To Aru ... Fanfiction Discussion Thread

[TkMacintosh]

Originally Posted by WiliamZ0

Spoiler for Awww:

I just want to use that idea in my fanfic, but the concept of us quite different~ Since Touma in my fanfic still have his memories. Oh well~ I will cancel it~ Cancel it Cancel it~

Please do your best for your fanfic

Eh, go ahead and use it. I get plenty of ideas so throwing out one here and there isn't that bad.

[Mr.Kyon]

Haven't posted something in awhile.

Spoiler for Why you shouldn't play with Worst:

“‘Gwuaaah!’ Misaka rages as Misaka drops the controller!”

Misaka Worst and Last Order were playing a videogame, and as usual, the [Queen of Trolling] won hands down. Seriously, she used her feet to play and 0wn her Onee-chan. She’s enjoying this very much as you dear reader can imagine; seeing Last Order fly into fits of rage over this made her giggle in a chillingly dark way. It was already humiliating back when she still had her arm in a sling, but now it’s like a slap to the face for the grand [Commander of the Network].

“Noisy brats!” grumbled Accelerator on the couch, being lazy like always.

“Oi oi, Honor Student-chan, play with me. This kid is no good.” Worst had to hold her sneering laughs on that one.

“Stop mocking Misaka Misaka!” Last Order was on the brink of tears.

The strongest rubbed his temples. “Are you stupid? That game is so…so…” Accelerator shuddered, “Ugh, girly…”

Worst sighed and hit the eject button on the console, putting back the game in its case. “Then we don’t have to play that one, moron. Misaka has a few gritty games you might like.” She then pointed at a few other game cases.

“Ha ha. Hit me so I can-” Worst did literally as she was told. “OW! You fucking bitch, I didn’t mean like that!”

Worst rolled her eyes, a mocking grin on. “I know. Still, correcting Whitey-chan’s potty mouth was quite satisfying,” she acknowledged.

Accelerator glared at her and clicked his tongue. ‘I hate you so much…’

She shrugged it off and began listing the games one by one.

“Super Go Karts 3?”

“No.”

“Super Mega Party 7?”

“If this is not going to get better, forget it.”

“Hmm…” Worst reached out for a particular box, “Mansion of the Dead?”

That seemed to have piqued his interests as he raised an eyebrow. She dug around a drawer below the TV and took a pair of light-guns controllers. Waving them around, she took on a faked melodramatic voice as she spoke: “See the wonders of virtual mass killing of zombies? Now you can do it with a partner too! Oh, Misaka looks forward to the great romance which will develop among the blood and bullets~”

Accelerator simply ignored her, and after a basic setup and training level, they were off killing zombies.

Although Accelerator hadn’t planned to have a trembling Last Order burying herself in his chest.

“‘Z-Z-ZO-ZO-ZOMBIES!’ Misaka stutters as Misaka cowers in fear. ‘Gekota Gekota Gekota…’ Misaka repeats as Misaka tries to calm herself down.”

This added weight made his aim slightly crooked, but that wasn’t saying much. He still was only getting headshots.

Worst on the other hand…

“Stop shooting the civilians and explosive barrels!” he scolded whilst offing another undead.

“Why? Oh look, his arm blew off!” she laughed as a human arm landed in their vision.

“Shoot the zombies you useless sack of-!”

Uwuggg, BRAINNNZZZ!

Since his vision was obstructed by the arm and the spilling blood from its stump, Accelerator couldn’t see anything, more specifically, the roving masses of flesh jumping at him. After screams of agony coming from their characters (and whimpering in Last Order’s case), a classic black-on-white GAME OVER screen appeared.

He glared at her, grinding his teeth together.

“Okay okay, you nerd. I’ll try to be serious.”

“You better.”

“Else what?” she wondered, wiggling her body.

No answer came, again.

This went on for the better of an hour, until it was Accelerator’s time to ragequit.

“I give up! I fucking give up! Even with my perfect aim I can’t win this!” he complained while dropping the light-gun.

Worst was madly grinning, crossing her legs and winking at him. She stroked her chin like a detective as she said: “Oh? Why’s that, white-hair?”

One giant red cross-popping vein later, he gave her his answer.

“I’ll tell you why you stupid bitch…” He began, then upped his tone. “THIS IS A CO-OP GAME YOU MO-ROOONNN! SHOOT THE GODDAMN ZOMBIES YOU USELESS PIECE OF-”

Coming from the kitchen adjacent to the living room, a certain spartan-like woman appears! “Tone that down, else the kid is going to get a bad tongue-jan,” Yomikawa interrupted, entering the scene.

The kid in question, Last Order, was still clinging to Accelerator. Why Yomikawa didn’t question the logic or morals of letting her see all that virtual carnage remains a mystery. Isn’t she a teacher? Oh wait, High School teacher, that makes a lot more sense now.

“Yeah Accelerator, it’s just a game, Geek Boy.”

‘Geek Boy’ threw his head into a pillow and snarled.

“Whatever! You try playing with her, Yomikawa, and see how you like it when she fucks you over!”

Yomikawa was handed the light-gun. “Uh? Well, if you insist. So, how does this work?”

Worst jumped to the occasion, “Oh it’s simple, you have to…”

Jump on ahead, sometime later after Worst gave Yomikawa instructions…

“We’ve defeated the final boss-janyo!”

“Nice work Onee-san!”

Accelerator and Last Order sulked together on the couch.

Also, I'm working on a little ShiagexRikou one-shot. Almost done.

[faiz blaster]

New chapter. I wonder if this author is intending to add the entirety of the Railgun heroines (including the sub-characters) into Touma's harem?

A Certain Scientific and Unscientific Girl - Chapter 3

[WiliamZ0]

Okay! Now time for my 2nd story arc XD review Please

To Aru Majutsu no Index : Alternative Testament - Chapter 3 & 4

[Chaos2Frozen]

Looks like this is the season to be updating fics



The 2nd chapter for my psychological-horror-action story is up! And it's a whooping 17000 words update I guess I got alittle carried away...

Original Sin - Chapter 2: A Long Way Down

It's got shotguns! Cryptic messages! Suggested Necropilia! And a Denpa-Yandere!

Note: For maximum effect, please read at night or in dim lighting, preferably in front of a mirror.

[TkMacintosh]

Spoiler for Random Story scene due to "Of Science and Magics":

When Touma came home that afternoon, he never expected to see both Mikoto AND Ruiko in his kitchen dressed in aprons, baking ingredients all over his countertop. Misaka gasped as she turned to look at the intruder at the door. "Tou-Touma! What are you doing here?" Misaka asked as she held the batter covered whisk up to her mouth, getting batter over her face. Ruiko just stared at him over Misaka's shoulder, her back facing him, but a light blush over her face.

"Uhh...this is -my- home? What are you two doing here?" Touma asked staring at the both of them.

"Uhh...Uhh..." Misaka stuttered as she tried to find the right excuse, the whisk still held up to her mouth, her face flushing red with embarassment.

Spoiler for Years into the future, Touma comes home after a long day of work.:

Touma shut the door behind him holding a striped bag. "I'm home. I got you something special" Touma said as he looked towards the living room seeing Sphinx standing on its back paw, its front paws on the table staring at the food.

"Ah. Welcome home, Touma dear." Mikoto's voice rang from the living room. "You're just in time for dinner."

"Welcome home Touma." Index said as she sat in front of the table, a full bowl of rice in her hand. "What did you get Touma?"

"I got those special rolls from the bakery in the 8th district." Touma answered back still bewildered that Index was living with Mikoto and himself, even after the two got married...though he could live with it...especially on those -special- nights.

Yeah...My random ideas come to mind after finding nice pictures.

[WiliamZ0]

I only come here as an idea giver XD

Anyone interested in crossover ?

This pic might help you guys XD

Spoiler for Here is the pic:

[Ritsu026]

OK , I didn't manage to upload my fanfic with pics in it , but I uploaded the pics in megaupload in zip file
here's the fanfic:
http://login.fanfiction.net/story/st...9214&chapter=1
here are the pics and some extra pics that I didn't plan to post in the FF:
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=BVMTVSME
I'll update it weekly if I can and these are all the pics I drew for it.

[TkMacintosh]

Originally Posted by WiliamZ0

I only come here as an idea giver XD

Anyone interested in crossover ?

This pic might help you guys XD

Spoiler for Here is the pic:

Pic is borked dude D:

I even copied the link of the pic and only got 403'd D:

[Mr.Kyon]

Hey, just throwing this out there, has anybody ever done a story related to somebody having a power related to his LEFT Hand? You know, with the many myths that align the Left Hand with Satan.

Fiamma's Holy Right "Symbolizes all powers of miracles, no matter it be magic or demonic arts, it will destroy all without differentiating between them. Even in the past it has sealed the demon lord Lucifer into Hell for a thousand years, the power of the Right that let the human realm have a thousand year of peace." Fiamma calls it a blessing from the Son of God multiple times.

Touma's Imagine Breaker "Cleanses God and exorcises the Devil." Simply, it has no allegiance to God or Satan, but relies on Right Hand symbolism. Like the Holy Right, it doesn't differentiate between magic or demonic arts. He's literally a neutral in this, between Fiamma's Holy Right and a possible Left Hand user.

What kind of power lies to Touma's left side and opposite of the Holy Right? I think it could made for a pretty good fic. Although this could end up with a Gary Sue type of OC if not handled well.

[TkMacintosh]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Hey, just throwing this out there, has anybody ever done a story related to somebody having a power related to his LEFT Hand? You know, with the many myths that align the Left Hand with Satan.

Fiamma's Holy Right "Symbolizes all powers of miracles, no matter it be magic or demonic arts, it will destroy all without differentiating between them. Even in the past it has sealed the demon lord Lucifer into Hell for a thousand years, the power of the Right that let the human realm have a thousand year of peace." Fiamma calls it a blessing from the Son of God multiple times.

Touma's Imagine Breaker "Cleanses God and exorcises the Devil." Simply, it has no allegiance to God or Satan, but relies on Right Hand symbolism. Like the Holy Right, it doesn't differentiate between magic or demonic arts. He's literally a neutral in this, between Fiamma's Holy Right and a possible Left Hand user.

What kind of power lies to Touma's left side and opposite of the Holy Right? I think it could made for a pretty good fic. Although this could end up with a Gary Sue type of OC if not handled well.

I would think that because it's aligned with Satan, it would have the power to effect things negatively, bring misfortune to all, bring death and destruction...maybe THAT'S what caused Touma such misfortune before he came to Academy City? When he arrived, Crowley somehow forced the Left Hand into a seal when Touma went to visit a hospital through the Frog Faced Doctor or some random nurse under his control?

Maybe Crowley believes that Touma's left hand is the one thing that's worse to have around then Touma's right hand....

OR Touma's Right Hand keeps the Left Hand in check, but every so often the Left Hand over powers Touma's Right Hand lets loose a splurt of power and causes Touma misfortune?

O.O

THAT'S IT! The thing in Touma that appeared in Vol 22 is the Left Hand trying to take over Touma, but Touma beat it back with sheer force of will and used it's power to regrow his arm and get back the Right Hand.

[Mr.Kyon]

When I was talking about a power that lies to Touma's left side, I wasn't talking as in, his left hand. I'm more talking about something like this.

Unknown Left Hand Power (???) - Imagine Breaker (Touma) - Holy Right (Fiamma)

[Master Assassin]

Spoiler for For the hell of it for a crossover idea:

Just dropping in to drop some ideas someone might use, as I'm rather amused by the realm of fandom having fun of confusing Touma for a certain other Kamijou from a somehow stellar series that just ended recently, if you know what I mean.

For the hell of it and FOR THE SAKE OF THE POOR GIRLS! ALL HAIL THE TOUMAN.

Well, also because there exists a certain tag I'm browsing called "Bad End (or Sad End) Flag Breaker" in which the "original" characters that fulfilled the criterias (Exactly As The Name Says On The Tin, if you ask) is Cobra of the Space Adventure Cobra fame. And recently Touma also fulfills that role, so yeah.

I don't really care how you fanfiction writers decide to do it, but.... Why Not™

Also we need more Touma being Touma, a messiah that saves someone so hard his saviour prowess extends to other universes *whistle*

[Marcus H.]

Somnium Interimus Kamijou Touma?

[MeisterBabylon]

I am the Terror that Cracks in the Night!

I am the... erm... the... WHATEVER!!

Babylon is back, and he's got an original fic for you:

Spoiler for A Certain Masked Detective - Prologue:

There are 2,300,000 stories in this city.

This one’s different.

This one’s mine.

16th July 2008, Wednesday
“Welcome to Ride City”

Gonna be updating this really fast as pretty much 4 days of content have been written... Those who know me know that I will use the most obscure facts from novel and real life to build this noir fic.

So hang on. It may not have too many ships, but it's going to be one hell of a ride.

[WiliamZ0]

Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Hey, just throwing this out there, has anybody ever done a story related to somebody having a power related to his LEFT Hand? You know, with the many myths that align the Left Hand with Satan.

Fiamma's Holy Right "Symbolizes all powers of miracles, no matter it be magic or demonic arts, it will destroy all without differentiating between them. Even in the past it has sealed the demon lord Lucifer into Hell for a thousand years, the power of the Right that let the human realm have a thousand year of peace." Fiamma calls it a blessing from the Son of God multiple times.

Touma's Imagine Breaker "Cleanses God and exorcises the Devil." Simply, it has no allegiance to God or Satan, but relies on Right Hand symbolism. Like the Holy Right, it doesn't differentiate between magic or demonic arts. He's literally a neutral in this, between Fiamma's Holy Right and a possible Left Hand user.

What kind of power lies to Touma's left side and opposite of the Holy Right? I think it could made for a pretty good fic. Although this could end up with a Gary Sue type of OC if not handled well.

About left hand, My OC that going to be shown in my fanfic (I already shown the concept before at several page back) have that wierd hand but his power concept almost similar to Touma except it really go to power that shown totally destruction (to physical things and some supernatural abilities (not all) ) .

About left hand ... 1 Info that is connection between Aleister and Left-Hand ... If I don't wrong at wikipedia and several forums about religion and something about aleister said something like ... uh I forget ... I gonna check it later

For the one who gonna put 'left hand' in their fanfic please have more different concept then mine

[MrTerrorist]

Finally read Of Science and Magics chapter 7

Spoiler for ch7:

The fight between Kaori and Mikoto was jaw dropping amazing! I love it. I also love the part with Touma consulting Saten about Level Upper.

One tiny minor mistake i notice that Stormwolfex made was "English Purist Church" when the correct one should be "Church of England" or "The Anglican Church".

However, it was still a very great fanfic! Keep up the good work Stormwolfex.

[TkMacintosh]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

Finally read Of Science and Magics chapter 7

Spoiler for ch7:

The fight between Kaori and Mikoto was jaw dropping amazing! I love it. I also love the part with Touma consulting Saten about Level Upper.

One tiny minor mistake i notice that Stormwolfex made was "English Purist Church" when the correct one should be "Church of England" or "The Anglican Church".

However, it was still a very great fanfic! Keep up the good work Stormwolfex.

I feel kinda silly for believing that Stormwolfex had used my idea >.>

I mean, I posted that idea before he came out with chapter 6 >.> then after posting my idea here, WillianZ0 asking to use it, then chapter 6 pops up shortly after WilliamZ0 asks, so I put 2 and 2 together...but it ends up being fish instead of 4 =.=

[Mr.Kyon]

I have no idea what just happened... One minute I was writing the next chapter of Promise, then I...

Oh god, something's really wrong with me... [Captain Obvious]

Spoiler for Kakine sings...:

“Accelerator!”

Last Order called out to her guardian.

“What is it, brat?”

“T-There’s wings coming from-!”

A figure clad in nothing but pink boxers stood behind the ten year old, fresh from the fridge.

“Last time hurt, you know.”

Kakine Teitoku, again. Well, Cyber=Kakine anyway.

“Oh great. Want to get killed again?”

“No, I came to propose a truce. We all know who’s the strongest anyway, and I’m tired of it.”

“…Why are you so nice all the sudden?”

“Ah, you want to know?”

“Enlighten me.”

“Well, I’ve found the light. I’m a proud Roman Catholic now!”

Suddenly, music came out of nowhere.

Accelerator recognized it.

He looked terrified.

“…No, stop that.”

“And I’m going to sing about it!”

“No, stop! I’ll do anything for you to stop that right now!”

“TOO LATE! I’VE FOUND YOUR WEAKNESS HAHAHAHA!”

Then Kakine started singing.

“There are Jews in the world.
There are Buddhists.”

“STOP!”

Accelerator begged for it to stop, and to his later dismay, he forgot he could’ve just redirected the sound away.

“There are Hindus and Mormons, and then
There are those that follow Mohammed, but
I've never been one of them.”

Last Order was enticed by the surprisingly good British voice.

Wait, was that even Kakine’s?

“I'm a Roman Catholic,
And have been since before I was born,
And the one thing they say about Catholics is:
They'll take you as soon as you're warm.

You don't have to be a six-footer.
You don't have to have a great brain.
You don't have to have any clothes on. You're
A Catholic the moment Dad came,

Because…

Every sperm is sacred.
Every sperm is greatness.
If a sperm is wasted,
God gets quite-UHHHAGGG, MY SPLEEN!”

Accelerator told Yomikawa that evening that they needed to phase out the fridge from the house, because a man singing about sperm came out from it.

She checked him in into the hospital’s mental ward.

Sadly, no progress on JuniorKiharaxLastOrder. I can't figure out a proper way to introduce Accelerator to shota Kihara, and that just blocks me hard.

Every idea I get ends with Accelerator accelerating Junior Kihara into the nearest wall the moment he hears his name is Kihara. Alternatively, Junior Kihara disables Accelerator with a reverse punch to the nuts while LO isn't looking.

"No hard feelings. It's pretty evened out. You killed my father, I punched you in the nuts... Fair deal, 'kay?" <---- Actual line. Junior Kihara plays sociopathy for comedy.

Anybody has a bone to throw me on that? Seriously, I'm blocked. Guess I'll go sleep and have a dream that enlightens me.

Or maybe I'll go sniff some black markers or something...

SHIT I REVEALED MY SECRET.

[Nayrael]

Just let Yomikawa introduce him to the Tokiwadai Dorm Manager and then tell him that he will meet that woman again if he kills they boy. That should keep the boy safe... or safe long enough for you to write something :P