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DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-19, 22:24

Uh guys, I have something to ask.

Exactly how does one normally tells or shows their past to others?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-19, 22:28

Tell them straight and see their reaction of course

Rarely out of the blue though, usually in private/by chance.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-19, 22:32

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Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Tell them straight and see their reaction of course

Rarely out of the blue though, usually in private/by chance.

Okay, how do they tell them straight?

Meaning do they tell them like it's a story? Or some other method? Like how Kyukai showed his past in Heart of the Machine (projecting his memories).

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-19, 22:39

Anything, anything you think can convey the message. Showing photos, strange mumbling, playing recording, whatever.

Human interaction is not set on stone.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-19, 22:47

I'm thinking of having something like the Pensieve from Harry Potter.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-19, 22:48

Then go with it

DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-19, 22:54

Now there's another thing to ask.

Exactly what should be shown of my guys's past? Yeah sure I'll them in combat when they were in the Thunder Crash mercenaries. But I also want to show that they're not just about fighting.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-19, 23:16

Ichika is not the not the kind of guy to barge in, so it'll be just fine if they told him little by little. As idiot as he is, Ichika is damn good listener.

DarkJak2050 · 2013-05-19, 23:33

Well, it's a good thing he's like that. Or things would go awry.

Edit:
Okay, now I got a new predicament. I'm having a tough time on getting Chapter 1 started for Phase 2.

Little help?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-20, 05:42

Ahahahaha

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Seriously... those audience can be either too patient or too impatient.

But really, if I have time I should just rewrite the first three chapter entirely rather than updating

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-20, 05:45

tri? erachin? This Zero has broken down. What should we do?

On another note. It's so hard to write real robot when reading about superpowers D:

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-20, 05:52

Something ridiculous always happen these days, Demi. No wonder my brain broke.

Someone PMed me why the hell I stick to canon and somehow reach 100.000 words without shame, plagiarism and all.

I told him to read chapter four, the next reply is "Yeah, but looking at the prologue yadda yadda no change"

I told him again to read chapter five, then he insist I should just "fucking rewrite" the first three chapter rather than updating.

Seriously, my OP specifically noted that IT IS a freaking plagiat, I knew he's got a point but man, being a jackass won't help you reach the author. On the other hand, I decided to do that after next update anyway, if only to respect the franchise itself.

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-20, 05:55

You may have neglected to mention you're doing a rewrite? Or maybe he's tired of the same song and dance from everyone and you just happened to be the unfortunate victim when he broke?

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-20, 06:00

No, I didn't promise anything, but now I probably should be.

What I did is making it clear in the second and third chapter that yes, I do copy the novel. Thanks to Asakust who remind me very early in the publishing (who left with disgust anyway) and delivered chapter 4 like, from bare cloth.

Once again, rewrite probably will be in my schedule after chapter 14 is published.

Eratas123 · 2013-05-20, 06:08

School in 7 days:/

demino_hellsin · 2013-05-20, 06:11

Something to cheer you up

---------------------

The taller woman could only pat the smaller woman's head as the bespectacled woman wept in her bossom at the unfairness of it all. But five minutes later and Chifuyu really regretted this considering her current attire.

“Gah! Yamada! Yamada!”

Chifuyu could feel the warm liquid trickle down her bare chest and down her gentle valley. She felt like she could cry herself as she hadn't the heart to push her kouhai away but at the same time this felt all forms of wrong and disgusting.

BBFFFFFTTTT!

Oh great. The raven-haired woman now felt some slick substance mixing in what she believed to be tears. The reason she identified this to be a 'substance' was because she did not want to confirm the link between the sound of Yamada blowing her nose and said 'substance' snaking its way down into her barely there top. Yes, it was safe to say that Chifuyu really wanted to cry.

Eratas123 · 2013-05-20, 06:30

Nice....to be honest, I really feel bad right now. Family problems are piling up and I'm not in the mood to write. Me and my sister were just arguing about our mom needing an operation. The way my sister says 'client' when referring to our own mother makes me wonder if she views her as a nurse does or as a daughter.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-20, 06:45

There's always a solution eras

Just don't give up

As for your sister, I could understood her to an extent. She probably feel it the most, because she had the knowledge and method to solve this, but at the same time, can't do it alone due to many reason. Reach her and you'll two will get an answer.

Eratas123 · 2013-05-20, 06:56

No, I give up. If she wants to act like it doesn't concern her, then that's her choice. I'm gonna talk my mom into getting a surgery. She can keep herself bottled for all she wants. I don't want to lose my mother because she's overworking herself trying to feed us and keep everything in check.

I'm gonna be stewing for a bit. Later.

ZeroXSEED · 2013-05-20, 07:27

It's... true

Speaking of which, while I can't be said to have a small breast, I don't have D-rated bust either.

So it's not small or big enough to be advantageous

WHY?!

- Madoka

(As of V8 though, Madoka is almost Lingyin level DFC)

2013-05-19, 22:28	Link #43682
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Tell them straight and see their reaction of course Rarely out of the blue though, usually in private/by chance. __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Anything, anything you think can convey the message. Showing photos, strange mumbling, playing recording, whatever. Human interaction is not set on stone. __________________

2013-05-19, 22:48	Link #43686
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Then go with it __________________

2013-05-19, 23:16	Link #43688
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ichika is not the not the kind of guy to barge in, so it'll be just fine if they told him little by little. As idiot as he is, Ichika is damn good listener. __________________

2013-05-19, 23:33	Link #43689
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Well, it's a good thing he's like that. Or things would go awry. *Edit:* Okay, now I got a new predicament. I'm having a tough time on getting Chapter 1 started for Phase 2. Little help? Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2013-05-20 at 03:20.

2013-05-19, 22:24	Link #43681
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Uh guys, I have something to ask. Exactly how does one normally tells or shows their past to others?

2013-05-19, 22:47	Link #43685
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	I'm thinking of having something like the Pensieve from Harry Potter.

2013-05-19, 22:54	Link #43687
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	Now there's another thing to ask. Exactly what should be shown of my guys's past? Yeah sure I'll them in combat when they were in the Thunder Crash mercenaries. But I also want to show that they're not just about fighting.

2013-05-20, 05:42	Link #43690
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Ahahahaha AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Seriously... those audience can be either too patient or too impatient. But really, if I have time I should just rewrite the first three chapter entirely rather than updating __________________

2013-05-20, 05:45	Link #43691
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	tri? erachin? This Zero has broken down. What should we do? On another note. It's so hard to write real robot when reading about superpowers D:

2013-05-20, 05:52	Link #43692
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Something ridiculous always happen these days, Demi. No wonder my brain broke. Someone PMed me why the hell I stick to canon and somehow reach 100.000 words without shame, plagiarism and all. I told him to read chapter four, the next reply is "Yeah, but looking at the prologue yadda yadda no change" I told him again to read chapter five, then he insist I should just "fucking rewrite" the first three chapter rather than updating. Seriously, my OP specifically noted that IT IS a freaking plagiat, I knew he's got a point but man, being a jackass won't help you reach the author. On the other hand, I decided to do that after next update anyway, if only to respect the franchise itself. __________________

2013-05-20, 05:55	Link #43693
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	You may have neglected to mention you're doing a rewrite? Or maybe he's tired of the same song and dance from everyone and you just happened to be the unfortunate victim when he broke?

2013-05-20, 06:00	Link #43694
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	No, I didn't promise anything, but now I probably should be. What I did is making it clear in the second and third chapter that yes, I do copy the novel. Thanks to Asakust who remind me very early in the publishing (who left with disgust anyway) and delivered chapter 4 like, from bare cloth. Once again, rewrite probably will be in my schedule after chapter 14 is published. __________________

2013-05-20, 06:08	Link #43695
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	School in 7 days:/ __________________

2013-05-20, 06:11	Link #43696
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Something to cheer you up --------------------- The taller woman could only pat the smaller woman's head as the bespectacled woman wept in her bossom at the unfairness of it all. But five minutes later and Chifuyu really regretted this considering her current attire. “Gah! Yamada! Yamada!” Chifuyu could feel the warm liquid trickle down her bare chest and down her gentle valley. She felt like she could cry herself as she hadn't the heart to push her kouhai away but at the same time this felt all forms of wrong and disgusting. BBFFFFFTTTT! Oh great. The raven-haired woman now felt some slick substance mixing in what she believed to be tears. The reason she identified this to be a 'substance' was because she did not want to confirm the link between the sound of Yamada blowing her nose and said 'substance' snaking its way down into her barely there top. Yes, it was safe to say that Chifuyu really wanted to cry.

2013-05-20, 06:30	Link #43697
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Nice....to be honest, I really feel bad right now. Family problems are piling up and I'm not in the mood to write. Me and my sister were just arguing about our mom needing an operation. The way my sister says 'client' when referring to our own mother makes me wonder if she views her as a nurse does or as a daughter. __________________

2013-05-20, 06:45	Link #43698
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	There's always a solution eras Just don't give up As for your sister, I could understood her to an extent. She probably feel it the most, because she had the knowledge and method to solve this, but at the same time, can't do it alone due to many reason. Reach her and you'll two will get an answer. __________________

2013-05-20, 06:56	Link #43699
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	No, I give up. If she wants to act like it doesn't concern her, then that's her choice. I'm gonna talk my mom into getting a surgery. She can keep herself bottled for all she wants. I don't want to lose my mother because she's overworking herself trying to feed us and keep everything in check. I'm gonna be stewing for a bit. Later. __________________

2013-05-20, 07:27	Link #43700
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	It's... true Speaking of which, while I can't be said to have a small breast, I don't have D-rated bust either. So it's not small or big enough to be advantageous WHY?! - Madoka (As of V8 though, Madoka is almost Lingyin level DFC) __________________