2012-04-21, 08:05 | Link #29623 |
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Make it sweet but not overboard, and keep everyone in character. There's time for interruption, and there's time to let them work. Also, no romance amnesia. If you're confident, make it part of their character development.
Don't let "God of abusive humor" and "God of Status Quo" tempt you just because
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2012-04-21, 08:23 | Link #29625 |
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Where romance moment wasn't destroyed so much as left in the brink of nothingness.
For example, I can understand that IchiHouki kiss is a spur of the moment, but neither of them even so much think about it, without resolution even. Even if the "Purposefully dense Ichika" theory is correct, Houki still kind of OOC. It'll be more bearable if they decide to talk about it THEN conclude that nothing is serious, at least from Ichika's side, whereas Houki was secretly happy that she still have a good chance winning him.
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2012-04-21, 08:47 | Link #29628 |
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What are the chances Ichika or any male in ISA would get labeled with Sexual harassment if they say anything inappropriate by accident? For example, I saw this asked when Tsukune was looking for a cat in a fanfic.
"Excuse me, girls, I'm looking for a little pussy. WOuld you please help me find one?" You can imagine the reaction.
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2012-04-21, 08:49 | Link #29629 | |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
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*Age is working on multiple fic at once*
Dream Catcher Fic allow me to do crazy stuff with original machine and yet feel justified because whatever crazy stuff the original machine does, it is for show only. (Edit: I admit it need work....lots of it, I type out the first part of 1st chapter just last night within a few hours ) and others which I am still trying to find time and mood to type out. Edit: Quote:
The girls will answer that question with brute force (the canon girls already has no qualm about using IS on Ichika). Anti-male girls would be rioting or petitioning to kick/expel the males.
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2012-04-21, 08:52 | Link #29630 |
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Not of it was said in Japanese. "Neko" is definitely not a sexual slang... most of the time. "Manko" is not even an euphemism, it's a well known slang for vagina and not used for anything else.
Back to topic, why not? That's why there's a trope named "Innocent Innuendo"
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2012-04-21, 09:02 | Link #29632 |
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Regular innuendo is intentional. Often used as pickup line. The "Gun in your pocket" is a classic example.
The innocent innuendo is your example above, it's perfectly harmless comment that could be interpreted as sexual.
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2012-04-21, 09:03 | Link #29633 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
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About that Ichika's Backbone Challenge in FF.net
Isn't that technically violating the ToS? There is no story in it.... Edit: I might try to integrate better version of Dream Catcher (Canon presence is too low in the story).
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2012-04-21, 11:09 | Link #29638 |
That one guy
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If lying isn't against the rules then he can just say that it's for a friend whom he met during his "previous travels". He'd say that she travels light due to her lifestyle and extra clothes weren't something she cared much about till now.
About the multiple language thing. Laura is more or less a foot soldier but I really think she's an espionage agent as well. Most military forces AKA foot soldiers already have military liaisons to set proper arrangements with foreign elements they work with. But for espionage agents, it is a big help to be able to speak on your own without reliance on a translator. |
2012-04-21, 11:31 | Link #29640 |
That one guy
Join Date: Nov 2011
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well there was a 5th generation idea I had but it involved Nineveh's wisdom
5th generation IS: to bridge the gap between human and IS AKA a more effective direct brain to machine interface than just waiting for the machine to accept nerve signals that pass through the local nervous system where they are located. Ideally, it would increase response time and even allow a certain sense of remote control weapons to be more easily controlled than before. Also overall increase in mobility since the current control system still suggest that the IS armoring is being physically lifted than it is tracing the pilot's movements. |
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