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Silqthashakka · 2011-02-19, 23:31

Hello out there. I'm just trying to get some feedback for my comic, TAG. It's just been copyrighted and hopefully publish within the year. Your comments would be greatly appreciated! Thanks for taking the time out to read it.

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Silqthashakka · 2011-02-19, 23:34

I'm having a difficult time adding my images on here so I just created a link. I hope this isn't against the rules or anything...

Daniel E. · 2011-02-20, 02:17

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Originally Posted by Silqthashakka

I'm having a difficult time adding my images on here so I just created a link. I hope this isn't against the rules or anything...

Yes it is:

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You must not post links that contain referrer tracking ids
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Use a hosting site like Imageshack if you want to show some samples of your work.

Silqthashakka · 2011-02-20, 08:45

Ok thanks! I'll do that!

JRendell · 2011-02-20, 15:25

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Hello out there. I'm just trying to get some feedback for my comic, TAG...

There's not much to say, other than compliment the artwork. What's the plot? Who are the characters?

mannie550 · 2011-02-20, 18:26

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Originally Posted by JRendell

There's not much to say, other than compliment the artwork. What's the plot? Who are the characters?

I think his comic is up now. Or at least, a part of it.

JuGG · 2011-02-20, 18:39

Read through your eleven pages and the character images and it's very clean. Nice job! The plot seems interesting and I would certainly check it out if it got published. I'm guessing this is merely a prologue but if not I'd say you could be moving too fast. Otherwise I can only offer positive comment--this contains very unique artwork, an intriguing concept, and has a very strong identity. As long as the rest is consistent with these pages and your characters dialogue is strong and your development well executed then it will be very publishable.

I wish you all the best and drop a line on this thread if this goes further.

mannie550 · 2011-02-20, 22:32

Here are the rest of the pages:

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mannie550 · 2011-02-21, 08:36

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Originally Posted by JRendell

There's not much to say, other than compliment the artwork. What's the plot? Who are the characters?

I managed to put up rest of the comic. Take a look and tell us what you think!

mannie550 · 2011-02-21, 08:38

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Originally Posted by JuGG

Read through your eleven pages and the character images and it's very clean. Nice job! The plot seems interesting and I would certainly check it out if it got published. I'm guessing this is merely a prologue but if not I'd say you could be moving too fast. Otherwise I can only offer positive comment--this contains very unique artwork, an intriguing concept, and has a very strong identity. As long as the rest is consistent with these pages and your characters dialogue is strong and your development well executed then it will be very publishable.

I wish you all the best and drop a line on this thread if this goes further.

Thank you so much for your comments. The rest of Chapter 1 is out! Take a look when you can and give us your feedback!

mannie550 · 2011-02-21, 23:09

Thanks for all the feedback. We have more chapters coming soon.

JuGG · 2011-02-23, 06:14

Had a look at the other half. Still very good and consistent. I don't know how far you've got with this or what you've planned but its potential is high. You have an intriguing style and approach and I'd certainly be interested if I saw this on a shelf in a store. My only negative stays the same in that I think you're moving a bit too fast; for example, his brother dies a little to quickly/early for me to empathise enough for impact, plus, the fighting could be extended a little with his escape explained more. I'd also say that it would be better to lead through a bit more dialogue in replacement of the monologue narration as it tends to draw the reader in more readily and provides us with a feel for the character's attitude. I hope this criticism is constructive without being disheartening in anyway--I really think this is a strong piece of work and I am enjoying the premise.

Silqthashakka · 2011-02-26, 17:15

mannie550 · 2011-03-03, 16:18

What I really like about your creation is the level of quality. It's simply amazing. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!

2011-02-19, 23:31	Link #1
Silqthashakka Riff Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Orlando Florida	The Highly Anticipated Tag Comic is here! Hello out there. I'm just trying to get some feedback for my comic, TAG. It's just been copyrighted and hopefully publish within the year. Your comments would be greatly appreciated! Thanks for taking the time out to read it. Manga Pages: Spoiler for Pg 1: Spoiler for Pg 2: Spoiler for Pg 3: Spoiler for Pg 4: Spoiler for Pg 5: Spoiler for Pg 6: Spoiler for Pg 7: Spoiler for Pg 8: Spoiler for Pg 9: Spoiler for Pg 10: Spoiler for Pg 11: Last edited by Silqthashakka; 2011-03-10 at 08:45. Reason: New Pics! Legal this time!

2011-02-20, 18:39	Link #7
JuGG Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Nottingham, UK Age: 35	Read through your eleven pages and the character images and it's very clean. Nice job! The plot seems interesting and I would certainly check it out if it got published. I'm guessing this is merely a prologue but if not I'd say you could be moving too fast. Otherwise I can only offer positive comment--this contains very unique artwork, an intriguing concept, and has a very strong identity. As long as the rest is consistent with these pages and your characters dialogue is strong and your development well executed then it will be very publishable. I wish you all the best and drop a line on this thread if this goes further. __________________

2011-02-20, 22:32	Link #8
mannie550 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2011	Here are the rest of the pages: Page 12 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 13 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 14 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 15 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 16 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 17 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 18 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 19 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 20 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 21 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 22 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 23 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 24 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 25 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 26 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 27 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 28 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 29 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 30 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us Pg 31 Spoiler: Uploaded with ImageShack.us

2011-02-23, 06:14	Link #12
JuGG Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Nottingham, UK Age: 35	Had a look at the other half. Still very good and consistent. I don't know how far you've got with this or what you've planned but its potential is high. You have an intriguing style and approach and I'd certainly be interested if I saw this on a shelf in a store. My only negative stays the same in that I think you're moving a bit too fast; for example, his brother dies a little to quickly/early for me to empathise enough for impact, plus, the fighting could be extended a little with his escape explained more. I'd also say that it would be better to lead through a bit more dialogue in replacement of the monologue narration as it tends to draw the reader in more readily and provides us with a feel for the character's attitude. I hope this criticism is constructive without being disheartening in anyway--I really think this is a strong piece of work and I am enjoying the premise. __________________

2011-02-19, 23:34	Link #2
Silqthashakka Riff Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Orlando Florida	I'm having a difficult time adding my images on here so I just created a link. I hope this isn't against the rules or anything...

2011-02-20, 08:45	Link #4
Silqthashakka Riff Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Orlando Florida	Ok thanks! I'll do that!

2011-02-21, 23:09	Link #11
mannie550 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2011	Thanks for all the feedback. We have more chapters coming soon.

2011-02-26, 17:15	Link #13
Silqthashakka Riff Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Orlando Florida

2011-03-03, 16:18	Link #14
mannie550 Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2011	What I really like about your creation is the level of quality. It's simply amazing. Keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!