Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

@ Meister and Zero- Small intro to new draft.

Spoiler:

It was an average day in IS academy; The birds were chirping, IS units were being used and the students were reading yaoi manga. Yup, everything was right with the world.

Or so it seemed.

The truth was this day spelled doom for all the males unlucky enough be in this cursed academy.

Right now their strength will be put to the test.

They will have to fight.

"I'll fight till my last breath!"

They will have to survive.

"I'm not gonna die here!"

They will have to Crossdress

"Damn you Zero!"

Coming soon in in a forum near you.

Side note- I blame you guys and this entire forum for injecting crack into my systems without me realizing it.

[DarkJak2050]

Alright, does anybody find it difficult or confusing on who's who in my Fanfic? Because my OCs do refer to eachother by their real names and nick names.

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Alright, does anybody find it difficult or confusing on who's who in my Fanfic? Because my OCs do refer to eachother by their real names and nick names.

Not really. I just tend to familiarize their names with their personality trait.

For example:

Hot Shot=Leader

Ratchet=Sarcastic smart guy

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

The novels show that energy can indeed be blocked by it since she manages to block both Cecilia's and Rin's attacks which use energy and sound respectively, plasma has not been used so far so we don't know it's place in canon yet.

As far as I know the AIC only extends to Laura's front, her back is completely undefended against attacks while it's on.

Energy as in particle beam cannon, sound as in air blast/ shockwave force. Both of them has mass (particle and air, respectively) and thus have inertia, so they can be blocked using Active Inertia-Canceller, meanwhile...

Spoiler for Spoiler:

Ichika will use hi-powered laser beam, old weapon that is Starlight Mk.I because laser has no inertia, so there nothing to cancel XD

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@Zero and Meister- Here's the new draft. Please leave a long review if you can, please and thank you!

Spoiler:

POV: Gou Karon
Location: Dormitory halls.

"Well, here it is."

"Oh~ This is Mistress' room?"

"*Sigh* Don't call me mistress!"

Irish was discharged from the clinic after a few days, and after that Tatnashi-senpai authorized him rooming with me and Riz but there were a few problems along the way.

"But that's the proper way to call someone isn't it Mistress?"

One: Irish wouldn't drop the Mistress crap no matter how much we told him to.

"Nevermind Irish, just fix your clothes please."

"O-Oh right."

Two: Apparently the only clothes he bothered wearing were shredded in that fight so I had to borrow Nii-nii's and the didn't exactly...fit right.

"Um...Mistress? These clothes are a bit big."

He wasn't kidding, the shirt was drooping over his right shoulder and was way too loose for comfort, we also had to tie a belt around his waist or else the pants would keep falling down.

'How did he get even thinner? He wasn't even in the hospital that long.'

"I know Irish but there's nothing we can do for now."

"A-Alright Mistress, sorry to bother you."

"N-No, you weren't bothering me or anything!"

'Yuu and those Yaoi fangirls would get a kick out of seeing this.'

I wasn't just talking about his attitude; His voice was higher (I can't tell if this is his real voice or his mind is making him think it is) and he looked younger for some reason (Probably because he didn't have that permanent scowl on his face). All in all he looked like an uke who came straight out of a Yaoi manga.

"Hopefully they never get to see him."

"Did you say something mistress?"

"...It's nothing."

Deciding to try and get this over with; I walk into the room and prepare to argue with Riselle.

"..."

She wasn't there.

'That was anti-climactic.'

I sigh and sit down on the bed.

"Um...Mistress? What do we do now."

"We wait for Riz to...wait a minute."

I get up from the bed and walk closer to Irish, something felt off.

"W-W-What is it Mistress?"

"When was the last time you took a bath?"

"W-Well.. you see I-"

"Irish, you better not lie to me."

"A-A-A f-few days ago!"

"What!?"

"I-I don't like taking baths, they feel weird"

"You're not sleeping in this room without taking a bath! Now go to the bathroom and take a shower!."

"But-"

"Now!"

Irish ran to the bathroom door and locked it behind him.

"..."

"I don't hear a shower!"

"I-I was just about to-"

"If I don't hear a shower in the next 10 seconds then I'm going in there myself!"

"I-I'm showering! I'm showering!"

The sound of running water suddenly filled the room.

"You better do it properly!"

With a sigh I walk back into the bed and plop down on it looks like I'm gonna have to wait a while.

"Karon"

Or maybe not.

I look up from the bed and see Riz along with Erika and Celeste.

"Um..what are Erika and Celsete doing here?"

"I brought them with me." Erika said. "I thought they might help me convince you that rooming with that psychopath isn't a good idea."

"That's right karon-chan, he might hurt you if you're not careful." Erika told me.

"..." Celeste was as silent as ever.

"Look, we talked about this, he needs help."

"Unless you can show me that he's not insane then I'm not letting him stay here."

"Alright fine." I turn to the bathroom door. "Irish come out here"

"C-Coming Mistress!"

The door to the bathroom opened and Irish rushed out--WHY ISN'T HE WEARING CLOTHES!?

"I-I'm here Mistress."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"..."

"Irish...why aren't you wearing clothes?"

"B-Because Mistress called me and putting them on would have made her wait."

"..."

*Crash*

The scene was too much for Erika and she collapsed on the floor with her face painted red.

Celeste started to check on her while Erika turned towards me.

"...He's not staying here."

'Just great!'

----------------------------------------------------

15 minutes later

After yelling at Irish to go back to the bathroom to put his clothes on and waking Erika up I managed to get everyone calm (In a relative sense) again.

Right now we me and Celeste were sitting in my bed while Riz and Erika sat in the other, Irish was kneeling on the floor for some reason.

"So, mind telling us what that was all about?" Riz started.

"Well..It's a bit complicated."

"Considering he just ran out of the bathroom naked I think we deserve to hear an explanation."

"P-Please don't blame Mistress! It wasn't her fault."

"We weren't talking to you."

"Uuuuuu~"

"Alright, I'll try to make this as simple as possible"

"We're listening."

"Well, have you guys heard of retrograde amnesia...."

5 minutes later.

"So...you're telling us that he doesn't remember anything?" Riz asked in clarification.

"That's right, so he's harmless"

"Retrograde amnesia? Are you sure he's not just acting Karon-chan?"

"I'm positive Erika, the doctor said it himself and I don't think he can act that well."

"So right now he can't hurt us at all?"

"I'm positive Riz, you can see how he's acting by now that he wouldn't hurt a fly."

"*Sigh* Alright then, he can stay here but he better not screw anything up."

"Alright! Did you hear that Irish?"

"Y-Yes, T-Thank you Mistress Riz"

"My name is Riselle, and cut it out with that mistress thing!"

"It's no use, he calls everybody like that."

Satisfied with the results; Erika and Celeste left the room and me and Riz started to prepare for bed, there was one problem left however.

"Hey Karon, where is he gonna sleep?"

"Oh, uh...Tatenashi-senpai said she'd get another bed but it wouldn't arrive for a few days."

"Are you telling me he has to sleep in one of our beds!?"

"Well...maybe?"

"No way!"

"I-It's okay Mistress, I can sleep on the floor."

"No you're not! Just sleep in mine, there's enough room for the two of us."

"A-As you wish."

I turn off the lights and plop down on the bed with Irish next to me. Tomorrows gonna be a pain in the ass.

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Noon the next day.

Location: Class 1-2

Class came and went and lunch time arrived, me and the others sat at a circle with our chairs while some of our classmates left and people from other classes went in to chat with friends.

Class was as boring as ever and I nearly cried with joy come lunch time. Unfortunately, I found myself missing the most vital thing.

"My Bento!"

"Hm? What's wrong Karon-chan?"

"I-I forgot my Bento box at my room! Lunch time's too short for me to go and get it." I slump in my desk with disbelief.

"You should've been more careful Karon." Riz lectured towards me

"Yeah, yeah"

"Um, why don't you have some of mine?"

"Thank's Erika, but I don't want to both-"

"Mistress~" A voice suddenly yelled out.

'Oh no, PLEASE don't tell me he-'

"Did you hear that?"

"I heard someone saying Mistress"

People in class were starting to talk already, this didn't look good.

"Mistress~ You forgot your Bento!"

Irish suddenly appeared in the doorway and caused virtually everyone in the room to stare at him.

"Wh-Who's that!?"

"He looks so cute!"

They were probably referring to the fact that he was still wearing Nii-nii's clothes which looked way too big on him.

'Please, please, PLEASE don't let him see-'

"Ah Mistress! There you are!"

'Why~'

He made his way across the room towards our table and held out my bento box towards me.

"You left your lunch at the room so I brought it over."

"Uh....Thanks" I take the bento from his hands.

"Please be more careful in the future Mistress." After saying that he quickly turned around and ran out of the room.

"..."

People were staring at where we were, I have a really bad feeling about this.

"WHO WAS THAT KARON-SAN!?"

"WHY WAS HE CALLING YOU MISTRESS!?"

"CAN WE USE HIM FO OUR NEW YAOI DOUJIN!?"

"WE'RE DOOMED! SHE'S ALREADY CLOSE TO ICHIKA-SAN AND NOW SHE HAS ANOTHER ONE!"

'This is gonna be a LONG day!'

LOL NO SHIT, Karon and Irish are meant to be with each other, except Irish is amnesiac and thus broke the chemistry...

It's still LULZ WORTHY though!

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Hell no! Zero x Meister is enough ho-yay for this board.

Really? Because I knew Old Man has broad tastes... especially that you act like an uke!

Wavehawk: "BUENO!"

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! !!!!!!!

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Meister and Zero- Small intro to new draft.

Spoiler:

It was an average day in IS academy; The birds were chirping, IS units were being used and the students were reading yaoi manga. Yup, everything was right with the world.

Or so it seemed.

The truth was this day spelled doom for all the males unlucky enough be in this cursed academy.

Right now their strength will be put to the test.

They will have to fight.

"I'll fight till my last breath!"

They will have to survive.

"I'm not gonna die here!"

They will have to Crossdress

"Damn you Zero!"

Coming soon in in a forum near you.

Side note- I blame you guys and this entire forum for injecting crack into my systems without me realizing it.

Blame Meister for the crack, I'm doing nothing but offer you extremely sweet cookies.

[Eratas123]

@Zero- Any suggestions for the new draft/story? It's not really my forte and the fact that I'm using nearly every male OC is gonna make it quite hectic.

Amnesiac!Irish and Karon remind me more of a little brother and older sister pair He wouldn't dare lie to her and you can see he's really scared of her even when she doesn't yell.

Wonder what'll happen to him now that he acts like a character out of a yaoi manga

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@Zero- Any suggestions for the new draft/story? It's not really my forte and the fact that I'm using nearly every male OC is gonna make it quite hectic.

Amnesiac!Irish and Karon remind me more of a little brother and older sister pair He wouldn't dare lie to her and you can see he's really scared of her even when she doesn't yell.

Wonder what'll happen to him now that he acts like a character out of a yaoi manga

Oh crud.

Are my OCs going to be in this, too?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@Zero- Any suggestions for the new draft/story? It's not really my forte and the fact that I'm using nearly every male OC is gonna make it quite hectic.

Amnesiac!Irish and Karon remind me more of a little brother and older sister pair He wouldn't dare lie to her and you can see he's really scared of her even when she doesn't yell.

Wonder what'll happen to him now that he acts like a character out of a yaoi manga

Suggestion: Keept that, becuase despite the background and themes is dark, you caught the spirit of youth within Infinite Stratos canon universe well. Mix and Match that works well indeed.

Amnesiac state of Irish indeed will be a hurdle to IriKa, it's like she's caught inside a love triangle even though there's two of them (disregarding their respective Harem that both Karon and Irish doesn't realize of course ).

What'll happened? Of course everyone is happy now that Char is no longer Uke material, they got a BETTER EXAMPLE!

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

Oh crud.

Are my OCs going to be in this, too?

I wanted to put them in but I wasn't sure you'd approve or not. So can I include them?

@Zero- I do not act like an uke! *hold's back tears* Y-You're just mean! Waaaah~

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I wanted to put them in but I wasn't sure you'd approve or not. So can I include them?

@Zero- I do not act like an uke! *hold's back tears* Y-You're just mean! Waaaah~

Everyone is an uke for Old Man Hawk and Drugged!Meister

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Everyone is an uke for Old Man Hawk and Drugged!Meister

I am not! I am perfectly straight and interested in girls despite the fact that I'm writing a crossdressing story. That is completely unrelated!

BTW- Since I'll have to replace Karon with Tatenashi I'm going to start adding more details since it'll be an ongoing story here now. Please continue to read

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I am not! I am perfectly straight and interested in girls despite the fact that I'm writing a crossdressing story. That is completely unrelated!

Well, too much HoYay is poisonus, We shall reduce the sexual jokes for now or Ichika will kill me.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

BTW- Since I'll have to replace Karon with Tatenashi I'm going to start adding more details since it'll be an ongoing story here now. Please continue to read

Of course, I'm here, always here!

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I wanted to put them in but I wasn't sure you'd approve or not. So can I include them?

@Zero- I do not act like an uke! *hold's back tears* Y-You're just mean! Waaaah~

Not much is really known about these guys. So for now, I'd say not at this time. Sorry man.

[Eratas123]

@ Zero- Thanks Zero I'll do my best then.

Any suggestions for the "School wide crossdressing"? I'd like to hear your opinion.

@Jak- Aw man! I was looking forward to writing that. Oh well, it might be for the best since they might kill students chasing them.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

I wanted to put them in but I wasn't sure you'd approve or not. So can I include them?

@Zero- I do not act like an uke! *hold's back tears* Y-You're just mean! Waaaah~

nono. You should say, "It's not like I am Uke for you, or anything!" while pouting. xD

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero- Thanks Zero I'll do my best then.

Any suggestions for the "School wide crossdressing"? I'd like to hear your opinion.

Hmm, dunno, this level of humor can only be achieved by smoking Meweister's crack...alright...

*SMOKES*

Hmm, Kyuukai will be the one that put the resistance the most I believe. Ichika will be the one that quickly give up, unless Irish is amnesiac. SO Kyuukai doing his venting escaper again... and again, meeting Tatenashi JUST BECAUSE.

Imagine two of the most skilled fighter in the student body duke it out because one refused to crossdress and one is too persistent.

@Blitz

What? Eratas? Tsundere? DOES NOT COMPU-

*was SHOT*

[Eratas123]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Hmm, dunno, this level of humor can only be achieved by smoking Meweister's crack...alright...

*SMOKES*

Hmm, Kyuukai will be the one that put the resistance the most I believe. Ichika will be the one that quickly give up, unless Irish is amnesiac. SO Kyuukai doing his venting escaper again... and again, meeting Tatenashi JUST BECAUSE.

Imagine two of the most skilled fighter in the student body duke it out because one refused to crossdress and one is too persistent.

@Blitz

What? Eratas? Tsundere? DOES NOT COMPU-

*was SHOT*

Irish isn't amnesiac It'd be no fun if he was and I can see him sabotoging the academy's units just because he's pissed.

Tatenashi again!? I can see Kyuukai and Irish and Tatenashi and Karon tag teaming to fight each other

It's not just those three. I made a list in the previous two pages who I'll include in the story. The strategy meeting will be full of lulz.

Side note - I-It's not like I'm writing the story for you or anything *Turns head to the right* I-I just like writing that's all *blush*

[ZeroXSEED]

Yeah I knew, you write it for the sake of ship.

That aside, Pyxis might be a little too lazy to run anyway...

[Eratas123]

@ Zero- Shipping indeed!

Irish: I'm not gonna die here! *Takes out jammer knife*

Kyuukai: Neither am I! *Takes out reapers sonata*

Tatenashi: Fufufufu~ I wonder what neko mimi looks like on both of you.

Karon: Let's find out!

Irish and Kyuukai: No way!

Behold! Neko Irish: http://danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/...wer-genderswap

[Eratas123]

@ Zero- Made an edit to previous post. Anyway, who do you think should get caught first?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Zero- Made an edit to previous post. Anyway, who do you think should get caught first?

Pyxis, as I said, he's the one that is laziest, and then Inami, who tried hard to run but fails, then Ichika, in the same vein as Inami. Consider Kyuukai being the last and THE one that looks weird in the dress (because hes' TOO manly to crossdress, maybe Pyxis too).

(Yes, Ichika and Inami would look god with some touch of make up)