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Mikke · 2010-05-27, 17:58

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Originally Posted by niwre-san

i kinda rush it a bit, but whatever.

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are you done making all the claymores? or are you just doing the most prominent characters?

the awakened beings can wait if the have to

Shiek927 · 2010-05-27, 17:58

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Originally Posted by niwre-san

i kinda rush it a bit, but whatever.

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Mmm... I don't know....it kind of shows that you rushed it. Her hair looks so plain and kind of boring :/.

Her face looks nice though; she's got that mischievious look on her face which I like, like you know she's up to something naughty

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niwre-san · 2010-05-27, 18:19

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Originally Posted by Mikke

are you done making all the claymores? or are you just doing the most prominent characters?

the awakened beings can wait if the have to

nah, i just do the characters that i feel like making. i guess im just lazy right now.

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Mmm... I don't know....it kind of shows that you rushed it. Her hair looks so plain and kind of boring :/.

Her face looks nice though; she's got that mischievious look on her face which I like, like you know she's up to something naughty .

yeah. might just either redo it or add more detail.

Ryus · 2010-05-27, 18:23

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Originally Posted by niwre-san

i kinda rush it a bit, but whatever.

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I guess you didn't see our debate on the statistics page about Riful intelligence or just perhaps disagreed with it.

Oh well, it was a fun debate...

Shiek is right the hair really needs to be finished. It's loli of the wests major feature.

I don't really disagree with any stat... her abilities are based on her blades. Which don't have a measurable category here (except maybe speed).

Can only imagine Priscilla's card; Yoki:EX SPD:SSS+ STR:SSS HRD:S+ INT:SS ... Oh wait Yagi already wrote it

I'd bet the Destroyers is... YOKI:EX SPD:E STR:EX HRD:SSS+ INT:C

FormerAbyssalone · 2010-05-27, 18:56

Yeah, all of her stats are pretty much right.

Same here finish her hair it is her most destinguishing feature.

I luv all ur Claymore cards.

Shiek927 · 2010-05-27, 19:02

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Can only imagine Priscilla's card; Yoki:EX SPD:SSS+ STR:SSS HRD:S+ INT:SS ... Oh wait Yagi already wrote it I'd bet the Destroyers is... YOKI:EX SPD:E STR:EX HRD:SSS+ INT:C

Pretty good, Raciella sounds just about right; maybe he should do a card for her too

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loivissa · 2010-05-27, 21:44

Nice new pictures, I like the style of the pixiv artist! Very nice color choices. I'll make more indepth comments about everyones' new pictures in a bit, I have to eat dinner in about 5 minutes.

Anyways, I whipped up the third portrait of Flora to accompany Rigardo and Clare. This is about 2 hours of work in openCanvas 4.06. I also finished the Clare picture and Rigardo picture, so after I tidy Flora up, I'll submit the three in a panel like I did before.

Special thanks to Ryus for offering me constructive criticism on Clare!

I always imagined Flora to be warm like the sun, so I drew her with a warm scheme and a soft smile. The colors aren't completely to my liking though, no doubt I'll be doing some tweaking. Suggestions?

FormerAbyssalone · 2010-05-27, 22:22

That is only 2 hours of work!!!!!!!! Holy S*** Its...its... fanstastic!!!!

Flora is beautiful in this artwork!!!

10/10 stars.

SpiritOfGray · 2010-05-27, 22:27

I too am a fan of those claymore cards.

@loivissa- I think the flora pic has the best pose. Great work, just like the others. Only one thing I notice that is awkward is the left eye (her left). It may be that the eyelashes are a bit big...compared to the other side at least...idk, I'm bad at finding small details in artwork..

loivissa · 2010-05-27, 22:33

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Originally Posted by FormerAbyssalone

That is only 2 hours of work!!!!!!!! Holy S*** Its...its... fanstastic!!!!

Flora is beautiful in this artwork!!!

10/10 stars.

Aw thanks! Usually my work doesn't turn out so well, but today seemed to be quite magical. Ironic too, because I've been feeling really depressed lately, yet I drew something so sunny.

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Originally Posted by SpiritOfGray

I too am a fan of those claymore cards.

@loivissa- I think the flora pic has the best pose. Great work, just like the others. Only one thing I notice that is awkward is the left eye (her left). It may be the the eyelashes are a bit big...compared to the other side at least...idk, I'm bad at finding small details in artwork..

I like the pose too. Since posting this, I've already fixed the detail issues in her face, including her eyelashes. My painting style is super messy, so I always have some clarity issues. Hopefully you guys will find her more beautiful since I've smoothed out her face.

*back to finishing Flora*

FormerAbyssalone · 2010-05-27, 22:41

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Originally Posted by loivissa

Aw thanks! Usually my work doesn't turn out so well, but today seemed to be quite magical. Ironic too, because I've been feeling really depressed lately, yet I drew something so sunny.

I like the pose too. Since posting this, I've already fixed the detail issues in her face, including her eyelashes. My painting style is super messy, so I always have some clarity issues. Hopefully you guys will find her more beautiful since I've smoothed out her face.

*back to finishing Flora*

Artists usally will produce their best works when in emotional(srry for spelling)

state of mind.

Artists are more inspired that way.

But if u think positive u'll pep u agian

loivissa · 2010-05-28, 01:26

Put everything together.

Rigardo, Clare, Flora.
If you have openCanvas 4.06, you can watch how I painted them by downloading from here: http://akanei-rin.deviantart.com/#/d2qkp8k

Shiroth · 2010-05-28, 03:35

Will go ahead and say that your Flora is easily my favorite of the three, though all three are masterpieces in their own right. Outstanding job loivissa.

Mikke · 2010-05-28, 05:11

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Originally Posted by loivissa

Put everything together.

Rigardo, Clare, Flora.
If you have openCanvas 4.06, you can watch how I painted them by downloading from here: http://akanei-rin.deviantart.com/#/d2qkp8k

Incredible work as allways loivi... I can't concieve how you mix true colors so well and shade at the same time without doing too many run overs... plus the details are ecsquisite!

One thing I gotta say that doesn't look right imo (Yes, since everybody turned into "arte critiques extraordinaires" in their own spare time, I thought maybe..)
Clare's hair looks a bit like a travelling monk who ran away from the barber mid work.. XD the top of her head is just begging to be shaved, lol.. JK

loivissa · 2010-05-28, 05:48

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Originally Posted by Shiroth

Will go ahead and say that your Flora is easily my favorite of the three, though all three are masterpieces in their own right. Outstanding job loivissa.

Wow thanks a lot.

Flora is my favorite too, her painting seemed to just draw itself.

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Originally Posted by Mikke

Incredible work as allways loivi... I can't concieve how you mix true colors so well and shade at the same time without doing too many run overs... plus the details are ecsquisite!

Aw thanks a bunch Mikke, it means a lot coming from you! It was very fun painting them.

Trust me, my stuff hardly ever comes out this way haha. I usually have to fight it.

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Originally Posted by Mikke

One thing I gotta say that doesn't look right imo (Yes, since everybody turned into "arte critiques extraordinaires" in their own spare time, I thought maybe..)
Clare's hair looks a bit like a travelling monk who ran away from the barber mid work.. XD the top of her head is just begging to be shaved, lol.. JK

Thanks for the critique, really excellent pointers. I meant to go back and make Clare's hair more jaggedy now that you mention it. Hopefully this one is better:

Mikke · 2010-05-28, 05:53

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Originally Posted by loivissa

Hopefully this one is better:

Oh yeah..

Oh btw, I can't play the events for some reason... it says they are locked -_-

loivissa · 2010-05-28, 06:35

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Originally Posted by Mikke

Oh yeah..

Oh btw, I can't play the events for some reason... it says they are locked -_-

Oh no. Did you make sure to extract them from the ZIP file first?
If it doesn't work then I'll have to reupload them, but that will have to wait until tomorrow after I get some sleep.

Mikke · 2010-05-28, 06:43

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Originally Posted by loivissa

Oh no. Did you make sure to extract them from the ZIP file first?
If it doesn't work then I'll have to reupload them, but that will have to wait until tomorrow after I get some sleep.

Ok n/m.. got it

Oh wow, you don't draw using contours.. a true painter

I never figured out how to do it with blotching

haha..! with the flora pic you did it the other way around XD

u use different techniques.. awesome

Ryuken · 2010-05-28, 10:27

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Originally Posted by loivissa

@loivissa, I think this is your best work yet. Love it to the bone.

Ryus · 2010-05-28, 10:43

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Originally Posted by loivissa

Oh no. Did you make sure to extract them from the ZIP file first?
If it doesn't work then I'll have to reupload them, but that will have to wait until tomorrow after I get some sleep.

I did the same stupid thing however when I extracted the files and then opened them my trial version of opencanvas crashed...

Edit: After some time it loads a blank image that says unlocked... however I can see the image in a preview when I attempt to open them... very very odd

2010-05-27, 21:44	Link #13147
loivissa Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: United States Age: 31	Nice new pictures, I like the style of the pixiv artist! Very nice color choices. I'll make more indepth comments about everyones' new pictures in a bit, I have to eat dinner in about 5 minutes. Anyways, I whipped up the third portrait of Flora to accompany Rigardo and Clare. This is about 2 hours of work in openCanvas 4.06. I also finished the Clare picture and Rigardo picture, so after I tidy Flora up, I'll submit the three in a panel like I did before. Special thanks to Ryus for offering me constructive criticism on Clare! I always imagined Flora to be warm like the sun, so I drew her with a warm scheme and a soft smile. The colors aren't completely to my liking though, no doubt I'll be doing some tweaking. Suggestions? __________________ Visit me for other artwork here: http://akanei-rin.deviantart.com/

2010-05-28, 01:26	Link #13152
loivissa Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: United States Age: 31	Put everything together. Rigardo, Clare, Flora. If you have openCanvas 4.06, you can watch how I painted them by downloading from here: http://akanei-rin.deviantart.com/#/d2qkp8k __________________ Visit me for other artwork here: http://akanei-rin.deviantart.com/ Last edited by loivissa; 2010-05-28 at 04:16. Reason: Changed image slightly

2010-05-28, 03:35	Link #13153
Shiroth Beautiful fighter. Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: England, UK Age: 37	Will go ahead and say that your Flora is easily my favorite of the three, though all three are masterpieces in their own right. Outstanding job loivissa. __________________ MyAnimeList Twitter

2010-05-27, 18:56	Link #13145
FormerAbyssalone Guts=badass Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: passed out inside a sea monster. Age: 33	Yeah, all of her stats are pretty much right. Same here finish her hair it is her most destinguishing feature. I luv all ur Claymore cards.

2010-05-27, 22:22	Link #13148
FormerAbyssalone Guts=badass Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: passed out inside a sea monster. Age: 33	That is only 2 hours of work!!!!!!!! Holy S*** Its...its... fanstastic!!!! Flora is beautiful in this artwork!!! 10/10 stars.

2010-05-27, 22:27	Link #13149
SpiritOfGray Karateka Join Date: May 2010 Age: 33	I too am a fan of those claymore cards. @loivissa- I think the flora pic has the best pose. Great work, just like the others. Only one thing I notice that is awkward is the left eye (her left). It may be that the eyelashes are a bit big...compared to the other side at least...idk, I'm bad at finding small details in artwork..