimes

Cue a descendant who came to know of Jeanne's descendant and that wants to exact revenge for what her ancestor did to his

*runs away*

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Terminator98

For some reason, Minato's acting SO MUCH like Jason Statham in some of his movies... I don't know, I just have that image of that mean bad mofo out there kicking people's sorry butts... But yes, this is a younger version with more mercy. He's also smarter.

But the Persona Minato's gonna come and get you if he knows what you made him become...

Jason Statham? Try Jeffrey Donovan

Spoiler for Burn Notice:

Anyway, the first part was just an act to scare the prisoners, the second is how he normally behaves. In the first place, the beauty of Persona's Minato's personality is that you can make it how ever you want him to be; if you're referring to the manga, he was too passive in that one for my taste- He doesn't even hug the girl!!

[Terminator98]

@Chaos: Was talking more about the manga, but yeah, the game's pretty open. I would've sworn though that out of all personalities, the one you gave him would've been one of the lasts I've lumped on him.

@Yoake: Where was the Rekki's irokane located already? Was it her earphones (I know that she listens to the sound of the wind in there... but didn't catch if it was the irokane or not).

Also, is it possible to have two Wind type irokanes? I have come up with a plot where the Kusanagi Sword is a wind type irokane that has been preserved for years... and my sword maiden actually has a fragment of it forged into her katana to improve her wind powers.

AND NOW... Main Male OC Over Haul OC Finished!

Allow me to present (re-present) you:

Yamato Kyousuke


Comments and appreciations are always welcomed.


Next coming up is my main Female OC, overhauled as well, Yamato V.H. Alexandra.
P.S: Plus a preview of the last OC that I'll be adding probably...

Adolph Whitman

[Icy.Tear]

Spoiler for Reki:Irokane:

She does not carry it on her body. She came into contact with Irokane at her birthplace, and she separated from it after it awakened.

There are no element-Irokane, merely colour Irokane.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Well my Arisato is relatively more talkative, but he's still the type of character that doesn't try too hard, everything comes naturally to him. Thats not to say nothing fazes him, just very little; he's the type to improvise.

If you recall his profile, he has the Eagle Vision from the bloodline of the Assassin's Creed.

[Terminator98]

Jah, I just read it again finishing the overhaul for my 1st OC... gonna redo my main girl now after I sleep. All the ideas are already in place... I just need the energy to weave everything together.

Comments and appreciations are welcome as always.

I decided to lump a bunch of the OCs here as fellow classmates of my own OCs. They'll all be in Tokyo Butei High Class B for 2nd Years (apparently, Kinji's in class A, so we'll at least already explain "WTH DUN I SEE YOUR OC IN THE CLASS?).

I'm already imagining Kyousuke having a flirt fest with Fiorenza... Minato and Gabriel discussing about the darkness of dagula... Asuka (gun-ho explosive user) arguing with Raimei what's the best way to blow up a tank, Yui and Aila discussing swordplay... but most of all, Kyouko wanting to arrest Kyousuke due to his Casanova attitude.

Times of fun ahead.


@Yoake: Interesting, might use this as some plot point for my own two irokane users... Glad to hear that Irokanes are based on color and not on elements... so the plan for the Kusanagi is a go I guess. (P.S; You're really doing your work just like that girl in your avatar does it... fine RL representation of her indeed. Can you make me an ice-cream plz? )

[MeisterBabylon]

^^ all while Chrysanthe is trying to figure out whether to hand her Class Rep position to either Athra or Gertrude.

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Gram belongs to Siegfried, from the Norse myth where he slew the dragon Fafnir with it.

Out of all European myths, I hated Siegfried the most because he is way too overpowered, hard to tell a story like that. Even Beowulf got toasted by a dragon.

Oops.

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Galahad's sword had no name, but legends stated that it was a "destiny finder" - Galahad's pure heart enabled him to find the holy grail, which Aerondight's owner could only get a glimpse of.

Which reminds me, Arthur was no saint either. And even

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

More details of the Arthurian swords can be found here. I am renaming the sword "Grace" - you can take Aerondight and the runes.

Thanks, that saved me a bunch of headaches.

While the character is fine, the sword won't appear till later, until Adara's arc. That would be end of season 1 (episode 22-26):

Spoiler for From my notes:

X-Butei/Athra arc
Yanko + Manami + Gertrude + Kanagi + Haruna band filler
Chrysanthe arc
Elizabeth Adseard filler (+ No Hokago Kohi! appearance)
Gertrude arc
Isara filler
Adara arc (climax)

That's about... 6 novels worth of fics to write.

And then with the antagonists established this season, I can run for another 2 seasons, making it a total of 18 novels in all...

[Chaos2Frozen]

Look, if you just need a Dragon-Slaying Sword; simply roll with ASCALON and be done with it

It was created on the idea of calculating out what precisely would be needed to slay the 50 foot long "Dragon of St. George" from the legend using only that one weapon. It is 3.5 metres long and weighs 200kg. It also possesses the following traits, though only one can be used at a time:


An axe-like thick blade to cleave at the sinews of the evil dragon.
A razor-like thin blade to cut away at the fat of the evil dragon.
A churchkey spike in the blade to tear off the scales of the evil dragon.
A fretsaw wire nestled on the blade to disembowel the evil dragon.
A giant saw on the back to severe the bones of the evil dragon.
A hook spike attached to the pommel to pull out the fangs of the evil dragon.
A close-combat spike near the grip to gouge out the nerves of the evil dragon.


...And a bunch of other hidden weapons within. Perfect for a crazy person like you

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Look, if you just need a Dragon-Slaying Sword; simply roll with ASCALON and be done with it

It was created on the idea of calculating out what precisely would be needed to slay the 50 foot long "Dragon of St. George" from the legend using only that one weapon. It is 3.5 metres long and weighs 200kg. It also possesses the following traits, though only one can be used at a time:


An axe-like thick blade to cleave at the sinews of the evil dragon.
A razor-like thin blade to cut away at the fat of the evil dragon.
A churchkey spike in the blade to tear off the scales of the evil dragon.
A fretsaw wire nestled on the blade to disembowel the evil dragon.
A giant saw on the back to severe the bones of the evil dragon.
A hook spike attached to the pommel to pull out the fangs of the evil dragon.
A close-combat spike near the grip to gouge out the nerves of the evil dragon.


...And a bunch of other hidden weapons within. Perfect for a crazy person like you

Thankfully, no, the League of Extraordinary Butei don't need to slay a dragon. Perhaps not until the Reign of Fire arc in the London Underground of Aoike no Athra S2.

However, a tool of all trades fits the jack of all trades... Hmm...

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Thankfully, no, the League of Extraordinary Butei don't need to slay a dragon. Perhaps not until the Reign of Fire arc in the London Underground of Aoike no Athra S2.

However, a tool of all trades fits the jack of all trades... Hmm...

Iyaa～ In the first place, do you even have a character that can singlehandedly wield a 3.5m long, 200kg chunk of steel

[SaintessHeart]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Right...Fragarach's abilities vary depending on the story, from making those who have its blade pointed at their neck tell the truth, to being unstoppable by any armor, or even being able to control the wind.
As for owners, Lugh and Cú Chulainn are the ones I know of.

Well, there's always the sword of light, Claíomh Solais, which belonged to Nuadha the Silver Arm

I wanted a sword whose previous wielder had an association with being effeminate, or seems that the sword is not meant to be his. Claiomh Solais is about Neptune and his little land wife, didn't quite like god tales.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

Which reminds me, Arthur was no saint either. And even

Well, according to a few texts I have read on MoB and MoF, Arthur came from a dysfunctional family. His mum married twice, and it is said that his half-sister Morgan Lefay is a bro-con - she likes Arthur and is jealous of Guinevere.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

However, a tool of all trades fits the jack of all trades... Hmm...

Think about a gigantic SOG multitool with a hammerspace function.

Thanks, that saved me a bunch of headaches.

No problem. You're welcome to add-in my characters to your fics because I'll be pushing 12 hour shifts on a daily basis in my new FT job.

[MeisterBabylon]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Iyaa～ In the first place, do you even have a character that can singlehandedly wield a 3.5m long, 200kg chunk of steel

A charm to match the might of a dragon.

Not to worry; the Ascalon carries itself!

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Well, according to a few texts I have read on MoB and MoF, Arthur came from a dysfunctional family. His mum married twice, and it is said that his half-sister Morgan Lefay is a bro-con - she likes Arthur and is jealous of Guinevere.

I know I just watched Denpa, but why did I just imagine Meme le Fay?! She's supposed to be my anti-heroine + arc-villainess!!

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Think about a gigantic SOG multitool with a hammerspace function.

I already have...

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

No problem. You're welcome to add-in my characters to your fics because I'll be pushing 12 hour shifts on a daily basis in my new FT job.

This too.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by SaintessHeart

Think about a gigantic SOG multitool with a hammerspace function.

Lol, what hammerspace functions ? Everything is all there.

Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon

However, a tool of all trades fits the jack of all trades... Hmm...

Symbolically, you can use it to do other things like for example

Sinews = Strength, therefore used to weaken the Enemy's stamina
Scales = Armor, therefore used to break the enemy's defense
Fangs = Weapon, therefore used to disarm your enemy
Nerves = Control, therefore used to paralyze the enemy

[Sheba]

Support Character - The Cute and Shy Nerd

Spoiler for portrait:

Pic by Tony Taka
Photoshop modification by LoweGear

Name: Nene Otonashi
(theorical) VA: Kaori Shimizu (Hiyori Tamura's voice range in Lucky Star)
Nationality: Japanese
Age: 16
Class 2nd year
Butei Rank: A (close to S)
Ancestor: Nobody famous.
Department: Repier
Bloodline Ability: None
Weapon: Walter PPK, Benchmade Model 860 Bedlam folding knife.
Friends: Yves Brunet, Kaede Fujita, Yasmin Saif, Sanae Noriaki and Naoko Kazami (those two only as online acquaintances).

Character Quotes:

"Wah! What! What are you going to do with the rope you asked for? Are you going to do xxxx or xxxx to me?!"



Background:

Spoiler:

Other than the fact she have been raised in a very strict family of christian japanese people, living in Okinawa a hundred of meters away from the NCIS Okinawa offices, Nene is what anyone would call a shy nerd girl with an above average intellect. Since a young age, she have developed for a love for science and crime dramas. Needless to say that watching procedural and forensic shows such as Unsolved Mysteries, CSI, Bones and NCIS have nurtured this love. This have come to the point she have wanted to be a part of this kind of fun, using science to help to solve crimes or disasters. As a result, she have focused on her studies for that goal. However, her parents have had other plans for her and the future have been looking dire for her, until her aunt from Tokyo have come to visit them and seen what Nene could do. She have then proposed to take Nene with her to Tokyo, under the condition that she yields good results in her new school, this school being Tokyo High Butei. Transfered there, she have shown to be quite competent and the teams who have worked with her have been very satisfied, but they also noted that Nene is lacking in the relational side of the deal. This is something she is trying to fix.

Personality:

Spoiler:

Nene is a shy girl as a result of her very strict upbringing, not helped by the fact that she have an older brother who is very successful in life in the financial sector and have been able to rebound from the recent financial worldwide crisis. As a result, she have made very few friends in real life and instead resorted to online social networks, such as 2ch, Facebook or chat programs to befriend some more. This, combined with the finding of her father's porn collection at a young age, have caused her to construct a more liberated and unrestrained online persona who would indulge in various fetishes. Yes, under that shy girl shell lies someone very knowledgeable in questionable areas. One can witness the results of this cocktail, shy girl with weak real life social skills added up with perverse online persona, her tendency to take the most harmless sentences out of context and spin it in the more questionable ways. This is one of the few things that people working with her have noted and hoped that she would correct. Kinji who have meet her during his first year have been annoyed, Jin and Preston are those who have found it rather amusing. Her aunt, more liberal than Nene's parents, have been working to make her niece a little more confident, notably getting her joining the tennis and swimming clubs of Butei High, and working in a maid cafe, the same as Kirsty and Jin, during the Friday and Saturday evenings.

Ability:
None

Style:
She is another of those non-combatant Butei who regularly takes classes in Assault to better themselves. During those occasions, she is one of those who get scolded.

Trivia

Spoiler:

*She have a tendency to blush a lot, this being enough to have annoyed Kinji.

*She draws pretty well and have published a few doujinshi under a pen name, she also have been using her aunt as her representative since she would not dare to meet the few fans she have had.

*Resulting of her drawing skills, she have written and drawn lemon short stories involving various Butei students, hetero, homo, bi, couple, threesome or foursome, anything and anyone goes as long as she have witnessed a particular event involving the parties. Victims of her fantasies so far are Kinji x Aria x Shirayuki, Jim x Kirsty, Amélie x Sanae, Fiorenza x Rachel Lee, Kyouko x Riko, Jin x Erin, Svetlana x Tomomi and many more. Needless to day that those featured in Nene's fics would be in one hell of a day if they ever read them. Nene naturally does her best to hide those.

*She is a repeat victim of Fio's "skinship".

*Under the influence of her aunt, she have dated Ryoushi. Let's say that the date have been quite uneventful because of their respective personalities.

*From what her aunt have told, it is dangerous to give Nene alcohol. This lift her inhibitions and can lead to rather traumatizing experiences.

Author's note

Nene is the last of the nerd girls trio (Sanae, Naoko and herself), if Sanae is the caustic one, Naoko the cool and sociable one, Nene is the shy of the trio.
Her creation have been rather chaotic in my mind. Firstly, I intended her to be a descendant of the father of forensic sciences, Vidocq, but I refrained because, first, I estimated there are enough people with famous ancestors in my roster as it is, lastly because I feared that whoever, either someone else or I, eventually tries to write her may not succeed into making her look the part. Then, I have wanted to base a character on Abby Sciuto, only to realize that Abby is too cool so I may fail short. Also, I have needed to find the right pic that would fit, those in danbooru under the "original + labcoat" search have yielded results that have gone like this "Too big. Too small. Too modest. Too slutty. OOoooooh that one is just right." Yes, this picture by Tony Taka have been the one I have chosen. Then, the need to give a personality to the character. This one is as weird one, I have very loosely based it on the online persona of someone named wanwan combined with the ability of some people to take anything out of context and misinterpret the most mundane line as something totally questionable, "that" kind of questionable. So here we have this bespetacled shrinking violet with a closet pervert quirk.

Last one in line

Yasmin


Characters so far

Kirsten Vikernes (Assault)

Preston Lee Whitworth (Medica)

Amelie D'Artagnan (Inquista)

Fiorenza Diotallevi (Logi)

Sanae Noriaki (Amdo)

Jin Yamazaki (SSR)

Svetlana Dragovic (Snipe)

Naoko Kazami (Connect)

Erin Dee Kirishima (Informa)

Kentaro Murasame (Amdo)

Yves Brunet (Assault)

Kaede Fujita (Inquesta)

[MeisterBabylon]

I did consider that, but the implications of...

A churchkey spike in the blade to tear off the scales of the evil dragon.

...then becomes a new way to destroy Butei 'Walking Churches'?

For the character I'm cannibalizing it for, he's a handyman and an hardcore improviser. With the Ascalon instead of being sequestered but modified and upgraded over the ages, the modern Buteirized weapon is obscenely-large multi-part blade. As it grew larger and heavier, a charm was added to the blade to offset the mass. As it became stained with more dragon blood, a shroud was included to hide from the nose of the evil dragon, rendering it invisible and intangible when unused. Each component is pulled out of the blade with a sorting chant, inspired by the list above.

I think the core of Aria's world is fapping to weaponry both guns and ancient. Guess I'll specialize in ancient relics while the experts handle the guns. So I'll arm Chrysanthe with a Papyrus Sceptor of Isis, and Manami with... flintlock pistols and pirate-style sabres? Handcannon?

I need a better idea here...

[Wild Goose]

I find it amusing - sorta - that you've forgotten about Rachel and Michelle; I think the only other person who's made note of them has been Sheba.

[kct]

There's Yukio the ABJ hoon too.

[Wild Goose]

Oops. I'd forgotten about him too.

If Jon doesn't want or need to drive, he might just get Derek to ferry everybody around. Though given that Jon's vehicle of choice is a 1985 Toyota Land Cruiser BJ60, due to having grown up in that particular vehicle, and having found that it's quite useful for transporting a fully armed squad of Butei in SWAT gear...

[Terminator98]

Wait a second... I thought that I had scoured the entire thread for every single OC... my eyes are tired... Let me go get em.