2012-08-06, 09:06 | Link #35241 |
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Yo Jak, remind me again what are the arsenal present on the Silverbacks. Currently trying to recton the Minerva such that it'll have lesser weapons(but more utilized) compared to the original.
And for some reason, I'm reading the UC tech page for ideas.
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2012-08-06, 09:12 | Link #35243 |
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My beta is not present AND not interested.
This story is practically bunny dumping grounds, neither good nor popular. Not much people have time to read it. After This chapter, I want to wrote yet another twincest fic, but this one is more realistic though still more lighthearted than recent chapter of ST. Interested in helping as Beta?
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2012-08-06, 09:20 | Link #35244 | |
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When the nanomachine lose energy, they lose the ability to stabilize themselves and break down immediately (rather than slowly). Or should I leave the Nanomachine as they are?(Stay because they are stabilized)
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2012-08-06, 09:22 | Link #35245 |
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@zero: the plot is fascinating enough but the characterization doesn't jive particularly well with me. Guess I'll pass.
Sides, I tend to write the flamed fictions in this fandom @age: I suggest stabilized. The fact your proposed ideas that the system your nanomachines compliment generate energy on scale probably above fusion and the nanites require time to be generated and stockpiled fit the bill. Charge energy capacitors, deplete for nanite generation. Time required to recharge capacitors. The capacitors would be a secondary energy source for your nanite generation so as not to affect IS operation heavily. |
2012-08-06, 09:34 | Link #35248 |
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It's still a concept basically it explores what happen if Madoka and Ichika really met as teenager, thus hilarity ensues.
Genetic Sexual Attraction and Westermarck effect both apply as my basis, the first apply to Madoka, the later is for Houki and Rin (and possibly what prevented his siscon to Chifuyu from being serious). I made it with light humor and relationship entanglement, basically a perfectly normal slice of life. As Demi pointed, it's futile considering my writing style.
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2012-08-06, 09:43 | Link #35249 | |
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Zero, the following draft is a scene of the rectonned Minerva. Since I'm practically mashing up UC and IS tech, I figured the explanations would make sense:
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2012-08-06, 09:50 | Link #35253 |
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Seeing as the Minerva's being rectonned, the future incarnations will most probably undergo changes as well.
That said, the problem I find in the original Minerva is that it has a wide array of weapons but majority of them are severely under-utilized. As such, I want to make sure that Inami actually uses every weapon he has at his disposal. This also means that the Magnus will not be present in the revamped Minerva as the beam sabers are practically Barrier Void weapons on their own. EDIT: Another reason for the revamp is to make the Minerva different from the IS. While the latter can pull installed weapons out of thin air from digital storage, the former's weapons won't have this feature and its weapons are already physically attached/built-in to the unit itself. In a way, trying to give the Minerva sort of a Real Robot kind of feeling.
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2012-08-06, 10:05 | Link #35254 |
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@zero: I suggest reading stuff other than LNs. Hunt down 100k word length stories in ff.net or fictionpress. They reach 100k for more than just sheer tenacity of the writers.
1st or 3rd person is fine. 1st person makes it easier because you imagine yourself in the character's position. 3rd person has multiple renditions and I'm only practicing one form thus far. It's mostly up to you. I'll look through the draft tomorrow but you might not get a quick response since its only 3 days away from my exam week :| |
2012-08-06, 10:08 | Link #35256 |
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@stratos: I think you under utilize the magnus because you labelled it as a final resort weapon but never reached a scenario that needed it. The weapon ideas were sound but the over conservation of usage is what probably gives you that feeling.
@zero: not familiar with the writer but when you read pay attention to the words and the way of writing. What draws you in and how it inspires the images in your mind. how the words immerse you in a world of more than just letters. each story and scenario type will have their own needed wordings and writing styles to draw out a more vivid image but the final product will lay with what you want to convey. I have a friend who took up a course of creative writing. The concepts of his stories never really took much of my interests but he conveyed his ideas well enough, he had an image he wanted to project and the details were simple but informative. Stimulating but not restrictive. I believe blitz's writing evokes the same feeling from me Last edited by demino_hellsin; 2012-08-06 at 10:28. |
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The character heavily relies on close-combat such that even the revamped Minerva may sport the following(Once again, need thoughts/comments on the feasibility): Quote:
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2012-08-06, 10:28 | Link #35258 |
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I always thinking about male-compatible I.S., but seeing how game breaker most fanon machine like that is, I think of a nerf so.
1. Armored Stratos cannot do a data-material conversion or vice versa. So they require real maintenance, refuel, and repair. This also means they're always struck in physical form. 2. They also can't really self evolve, only their computer can adapt. The only way to strengthen them is doing a real time upgrade by changing parts created form the battle data recorded. 3. Those weakness above can be mitigated by connect the machine to a genuine I.S.. it won't interfere with said I.S. own maintenance since Armored Stratos only borrow the conversion software and use it's own energy. However both of them has to be immobilized to prevent malfunction. 4. Only one A.S. can attach to an I.S. at a time due to the number and complexity of connection cables. 5. Their A.I. aren't sentient unlike I.S., they have total obedience and zero personality and thus not affected by pilot's state of emotion. However, that means they won't achieve extraordinary feat like OOA, Core Resonance and Frame Synchronization.
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2012-08-06, 10:49 | Link #35260 | ||
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1, 2 and maybe 5 applies to the revamped Minerva. It's never built to have system integration with an IS (e.g No NTD-ish bit-stealing) so its OS is incapable of merging with that of an IS. Quote:
Gonna turn in for now, ciao~ :3
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