Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for special:

OoO Darn it Rick rolled again!!!!

I like the new/not really new sig. Yuuno needs some lovin'


Edit: Page claim for

Spoiler for Surprise:

Fate: *flipping through mail* Oh. A new video letter from Nanoha. *Happy happy*
Fate: *Puts in Dvd player* I wonder what’s been going on. *Video flickers on*
Video: Nanoha: Hey Fate how a-a-r-r-e—e *video starts to flicker*
Fate: N-nanoha! What’s going on!
Video: *You know who pops on* Never gonna give you up! Never gonna let you down!
Fate: D: I’ve been RICK ROLLLLLLEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD! for the fifth time this month...
Nanoha: *far far away* He he he

Edit2: Made the surprise better

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

OoO Darn it Rick rolled again!!!!

I like the new/not really new sig. Yuuno needs some lovin'


Edit: Page claim for

Spoiler for Surprise:

umm.. the video is no longer available?

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

umm.. the video is no longer available?

Can't embed it apparently . Well I made the surprise more interesting now *and on topic*

[Satashi]

Since we're doing youtube, here's the muppets singing the Nanoha opening.

Spoiler for NanoFate:

Spoiler for Saved by the Bell and muppets:

Fate clicked the link, smiling as the muppets came up. "Awww, how sweet, Nanoha sent me a cute clip!" Her mouse went over to the play button and she leaned back in her chair happily.

As the music came on, the blonde's eyebrow twitched lightly. "She...She... Rick roll'd me.... NANOHA rick rolled me!"

Precia peeked into her daughter's room, grinning at the sight. " Awww, did Fate get pwned?"

"Go away mom!" Fate chunked a beanie baby at the door, making Precia hide behind it.

[TheShinySword]

*shifty eyes* I couldn't help it

Spoiler for Fate's not the only one:

Yuuno: *sigh* Nanoha said she'd call *stares at cellphone* Ring cellphone ring!
Cellphone: ...
Yuuno: ... Please?
Cellphone: ...
Yuuno: *sigh*
Cellphone: *starts ringing*
Yuuno: Yes! *grabs phone* ... wait a minute... *looks at phone* HOW DID SHE MANAGED TO RICK ROLL MY RING TONE!
Nanoha: *far far away*

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Since we're doing youtube, here's the muppets singing the Nanoha opening.

Spoiler for NanoFate:

Spoiler for Saved by the Bell and muppets:

Fate clicked the link, smiling as the muppets came up. "Awww, how sweet, Nanoha sent me a cute clip!" Her mouse went over to the play button and she leaned back in her chair happily.

As the music came on, the blonde's eyebrow twitched lightly. "She...She... Rick roll'd me.... NANOHA rick rolled me!"

Precia peeked into her daughter's room, grinning at the sight. " Awww, did Fate get pwned?"

"Go away mom!" Fate chunked a beanie baby at the door, making Precia hide behind it.

*BRUTALLY MURDERS SATASHI IN UNSPEAKABLE WAYS*

I HATE YOU!!!!!! ><

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Since we're doing youtube, here's the muppets singing the Nanoha opening.

Spoiler for NanoFate:

Spoiler for Saved by the Bell and muppets:

Fate clicked the link, smiling as the muppets came up. "Awww, how sweet, Nanoha sent me a cute clip!" Her mouse went over to the play button and she leaned back in her chair happily.

As the music came on, the blonde's eyebrow twitched lightly. "She...She... Rick roll'd me.... NANOHA rick rolled me!"

Precia peeked into her daughter's room, grinning at the sight. " Awww, did Fate get pwned?"

"Go away mom!" Fate chunked a beanie baby at the door, making Precia hide behind it.

oh my.. *is teary eyed* i couldn't stop laughing half of the time. XD that was good!!! wow you people sure are happy today.

edit:

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*shifty eyes* I couldn't help it

Spoiler for Fate's not the only one:

Yuuno: *sigh* Nanoha said she'd call *stares at cellphone* Ring cellphone ring!
Cellphone: ...
Yuuno: ... Please?
Cellphone: ...
Yuuno: *sigh*
Cellphone: *starts ringing*
Yuuno: Yes! *grabs phone* ... wait a minute... *looks at phone* HOW DID SHE MANAGED TO RICK ROLL MY RING TONE!
Nanoha: *far far away*

Nanoha must be on a serious amount of crack doing these things to Yuuno and Fate.

[ghazghkull]

*Is muttering in a dark corner how getting Rick Roll'd like that was cruel and unusual*

[Thesinwithin]

Is it bad... that I rather like that song?

Edit: "" Awww, did Fate get pwned?""

This is now my new quote of the day. Lol pwned Fate is pwned.

[ghazghkull]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Is it bad... that I rather like that song?

I have no probs against the song.

It's the very idea that I have been Rick Roll'd is what's annoying :P

[Satashi]

Dream wing future glimpse!

Spoiler for :D:

Arika: Puri puri puri puri bang!

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Dream wing future glimpse!

Spoiler for :D:

Arika: Puri puri puri puri bang!

:3 yes. That's awesome... now I'm really really excited but when we're talking future exactly how future

[Kaix]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Wow! The thing are getting very interesting, seems like these Chrono and Lindy are evils lol Who are the blue hair girl and the orangue hair girl? Couldthey be... Subaru and Teana?

PD: I like your ideas for Baridiche and Raising Heart, You draw them by yourself?[

You'll just have to wait and see. And yea, I drew them.

Uh, uh! Can you add some goblins?



I like goblins

Hmm... I don't think Goblins would fit quote well in the universe, BUT it did give me a crazy idea! Expect some weird stuff.

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Nanoha/ MARVEL

Spoiler for Chapter 2:

-cut-

To no one get lost

Spoiler for INFO:

S.H.I.E.L.D.

Nick Fury

Okay, sorry about some of the things I said at the previous chapter, they were probably a bit overboard. This chapter looks much better. I was half-expecting somebody like Nanoha to come and save Fate, but having Iron Man do it was cool! XD (What was happening on the Nanoha-side of the story btw? )
Also, why Xbox360??? Fate wants Wii!



@Thread: The rest of the tread is pure EVIL!

[Mae]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Since we're doing youtube, here's the muppets singing the Nanoha opening.

Spoiler for NanoFate:

Spoiler for Saved by the Bell and muppets:

Fate clicked the link, smiling as the muppets came up. "Awww, how sweet, Nanoha sent me a cute clip!" Her mouse went over to the play button and she leaned back in her chair happily.

As the music came on, the blonde's eyebrow twitched lightly. "She...She... Rick roll'd me.... NANOHA rick rolled me!"

Precia peeked into her daughter's room, grinning at the sight. " Awww, did Fate get pwned?"

"Go away mom!" Fate chunked a beanie baby at the door, making Precia hide behind it.

This had me in tears. X3

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*shifty eyes* I couldn't help it

Spoiler for Fate's not the only one:

Yuuno: *sigh* Nanoha said she'd call *stares at cellphone* Ring cellphone ring!
Cellphone: ...
Yuuno: ... Please?
Cellphone: ...
Yuuno: *sigh*
Cellphone: *starts ringing*
Yuuno: Yes! *grabs phone* ... wait a minute... *looks at phone* HOW DID SHE MANAGED TO RICK ROLL MY RING TONE!
Nanoha: *far far away*

Poor Yuuno. Nanoha certainly is a little devil.

Was I the only one that had to look up what "rick-roll'd" was?

Oh well, at least I learned something new today.

[Satashi]

On topic post is on topic.

Dream Wing II
Status: 80%
ETA: Monday *24 hours*
Words so far: 3,235

Teaser:

Spoiler for Teaser ( for real):

“I don't feel good...” Fate spoke again, voice weak. “I feel... sick.”

“Sick?” Yohko moved to inspect Fate closer. “Oh my, you're sweating quite a lot. Do you think you will throw up?”

The blond closed her eyes and took a long intake of air. “I... I think I might.”

“Fate-chan?” Nanoha sat up nervously. “Are you okay?”

“Lay down,” Yohko informed her, pushing the girl onto her back gently. “I'll take care of your friend.”

“Fate-chan...” Nanoha looked over at her partner and cursed the fact that she couldn't take her hand or anything. “Hang in there, okay?”

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Satashi

On topic post is on topic.

Dream Wing II
Status: 80%
ETA: Monday *24 hours*
Words so far: 3,235

Teaser:

Spoiler for Teaser ( for real):

“I don't feel good...” Fate spoke again, voice weak. “I feel... sick.”

“Sick?” Yohko moved to inspect Fate closer. “Oh my, you're sweating quite a lot. Do you think you will throw up?”

The blond closed her eyes and took a long intake of air. “I... I think I might.”

“Fate-chan?” Nanoha sat up nervously. “Are you okay?”

“Lay down,” Yohko informed her, pushing the girl onto her back gently. “I'll take care of your friend.”

“Fate-chan...” Nanoha looked over at her partner and cursed the fact that she couldn't take her hand or anything. “Hang in there, okay?”

Fate-chan.... Dear God/insert-name-of-holy-being-here, please let Fate-chan be okay..

[Evil Rick]

Chapter 35

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Revelations:

I slowly walked back with Sasuke and sitted again, I felt that I was going to recive a heart attack,I was sweating, I was shaking

"You want to talk abou it?" Sasuke asked me

"How do you?.."

"Discovered it?" He interrupted me "Very easy, I'm a Dragon,there is no way in wich you can trick a Dragon, besides... don't forget that the stars alway teels the secrets of the world to the Dragons my dear"

My intention was never to trick Sasuke, but I had no other choise, I told him about all,about the first letter that we recived, aboutthe request to kill Salazar and Beatriz, even about the traitor thing, I pass speaking about like an hour and Sasuke didn't interrupted me, finally, when I finally ended, he speaked

"Firs of all you shall feel ashame of yourself for trusting into a man that you don't even know instead of your allies, and more important; your friends" When Sasuke told this I felt really bad

"But" He continued "In some point I think that indeed we have a traitor among us, I was suspecting it while ago, I been trying to discoverhim, but the stars can't see him,probably Nanoha is hidden him just like she hides his demons"

"I think that the traitor is Raphael" I added

"Really? And why?" I explained Sasuke about the sniper rifle who kill Jack and about the fight that Sky and Raphael had

"You are really a stupid. You know?"

"W-why?" I asked

"Do you think that Raphael shall join with Nanoha and his demons after his wife and daughter weremurdered by Slaves?" This revelation shocked me

"His... his wife and daughter?"

"Yes, a 23 years old german woman and her baby just borned, besides you shall beter see to another ones, like Pink for example"

"Pink? But why her shall do that"

"Because Pink killed his own father and until now is something that she still can't forgive herself" Another revelation who also petrificed me

"No... no way! Pink told me that his Father..."

"She lied to you, Pink once was a Vatican Knight just as you, but one day his father get corrupted and started to get turned into a Slave, the order of Dr. Van Hellsing was to kill him, Pink didn't wanted to, but she was forced to do it, after that she leave the order and became a nurse, that's enough motive for her to heat the Vatican Knights and wish to get revengue" I was speakless

"We also have Dr. Van Hellsing, He was in jail, you know? Before joining the order he discovered that his wife was cheating him and he killed her and her lover, and of course we can't forget Sky"

"Sky?" I really didn't wanted to hear that

"Before joining the order, Sky was the leader of a sect who seeked the secret for Eternal life, you have no idea ofwhat things he did while that time"

I was very shocked, I didn't know all those thing about Raphael and the others

"Althoug Raphael also had his motives for joining Nanoha, that demon knows the ways of temptation, for example, she could promise Raphael to resurect her daughter and Wife in exchangue of his alliance" That also maded pretty much sence

"Now" Sasuke continued "Tell me what does the letter says" I grabed it from my pocket, opened it and started to read it:

Vivio Valentine:

I happily discovered that Beatriz de la Huerta and Salazar de la Huerta are no longer a trouble, now, as I promised I will asist you to kill Nanoha

First of all you must know wich ones are the intentions of Nanoha, she has the plan to kill all the poblation of the world, to clean it and start a new one, altough she had several demons at her service, she is unable to do this by herself, she is going to activate an old mechanism named 'The punishment hand" an ancient artifact builded by ancient one's wich prupose is to start the nwe era when the time comes, to activate this device however, Nanoha is forced to colect 3 keyes, the keyes of Greed, Lust and Wrath, by missfortune, she had alredy founded the one of Greed in Spain and actually she had sended her minions in search of the rest, by lucky She designed me to lead this searchs and actually I alredy know the ubication of the Lust Key; the coliseum,in Rome

You must found a way to go there, the most probably is that the traitor in your fileswill inform her so don't espect to recive a nice welcome

To find the Key you must remember this riddle: The Shadow is the true one

That's all I can reveal now, be lucky and most important, don't fail

Atte: Alastor Wilzon

I closed the letter, Sasuke remained silent for amoment, then he told me

"Go sleep now, destroy that letter and tell you friends, only your friends of what we talk here"

"But what are we..." He interrupted me

"Don't worry Vivio, I will fix this in the tomorrow"

Spoiler for Draws that I shall post long ago:

[Krinen]

Since I'm tired of the low contribute-to-lurk ratio I have, I've finally decided to post... Something. It's Ch. 1 of the OF-Nanohaverse crossover 'fic. It's... Kinda "beta", I could say, as I don't have anyone to tell me weather or not I've kept the Nanoha-side characters as cannon as possible, but... Here it is.

Oh, a beforehand warning. It may be a tad bit hard to follow at times, because of the excessive amounts of characters I use, but I have a method.

It's an outside, omnipotent perspective, centric on one person with one, max two others in the main circle. Meaning they have the most detail to them. It changes rather abruptly, as I've not worked out a surefire, non-confusing centrism, but It's all I've got. Enjoy.

Spoiler for Fictiondump?:

Magistrix
Prologue

A cellar, rather dimly lit, save for anything but a small overhanging light surrounded a girl. She was rooting through box after box, looking for god-knows what, becoming steadily more irritated by the dim lighting, and heavy air. She stood upright, wiping her sweat-covered brow with the back of her sleeve. Her thigh-long, wavy purple hair shining, even in the dim light. She closed her red eyes, a defeated expression on her face.

"Mou, where is it?" She wondered aloud, crossing her arms. She wore a dress, impractical for the situation, It's bottom fringe lined with a black spiked lining. It rose to her waist, where a thin belt marked the change from a dress, to what looked like a tank-top, over a black, long-sleeved undershirt. Over the tank-top, covering most of it, save the collar, was a long-sleeved jacket, stopping just below the ribcage, rimmed with black at the seams. The entire ensemble was a soothing purple, only a few shades darker than her hair. 'Gothic-Lolita', some would call it, though that was the farthest thing from her mind, when she sewed it with her mother years ago. She tilted her head rhythmically to the left, right, then back again over and over, thinking hard.

"Think, Mythril. Where could it be?" She muttered, again to herself. She stopped her movements, dropped her arms, and looked around the room. Boxes of various shapes, sizes, even materials stacked haphazardly met her gaze. One, in particular, caught her interest. A small, padlocked box, no bigger than a loaf of bread sat on the floor, collecting dust under the shadow of a matte-white steel cylinder. She walked to the small oaken box, it's color faded with age. She knelt down in front of it, holding the lock with one hand. She pulled it a bit, fruitlessly, before standing and looking for the nearest thing to bludgeon it with. Adventurous, she opened the top of the cylinder, to see what looked like a shiny, semi-transparent purple crystal. Reaching under her vest, she pulled out a small knife, square-handled, and razor sharp.

Quickly, she struck the side of the lone contents of the cylinder with the blade. It sparked, and the crystal resonated a soft tune, but nothing visible happened to it. Sheathing the knife, she reached in, and pulled the crystal, only a head shorter than her, out. Hefting the thinnest part of the object, she stabbed down on the padlock with as much force as she could muster.

The sound resonated once more.
Nothing.
Again, louder.
Still nothing.
A third time.

Silence.

Mythril stopped, and held the crystal horizontally, looking it's length, confused. Holding it, with much difficulty, like a baby, she flicked the crystal.

The sound.
A shatter.

The crystalline object exploded into hundreds of tiny fragments, rocketing around the room, impaling objects left and right, but, through a stroke of luck, only scratching her face minutely. She brought a hand to her shocked face, touching the slender, warm wound. Feeling a wetness, she brought her hand in front of her face, to see the fingers coated in a crimson liquid. Shaking her head, gently, she resolved to at least put the shards back, and walked to the nearest one. Kneeling down, she touched the crystal with the red-stained fingers.

It flashed an ethereal blue, and it's color changed, shifting, multicolored and vibrant. A wind filled the room, swirling to the shard. Mythril stood, quickly, and staggered backwards, watching as every one of the fragments flew together, and melded, to form a multicolored archway, glowing a harsh, unyielding white.
It's center began to flicker, before a high-pitched screech filled the air. It continued for not long, before a loud boom, accompanied by a shock wave knocked Mythril back, smashing her head into a support beam, knocking her unconscious.

She awoke, slowly. She wasn't sure how much time had passed, but she knew for certain she was still alone in the house. The normally dimly-lit room, was now dancing with shadows and various hues of swirling color. She sat up, to see the once crystalline archway gone, replaced by what looked like a tear in the fabric of space, a swirling vortex of white, purple, black and red. A slight wind was being pulled in, mimicking it's effect on her mind. She stood, shakily, and began to walk, slowly, to the portal, it's body calling her, like the most beautiful of the siren songs. The closer she got, the drowsier, like a spell, 'till she reached it's entrance, the wind threatening to push her in. Her eyelids felt heavy, her legs felt light. She spared only one moment, before falling asleep, and forward into the portal, which slammed shut behind her.

Again, she awoke, drowsier this time. But no hardwood roof came to her eyes, instead, a sunny blue sky, lined with brickwork walls, windows, and a clothesline covered in questionable garments. The world seemed to spin, making the clouds seem to dance. Dizzy, she sat up, and looked down what was now apparently an alleyway next to a busy street. Near it's entrance sat a dumpster, obscuring most of what lay beyond from her sight. She scooted herself backwards, against the far wall, suddenly feeling the pain in her body, akin to that of a fall. Murmuring made her look to the end of the alley. Two men, clothed in jackets and beanies were talking to each other in hushed tones, pointing down the way toward her. One started down toward her, followed closely by the second, each reaching into their open jackets, and pulling out something metallic. An ominous click met her ears, a sound she'd only heard once before.

Pistols.

She began to breath heavier, wanting to push herself into the wall, to hide. The men approached closer, smiling perverted smiles, muttering coos of faux reassuring, and warnings of what might happen if she were to scream. They closed the gap, and terrified, Mythril shut her eyes, screaming. A flash illuminated the alleyway, and a gunshot rang through the air, as blood spattered against the back wall, lost in the sound of a passing siren.

Holy crap that was darker than I thought.

Anyway, don't expect chapter two anytime soon. I don't usually write like this on a regular basis. Also; excuse anything odd. This was written with no proofreads in a one hour, thirty minute period. But, anyway. Yea. That's the start of Requiem. More to come.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Krinen

It's Ch. 1 of the OF-Nanohaverse crossover 'fic.

OF-Nanohaverse?

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Krinen

Since I'm tired of the low contribute-to-lurk ratio I have, I've finally decided to post... Something. It's Ch. 1 of the OF-Nanohaverse crossover 'fic. It's... Kinda "beta", I could say, as I don't have anyone to tell me weather or not I've kept the Nanoha-side characters as cannon as possible, but... Here it is.

Oh, a beforehand warning. It may be a tad bit hard to follow at times, because of the excessive amounts of characters I use, but I have a method.

It's an outside, omnipotent perspective, centric on one person with one, max two others in the main circle. Meaning they have the most detail to them. It changes rather abruptly, as I've not worked out a surefire, non-confusing centrism, but It's all I've got. Enjoy.

Spoiler for Fictiondump?:

Magistrix
-Requiem-
Chapter One

A cellar, rather dimly lit, save for anything but a small overhanging light surrounded a girl. She was rooting through box after box, looking for god-knows what, becoming steadily more irritated by the dim lighting, and heavy air. She stood upright, wiping her sweat-covered brow with the back of her sleeve. Her thigh-long, wavy purple hair shining, even in the dim light. She closed her read eyes, a defeated expression on her face.

"Mou, where is it?" She wondered aloud, crossing her arms. She wore a dress, impractical for the situation, It's bottom fringe lined with a black spiked lining. It rose to her waist, where a thin belt marked the change from a dress, to what looked like a tank-top, over a black, long-sleeved undershirt. Over the tank-top, covering most of it, save the collar, was a long-sleeved jacket, stopping just below the ribcage, rimmed with black at the seams. The entire ensemble was a soothing purple, only a few shades lighter than her hair. 'Gothic-Lolita', some would call it, though that was the farthest thing from her mind, when she sewed it with her mother years ago. She tilted her head rhythmically to the left, right, then back again over and over, thinking hard.

"Think, Mythril. Where could it be?" She muttered, again to herself. She stopped her movements, dropped her arms, and looked around the room. Boxes of various shapes, sizes, even materials stacked haphazardly met her gaze. One, in particular, caught her interest. A small, padlocked box, no bigger than a loaf of bread sat on the floor, collecting dust under the shadow of a matte-white steel cylinder. She walked to the small oaken box, it's color faded with age. She knelt down in front of it, holding the lock with one hand. She pulled it a bit, fruitlessly, before standing and looking for the nearest thing to bludgeon it with. Adventurous, she opened the top of the cylinder, to see what looked like a shiny, semi-transparent purple crystal. Reaching under her vest, she pulled out a small knife, square-handled, and razor sharp.

Quickly, she struck the side of the lone contents of the cylinder with the blade. It sparked, and the crystal resonated a soft tune, but nothing visible happened to it. Sheathing the knife, she reached in, and pulled the crystal, only a head shorter than her, out. Hefting the thinnest part of the object, she stabbed down on the padlock with as much force as she could muster.

The sound resonated once more.
Nothing.
Again, louder.
Still nothing.
A third time.

Silence.

Mythril stopped, and held the crystal horizontally, looking it's length, confused. Holding it, with much difficulty, like a baby, she flicked the crystal.

The sound.
A shatter.

The crystalline object exploded into hundreds of tiny fragments, rocketing around the room, impaling objects left and right, but, through a stroke of luck, only scratching her face minutely. She brought a hand to her shocked face, touching the slender, warm wound. Feeling a wetness, she brought her hand in front of her face, to see the fingers coated in a crimson liquid. Shaking her head, gently, she resolved to at least put the shards back, and walked to the nearest one. Kneeling down, she touched the crystal with the red-stained fingers.

It flashed an ethereal blue, and it's color changed, shifting, multicolored and vibrant. A wind filled the room, swirling to the shard. Mythril stood, quickly, and staggered backwards, watching as every one of the fragments flew together, and melded, to form a multicolored archway, glowing a harsh, unyielding white.
It's center began to flicker, before a high-pitched screech filled the air. It continued for not long, before a loud boom, accompanied by a shock wave knocked Mythril back, smashing her head into a support beam, knocking her unconscious.

She awoke, slowly. She wasn't sure how much time had passed, but she knew for certain she was still alone in the house. The normally dimly-lit room, was now dancing with shadows and various hues of swirling color. She sat up, to see the once crystalline archway gone, replaced by what looked like a tear in the fabric of space, a swirling vortex of white, purple, black and red. A slight wind was being pulled in, mimicking it's effect on her mind. She stood, shakily, and began to walk, slowly, to the portal, it's body calling her, like the most beautiful of the siren songs. The closer she got, the drowsier, like a spell, 'till she reached it's entrance, the wind threatening to push her in. Her eyelids felt heavy, her legs felt light. She spared only one moment, before falling asleep, and forward into the portal, which slammed shut behind her.

Again, she awoke, drowsier this time. But no hardwood roof came to her eyes, instead, a sunny blue sky, lined with brickwork walls, windows, and a clothesline covered in questionable garments. The world seemed to spin, making the clouds seem to dance. Dizzy, she sat up, and looked down what was now apparently an alleyway next to a busy street. Near it's entrance sat a dumpster, obscuring most of what lay beyond from her sight. She scooted herself backwards, against the far wall, suddenly feeling the pain in her body, akin to that of a fall. Murmuring made her look to the end of the alley. Two men, clothed in jackets and beanies were talking to each other in hushed tones, pointing down the way toward her. One started down toward her, followed closely by the second, each reaching into their open jackets, and pulling out something metallic. An ominous click met her ears, a sound she'd only heard once before.

Pistols.

She began to breath heavier, wanting to push herself into the wall, to hide. The men approached closer, smiling perverted smiles, muttering coos of faux reassuring, and warnings of what might happen if she were to scream. They closed the gap, and terrified, Mythril shut her eyes, screaming. A flash illuminated the alleyway, and a gunshot rang through the air, as blood spattered against the back wall, lost in the sound of a passing siren.

Holy crap that was darker than I thought.

Anyway, don't expect chapter two anytime soon. I don't usually write like this on a regular basis. Also; excuse anything odd. This was written with no proofreads in a one hour, thirty minute period. But, anyway. Yea. That's the start of Requiem. More to come, yakusokuyo.

Very interesting, don't worry about large numbers of characters, I've read books that have a lot of characters in and jump around a lot.

But like Satashi, I'm a bit confused at what you mean by, Nanohaverse?