2013-02-06, 21:04 | Link #2401 |
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Join Date: Mar 2012
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Wouldn't mind that ending but you forgot one thing with this author: not enough DRAMA in that ending.
Add a few twists involving his grandfather, his sister, some sort of plot that makes him turn emo and run away from everyone, even though the situation could be easily resolved if everyone just stopped to think for a few seconds. Wich brings me to another thing that kinda tics me off with this story: how can the Pandoras be so shallow and make a big melodrama about the tinniest of things? I know they are high school girls and have no problem with trying to bring normal life problems into the overall story but that kinda fades away when we know this: PANDORAS AREN'T EASILY MADE AND THEY ARE THE ONLY ONES CAPABLE OF DEFEATING THE NOVAS, OTHERWISE THE WORLD IS GONE. For crying out loud, stop making such a big deal of things that don't even matter one bit IN THE MIDDLE OF THE FREAKING LIFE AND DEATH BATTLES WITH THE NOVAS. There, it's out of my chest.
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2013-02-06, 21:06 | Link #2402 | |
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If he really wants it to end... The quickest possible... Last edited by NoemiChan; 2013-02-22 at 06:15. |
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2013-02-06, 21:10 | Link #2403 | |
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Also the arc with Satellizers brother had a good amount of drama, Let's not forget the scientist "to prove Gengo is hiding something I'm going to cause a potentially devastating event that can cause the deaths of almost the entire Pandora force and leave mankind defenseless". Oh, before that one there was the previous artificially Pandoras drama of existence and all....and the inability of the regular Pandoras to unite because of some B.S., leaving the fight to almost only one Pandora.... And that drama situation is still underway. Plenty to choose from.
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2013-02-06, 21:13 | Link #2404 | |
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2013-02-06, 21:15 | Link #2405 |
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Join Date: Mar 2012
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Calm down, I said I liked your ending for the story, no worries there.
It's just that this author likes open endings with lot's of drama in the way, just that, so even though you'r ending is good the author wouldn't do it like that.
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2013-02-06, 21:18 | Link #2406 | |
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Anyway... if he wants to end the way he want it.... with drama... he should finish what he started. If he got tired of it.... I'll kill him if he cuts it with a BS. ending.... Lols |
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2013-02-06, 21:20 | Link #2407 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2012
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Start sharpening your knife.
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2013-02-06, 21:42 | Link #2408 |
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IDY already axed Onihime vs., right? As I've stated in other threads, this guy gets good ideas, starts them, then realizes he'd rather draw boobs and ass, throw in a little NTR-type situation, and when all's said and done, unless he really goes NTR level, he can't exactly do too much worse than how he ended UxU
... the short version: only Legend of Maian, when that gets updated about twice a year, still has a real story. This is now pretty much just about the boobs and ass (granted, I still have interest in this because I have the fool's hope that something will actually HAPPEN between Stella and Kazuya)
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2013-02-06, 23:45 | Link #2409 | |
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2013-03-21, 17:33 | Link #2417 |
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Gee Gengo Aoi, if there's any moment where I want to kick you in the shin, then kick your face in, then do a knee drop on your stomach, and then stomp you in the n*ts, and then throw your butt over to the nearest anime prison where the worst anime villians get to beat your a** for a bit until one sends you flying straight to my location in the air where I just spiked your head from above sending you flying downward and hit the ground so hard that it causes a meteor class impact, this would be it and then some.
Spank you Gengo, spank you very much, you deserve a douchebag and a punchbag award. XD
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