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Old 2011-01-12, 13:07   Link #28541
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Well, you got Agito in StrikerS telling Signum that if she ever betrayed the ideals that Zest talked about... and Signum replied that she would want Agito to kill her with her flame. I really couldn't avoid the consequences of that one (and to my knowledge, I haven't really seen any fic take up the consequences of that fatal promise). And Signum did die and come back to life once in A's already, so was her "sacrifice" pointless there? ;p
She didn't sacrifice herself so much as she was killed. Agito's sacrifice is the one I think Justin_Brett is talking about.
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Old 2011-01-12, 15:07   Link #28542
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Not a very long part, but, hey, it's what I got.

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i got one nasty idea, nanya...

After your StrikerS arc, can you integrate your "Due" story to this one?
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Old 2011-01-12, 16:44   Link #28543
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i got one nasty idea, nanya...

After your StrikerS arc, can you integrate your "Due" story to this one?
Y'know that is the first thing that crossed my mind when she started talking...Except or course she's older.
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Old 2011-01-12, 16:51   Link #28544
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Not a very long part, but, hey, it's what I got.

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I assume Due picks on Tre for entertainment value. Much like how fun it would be to pick on Nove.

The 'Frowny' ones have the most entertaining reactions.
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Old 2011-01-12, 19:12   Link #28545
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Well, you got Agito in StrikerS telling Signum that if she ever betrayed the ideals that Zest talked about... and Signum replied that she would want Agito to kill her with her flame. I really couldn't avoid the consequences of that one (and to my knowledge, I haven't really seen any fic take up the consequences of that fatal promise). And Signum did die and come back to life once in A's already, so was her "sacrifice" pointless there? ;p
I meant Agito there >_>.

And in that case, it's equally pointless since it didn't actually put her down for good, and Agito just wants to kill Hayate now.
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Old 2011-01-12, 21:58   Link #28546
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I meant Agito there >_>.

And in that case, it's equally pointless since it didn't actually put her down for good, and Agito just wants to kill Hayate now.
Signum's death in A's was equally pointless because she came back? ;p Sometimes it's not whether they come back, but the effect it has on those around them.^^

At any rate, posted Future Tense, Chapter 29: The Longest Night up on ff.net.
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Old 2011-01-12, 22:02   Link #28547
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It's supposed to be a comedy, but I don't think it turned out too well, ah well, at least the idea is out of my head for now.

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Old 2011-01-13, 00:34   Link #28548
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Speaking of librarians, here's a Shadowverse fic about Vivio! Hey, it's not just Lutecia who gets to go out in the field in the 'verse!

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Old 2011-01-13, 00:40   Link #28549
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Speaking of librarians, here's a Shadowverse fic about Vivio! Hey, it's not just Lutecia who gets to go out in the field in the 'verse!

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...

HA!

Can I just say that this fits Vivio so completely, blasting apart everything in her way to reach a book? Now I can imagine Yuuno sending her on these kinds of missions all the time! It would certainly make sure people return the books when they're due instead of keeping them late!

Also, hang in there, Cia! Only one more year! If I ever update...
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Old 2011-01-13, 00:43   Link #28550
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I assume Due picks on Tre for entertainment value. Much like how fun it would be to pick on Nove.

The 'Frowny' ones have the most entertaining reactions.
Yeah.

Just wait till you guys see how she tortures the 'frowny faces'. XD
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Old 2011-01-13, 01:34   Link #28551
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Speaking of librarians, here's a Shadowverse fic about Vivio! Hey, it's not just Lutecia who gets to go out in the field in the 'verse!

(note: unproofread)
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I know you said it's not proofed , but one paragraph just jumped out at me so much I had to comment....

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The pain stopped almost at once, excepting only a dull headache and a pulsing throb in her side where a linear rifle shot had found a soft spot. She was going to have an ugly bruise, she just knew it. She was lucky that was all; those things were designed through [designed to go through]? a low-grade Barrier Jacket at close range, especially when that Jacket had been simultaneously stressed holding off the attack magic of three mages of at least C rank. If she'd been even a B-ranker defensively, she'd have been seriously injured or dead.
The gangsters using Vivio/the Kaiser's body-parts for swear words is hilarious , and brings me to mind of the more pagan societies in literature who often do the same thing. It's weird, even though yes, the last Saint King was a woman, but the moniker "king" would still have people swearing by his/her "rack" ....

A fun fight , Vivio vs. Whole Building. Of course we know who would win!

I liked how Burning Glory and Vivio would have little witty dialogues with each other.

Your Author's Note about the tracking beacons was quite interesting--it makes sense that it could be a violation of privacy to actively track books, but the usages of that...imagine putting one of these passive trackers inside an innocuous object that can be activated by someone.... I'm probably thinking about it too much, eh?
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Old 2011-01-13, 02:11   Link #28552
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Speaking of librarians, here's a Shadowverse fic about Vivio! Hey, it's not just Lutecia who gets to go out in the field in the 'verse!

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Funny that my second tale was to be about ninja librarians trying to retrieve overdue books, ah well.

But using a savior's body parts as swear words is pretty new to me, funny too. (I'm so going into hell for that)
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Old 2011-01-13, 10:02   Link #28553
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Speaking of librarians, here's a Shadowverse fic about Vivio! Hey, it's not just Lutecia who gets to go out in the field in the 'verse!

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ahahahahha!! I kept thinking while Vi was busy demolishing the building that she might just blow up the thing she came to get lol. She takes the overkill thing a little seriously too.

And Kaiser's knickers I absolutely loved Lulu's last line ;D
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Old 2011-01-13, 11:06   Link #28554
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She takes the overkill thing a little seriously too.
She's Nanoha's daughter, that kind of thing just runs in the family.
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Old 2011-01-13, 11:36   Link #28555
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Speaking of librarians, here's a Shadowverse fic about Vivio! Hey, it's not just Lutecia who gets to go out in the field in the 'verse!

(note: unproofread)
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... ... ... ... ... Vivio the Librarian Terminator is jumping up the list of my favorite interpretations of the character, and she's only been in this one short.

That is all.
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Old 2011-01-13, 11:52   Link #28556
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"They Take These Matters Seriously"
Best was "Kaiser's rack", by far, though I think there should have been more from Vivio about that.

Hysterical and awesome, and not only something that Yuuno would do just because, also something Chrono might tell him to do.

Chrono: I have something on my desk that I think shouldn't be handled by us.
Yuuno: Oh?
Chrono: We found that there's an overdue library book in the hideout, and I'm pretty sure they can't break a B to A rank defense.
Yuuno: ...again?
Chrono: It's something about these criminal types; they keep forgetting that probable cause includes a great many small things.
Yuuno: I mean, all of them have overdue books! Are you planting them?
Chrono: ... no...

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And Kaiser's knickers I absolutely loved Lulu's last line ;D
That was more "Your body is an object to me" than Lulu tends to get, but I think the frustration can be forgiven for coming out quite like that.
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Hysterical and awesome, and not only something that Yuuno would do just because, also something Chrono might tell him to do.

Chrono: I have something on my desk that I think shouldn't be handled by us.
Yuuno: Oh?
Chrono: We found that there's an overdue library book in the hideout, and I'm pretty sure they can't break a B to A rank defense.
Yuuno: ...again?
Chrono: It's something about these criminal types; they keep forgetting that probable cause includes a great many small things.
Yuuno: I mean, all of them have overdue books! Are you planting them?
Chrono: ... no...
LOL, I love how unsketchy Chrono sounds .....
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Also, hang in there, Cia! Only one more year! If I ever update...
... ... ... Poor Cia. She'll be fifty by the time she finally gets some.
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Well, another update. Though it seems like everyone's interested in something else in my topic lately. =/

I kid, this isn't my topic, but I WAS the only one posting because everyone else was doing something else during November and December.

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Old 2011-01-13, 18:32   Link #28560
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Well, another update. Though it seems like everyone's interested in something else in my topic lately. =/

I kid, this isn't my topic, but I WAS the only one posting because everyone else was doing something else during November and December.

Nope nanya.... your fanfic post of "BTF" is damn interesting for everyone here...

and oh boy... am I expecting the "White Nightmare" (Well... the title of White Devil is not gonna fit Nanoha when she gone berserk...) to pop out at that little incident in the cannon?
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