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NightBeast · 2004-02-13, 06:48

Hi all. I'm a fresh newbe in this wonderful forum and my english isn't good too(cuz i'm german...) anyway, thats my first thread here.

I'm sixteen and my favorite anime is naruto. I'm drawing fanart and i have a small gallery page. check it out...

Sample:

And here is the link to the gallery page:
http://home.arcor.de/night9/fanart.htm

Please vote for the picture you like there and tell me what you think about my drawings

Forsaken102 · 2004-02-13, 07:07

@.@

I'm quite impressed; In fact, I'm very impressed. That is some excellent shading you have going on there, along with some excellent form.

If I absolutely had to criticize anything, I would say that the waist needs to be a bit longer... the distortion from the viewpoint doesn't quite shorten it THAT much... I think.

Tboz · 2004-02-13, 08:12

She looks quite stocky, I think it will be perfect if you lengthen each of her body proportions to make her more slender.

Lord Raiden · 2004-02-13, 09:04

Wow, that's really good. Miles beyond what I could do. Nice job!

NightBeast · 2004-02-13, 10:02

thx for the praise guys. i'm glad to hear that you like it.

@Tboz: lol stocky ^^' hehe, sorry but she isn't. Because of the pose everything from the head down the feet is bacoming smaller. That's why the right leg is so short.

imagine a camera which is taking a photo of her from above. You'll see that everything from the head to the feet is becoming smaller. So it's because of the position of the view ^_^

man, my english is the worst...

anime-otaku · 2004-02-13, 11:33

Very nice shading,weclome to animesuki.

By the way you should give credit where its due, becuase I am sure there's a War of Genesis picture exactly like that one.

NightBeast · 2004-02-13, 12:12

yeah sure ^_^ It is a war of genesis fanart

this one, too
check out my site. There are other fanarts i have drown. I think it would't be good to show all the fanarts in this thread, so it's better to see them at the gallery page

WoG1:

ShadowLady · 2004-02-13, 13:22

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tboz

She looks quite stocky, I think it will be perfect if you lengthen each of her body proportions to make her more slender.

:@ no!!!! it's nice to see girls that aren't drawn like friggin twigs.

Raxial · 2004-02-13, 13:24

really nice work! I'm studying german in school, so I can speak a little

Great to have you here.

calavera spain · 2004-02-13, 14:30

the second drawings is great

... your tone technique is fantastic, but the position of the right arm is a bit too harsh

NightBeast · 2004-02-13, 16:17

Thx for the prais guys...

@calavera: Yeah, but i like poses like that. Maybe the arm is really a little bit too harsh but there is nothing i can do now. ^_^

@Raxial: thx, i'm glad to be here, too ^_^ it's fun to write some posts in english and i think it should also be fun for you to be a member on a german board. Let me ask you somthing in German;
-Wie alt bist du und woher kommst du?
-Welcher anime gefällt dir am besten?
-Mach dir der Untericht in deutsch Spass?

i don't know, if you can answer that easily but try to

-------------------------------
Here is another one.

Raxial · 2004-02-13, 17:16

my german isn't THAT good, but...

-Ich bin 15 Jahre alt, und komme ich aus Pennsylvania, USA
-Ich glaube (would I use glauben?), dass Naruto die beste anime ist.
-Don't understand everything in the question

I'd appreciate it if you could correct me, I'm not the best in my German class

fenrihr · 2004-02-13, 17:45

lookin' good, the first only thing i can say bad about it is the boot looks slightly off, not sure how... but overall it looks real nice.

you did the 3rd in colored pencil right? color looks great.

Namiko · 2004-02-13, 19:36

great work on shading. german? lol, type in german.

NightBeast · 2004-02-14, 05:43

Hehe, yeah. It's in colored pencil

Thx.

@raxial: That was good

but ithink it would be better if you write ...dass Naruto der beste anime ist. But you can't know something like this ^_^
Hehe you know, i'm sixteen, but i'm living only 5 years in Germany. I birthed in Russia so i'm half german, half russian ^^' My russian is still better than my German.
The last question was: Is it fun to study German for you?

another one and the newest drawing:

Forsaken102 · 2004-02-14, 06:00

I'm excited to see even more of your work, hopefully originals.

btw... what DOES Wohnort mean?

--NightSlave

dexter · 2004-02-14, 10:46

Wow , I can't shade that good

NightBeast · 2004-02-14, 12:33

@fosaken: "Wohnort" means: place of residence

a old drawing (drew it when i was eleven):

Raxial · 2004-02-14, 12:49

wow, your hair is absolutely amazing. Incredible.

And yeah, German's fun to learn. I like learning languages (I hope to learn more than just German). That's awesome that you know Russian, too.

GreenTze · 2004-02-14, 13:08

1st pic: Thats a pretty cool drawing. Her body looks proportioned, but her head looks a tad too round.

2004-02-13, 06:48	Link #1
NightBeast Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 36	My drawings... xD Hi all. I'm a fresh newbe in this wonderful forum and my english isn't good too(cuz i'm german...) anyway, thats my first thread here. I'm sixteen and my favorite anime is naruto. I'm drawing fanart and i have a small gallery page. check it out... Sample: And here is the link to the gallery page: http://home.arcor.de/night9/fanart.htm Please vote for the picture you like there and tell me what you think about my drawings

2004-02-13, 16:17	Link #11
NightBeast Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 36	Thx for the prais guys... @calavera: Yeah, but i like poses like that. Maybe the arm is really a little bit too harsh but there is nothing i can do now. ^_^ @Raxial: thx, i'm glad to be here, too ^_^ it's fun to write some posts in english and i think it should also be fun for you to be a member on a german board. Let me ask you somthing in German; -Wie alt bist du und woher kommst du? -Welcher anime gefällt dir am besten? -Mach dir der Untericht in deutsch Spass? i don't know, if you can answer that easily but try to ------------------------------- Here is another one. Last edited by NightBeast; 2004-02-13 at 16:32.

2004-02-13, 07:07	Link #2
Forsaken102 Insanity Goddess Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Missouri Age: 40	@.@ I'm quite impressed; In fact, I'm very impressed. That is some excellent shading you have going on there, along with some excellent form. If I absolutely had to criticize anything, I would say that the waist needs to be a bit longer... the distortion from the viewpoint doesn't quite shorten it THAT much... I think.

2004-02-13, 08:12	Link #3
Tboz Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2003	She looks quite stocky, I think it will be perfect if you lengthen each of her body proportions to make her more slender.

2004-02-13, 09:04	Link #4
Lord Raiden Uber Coffee for da win! Join Date: May 2003 Location: Middle of insanity	Wow, that's really good. Miles beyond what I could do. Nice job!

2004-02-13, 10:02	Link #5
NightBeast Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 36	thx for the praise guys. i'm glad to hear that you like it. @Tboz: lol stocky ^^' hehe, sorry but she isn't. Because of the pose everything from the head down the feet is bacoming smaller. That's why the right leg is so short. imagine a camera which is taking a photo of her from above. You'll see that everything from the head to the feet is becoming smaller. So it's because of the position of the view ^_^ man, my english is the worst...

2004-02-13, 11:33	Link #6
anime-otaku Lazy Guitarist Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Brooklyn Age: 39	Very nice shading,weclome to animesuki. By the way you should give credit where its due, becuase I am sure there's a War of Genesis picture exactly like that one.

2004-02-13, 12:12	Link #7
NightBeast Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 36	yeah sure ^_^ It is a war of genesis fanart this one, too check out my site. There are other fanarts i have drown. I think it would't be good to show all the fanarts in this thread, so it's better to see them at the gallery page WoG1:

2004-02-13, 13:24	Link #9
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	really nice work! I'm studying german in school, so I can speak a little Great to have you here.

2004-02-13, 14:30	Link #10
calavera spain empty mind Join Date: May 2003 Location: spain (barcelona) Age: 38	the second drawings is great ... your tone technique is fantastic, but the position of the right arm is a bit too harsh

2004-02-13, 17:16	Link #12
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	my german isn't THAT good, but... -Ich bin 15 Jahre alt, und komme ich aus Pennsylvania, USA -Ich glaube (would I use glauben?), dass Naruto die beste anime ist. -Don't understand everything in the question I'd appreciate it if you could correct me, I'm not the best in my German class

2004-02-13, 17:45	Link #13
fenrihr is dime-a-dozen Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Rich., VA	lookin' good, the first only thing i can say bad about it is the boot looks slightly off, not sure how... but overall it looks real nice. you did the 3rd in colored pencil right? color looks great.

2004-02-13, 19:36	Link #14
Namiko Namiko Choshi Join Date: Nov 2003 Age: 37	great work on shading. german? lol, type in german.

2004-02-14, 05:43	Link #15
NightBeast Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 36	Hehe, yeah. It's in colored pencil Thx. @raxial: That was good but ithink it would be better if you write ...dass Naruto der beste anime ist. But you can't know something like this ^_^ Hehe you know, i'm sixteen, but i'm living only 5 years in Germany. I birthed in Russia so i'm half german, half russian ^^' My russian is still better than my German. The last question was: Is it fun to study German for you? another one and the newest drawing:

2004-02-14, 06:00	Link #16
Forsaken102 Insanity Goddess Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Missouri Age: 40	I'm excited to see even more of your work, hopefully originals. btw... what DOES Wohnort mean? --NightSlave

2004-02-14, 10:46	Link #17
dexter Member Join Date: Nov 2003 Age: 40	Wow , I can't shade that good

2004-02-14, 12:33	Link #18
NightBeast Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Age: 36	@fosaken: "Wohnort" means: place of residence a old drawing (drew it when i was eleven):

2004-02-14, 12:49	Link #19
Raxial CG / Color Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Eastern United States Age: 35	wow, your hair is absolutely amazing. Incredible. And yeah, German's fun to learn. I like learning languages (I hope to learn more than just German). That's awesome that you know Russian, too.

2004-02-14, 13:08	Link #20
GreenTze Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2004	1st pic: Thats a pretty cool drawing. Her body looks proportioned, but her head looks a tad too round.