Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Dream_Traveller]

Woah.

I might submit character info for those cards...nice symbol work there, too.

And again:

[An Hero]Epic list is EPIC.[/An Hero]

Sorry, had to be done.

As for the other stuff posted, I practically just got up, skimming over it...I haven't ignored it though. Good work, as per usual.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

You just made me imagine a Kha vs. Jail fight using Unlimited Spell Forge and Unlimited Desire Works, respectively.

Brain powah?

1. That made me go WTF?! I mean, combine both together, and you get the infamous "Unlimited Saber Works" doujin-Shiro used to defeat Gil.

2. 2WTF?! At least they got their brains handed to them. I love the smell of political vacuum. Now's a good time for the GDI to step in, after creating the AX, helping Aurion, and nudging Ordered Space along from their shadowy corners in TSAB control.

But of course I'm waiting for canon to reveal the steps taken to deal with the loss of brain power before I rebuild the theory.

Originally Posted by Saint X

- You are an advocate of the CLAMP Legacy and you don't know that mantra?

Clow Hammer >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Kha

Maybe because you're phrasing it differently from me?

*Mokonapile >> Creator-san*

Originally Posted by Saint X

- She more magical, 10% kendo, 0% mecha, 0 % cold badass aura (sometimes), and much more Tsundere than the current Miharu

OK. Basically, more powerful than Miharu, since all I see is +stats and no -stuff.

Originally Posted by Saint X

- It does not matter even if you drop the theory or not... or rather, it's more chaotic to drop the theory...

We need the moderation powers of the Civil Arm (AKA Ex- Secretariat (since Reiji's dropped it- maybe)) to prevent the GDI from backing from the edge of the Yellow and Red Zones.

Why?

With the fall of the TSAB, who will keep peace and order in Ordered Space in the mean time?

The distant GDI? Yeah right... Instant Marital Law as per Crisis Control Dictum...

and with that, the red zone closes near to Ordered Space- bringing a turnaround is Crosys an I-n's events... the loss of over half of Ordered Space to the Einst and Necron Invasion, the weakening of the GDI- thus making AlternateS II timeline a much more complex act to create... all we need after this is Fangwang walking in to finish all of us off...

we can just drop the TSAB logo and create two more logos for the Admin Body (Ex-Secretariat) and the Galactic Army (GDI), since the TSAB is the 'Police Force'...

Who passes the TSAB budget anyway if they don't seem to have any business ventures?

How the hell can the TSAB corrupts be a client to Scag if the money to finance his projects comes from their own pockets? that's not good for people who want money and power at the same time...

my 2 gold bars...

You're getting me wrong... I meant drop the theory completely. The theory is invalid from the start.

That means,

- The Secretariat does not exist. It never did.
- The GDI is still a secret organization, as the Galactic Army never really dismantled after the formation of TSAB and the ban of conventional warfare, but instead returned to the shadows from which it came.
- The TSAB is the sole body in overt control of Ordered Space. The GDI is just a shadow organisation backing it up.

As for day to day operations, I'm waiting for canon to reveal more about the decapitation attack, and the steps taken before I work out how things work for once.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Erio

More pictures, this time of Natalia & Emeralda together.

I wanted to post the next part of my ficlet tonight, but couldnt finish it on time... Oh well, probably tomorrow.


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Picture Gallery #02: Natalia & Emeralda #01

1. Natalia (right) & Emeralda (left) wearing her mage hat getting ready for battle... I think.

Spoiler for Picture 1:

2. Here they are after getting somewhat drunk... ... well, maybe not "somewhat"...

Spoiler for Picture 2:

3. And why not...a little fan service...?

Spoiler for Picture 3:

... *runs*

Oooh nice

Can we expect similar fanservice in the profiles?

*runs for life*

Originally Posted by Kha

But they aren't 1337 yet... They are all 3 years younger than Erio, in StrikerS they're 7, and still undergoing basic walker proficiency training. But suffice to say, they're demonstrating much talent.

This choice is due to the fact that the Cleric-knights, due to extremely limited numbers, have become a purely mechanized unit based on old doctrine to amplify each Knight's power. Hence every new CK, even Kha himself, is an Avatarion as well.

And there's a little mistake there. Zhang Wudi should've been Domon Kaistar. I'll update in a while.

*dodges Bakatsu God Finger*

Well, in Nanoha the younger you are the better

So you're telling us that most of the Cleric-Knights are now MS pilots? Hmmmm....

And... Domon

SHINING FINGAAH SWORDO!!!!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Kha

But--! That's unstable! It'll destroy all males within a 100 mile radius!!!

Exactly the plan, and once they're all been decreased to molten blobs of goo I can take over!

*demonic laughter*

Originally Posted by Kha

Okay now you've scared me. WoW Undead don't look half as scary.

*hurries to think of new form*

That's the first thing that came to mind unfortunately

Originally Posted by Erio

lol, who're going to be the other two, I wonder... Kay one of them?

But hey, S&W can try to do what Chrono and Yuuno never could... build up t3h h4r3m!!

Kay's a super robot pilot, not a sentai

I don't think S&W have what it takes to have their own harem, precisely because they want to have one

Originally Posted by Erio

Would fake IDs get me access to TSAB facilities??

If the forgery craftsmanship's good enough

Originally Posted by Erio

LOL I wasnt expecting that one.

*thinks what to say to defend himself*

Why must you ask me such difficult question?!

Originally Posted by Kha

Just admit that you're Erio and so there's nothing wrong with that.

Search your feelings... you know it to be true!

Erio... you are a Lolicon!

*Party Van parks outside*

"OH S*** It's the Feds! RUN"

Originally Posted by Kha

Just remembered one thing... And it's gonna land hard on the AX and the 82nd.

I'm for dropping the whole Tripartite thing. It all started from wondering about the TSAB Shield, but after the Brains appeared, I was so disgusted to think the GDI or Secretariat would've allowed such bull to happen. The 3 components of the shield might've just been the 3 wings of the TSAB, or the 3 brains, and nothing else...

The only problem is that because this severely affects the 82nd and the AX. But I did warn you guys that barring Ion Canon it would hold, and so far, the blast has landed, but yet to clear so I've no clear idea what happens to the theory.

Is it okay that I drop the theory altogether?

Man... and the Tripartite theory was a good one too. Guess that's one of the worst Ion Canon hits in OC history... and all because of the "brains" behind the TSAB...

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Expect something from me soon in regards to Joseth (( I feel so tempted to write a short where he punches the post-operation Vice in the stomach unconscious, but that'd be so evil... )) and maybe Austin. Damn, it's hard to find a good picture...

Now, let me rip off the AAS logo from the Nanoha page...

And expect my own... Kira/Canard too.

Joseth would actually do that? Youch...

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

And no amount of Tsun-Tsun can subdue me - if you want a knockout, then you're right; use TEH DERE-DERE POWAAA!!!

Not me! I live for that stuff!

In short... No Tsundere Too Severe for Reiji

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I see... Well, dere-dere is always good after a good dose of tsun-tsun.

More like, it's the tsun-tsun that makes the dere-dere all the more sweeter

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Maybe someone did, or maybe not Did I at least hide most of the involved OCs' identities successfully?

I had some suspicions on their identities, but I wouldn't bet on it

Originally Posted by Saint X

- Will PM you some details, though some pictures will only have a bar that says "Top Secret" on them, is that okay?

- Good for a watermark... lemme see what i can do... i have a much better group logo.

Saves and begins jury-shopping it.

Top Secret? No problem

Trivia: That logo supposedly represents Unlimited Blade Works

[Kha]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Well, in Nanoha the younger you are the better

So you're telling us that most of the Cleric-Knights are now MS pilots? Hmmmm....

And... Domon

SHINING FINGAAH SWORDO!!!!!!!!!

Nicely done. I must say, Domon and Hiro don't exactly get along...

And I need more original OCs...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Exactly the plan, and once they're all been decreased to molten blobs of goo I can take over!

*demonic laughter*

Suit yourself... If there's anything left of ya.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Kay's a super robot pilot, not a sentai

I don't think S&W have what it takes to have their own harem, precisely because they want to have one

1. Oh, I see. Now I've got to ask what's her reaction's gonna be when DaiStahlMut is pressed into service against the Wanderer on Meggido.

2. And because Kha doesn't want to have a harem, that's why he ended up with one.

*runs*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Man... and the Tripartite theory was a good one too. Guess that's one of the worst Ion Canon hits in OC history... and all because of the "brains" behind the TSAB...

No need to be that upset. At least Aurion kept the GDI alive, as the "benefactor" while he was the biggest h4xx of all time.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

In short... No Tsundere Too Severe for Reiji

Good luck... I guess someone else is used to being someone else's punching bag IRL other than myself...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

More like, it's the tsun-tsun that makes the dere-dere all the more sweeter

Reminds me of that Korean film, "My Sassy Girlfriend".

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Trivia: That logo supposedly represents Unlimited Blade Works

You don't say... I was wondering what the Rebel Alliance of the Republic had gotta do with gears.



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I'm once again at a loss for inspiration. I've got lots to do for Kha's Counterattack, but the other arcs are calling me...

[Erio]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Oooh nice

Can we expect similar fanservice in the profiles?

*runs for life*

Maybe...

*runs*

Kay's a super robot pilot, not a sentai

I don't think S&W have what it takes to have their own harem, precisely because they want to have one

Haha, makes sense.

If the forgery craftsmanship's good enough

If I had good logos to represent my characters' "group".... hmm...

Search your feelings... you know it to be true!

Erio... you are a Lolicon!

*Party Van parks outside*

"OH S*** It's the Feds! RUN"

W-What the--!! HOW DID THIS HAPPEN?!?

lol The fan service picture joke worked...but not exactly as planned, huh?

Originally Posted by Kha

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I'm once again at a loss for inspiration. I've got lots to do for Kha's Counterattack, but the other arcs are calling me...

Well, we cant do Kha's Counterattack until almost the end of StrikerS anyway...

And hey, what was that Tripartite theory? I never read about it.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by AImost Pure

All right!! The new piece is ready and up!

Spoiler for Minea Diaries #4 Part 3:

[Constance]

8 AM the following Monday Morning. Constance was to arrive at the facility right and early to meet with her colleagues and her superior. Her objects in this place were clear to her when she received her mission; discover the reason for the disappearances of recruits and officers and arrest those responsible. As far as the people here were concerned, she was a deputy Enforcer trainer in charge of the younger recruits. This assignment appeared to be simple and straight forward. In most cases the disappearances were easy to find since most of them were runaways or elopers with lovers.

It was a short walk from the Condominium to the facility, with how small the city was most things were a short walk, Constance left early though to get a better look at the streets and access points to the facility. She held at her side a nylon duffle bag, brief case combination case containing paper work, memorabilia, and a box of rounds for her Glock. Black high heeled shoes clicked the ground each step she took reaching the front doors of the facility. Wearing a uniform, knee skirt in a dark blue tone, a dress jacket of the same color, and a silk undershirt to finish it off, Constance appeared to be a model officer. Her short hair was brushed back from her eyes by a white gloved hand before she went past the clear, glass doors into the lobby.

The facility was an older designed from the early days of the TSAB. Much of the architecture modeled steel and granite then computers and steel combined. Many years ago the wiring had been gutted and the lobby reconstructed being the only “new” part of the compound aside from the laboratory. The lobby held a massive two story fountain at its base. Marble floors, marble pillars raised up five stories, offices to the right and the elevators to the left. A quick approach to the receptionist desk gave her directions to the elevator on her left; the top floor at floor 15 was her destination.

The elevators were a series of wide, glass cylinders using magnetic energy to raise and lower the platforms to each floor and then the roof; access to floors 12-14 and the roof was only granted to special authority. Each floor the elevator reached a soft ding signaled either its passing or stopping, for Constance it was a non stop flight to the top. At the top, the doors didn’t open immediately, instead they remained closed for a time period of one minute giving the person riding it a moment to gaze out across the city’s span.

The hard steel doors finally opened allowing Constance to step out into the hallway. Another receptionist sat in front of a single door in the back, to her left and right another four doors sat with the four other Commanding Officers offices. She walked without worry or lack of confidence reaching the receptionist’s desk. A moment pausing, she gazed down at the ditzy looking green head behind the desk. She appeared to be only in her early twenties like Constance, thick eye makeup, skirt dangerously too short to be professional, breast implants from the looks of it, and who knew that a low cut blouse with a few buttons unbuttoned was regulation dress wear. The secretary was seated in front of a wide, metal desk with a holographic keyboard and screen positioned in front of her. “I’m here to see, Admiral Franklin Secrin.” Constance spoke raising her voice enough to get the Teen Dream away from her computer conversation on the holographic screen.

Over the sound of thick gum chewing, the stereotype secretary pushed a button in front of her buzzing the twin, red wood door behind her. “Go on in. He’s waiting for you.” She said annoyingly nodding her head to Constance returning to her computer screen.

Constance felt an urge to throw the girl across the room for principle alone. Irritation swept over her normally calm manner. Turning swiftly to the right she went forward pushing her way inside of the office. The massive room was a good twenty feet by twenty feet. Antique legal Logia, paintings from various worlds and times, antique weapons, and a giant tank containing a lizard sized dragon. ‘Certainly has his share of money… Doesn’t he?’ Constance noted gazing around as she walked forward towards the back of the office. The back wall was a window, a massive desk in front of it mirroring how many officers seemed to keep their offices. Constance assumed that the man sitting on the back facing chair would be the admiral. “Admiral, Constance Lantus Reporting.” Constance spoke aloud, her legs coming together to obtain a proper stance.

The expensive, dragon leather chair spun around to face Mage Trainer Constance. Admiral Secrin was one of the youngest Admirals to ever be given the position. Coming from a middle class family from the suburbs; The Admiral excelled in no major classes in school or in the academy that he was in. What did he excel in if not in magic or academic skills? Improvising, sabotaging, data manipulation, and contacts within the facility. He rose in the ranks quickly with these means ducking under watching eyes by either changing videos, rankings, or ensuring those ahead of him faltered. It was when Commander Gil Graham had resigned that he was finally given his position of Admiral; a decision that the founding Brass regrets to this day. Shuffled around until he was placed at an older Facility, the Admiral has since reformed the facility to his own personal needs and desires. The admiral’s appearance fit a young man well. Black hair with tips dyed blond, goatee running around his mouth with a triangle bottom, broad shoulders, thin hands, and athletic legs. He wore his uniform seemingly proudly with his rank and medals shinned and shown for all to see. Many would argue that those same medals belong to others for accomplishments that he stole. “Welcome. Yes I received the information of your transfer recently. Welcome to my Facility, Trainer Lantus.” He gave her a seducers smile flashing perfect straight teeth. The sunlight from the window giving his pale skin a certain glow.

“Yes, sir.” Constance replied setting her hands behind her back, left hand holding onto her wrist. “I will be conducting a new training technique here at the facility to see how well it works before being applied to other facilities.” Her words were spoken without hesitation or doubt in why she was here. The perfect cover, after all, had to have perfect confidence.

“Yes, yes. I read the briefings and reports. I apologize that I do not have more time to discuss your stay here. Enforcer Damuel will be your fellow trainer.” The Admiral gave a dismissive wave to her. He truly had no interest in this new trainer as he should have had. “She is waiting for you out on the training grounds. She enjoys showing off her skill to the new recruits before they begin their training. Before you go to the elevator, please tell my secretary I need to see her.” The admiral turned in his chair fully disregarding Constance’s presence in the room.

Constance smirked at the Admiral’s back. A very cocky, upstart of a man she determined just by this meeting. She bowed her body forward then turned twisting on the heel of her shoes around back to the door. Her hand slid down into the pocket of her skirt withdrawing a small marble sized device. A quick squeeze on the thin outer layer broke the device’s coating turning it into a sticky ball. Constance flicked her wrist sending the device against a nearby statue, no doubt to remain until she removes it.

Once she escaped from the office the secretary didn’t have to be told to go in, she was already waiting for Constance to reach the elevator before descending into the Admiral’s office. Inside of the glass tube again, Constance pressed the button for the basement level then leaned against the glass wall. “Once chore down, no doubt Malaki is on his radio on time listening to whatever the Admiral is going to ever say.” Constance turned her head enough to again gaze out the window watching over the city. The assignment didn’t make much sense to her. She was to investigate reporting of officers and new mages going missing along with unusual magic readings from the laboratory. The two primary suspects are the Admiral and Doctor Celesti Damuel.

Constance lingered for a long moment in the elevator when it reached the basement. Her thoughts a high wire act of wonder and intrigue about this place. Celesti Damuel was the one who caught her attention the most. At one point she was a scientist working in conjunction with Precia Testarossa and on the very same project she worked on, until she broke off to search out her own methods. This alone would have caused an investigation to come over her after the Jewel Seed Incident but nothing happened. As for the Admiral, his quick rise through the ranks, unusual rise to wealthy status, and lack of investigations into many alleged crimes; possible rape, embezzlement, murder, kidnapping, and witness to many suicides, has many wondering how he did even make Admiral to begin with. These allegations made him a prime suspect just by principle alone.

Constance mind shifted instantly when she left the garage area where the elevator was and out in the training field. The open air area expanded to the size of a football field. The area that Constance came from had above it a U shaped stadium set of seats to sit spectators and officials when in the past they would take notes of how training went. Various spots of the dusty field had small emitters implanted into the ground to create structures or enemies at quick disposal for the necessary exercise at hand. Above, various beams went form one side to another to act for rappelling or swinging during combat. At the end of the field, about a quarter mile off, was a massive lake with at the far end the laboratory sat looming in the shadow of a massive mountain. Constance didn’t know what experiments they performed in the multi high rise building, but she was bound to find out sooner or later.

Constance took a moment glancing around the open field. On her left upon leaving the garage a group of young trainees were waiting to watch the mages in work. Most of them had to be anywhere between 10 and 13 years of age. They were staring forward in amazement at the six figures currently on the field; the six before them was Alexandria and her five chosen members of her unit. Each of them wore identical Barrier Jackets to Alexandria’s; a skin tight cat suite of black that covered from their necks down to their feet and hands. Specialized mechanical shoes and finger less gloves were worn on their limbs designed for added traction and grip. Metal plates were specially sculpted to fit onto their shins, thighs, and arms for added reflection projection. Over their torsos they wore metal chest pieces set to fit their individual body shapes. Over their faces, Wyvern masks were placed to hide who they were individually. Of the five of Alexandria’s unit, there were four women and one man, the man and one woman with dark skin, and the other three with light.

Alexandria motioned for her unit to move away and disperse to the side lines. The machinery and holograms went to work creating an urban setting of sprawling buildings and automobiles around. Alexandria smirked when she saw her future partner Trainer standing with the new recruits. “Twilight, Activate Crescent Blades” Alexandria commanded touching the black star imbedded in her chest armor. A bright light engulfed her hands creating her weapons. The dual swords were an unusual shape for long swords; their hilts made of half crescents with the handle attached at the ends opposite the curves. Ice shard wings appeared on her back followed by a glass shattering sound when Alexandria leapt upwards taking to the air; a streak of ice powder flowing behind her. At twenty feet above the materialized structure, Alexandria flipped back down with her back facing the ground in a beautiful summersault. She twisted her self diving towards the ground with the blades extended in front of her. Moments before she hit the hard dirt her body twisted it’s self to fly horizontal with the earth below, the blades extending outwards at her sides with cold energy pulsing to freeze the buildings at their base where they touched. At the end of the holographic street she straightened her self then landed onto her feet. Now, came the fun part.

Multiple humanoid drones dropped down form the tops of the buildings crashing to the ground below. They held no weapons for this particular exercise but they would be well enough for what she needed. Alexandria waited no time at all to attack the drones. When they struck high she ducked down or rolled beneath their blows driving her blades through their legs then up to their torso. The long swords slid on their curved hilts changing their direction without changing how Alexandria was holding them or swinging. When only a few of the drones remained, Alexandria took to the skies positioning her self above the final drones. She moved her blades so one was set behind the other, their shape merging together forming a long range rifle; light blue metal attaching to it. “Twilight, Blast Spike.” Alexandria commanded. Magic symbols appeared beneath her body, energy collected with in the barrel of the rifle. “Fire” She spoke aloud firing at high speeds a globe of dark blue energy.

The orb crashed against the ground sending spikes of ice in every direction where the bottoms of the buildings were frozen. The sharp ice sickles broke the bases of the buildings bringing the high rises crashing down around the drones crushing them beneath the weight. The crowd of on looking recruits began to cheer loudly as the Ice Queen came down landing in front of them.

Constance was amazed by the tactics that she used to defeat her opponents. Not only did Alexandria use brute force and magic to dispatch them, but she used her surroundings to her advantage as well. Constance stepped forward to approach the head Enforcer Trainer of the Facility. Her hand came up brushing back her short, dark brunette hair then took a proper soldier stance. “Good morning. Alexandria Damuel, if I am not mistaken.”

Alexandria glanced up and down over Constance. Her hands drawing back her long black hair from her eyes and shoulders letting it fall behind her. Her barrier jacket vanished in a glow of blue energy, Twilight reforming as a necklace around her neck. “Yes, I have been expecting you. We have much to discuss.”

Alexandria and Constance turned moving back into the garage. Both of them in their peak physical shape, walked with a poise of confidence and maturity rarely seen in officers. “I run my training session’s tough. If someone is unable to understand the dangers of battle, or understand that only the best should become Enforcers, then I ensure that they do not move on.” Alexandria began speaking stopping her movements in front of the closed Elevator. Her hand raised pressing for the fifth floor.

“I agree completely. Someone who is not ready to fulfill a position of combat should not be placed into live combat. It could jeopardize the mission and the lives of others around them. Strict training to draw out and eliminate their weakness is the only method that should be approached.” Constance replied glancing over to the stunning, black haired woman the back forward waiting for the elevator to come down to them.

“We are one in the same it seems. From what I have been told, you will be eliminating possible rejects before they are put under my training. This will allow me to further train possible Enforcers further then I have all ready.”

“Exactly. I have read of your records, and from what I have seen I am quite impressed with your methods of combat and styles. You accomplish your battles quickly and use everything at your disposal.” Constance put her hands behind her back, one hand holding the other’s wrist. She tilted her head back watching the numbers for the floors light up as the elevator reached each designated floor.

“We have much to discuss it seems. I am sure I will enjoy working with you, Trainer Lantus.”

“As I, with you, Enforcer Damuel.”

[Minea]

Dear Diary, March 27th

I’m afraid I angered Alexandria again this morning. When I woke up she was sitting at the end of my bed watching me sleep but… she was clearly angry with how she was snarling. All the pictures I had on my walls been torn down; the photos of Signum, mother, Alexandria, and everyone at the diner littered the ground.

“What have I told you about disrespecting Mother and I.” She said throwing a picture of Signum at me. “I should be the one you look up to and cherish, my dear sister. Not someone you have never met.” She screamed at me as she began to hit me. “I am going to discipline you now, my dear sister.” I remember her saying that just as I felt her grab my leg, and a painful crack coming from my foot. I don’t know how much time passed, but when she was done, Judas took me to Mother’s lab to be checked on.

Mother was there to see my injuries. She put my foot in a splint and told me it was broken, she bandaged my left cheek, above my right eye, and wrapped my ribs up saying two were cracked. She actually spoke to me though this time, “She does this out of Love, Dear Minea.” She’s never talked like this before. “You should listen to what she and Mother say.” Judas took me home so I could call Vanissa to tell her I wouldn’t be coming in for a week; Mother told me that I would be out for that long. The mage who normally heals me is away right now.

Judas took me home and set me to bed. He made me lunch then went to sit at my door to make sure I didn’t leave. I want to go to the diner even if I am hurt but mother said no. She told me that they both love me… That’s what she said. I just want to make them happy but not be hurt for it… Isn’t there anything I can do?

[Celesti]

Celesti sat in her underground office watching on her holographic screen as Minea wrote in her diary. Two other screens were opened monitoring Minea’s vital signs and the energy coming from her Logia heart. Realization would surmise showing on her face as the energy from the Logia increased when she spoke about love and spending time at the diner, but decreased during the time she wrote about turmoil. Celesti turned once of the three screens to show the activity of the Logia from 9 years ago when the Condominium complex’s pets changed into monsters from the Logia draining their life. She had written about being lonely, and wanting her family. “Brilliant. I may know how to activate its full potential. Precia was close to uncovering the truths, but her madness caused by fools drove her to the brink. My dear Minea, you hold the blood of my self and another’s in your veins. Soon, our dreams will be realized.”

I'm defenitely amazed by the amount of detail you can put in your works!
Excellent. There're quite a lot of meetings going on here. That Admiral is sure gonna get it in the future!

Constance and Alexandria's meeting is quite fitting. And Minea's plight is .

Originally Posted by Erio

LOL I wasnt expecting that one.

*thinks what to say to defend himself*

Why must you ask me such difficult question?!

Originally Posted by Kha

Just admit that you're Erio and so there's nothing wrong with that.

[Kha][/Kha]

Originally Posted by Kha

1. That made me go WTF?! I mean, combine both together, and you get the infamous "Unlimited Saber Works" doujin-Shiro used to defeat Gil.

LOL! I know that doujin!
Though I gotta admit. It sounds nutty.

2. 2WTF?! At least they got their brains handed to them. I love the smell of political vacuum. Now's a good time for the GDI to step in, after creating the AX, helping Aurion, and nudging Ordered Space along from their shadowy corners in TSAB control.

Canon seems to not mind me. Whooo! I really play my cards well! Glad I helped somehow.

But of course I'm waiting for canon to reveal the steps taken to deal with the loss of brain power before I rebuild the theory.

You're getting me wrong... I meant drop the theory completely. The theory is invalid from the start.

That means,

- The Secretariat does not exist. It never did.
- The GDI is still a secret organization, as the Galactic Army never really dismantled after the formation of TSAB and the ban of conventional warfare, but instead returned to the shadows from which it came.
- The TSAB is the sole body in overt control of Ordered Space. The GDI is just a shadow organisation backing it up.

As for day to day operations, I'm waiting for canon to reveal more about the decapitation attack, and the steps taken before I work out how things work for once.

OUCH! So much for that... I also need Canon confirmation if I am to further expand on RevivalS. Lutecia, Agito, Vivio, etc. are all loose ends.

Originally Posted by Kha

No need to be that upset. At least Aurion kept the GDI alive, as the "benefactor" while he was the biggest h4xx of all time.

Chotto... Biggest HAXX? (Well.. Infinity Cylinder-class attack in Nanohaverse really is...)

[haiz123321]

Whee im back at last, com died on me few months back so i couldn't get on but i editted a whole lot of stuff so plz give me any comments =p

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Evil teasers seem to be popular lately, so I can't help joining the trend

Teasers for OutcastS:

Spoiler for The past?:

“Is this all?”

“Yes, Lord Inquisitor.’

“Very well, let me summarize what you’ve told us then …”

He briefly skipped through the report once more, making short remarks at some points.

“To tell you the truth I find it extremely hard to believe that we could’ve been missing such major anomaly within the Immaterium all this time.”

“I would say the same at your place, but I’ve seen it myself, experienced it, and that is why-“

“Don’t be so rash, Confessor, the case is quite delicate indeed.”

“I’m sorry, Lord Inquisitor, I understand.”

“By the way, there’s one thing missing in your report.”

“What? Missing?”

“Yes, one thing is missing from your report.”

The Inquisitor put his hands on the table and leaned forward.

"You've mentioned the names of 13 Daemon Lords, right?"

"Yes, 13 holding the most power, but why is this important?"

“Do not interrupt me yet. The Daemon that told you all of this, you've never mentioned that, but which one of those names belongs to him?”

“How? … How do you know he’s one of the Lords at all?!”

Something similar to a grin of satisfaction appeared on the Inquisitor's face.

“Don’t try to hide anything, Confessor. You future has already been sealed. The truth shall be known to everybody.”

The Inquisitor’s voice sounded like coming from the bottom of a deep well, his eye pupils rapidly turning pitch black.

“His name is…”
“My name is…”

The two phrases were spoken simultaneously.

“*********.”

The name echoed in the chamber.

“Lord Inquisitor … you … can’t be ..?”

Spoiler for Back to the main timeline:

“I can clearly see your connection to the powers of Chaos, but one thing about you is strange – you do not seem to serve any one of the Gods. Nevertheless …”

The voice of the hooded figure obtained a more menacing tone.

“… We are not going to take any unnecessary risks. I will say it only once – do not get yourself involved with this case. Otherwise you will not be simply endangering your own life but will also make other people around you suffer. I believe I do not have to tell you the names.”


***


“The task should not be difficult for you at all. We will be taking care of most of the threats while you shall simply get the named items and destroy the rest along with the depot. You are free to deal with the possible obstacles in any way you will find appropriate. The operation will take place in two days and will serve as the indication of our alliance being officially forged. You will be provided with the detailed plans of the building and its surroundings as well as the profiles on everybody you may encounter there. Though you should be familiar with most of them already. Right, *********?”


***


“Sir, we have an urgent report from the Headquarters”, - Sarah entered the room with a worried expression she had never shown before, - “The visual link will be established in a moment – we’re having some troubles with communications due to a nearby Warp Storm.”

“What’s it about?” – Serge wondered if the news were going to mess up his current plans.

“The enemy”, - replied Sarah shortly, - “They’ve made their move, but it’s quite far from here, and … it was S’Zet military base this time. It seems that they’ve taken over the battleship stationed there …”

The way she sounded wasn’t promising anything good.

“How serious is it?”

“It was the flagship, sir.”


***


With an impossible for a regular human’s body move Sirius’ hand stopped the weapon from hitting his face, grabbing it along with the wielder’s arm.

“Looks like TSAB officers do get some basic training in melee combat”, - he said calmly.

Then he straightened his arm, twisting the opponent’s hand in the process.

“But compared to us without your magic you’re quite worthless.”

His free arm made a quick upward motion accompanied by the sound of breaking bones.

“You have lost.”


***


“It would be enough for me to simply delay you here for a while but I have a feeling that you could appear more troublesome than you seem to be, and when I have an opportunity to prevent troubles from happening I use them.”

The hooded figure stretched the right arm forward, though it was still impossible to see its actual hand.

“I will be killing you all right away.”

A weird magical circle of purple color appeared beneath the figure and the smell of sulfur suddenly filled the air.

“Arcesso Ignis Bellua.”


***


Sirius stood at the place of former office building, seemingly not being harmed more than he’d already been before the impact. A raging aura, its color similar to that of the rotten blood, protected his entire body while the masses of steel, glass and concrete around him were being easily vaporized.

“Impressive”, - he uttered, - “At their peak your powers could even surpass mine. But …”

He made several steps forward.

“… at your condition it’s useless now. No matter what you’ll try, you have lost.”


***


Serge felt the taste of iron in his mouth and when he took his next breath the air seemed to be filled with fine sand or some other kind of miniscule grains. He coughed hard and tried breathing through a piece of cloth. That helped but didn’t solve the problem entirely, and he still wasn’t able to sense any magic involved. Attacking recklessly was already proven a poor option, and though Serge was sure that he wouldn’t repeat his unlucky subordinate’s mistake he also couldn’t think of a reliable way to take care of this opponent. For the first time in his entire life he felt so powerless despite not being actually restrained in any way. The logic was telling him that the best solution right now would be an attempt to escape while there was still a chance.


***


The unconscious body fell helplessly onto the ground.

“It’s your own fault”, - narrated Sirius looking down at the defeated opponent, - “Though you’re worthy of my praise – that move of yours was actually able to surprise me. But you shouldn’t have thought that it alone could be enough to take me down.”

He made a short pause.

“And on top of that your priorities during the battle are completely wrong. Therefore, you have lost.”


***


“Hmm, you are hurt?” – The emotionless low voice clearly belonged to the one labeled Cygnus.

“You can see it yourself, there’s no need for my confirmation”, - Sirius answered him in a not so pleasant tone.

“It is quite a rare sight, were they actually that good?”

“Not really.”

“Was it your pride again then? You should give up on it and stop holding back already.”

“Mind your own business. You’ve got what you needed, isn’t it?”

“That is right. We will also execute the back-up plan concurrently with the main operation.”

“Is it really necessary? Who gave the orders?”

“Lord *** *****.”

“What a coward … I still can’t believe someone of his power could be so paranoid.”

“I hate him as well, but we are allies right now.”

“Tch.”

“Would you lend me a hand here? It is quite hard to do when they are unconscious.”

“I believe you’ll manage somehow. I’ll be reporting to Milady. For now, farewell.”


***


“I … am alright, I think. But … who are you?”

“Eeh?” - ****** stared at her friend with a mixed expression of concern and surprise, - “What do you mean by asking me who I am?”

A nice teaser, although so so evil....

I'll be looking forward to when the whole thing get's finished

Originally Posted by AImost Pure

All right!! The new piece is ready and up!

Spoiler for Minea Diaries #4 Part 3:

[Constance]

8 AM the following Monday Morning. Constance was to arrive at the facility right and early to meet with her colleagues and her superior. Her objects in this place were clear to her when she received her mission; discover the reason for the disappearances of recruits and officers and arrest those responsible. As far as the people here were concerned, she was a deputy Enforcer trainer in charge of the younger recruits. This assignment appeared to be simple and straight forward. In most cases the disappearances were easy to find since most of them were runaways or elopers with lovers.

It was a short walk from the Condominium to the facility, with how small the city was most things were a short walk, Constance left early though to get a better look at the streets and access points to the facility. She held at her side a nylon duffle bag, brief case combination case containing paper work, memorabilia, and a box of rounds for her Glock. Black high heeled shoes clicked the ground each step she took reaching the front doors of the facility. Wearing a uniform, knee skirt in a dark blue tone, a dress jacket of the same color, and a silk undershirt to finish it off, Constance appeared to be a model officer. Her short hair was brushed back from her eyes by a white gloved hand before she went past the clear, glass doors into the lobby.

The facility was an older designed from the early days of the TSAB. Much of the architecture modeled steel and granite then computers and steel combined. Many years ago the wiring had been gutted and the lobby reconstructed being the only “new” part of the compound aside from the laboratory. The lobby held a massive two story fountain at its base. Marble floors, marble pillars raised up five stories, offices to the right and the elevators to the left. A quick approach to the receptionist desk gave her directions to the elevator on her left; the top floor at floor 15 was her destination.

The elevators were a series of wide, glass cylinders using magnetic energy to raise and lower the platforms to each floor and then the roof; access to floors 12-14 and the roof was only granted to special authority. Each floor the elevator reached a soft ding signaled either its passing or stopping, for Constance it was a non stop flight to the top. At the top, the doors didn’t open immediately, instead they remained closed for a time period of one minute giving the person riding it a moment to gaze out across the city’s span.

The hard steel doors finally opened allowing Constance to step out into the hallway. Another receptionist sat in front of a single door in the back, to her left and right another four doors sat with the four other Commanding Officers offices. She walked without worry or lack of confidence reaching the receptionist’s desk. A moment pausing, she gazed down at the ditzy looking green head behind the desk. She appeared to be only in her early twenties like Constance, thick eye makeup, skirt dangerously too short to be professional, breast implants from the looks of it, and who knew that a low cut blouse with a few buttons unbuttoned was regulation dress wear. The secretary was seated in front of a wide, metal desk with a holographic keyboard and screen positioned in front of her. “I’m here to see, Admiral Franklin Secrin.” Constance spoke raising her voice enough to get the Teen Dream away from her computer conversation on the holographic screen.

Over the sound of thick gum chewing, the stereotype secretary pushed a button in front of her buzzing the twin, red wood door behind her. “Go on in. He’s waiting for you.” She said annoyingly nodding her head to Constance returning to her computer screen.

Constance felt an urge to throw the girl across the room for principle alone. Irritation swept over her normally calm manner. Turning swiftly to the right she went forward pushing her way inside of the office. The massive room was a good twenty feet by twenty feet. Antique legal Logia, paintings from various worlds and times, antique weapons, and a giant tank containing a lizard sized dragon. ‘Certainly has his share of money… Doesn’t he?’ Constance noted gazing around as she walked forward towards the back of the office. The back wall was a window, a massive desk in front of it mirroring how many officers seemed to keep their offices. Constance assumed that the man sitting on the back facing chair would be the admiral. “Admiral, Constance Lantus Reporting.” Constance spoke aloud, her legs coming together to obtain a proper stance.

The expensive, dragon leather chair spun around to face Mage Trainer Constance. Admiral Secrin was one of the youngest Admirals to ever be given the position. Coming from a middle class family from the suburbs; The Admiral excelled in no major classes in school or in the academy that he was in. What did he excel in if not in magic or academic skills? Improvising, sabotaging, data manipulation, and contacts within the facility. He rose in the ranks quickly with these means ducking under watching eyes by either changing videos, rankings, or ensuring those ahead of him faltered. It was when Commander Gil Graham had resigned that he was finally given his position of Admiral; a decision that the founding Brass regrets to this day. Shuffled around until he was placed at an older Facility, the Admiral has since reformed the facility to his own personal needs and desires. The admiral’s appearance fit a young man well. Black hair with tips dyed blond, goatee running around his mouth with a triangle bottom, broad shoulders, thin hands, and athletic legs. He wore his uniform seemingly proudly with his rank and medals shinned and shown for all to see. Many would argue that those same medals belong to others for accomplishments that he stole. “Welcome. Yes I received the information of your transfer recently. Welcome to my Facility, Trainer Lantus.” He gave her a seducers smile flashing perfect straight teeth. The sunlight from the window giving his pale skin a certain glow.

“Yes, sir.” Constance replied setting her hands behind her back, left hand holding onto her wrist. “I will be conducting a new training technique here at the facility to see how well it works before being applied to other facilities.” Her words were spoken without hesitation or doubt in why she was here. The perfect cover, after all, had to have perfect confidence.

“Yes, yes. I read the briefings and reports. I apologize that I do not have more time to discuss your stay here. Enforcer Damuel will be your fellow trainer.” The Admiral gave a dismissive wave to her. He truly had no interest in this new trainer as he should have had. “She is waiting for you out on the training grounds. She enjoys showing off her skill to the new recruits before they begin their training. Before you go to the elevator, please tell my secretary I need to see her.” The admiral turned in his chair fully disregarding Constance’s presence in the room.

Constance smirked at the Admiral’s back. A very cocky, upstart of a man she determined just by this meeting. She bowed her body forward then turned twisting on the heel of her shoes around back to the door. Her hand slid down into the pocket of her skirt withdrawing a small marble sized device. A quick squeeze on the thin outer layer broke the device’s coating turning it into a sticky ball. Constance flicked her wrist sending the device against a nearby statue, no doubt to remain until she removes it.

Once she escaped from the office the secretary didn’t have to be told to go in, she was already waiting for Constance to reach the elevator before descending into the Admiral’s office. Inside of the glass tube again, Constance pressed the button for the basement level then leaned against the glass wall. “Once chore down, no doubt Malaki is on his radio on time listening to whatever the Admiral is going to ever say.” Constance turned her head enough to again gaze out the window watching over the city. The assignment didn’t make much sense to her. She was to investigate reporting of officers and new mages going missing along with unusual magic readings from the laboratory. The two primary suspects are the Admiral and Doctor Celesti Damuel.

Constance lingered for a long moment in the elevator when it reached the basement. Her thoughts a high wire act of wonder and intrigue about this place. Celesti Damuel was the one who caught her attention the most. At one point she was a scientist working in conjunction with Precia Testarossa and on the very same project she worked on, until she broke off to search out her own methods. This alone would have caused an investigation to come over her after the Jewel Seed Incident but nothing happened. As for the Admiral, his quick rise through the ranks, unusual rise to wealthy status, and lack of investigations into many alleged crimes; possible rape, embezzlement, murder, kidnapping, and witness to many suicides, has many wondering how he did even make Admiral to begin with. These allegations made him a prime suspect just by principle alone.

Constance mind shifted instantly when she left the garage area where the elevator was and out in the training field. The open air area expanded to the size of a football field. The area that Constance came from had above it a U shaped stadium set of seats to sit spectators and officials when in the past they would take notes of how training went. Various spots of the dusty field had small emitters implanted into the ground to create structures or enemies at quick disposal for the necessary exercise at hand. Above, various beams went form one side to another to act for rappelling or swinging during combat. At the end of the field, about a quarter mile off, was a massive lake with at the far end the laboratory sat looming in the shadow of a massive mountain. Constance didn’t know what experiments they performed in the multi high rise building, but she was bound to find out sooner or later.

Constance took a moment glancing around the open field. On her left upon leaving the garage a group of young trainees were waiting to watch the mages in work. Most of them had to be anywhere between 10 and 13 years of age. They were staring forward in amazement at the six figures currently on the field; the six before them was Alexandria and her five chosen members of her unit. Each of them wore identical Barrier Jackets to Alexandria’s; a skin tight cat suite of black that covered from their necks down to their feet and hands. Specialized mechanical shoes and finger less gloves were worn on their limbs designed for added traction and grip. Metal plates were specially sculpted to fit onto their shins, thighs, and arms for added reflection projection. Over their torsos they wore metal chest pieces set to fit their individual body shapes. Over their faces, Wyvern masks were placed to hide who they were individually. Of the five of Alexandria’s unit, there were four women and one man, the man and one woman with dark skin, and the other three with light.

Alexandria motioned for her unit to move away and disperse to the side lines. The machinery and holograms went to work creating an urban setting of sprawling buildings and automobiles around. Alexandria smirked when she saw her future partner Trainer standing with the new recruits. “Twilight, Activate Crescent Blades” Alexandria commanded touching the black star imbedded in her chest armor. A bright light engulfed her hands creating her weapons. The dual swords were an unusual shape for long swords; their hilts made of half crescents with the handle attached at the ends opposite the curves. Ice shard wings appeared on her back followed by a glass shattering sound when Alexandria leapt upwards taking to the air; a streak of ice powder flowing behind her. At twenty feet above the materialized structure, Alexandria flipped back down with her back facing the ground in a beautiful summersault. She twisted her self diving towards the ground with the blades extended in front of her. Moments before she hit the hard dirt her body twisted it’s self to fly horizontal with the earth below, the blades extending outwards at her sides with cold energy pulsing to freeze the buildings at their base where they touched. At the end of the holographic street she straightened her self then landed onto her feet. Now, came the fun part.

Multiple humanoid drones dropped down form the tops of the buildings crashing to the ground below. They held no weapons for this particular exercise but they would be well enough for what she needed. Alexandria waited no time at all to attack the drones. When they struck high she ducked down or rolled beneath their blows driving her blades through their legs then up to their torso. The long swords slid on their curved hilts changing their direction without changing how Alexandria was holding them or swinging. When only a few of the drones remained, Alexandria took to the skies positioning her self above the final drones. She moved her blades so one was set behind the other, their shape merging together forming a long range rifle; light blue metal attaching to it. “Twilight, Blast Spike.” Alexandria commanded. Magic symbols appeared beneath her body, energy collected with in the barrel of the rifle. “Fire” She spoke aloud firing at high speeds a globe of dark blue energy.

The orb crashed against the ground sending spikes of ice in every direction where the bottoms of the buildings were frozen. The sharp ice sickles broke the bases of the buildings bringing the high rises crashing down around the drones crushing them beneath the weight. The crowd of on looking recruits began to cheer loudly as the Ice Queen came down landing in front of them.

Constance was amazed by the tactics that she used to defeat her opponents. Not only did Alexandria use brute force and magic to dispatch them, but she used her surroundings to her advantage as well. Constance stepped forward to approach the head Enforcer Trainer of the Facility. Her hand came up brushing back her short, dark brunette hair then took a proper soldier stance. “Good morning. Alexandria Damuel, if I am not mistaken.”

Alexandria glanced up and down over Constance. Her hands drawing back her long black hair from her eyes and shoulders letting it fall behind her. Her barrier jacket vanished in a glow of blue energy, Twilight reforming as a necklace around her neck. “Yes, I have been expecting you. We have much to discuss.”

Alexandria and Constance turned moving back into the garage. Both of them in their peak physical shape, walked with a poise of confidence and maturity rarely seen in officers. “I run my training session’s tough. If someone is unable to understand the dangers of battle, or understand that only the best should become Enforcers, then I ensure that they do not move on.” Alexandria began speaking stopping her movements in front of the closed Elevator. Her hand raised pressing for the fifth floor.

“I agree completely. Someone who is not ready to fulfill a position of combat should not be placed into live combat. It could jeopardize the mission and the lives of others around them. Strict training to draw out and eliminate their weakness is the only method that should be approached.” Constance replied glancing over to the stunning, black haired woman the back forward waiting for the elevator to come down to them.

“We are one in the same it seems. From what I have been told, you will be eliminating possible rejects before they are put under my training. This will allow me to further train possible Enforcers further then I have all ready.”

“Exactly. I have read of your records, and from what I have seen I am quite impressed with your methods of combat and styles. You accomplish your battles quickly and use everything at your disposal.” Constance put her hands behind her back, one hand holding the other’s wrist. She tilted her head back watching the numbers for the floors light up as the elevator reached each designated floor.

“We have much to discuss it seems. I am sure I will enjoy working with you, Trainer Lantus.”

“As I, with you, Enforcer Damuel.”

[Minea]

Dear Diary, March 27th

I’m afraid I angered Alexandria again this morning. When I woke up she was sitting at the end of my bed watching me sleep but… she was clearly angry with how she was snarling. All the pictures I had on my walls been torn down; the photos of Signum, mother, Alexandria, and everyone at the diner littered the ground.

“What have I told you about disrespecting Mother and I.” She said throwing a picture of Signum at me. “I should be the one you look up to and cherish, my dear sister. Not someone you have never met.” She screamed at me as she began to hit me. “I am going to discipline you now, my dear sister.” I remember her saying that just as I felt her grab my leg, and a painful crack coming from my foot. I don’t know how much time passed, but when she was done, Judas took me to Mother’s lab to be checked on.

Mother was there to see my injuries. She put my foot in a splint and told me it was broken, she bandaged my left cheek, above my right eye, and wrapped my ribs up saying two were cracked. She actually spoke to me though this time, “She does this out of Love, Dear Minea.” She’s never talked like this before. “You should listen to what she and Mother say.” Judas took me home so I could call Vanissa to tell her I wouldn’t be coming in for a week; Mother told me that I would be out for that long. The mage who normally heals me is away right now.

Judas took me home and set me to bed. He made me lunch then went to sit at my door to make sure I didn’t leave. I want to go to the diner even if I am hurt but mother said no. She told me that they both love me… That’s what she said. I just want to make them happy but not be hurt for it… Isn’t there anything I can do?

[Celesti]

Celesti sat in her underground office watching on her holographic screen as Minea wrote in her diary. Two other screens were opened monitoring Minea’s vital signs and the energy coming from her Logia heart. Realization would surmise showing on her face as the energy from the Logia increased when she spoke about love and spending time at the diner, but decreased during the time she wrote about turmoil. Celesti turned once of the three screens to show the activity of the Logia from 9 years ago when the Condominium complex’s pets changed into monsters from the Logia draining their life. She had written about being lonely, and wanting her family. “Brilliant. I may know how to activate its full potential. Precia was close to uncovering the truths, but her madness caused by fools drove her to the brink. My dear Minea, you hold the blood of my self and another’s in your veins. Soon, our dreams will be realized.”

That was really well written. The description of Alexandria as she moves through the exercise was well handled. Nice Job!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

For those wanting ID's similar to these, I'm now Accepting OC ID information. PM with the following information:

- Name
- Position (This is the OC's role in their particular group)
- ID number (random sequence of alphanumeric characters )
- Career (The OC's career record)
- Registered Domicile (Place of birth, and if possible date of birth in MM-DD-YYYY format.)
- Present Address (current place of residence)
- Qualification (OC's magic rank, class and specialty. Also, Job Description.)
- Device (OC's Device or devices)
- Present Belonging (The group OC currently serves under)
- Magic Color (which'll determine the ID border's color)

Also, need good quality pics for:

- Watermark (this is the central insignia for the ID, which represents the group the OC is under.)
- Squad Insignia (Insignia of squad OC belongs to)

And of course, a good pic of your OC

I'll keep that in mind I may be using your services soon Soon as when I get the time to find pictures and create insignia... ie, not for a good while..

Just something that really annoyed me as I was scrolling thorugh the backlog...
While KHA'S list was truly EPIC in scale and in length, could people please refrain from quoting the whole post... think of the scrolling that we have to do... (Especially those of us who aren't usind the default settings, I'm on 30 posts/page and it still takes a long time.)

Thanks.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

OUCH! So much for that... I also need Canon confirmation if I am to further expand on RevivalS. Lutecia, Agito, Vivio, etc. are all loose ends.

Chotto... Biggest HAXX? (Well.. Infinity Cylinder-class attack in Nanohaverse really is...)

Where's the love for Zest?! He's awesome!! (Though I know what you mean... he wont be alive by then )

And you admit it finally!!! YES!!!!

Originally Posted by Liingo

Just something that really annoyed me as I was scrolling thorugh the backlog...
While KHA'S list was truly EPIC in scale and in length, could people please refrain from quoting the whole post... think of the scrolling that we have to do... (Especially those of us who aren't usind the default settings, I'm on 30 posts/page and it still takes a long time.)

Thanks.

[Kha] [/Kha]

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Whee im back at last, com died on me few months back so i couldn't get on but i editted a whole lot of stuff so plz give me any comments =p

I see you're back. Well then, off to Koumyou.

Rank: HIGH! He's that powerful? You understand that he's already more powerful than all of the Aces at that point, right? Nanoha and Fate are S+ while Hayate is SS. And he's 18! I call HAXX!

Device: Where did that device come from?

Hermit: There's no such thing as a Hermit that can teach him both Mid and Belka magic and provide him with cartridge systems. Is that on Earth? More explanations please.

Dark Mage: This I can perhaps understand. Do you plan on introducing him later?

Timeline: If joining with the current timeline is difficult, you can make an Alternate Universe (AU) where there is only your character and the other OC's of your choice. It's much easier this way.

Skills: Good enough.

Aside from those, Koumyou seems fine...



@Erio: Zest is indeed cool... But He's chances of survival are very small.

Now do you understand why I put so much limitations for Regression Impulse Breaker? That's too HAXX. And I'm not planning on EVER having Aurion use it again. A********** is as far as I'll go now. After that, time for some Phantom Squad development and some new OC's while Aurion retires from the front lines.

[Erio]

Hey, got a few questions here... I hope you guys know more than me!

1. I need to know how much time has passed during StrikerS, especially after episode 5. Here's what I have so far, though they are estimates...

From episode 5 ~ 9: A week or two.

10 ~ 15: A couple of days.

Between 15 and 16: A month, I think?

16+ doesnt matter for now...

I dont need EXACT timelines, just rough estimates will do... thanks.

2. Is it safe to say that all Boost Up (buffs) magic in canon (at least what has been shown so far) work just like cartridge boosts in that they are temporal and last only a few seconds and only for one attack?

Examples: All of Caro's boosts: The one she casted on Teana and the others she casted on Erio.


Any ideas would be great, thanks.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

I had some suspicions on their identities, but I wouldn't bet on it

Would it be funnier if I revealed the characters I wonder? I had to remove some lines from the teasers to make them less obvious, mainly from the ones with Sirius, so I hope it's quite unclear whom he fought

Originally Posted by Liingo

A nice teaser, although so so evil....

I'll be looking forward to when the whole thing get's finished

That surely won't happen until the current season ends But I may post a chapter or two (regarding the events in the past) as well as more teasers

EDIT:

Originally Posted by Erio

Hey, got a few questions here... I hope you guys know more than me!

1. I need to know how much time has passed during StrikerS, especially after episode 5. Here's what I have so far, though they are estimates...

From episode 5 ~ 9: A week or two.

10 ~ 15: A couple of days.

Between 15 and 16: A month, I think?

16+ doesnt matter for now...

I dont need EXACT timelines, just rough estimates will do... thanks.

2. Is it safe to say that all Boost Up (buffs) magic in canon (at least what has been shown so far) work just like cartridge boosts in that they are temporal and last only a few seconds and only for one attack?

Examples: All of Caro's boosts: The one she casted on Teana and the others she casted on Erio.


Any ideas would be great, thanks.

1. No idea about the timelines

2. I believe you're right about canon boosts. Though I made mine mostly based on fixed duration instead.

BTW is this a sign of the continuation of LRW story being prepared? Maybe it'll allow my OCs to get involved in something during canon timeline, as the actual plot didn't inspire me to take any actions Ah, I got an idea if there won't be any involvement for me - I'm going to shoot down the Cradle with the Arc-Warp Cannon (yes, right above the city ). Any volunteers to prevent that from happening? (I'll provide the means to get the information about such plan if necessary).

[Kha]

Originally Posted by haiz123321

Whee im back at last, com died on me few months back so i couldn't get on but i editted a whole lot of stuff so plz give me any comments =p

Er... Hmm... Am I allowed to say it looks kinda cliche, with the dark mage villian and hermit training...? But the way he bumped into the evil mage and got a boost instead looks like a rather sticky plot device to boost him.

Certainly needs more explanations. We're asked to assume too many things IMO. Device origins would be a good addition, as well as a bit more detail. Why would a 5 year old be wandering around? And who's this perfect hermit, who knows both systems?!

But now that I've said it out loud, I think we all know who he is... Name sounds like a cross, deshou...?

And last but not least, an 18 year old, with unclear alignment, can't possibly be SS+ without the TSAB either

a) watching him

b) recruiting him

c) arresting him

This is assumed from the way the Brains have been acting up to late.

And lastly, to avoid h4xx we try to have no OC to exceed SS rank without a good reason and must be at least 30 years of age. For the sake of the thread, and threat rating of villains, we don't want another Hermit (sure sounds better than H4xx0r ) running around...

Originally Posted by Erio

Hey, got a few questions here... I hope you guys know more than me!

1. I need to know how much time has passed during StrikerS, especially after episode 5. Here's what I have so far, though they are estimates...

From episode 5 ~ 9: A week or two.

10 ~ 15: A couple of days.

Between 15 and 16: A month, I think?

16+ doesnt matter for now...

I dont need EXACT timelines, just rough estimates will do... thanks.

Erm we need to take the SS and manga into context as well, and I'm not too familiar with the manga...

DARCO! LIINGO! When you wake up please help me answer?

Originally Posted by Erio

2. Is it safe to say that all Boost Up (buffs) magic in canon (at least what has been shown so far) work just like cartridge boosts in that they are temporal and last only a few seconds and only for one attack?

Examples: All of Caro's boosts: The one she casted on Teana and the others she casted on Erio.

Hmm... They seem to last for a short while, much shorter than I'd expected. It forced me to nerf Kha's buff durations, based on WoW timing, quite a bit back then.

So yes I think so. Even for Kha, a master buffboard, works for 5 mins (Normal Blessing) and 15 mins (Greater Blessing).

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

BTW is this a sign of the continuation of LRW story being prepared? Maybe it'll allow my OCs to get involved in something during canon timeline, as the actual plot didn't inspire me to take any actions Ah, I got an idea if there won't be any involvement for me - I'm going to shoot down the Cradle with the Arc-Warp Cannon (yes, right above the city ). Any volunteers to prevent that from happening? (I'll provide the means to get the information about such plan if necessary).

You risk blasting Nanoha, who is definitely going to be battered by the time she gets to and fights (maybe?) Vivio.

And maybe Kha as well, for I'm trying to sneak him into some place with data on Relics, which at the moment is either Scagletti's lab and the Cradle. He needs to learn about the Relic in him...

I'll make sure Kha does not interfere with canon. In fact, he's supposed to go missing during the last sortie, therefore no one knows where he is.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

1. No idea about the timelines

2. I believe you're right about canon boosts. Though I made mine mostly based on fixed duration instead.

Originally Posted by Kha

Hmm... They seem to last for a short while, much shorter than I'd expected. It forced me to nerf Kha's buff durations, based on WoW timing, quite a bit back then.

So yes I think so. Even for Kha, a master buffboard, works for 5 mins (Normal Blessing) and 15 mins (Greater Blessing).

I see. I was worried I was wrong about this. Thanks.

The buffs you guys are using, though, have a fixed durations. The ones I'm thinking of using are sustained buffs. (Think Guild Wars enchantments that need to be maintained with 1 or more pips of energy regeneration )

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

BTW is this a sign of the continuation of LRW story being prepared? Maybe it'll allow my OCs to get involved in something during canon timeline, as the actual plot didn't inspire me to take any actions Ah, I got an idea if there won't be any involvement for me - I'm going to shoot down the Cradle with the Arc-Warp Cannon (yes, right above the city ). Any volunteers to prevent that from happening? (I'll provide the means to get the information about such plan if necessary).

lol That's right, I'm working on it right now. I'm having trouble with the StrikerS timeline, though, as you can see in my first question above... the timeline jumps a lot, and there is even a MONTH in between episodes 15 and 16. What the hell am I going to do in a MONTH?! I'll have to come up with much more story than expected, before I get involved in Kha's Counterattack events.

And who the hell is going to stop that? Only Kha can probably stop such a blast... but why would he save the Cradle? Oh wait... because Vivio is inside... interesting!

At least I can tell you now, my OCs dont really care about that, unless Scaglietti sets off another of his 'deals' with them...

Oh wait, I got an idea... the three druggies Lowe and I are about to release (the profiles are almost complete ), who are Scaglietti's elite personal unit, will surely be assigned to stop that. Nice... we can surely make it happen, if you want.

Originally Posted by Kha

You risk blasting Nanoha, who is definitely going to be battered by the time she gets to and fights (maybe?) Vivio.

And maybe Kha as well, for I'm trying to sneak him into some place with data on Relics, which at the moment is either Scagletti's lab and the Cradle. He needs to learn about the Relic in him...

I'll make sure Kha does not interfere with canon. In fact, he's supposed to go missing during the last sortie, therefore no one knows where he is.

Hey hey, interesting... My characters dont know much about Relics themselves, and they definitely would want such information... This event could possibly lead to interaction between Kha and my characters... I'll have to see who those will be and how this could happen...

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

So yes I think so. Even for Kha, a master buffboard, works for 5 mins (Normal Blessing) and 15 mins (Greater Blessing).

Mine last for a couple of minutes generally.

You risk blasting Nanoha, who is definitely going to be battered by the time she gets to and fights (maybe?) Vivio.

And maybe Kha as well, for I'm trying to sneak him into some place with data on Relics, which at the moment is either Scagletti's lab and the Cradle. He needs to learn about the Relic in him...

I'll make sure Kha does not interfere with canon. In fact, he's supposed to go missing during the last sortie, therefore no one knows where he is.

Au-au-au, like Serge will care Though it'd be sad if RH gets destroyed in the process.

Oh, and Scaglietti's Lab ... I think I'll send a character there too.

Originally Posted by Erio

And who the hell is going to stop that? Only Kha can probably stop such a blast... but why would he save the Cradle? Oh wait... because Vivio is inside... interesting!

At least I can tell you now, my OCs dont really care about that, unless Scaglietti sets off another of his 'deals' with them...

Oh wait, I got an idea... the three druggies Lowe and I are about to release (the profiles are almost complete ), who are Scaglietti's elite personal unit, will surely be assigned to stop that. Nice... we can surely make it happen, if you want.

Well, it could be easier to stop the blast from happening than block it, and actually I have no idea how one can block a Warp Mode blast

So what I'm generally planning to do then - there'll be two characters going to Scaglietti's lab and they'll end up revealing the plan to blast the Cradle, so both Scaglietti and the good guys will know about it.

I'll write the prelude by the weekend, than I'll need to know how CC will be acting in Scaglietti's Lab (Fate, Schach and Acous will be there most probably).

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

I'll come up with names today.

@Reiji:

So my name for the Dunamist Knight would be Gilliard DeRosan. The device would be called Midnight.

BTW is the bit of trivia about him once having a familiar approved? Her name would be Anastasia in such case. I can provide more information or leave the entire background to you.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Well, it could be easier to stop the blast from happening than block it, and actually I have no idea how one can block a Warp Mode blast

So what I'm generally planning to do then - there'll be two characters going to Scaglietti's lab and they'll end up revealing the plan to blast the Cradle, so both Scaglietti and the good guys will know about it.

I'll write the prelude by the weekend, than I'll need to know how CC will be acting in Scaglietti's Lab (Fate, Schach and Acous will be there most probably).

Noted. If the threat is big, Scaglietti will make his move. Will you be guarding that cannon/whatever, though? Apparently all of Vanguard except for Serge are somewhere else... I think?

[Ratler]

@haiz123321: Welcome back ^^, I know what it is like when you lose track of the thread for long periods of time. I hope you survive the backlogs ^^

P.s. you Avi makes my eyes twitch

[haiz123321]

Originally Posted by Ratler

@haiz123321: Welcome back ^^, I know what it is like when you lose track of the thread for long periods of time. I hope you survive the backlogs ^^

P.s. you Avi makes my eyes twitch

u talking bout mine? =p btw avi = avatar right? and yeah i might intro the evil mage guy but i can't think up any good ideas now cause im sick and my brains are like exploding -.-

O yeah i was wondering if i could put something like, he was training under someone and then bla bla bla. It won't really affect other people's char right?

O yeah what the alignment thing? care to explain? well i lowered his rank to S+.
N yeah, i plan to make him a TSAB guy but what positions are avaliable for a S+ guy, e.g. lieutenant or seargant? cause im not good with this kind of stuff

Off-topic: im still in rage after seein the combat cyborgs pwning division 6 T_T but subaru berserk was cool =p

[USB500]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Evil teasers seem to be popular lately, so I can't help joining the trend

Teasers for OutcastS:

Spoiler for The past?:

“Is this all?”

“Yes, Lord Inquisitor.’

“Very well, let me summarize what you’ve told us then …”

He briefly skipped through the report once more, making short remarks at some points.

“To tell you the truth I find it extremely hard to believe that we could’ve been missing such major anomaly within the Immaterium all this time.”

“I would say the same at your place, but I’ve seen it myself, experienced it, and that is why-“

“Don’t be so rash, Confessor, the case is quite delicate indeed.”

“I’m sorry, Lord Inquisitor, I understand.”

“By the way, there’s one thing missing in your report.”

“What? Missing?”

“Yes, one thing is missing from your report.”

The Inquisitor put his hands on the table and leaned forward.

"You've mentioned the names of 13 Daemon Lords, right?"

"Yes, 13 holding the most power, but why is this important?"

“Do not interrupt me yet. The Daemon that told you all of this, you've never mentioned that, but which one of those names belongs to him?”

“How? … How do you know he’s one of the Lords at all?!”

Something similar to a grin of satisfaction appeared on the Inquisitor's face.

“Don’t try to hide anything, Confessor. You future has already been sealed. The truth shall be known to everybody.”

The Inquisitor’s voice sounded like coming from the bottom of a deep well, his eye pupils rapidly turning pitch black.

“His name is…”
“My name is…”

The two phrases were spoken simultaneously.

“*********.”

The name echoed in the chamber.

“Lord Inquisitor … you … can’t be ..?”

Spoiler for Back to the main timeline:

“I can clearly see your connection to the powers of Chaos, but one thing about you is strange – you do not seem to serve any one of the Gods. Nevertheless …”

The voice of the hooded figure obtained a more menacing tone.

“… We are not going to take any unnecessary risks. I will say it only once – do not get yourself involved with this case. Otherwise you will not be simply endangering your own life but will also make other people around you suffer. I believe I do not have to tell you the names.”


***


“The task should not be difficult for you at all. We will be taking care of most of the threats while you shall simply get the named items and destroy the rest along with the depot. You are free to deal with the possible obstacles in any way you will find appropriate. The operation will take place in two days and will serve as the indication of our alliance being officially forged. You will be provided with the detailed plans of the building and its surroundings as well as the profiles on everybody you may encounter there. Though you should be familiar with most of them already. Right, *********?”


***


“Sir, we have an urgent report from the Headquarters”, - Sarah entered the room with a worried expression she had never shown before, - “The visual link will be established in a moment – we’re having some troubles with communications due to a nearby Warp Storm.”

“What’s it about?” – Serge wondered if the news were going to mess up his current plans.

“The enemy”, - replied Sarah shortly, - “They’ve made their move, but it’s quite far from here, and … it was S’Zet military base this time. It seems that they’ve taken over the battleship stationed there …”

The way she sounded wasn’t promising anything good.

“How serious is it?”

“It was the flagship, sir.”


***


With an impossible for a regular human’s body move Sirius’ hand stopped the weapon from hitting his face, grabbing it along with the wielder’s arm.

“Looks like TSAB officers do get some basic training in melee combat”, - he said calmly.

Then he straightened his arm, twisting the opponent’s hand in the process.

“But compared to us without your magic you’re quite worthless.”

His free arm made a quick upward motion accompanied by the sound of breaking bones.

“You have lost.”


***


“It would be enough for me to simply delay you here for a while but I have a feeling that you could appear more troublesome than you seem to be, and when I have an opportunity to prevent troubles from happening I use them.”

The hooded figure stretched the right arm forward, though it was still impossible to see its actual hand.

“I will be killing you all right away.”

A weird magical circle of purple color appeared beneath the figure and the smell of sulfur suddenly filled the air.

“Arcesso Ignis Bellua.”


***


Sirius stood at the place of former office building, seemingly not being harmed more than he’d already been before the impact. A raging aura, its color similar to that of the rotten blood, protected his entire body while the masses of steel, glass and concrete around him were being easily vaporized.

“Impressive”, - he uttered, - “At their peak your powers could even surpass mine. But …”

He made several steps forward.

“… at your condition it’s useless now. No matter what you’ll try, you have lost.”


***


Serge felt the taste of iron in his mouth and when he took his next breath the air seemed to be filled with fine sand or some other kind of miniscule grains. He coughed hard and tried breathing through a piece of cloth. That helped but didn’t solve the problem entirely, and he still wasn’t able to sense any magic involved. Attacking recklessly was already proven a poor option, and though Serge was sure that he wouldn’t repeat his unlucky subordinate’s mistake he also couldn’t think of a reliable way to take care of this opponent. For the first time in his entire life he felt so powerless despite not being actually restrained in any way. The logic was telling him that the best solution right now would be an attempt to escape while there was still a chance.


***


The unconscious body fell helplessly onto the ground.

“It’s your own fault”, - narrated Sirius looking down at the defeated opponent, - “Though you’re worthy of my praise – that move of yours was actually able to surprise me. But you shouldn’t have thought that it alone could be enough to take me down.”

He made a short pause.

“And on top of that your priorities during the battle are completely wrong. Therefore, you have lost.”


***


“Hmm, you are hurt?” – The emotionless low voice clearly belonged to the one labeled Cygnus.

“You can see it yourself, there’s no need for my confirmation”, - Sirius answered him in a not so pleasant tone.

“It is quite a rare sight, were they actually that good?”

“Not really.”

“Was it your pride again then? You should give up on it and stop holding back already.”

“Mind your own business. You’ve got what you needed, isn’t it?”

“That is right. We will also execute the back-up plan concurrently with the main operation.”

“Is it really necessary? Who gave the orders?”

“Lord *** *****.”

“What a coward … I still can’t believe someone of his power could be so paranoid.”

“I hate him as well, but we are allies right now.”

“Tch.”

“Would you lend me a hand here? It is quite hard to do when they are unconscious.”

“I believe you’ll manage somehow. I’ll be reporting to Milady. For now, farewell.”


***


“I … am alright, I think. But … who are you?”

“Eeh?” - ****** stared at her friend with a mixed expression of concern and surprise, - “What do you mean by asking me who I am?”

Evil teaser is EVIL indeed

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Originally Posted by haiz123321

Whee im back at last, com died on me few months back so i couldn't get on but i editted a whole lot of stuff so plz give me any comments =p

Welcome back, buddy.

Can't contribute much today, due to flu I'm having right now