2012-07-19, 10:57 | Link #34301 |
I am no one
Join Date: Apr 2010
Location: Inside your head
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I mean the comparing stuff.
It's good plot and all but really, that could easily mistaken as favoritism. Especially considering the woobie treatment of Gentarou, whose people in-universe don't give a jack shit about. You can just go with the general idea and run with it.
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2012-07-19, 21:25 | Link #34313 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Not only she has girls as rival, suddenly she gain male rival too. On top on that, she is not a rep candidate, just a normal girl with normal syn-rate with IS. She is only in ISA only through hard work(Studying hard for the entrance exam, training very hard) while the male just enter ISA because they are male. (O_O) Combine with the fact that guys hate girls because of IS and she has a family full of guys.... Her life really suxs. Edit: Make you kind of want to pity her..... She work really damn hard only to be put down because of "GUYS WITH TECHNOLOGY THAT IS AS GOOD AS IS!".
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2012-07-19, 21:35 | Link #34315 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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To be honest, I don't think the social order in China will change just because of IS....
Only males can carry the family name (most important point) and villagers from Rural area probably had never even heard of IS. The only differences is: The probability of infanticide is reduced (There will always be people who decided that continuing the family line is more important.)
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2012-07-19, 21:40 | Link #34317 |
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Join Date: Sep 2011
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Nope, it's mentioned in the first chapter alone that the shift caused a lot of changes. The IS does take a role, it just doesn't come into play until pivotal points.
Tip: There's a reason Ichika got a scholarship even if hsi cooking skills aren't pro level.
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