2013-04-11, 15:14 | Link #922 |
Awe of She
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Orlando
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Che, the Fan Fiction part of the old Claymore thread is locked up... >< Ah well, I'll post it up here the. A revision of 'All Work and No Play,' from...several years ago that I did. I'm actually revisiting my old fanfiction now. Be grateful - Homecoming is on the list for me to finish. Now I just need to find that darn Muse...
All Work and No Play? Spoiler for Part 1:
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2013-04-11, 15:21 | Link #924 |
Awe of She
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Orlando
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Spoiler for Part 3:
Sorry that it's broken up like this but the extended part at the end was almost the same length as some of my earlier drafts of this story so... ^^ Anyway, if you're up to it, read and make little comments. Still deciding if I want to just replace the current one sitting up on FFNET or make a new story for this one altogether... Help me decide - it's what you guys are around for anyway.
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2013-04-12, 19:06 | Link #925 | |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
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Normally a yoma would just eat their family but Clare's older brother turned to a yoma rapes her instead. Messed her in the head making her mute. Clare would've been one of many orphan girls taken by the Organization but along the way a captive of yoma abused by them. Clare wants to comfort Teressa as likely she sees she is as lonely as herself. Clare snaps when Teressa is about to let herself be raped by a bandit as the rules say no harming humans. On another note I think the reason Teressa is always smiling hence her nickname but because much like people having a nervous laugh it is how she copes with the terrible things that happens in front of her. Clare's well being becomes her berserk button. Teressa likely also saw herself in Clare. Besides the motherly instincts she is having for her. Rubel and a yoma thinks Clare taking care of Raki probably means she had a younger brother. Not exactly as Clare had an older brother. She likely sees her brother in Raki before he turned yoma. But whatever sibling feeling she has for Raki get more complicated that given she kissed him goodbye she also has a romantic attraction toward him. On Raki's relationships besides Clare there is Priscilla who even saved him when she didn't need him anymore. As shown with Duff and Riful Awakened Beings can still have romantic emotions. Then there is the trainees that see him as an older brother or knight that protected them. |
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2013-04-29, 22:44 | Link #932 |
Hiding Under Your Bed
Join Date: May 2008
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I'm not even going to pretend to understand the MiB conversation, though strangely enough, the translation throughout the issue didn't seem like it was made by a five-year old.
All I'll say is Yagi seems to be trying to find ways to continuously power up and ramp up the action, and as any shounen author realizes eventually, at some point you can't sustain that. Granted, at only one chapter/month, there's possibly years left to the manga, but I feel like we're likely in the ending chapters of the story at this point, even if it may take years for this battle to play out on page.
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2013-05-07, 18:12 | Link #937 |
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Under the 7 seas
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Nooooooppppe for the next 2 years it will be about Galatea wheree she will be reunighted with Irena at her time in need. As we where never shown if she died by the hands of the ex current gen 10. There Irena would then show use the Trrueee power of the quick sword and comment on how Clare quick sword has grow in strength. Sounds good to me. We also will learn more about the org and there doings in the past. But for the most shocking part will be Isley revelied to be ALLIVEE :O
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2013-05-08, 01:20 | Link #939 | |
Snobby Gentleman
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Monterrey, México
Age: 43
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There's no freaking way that everything's going to get resolved in the next five chapters to come; Claymore will continue. If Yagi keeps things going around circles, then I find the idea of the story coming to a third act not unfathomable but a probability to materialize. The first act refers to the pre-timeskip period that covers: Chapters 1 - 64. The second act refers from the timeskip to the current arc: Chapters 65 - 138 and more to come. |
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