2011-06-12, 20:33 | Link #581 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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Ok... after a long day of writing....
CHAPTER/PETAL 1 IS OUT! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...thkey=CPDL76gO Comments, critiques and appreciations are welcome as always.
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2011-06-12, 22:15 | Link #583 | |||||
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Mother Nature just wtfpwn'd me with the world's longest middle finger, stretching all the way from Chile past the Cape of Good Hope and the Indian Ocean right into Perth and the eastern Australian seaboard.
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One thing I like about how I made Nemo that its a title, that means nothing, and so can mean anything. Gives me room to slowly work my way through his character as his own pace. And now that you've made one, I think Nemo can be retconned to be using him. And Reisen.
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2011-06-12, 23:06 | Link #584 | |
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Join Date: Apr 2008
Location: Hotsprings Resort
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Nitori Technologies (Nitori-Tech for short), in conjunction with Kawashiro Development Group and Kappa Heavy Industries have produced a number of weapons and force multipliers that a certain pair of Butei Masters are frequently contracted to test. Some equipment includes: Weapon Cache Boxes - easy and simple storage of special under-barrel weapons that attach to the Advanced Combat Rifle (a placeholder weapon for now). Their contents are easily identified by a large letter printed on the sides of the boxes, and include weapons such as shotguns, grenade launchers, and even rocket launchers and laser devices. The current problem is that there seems to be a strange and very loud voice announcing the attachment's name upon opening the box. NT-SV-001 - Currently an unnamed vehicle, it is a vastly miniaturized tank with room for one man to drive and fight. Armed with twin three-barreled 12.6mm Vulcan guns and a 127mm low-pressure cannon, the tank can churn out incredible firepower and absorb damage that could normally kill a man. Fast and furious, the tank is a force multiplier of massive proportions. NT-SV-001X - A slightly larger and modified version of the original SV-001. It drops one Vulcan gun, but replaces it with a hidden weapon. The greatest and most significant change is the inclusion of a proprietary transformation system that allows the SV-001X to convert from tank to walker vehicle. This form offers greater flexibility at the expense of speed, but it also reveals the pile bunker spike that replaces the previous gun. Unfortunately, this model has thinner armor to compensate for the increased weight from the transformation system. There is talk of a second prototype, in which the general size and armaments are increased. Currently, no models are available for public or private use. Test models have been leased to contractors for testing.
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2011-06-12, 23:24 | Link #585 |
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Jim: Hey, check this out!
[Heavy machinegun!] Nemo: Like I care about that 7.62mm gas-operated automatic made by a loli who can't keep her mouth shut!! Jim: ...oh good. Nemo: What? Jim: You're tsundering. Nemo: E-eh?! Jim: You're tsundere for Kappa. Nemo: W-what? N-no! N-nothing of that sort!! Chaos, about that thing about best mate luck... EDIT: Surprise road trip. Cya again when I can find net...
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2011-06-13, 01:13 | Link #586 | |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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2011-06-13, 12:17 | Link #587 | |
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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2011-06-13, 22:21 | Link #588 | |
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Well obviously I'll still shave off parts that wouldn't fit into this universe, but the general character is there.
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2011-06-14, 14:03 | Link #589 |
Archangelic Demon Vampire
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Join Date: May 2009
Location: Mauritius
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I just realized something. It was a very bad to write the first chapter at 4:00AM. I'm re-reading my fic and finding horrible mistakes and repetitions. Will re-write and overhaul it... wait for a repost...
(Must be why everyone's be so silent. Don't worry, feel free to say if the narration or anything sucks. Could use some tips to improve my English. XD)
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2011-06-14, 14:13 | Link #590 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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Because we are all busy doing things. I, on my side, jump from working on the profile of Amélie's housemaid, just for fluff and silliness, and trying to write that short that kct have suggested even knowing that I have never done comedy before.
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2011-06-15, 22:15 | Link #592 |
Princess or Plunderer?
Join Date: May 2009
Location: the Philippines
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Člise: It seems that Marcus is temporarily staying at Tokyo Butei High School's infirmary due to reasons I have yet to determine. Poor kid. And only when I was about to personally introduce to him. Credits to Terminator98 for the picture. *_* Marcus H.: Y-You gotta tell me where you got that image.
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2011-06-15, 23:49 | Link #594 |
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Let's go! Elise JET STREAM ATTACK!!
Jim Bean has been updated with his new portrait. Also, tried to bring some order into the chaos of his profile, so watch this space.
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2011-06-16, 01:24 | Link #595 |
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So yeah I am still here, just not really posting becasue allot of this stuff is just frankly too out there for my tastes. I'm pretty much doing my own thing less focused on being as insane as possible and hopefully bringing a bit of actual you know police work into things. So yeah this is probably going to be slower and much less focused on action set pieces then what others are planning; although it will have some of that later.
This is something of a draft and while it's probably pretty close to final, it might be tweaked slightly going forward if something is really out of whack, anyway enough rambling here it is: Chapter 1 of... something I don't know I'm bad with names.
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2011-06-16, 01:27 | Link #596 | |
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2011-06-16, 04:09 | Link #597 |
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A girl with some class.
Yuuko Arishima (Inquesta) Should be the last of the girls on the side of the good guys. Last edited by kct; 2011-06-16 at 10:48. |
2011-06-16, 07:07 | Link #598 |
VxR Productions
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The Final Vanguard and member of the Blue Side for now:
[Vanguard B, Position M] Shou Tsujimoto, Multi-tasker/Null Presence ====== Current Roster: Blue Side:
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2011-06-16, 10:32 | Link #600 |
RUN, YOU FOOLS!
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Formerly Iwakawa base and Chaldea. Now Teyvat, the Astral Express & the Outpost
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So I heard you like meido? Say hello to Sarah.
This profile is merely done in the purpose to give a face, a name and a past to Amélie's housemaid who is mentioned in her profile. Also a possible heroic version of the Chekhov's Gunman. |
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