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EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 22:17

I can just see Irish and Kyuukai butt heads when they're not trying to kill each other.

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DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-29, 22:20

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

I can just see Irish and Kyuukai butt heads when they're not trying to kill each other.

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Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 22:22

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

I can just see Irish and Kyuukai butt heads when they're not trying to kill each other.

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They will butt heads a lot. Everyone considers FRACTURE heroes for defending them against the IS while he believes that they started the whole thing (since Tabane's with them) and they're just trying to clean up their own mistakes.

He'll even call Kyuukai "Hero" a lot as a sarcastic nickname.

Side note - How good is Kyuukai at hacking?

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-29, 22:26

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

I can just see Irish and Kyuukai butt heads when they're not trying to kill each other.

(WOOT! After a month long hiatus, Heart of the Machine has an update!)

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

They will butt heads a lot. Everyone considers FRACTURE heroes for defending them against the IS while he believes that they started the whole thing (since Tabane's with them) and they're just trying to clean up their own mistakes.

He'll even call Kyuukai "Hero" a lot as a sarcastic nickname.

Putting both of them against same enemies though would be a whole new level of awesome.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 22:43

@ Zero and Rain - Here's an argument from the two of them, tell me what you think.

Spoiler:

EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 22:48

I expect to see more of those in the future.

Have Tabane actually meet him face to face, see what'll happen then. For added effect, include Koyomi. If you add Kyuukai, there has to be some mention or inclusion of Koyomi.

Ah, and he's a really good hacker. Because well, his Mom is Tabane Shinonono.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 22:56

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

I expect to see more of those in the future.

Have Tabane actually meet him face to face, see what'll happen then. For added effect, include Koyomi. If you add Kyuukai, there has to be some mention or inclusion of Koyomi.

Is Kyuukai OOC? I'm trying to avoid that.

Also, him meeting Tabane is gonna be catastrophic since she's the one person who made the machine that destroyed his life. He'll probably try to kill her once he sees her.

Tabane acts cheerful in your fic right? I'll have to see if I can have Irish push her buttons in a very dickish manner.

Here's an example.

Irish: So, you made the IS?

Tabane: That's right! I'm the genius extraordinaire.

Irish: Huh, I wonder what your husband thinks of you.

Tabane: What did you say?

Irish: I wonder what his last thoughts were as he got killed by the thing his wife was so proud of.

EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 22:59

Now I want to see the rest of your fic, and BADLY.

Hopefully he doesn't try to kill her, or everyone on the ALBATROSS and in FRACTURE will be after his head. Then again, if that doesn't work, Kyuukai's gonna beat the shit out of him. And if he's unarmed when Tabane meets him... She's got martial arts training from Ryuu. She's the one who's gonna beat the shit out of him.

If he manages to escape, imagine him staring up at the city in the sky that has all it's guns pointed at him.

ZeroXSEED · 2011-10-29, 23:00

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Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero and Rain - Here's an argument from the two of them, tell me what you think.

Spoiler:

INCREDIBLE.

Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 23:04

@ Rain - He doesn't care about his life though. This helps him on missions since ignores obvious risks to his life without hesitation.

He doesn't have any martial arts however. All he has is agility/acrobatics and knife combat which doesn't help him if he's unarmed.

Side note - How good of a hacker is Kyuukai? As in what can and can't he hack?

@ Zero - Thanks for reading.

EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 23:12

Kyuukai can hack everything short of both TOP TIER 1 HIGH END Government code and whatever his mom can can took up. Other than those two things, he can hack and program or reprogram.

One word of advice, never let Irish anywhere near Koyomi. Otherwise, Kyuukai will probably end up tormenting and then viscerally murdering him. Seriously, it's in his character.

StratoSpear · 2011-10-29, 23:13

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Too bad then.... I will be changing her name too.

She will be Bertha.

How about the appearance of the character as Mid-season upgrade?

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Suggestion of Linking the two Universe:

The creator of the drone in the original is the same creator of the drones in my universe.

He joined Praxidike because he thought that they share goal of bring chaos into the world (through the breaking down of IS system).

Probably betrayed/back-stabbed Gerald because he is sick of keep making Clones of IS. If he rise to power, the drones will upgrades and become better (Justification for the Characters to get better/upgrades.....).

Bertha sounds allright, just keep in mind that Inami and Jinrai are no longer part of Praxidike.

One more thing to note, Athena Bouclier is not finished yet so yeah...

Also:

Spoiler for Upgrade:

wavehawk · 2011-10-29, 23:14

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Spoiler:

Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 23:16

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

Kyuukai can hack everything short of both TOP TIER 1 HIGH END Government code and whatever his mom can can took up. Other than those two things, he can hack and program or reprogram.

One word of advice, never let Irish anywhere near Koyomi. Otherwise, Kyuukai will probably end up tormenting and then viscerally murdering him. Seriously, it's in his character.

Don't worry. Irish doesn't harm innocent people and non-combatants. This'll cause problems in the new chapter since Viktor is obviously willing to cross this line while he isn't.

Do you mind if I make Irish a better hacker though? He had to learn quick as a kid or he would be killed in the camp. The one time he did somebody took the blame for him and died.

@ Hawke - Nice

I want to put a part like that in the fic in the future

EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 23:27

Go ahead. Irish would probably have more experience. But Kyuukai would have more experience in the field. His hacking is more like hacking on the go. He doesn't hack unless it's needed (on the field or off of it) or he needs something for his programming of his tech.

On another note, you could have Kyuukai and Irish hate Phantom Task for starting a lot of shit that would be spoilers for my story's chapter 18.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-29, 23:27

Kyuukai's a Combat Engineer, right?

How well does he repair/build things?

One of my OC's in my fic is a Combat Engineer himself. In fact he's the same age as Kyuukai, 17 years old, right?

Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 23:30

@ Rain - Alright then. He already hates phantom tadk though, they're the one who killed his older brother figure. If you've read volume 5 then it's the pilot who's piloting Arachne.

EthernalRain · 2011-10-29, 23:30

@Jak Very well. He's the one who developed his weapons, after Tabane gave him a grant that gave him access to 5 specially made IS cores out of a hundred. These IS cores are the ones used for anti IS tools. His anti-IS weapons are some of the first.

DarkJak2050 · 2011-10-29, 23:34

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Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@Jak Very well. He's the one who developed his weapons, after Tabane gave him a grant that gave him access to 5 specially made IS cores out of a hundred. These IS cores are the ones used for anti IS tools. His anti-IS weapons are some of the first.

Can he fix/repair anything without any form of manuel, if he has the right parts?

Even if it's something he never messed with, let alone touched before?

Eratas123 · 2011-10-29, 23:34

@ Rain - Any idea that can help me write Kyuukai's part for future imperfect?

2011-10-29, 22:43	Link #5045
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Zero and Rain - Here's an argument from the two of them, tell me what you think. Spoiler: The FRACTURE memorial stood as a testament to all that they've sacrificed to ensure our continued safety. Everyone knew of what they did to save us. On the memorial stood two people; One was a young man in his late teens. The other was a lad in his early teens with his hands binded together. "So, you're the "Hero" huh?" The younger one remarked. "It's just a name, it's what people call everyone who sacrificed everything to help them." The older boy replied. "Heh, what a load of shit." "What did you say?" "A Hero? All you're doing is cleaning up the mess that crazy bitch started in the first place." "What the hell are you going on about?" "People call you heroes but all you're doing is trying to fix your little fuck up, can't believe how stupid people can get nowadays." "We've sacrificed our lives to protect others. I've lost friends and family who were willing to die to make sure no one else had to." "Is that supposed to make me feel sorry for you? Oh boo hoo, the hero lost everything to protect the people he loves." He remarked sarcastically. The older boy couldn't stand any more and grabbed the younger one by the collar. "We've lost so much just trying to protect innocent people. I've been to so many funerals that it makes me sick!" He nearly yelled at him, "But we still keep fighting, let me ask you something though. What have you been doing?" The younger boy just smirked before answering, "You forgot one thing." "What?" "I never called myself a hero." "And that gives you the excuse to say all that shit!?" "If you want to see the proof of your mistakes just look in front of you." "The hell are you talking about?" "Look in front of you, at the monster you helped create."

2011-10-29, 22:48	Link #5046
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	I expect to see more of those in the future. Have Tabane actually meet him face to face, see what'll happen then. For added effect, include Koyomi. If you add Kyuukai, there has to be some mention or inclusion of Koyomi. Ah, and he's a really good hacker. Because well, his Mom is Tabane Shinonono. Last edited by EthernalRain; 2011-10-29 at 22:56. Reason: Forgot to add info

2011-10-29, 22:17	Link #5041
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	I can just see Irish and Kyuukai butt heads when they're not trying to kill each other. (WOOT! After a month long hiatus, Heart of the Machine has an update!)

2011-10-29, 22:59	Link #5048
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Now I want to see the rest of your fic, and BADLY. Hopefully he doesn't try to kill her, or everyone on the ALBATROSS and in FRACTURE will be after his head. Then again, if that doesn't work, Kyuukai's gonna beat the shit out of him. And if he's unarmed when Tabane meets him... She's got martial arts training from Ryuu. She's the one who's gonna beat the shit out of him. If he manages to escape, imagine him staring up at the city in the sky that has all it's guns pointed at him.

2011-10-29, 23:04	Link #5050
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - He doesn't care about his life though. This helps him on missions since ignores obvious risks to his life without hesitation. He doesn't have any martial arts however. All he has is agility/acrobatics and knife combat which doesn't help him if he's unarmed. Side note - How good of a hacker is Kyuukai? As in what can and can't he hack? @ Zero - Thanks for reading.

2011-10-29, 23:12	Link #5051
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Kyuukai can hack everything short of both TOP TIER 1 HIGH END Government code and whatever his mom can can took up. Other than those two things, he can hack and program or reprogram. One word of advice, never let Irish anywhere near Koyomi. Otherwise, Kyuukai will probably end up tormenting and then viscerally murdering him. Seriously, it's in his character.

2011-10-29, 23:27	Link #5055
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	Go ahead. Irish would probably have more experience. But Kyuukai would have more experience in the field. His hacking is more like hacking on the go. He doesn't hack unless it's needed (on the field or off of it) or he needs something for his programming of his tech. On another note, you could have Kyuukai and Irish hate Phantom Task for starting a lot of shit that would be spoilers for my story's chapter 18.

2011-10-29, 23:27	Link #5056
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Kyuukai's a Combat Engineer, right? How well does he repair/build things? One of my OC's in my fic is a Combat Engineer himself. In fact he's the same age as Kyuukai, 17 years old, right?

2011-10-29, 23:30	Link #5057
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Alright then. He already hates phantom tadk though, they're the one who killed his older brother figure. If you've read volume 5 then it's the pilot who's piloting Arachne.

2011-10-29, 23:30	Link #5058
EthernalRain Head of FRACTURE R&D Join Date: Oct 2011	@Jak Very well. He's the one who developed his weapons, after Tabane gave him a grant that gave him access to 5 specially made IS cores out of a hundred. These IS cores are the ones used for anti IS tools. His anti-IS weapons are some of the first.

2011-10-29, 23:34	Link #5060
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Rain - Any idea that can help me write Kyuukai's part for future imperfect?