Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Naolin

...Mmhm, I really should be getting to that sleep.

Spoiler for citrus of...wha?:

‘Testarossa…’

Signum’s breath hits her ear, hot enough to make her shiver and light enough to set all her nerves on end. She half-unconsciously moves her neck further to the side, distantly wondering if her hair is going to end up tangled and keenly aware of the older woman’s hand tracing achingly soft lines on her stomach. The other hand, the right, is currently occupied with holding her wrists against the bed, shaking minutely; whether from nerves or excitement is unclear to her, but driven to distraction as she is by the hand not holding her down the thought seems vastly unimportant.

That teasingly unsteady left hand is following its own path over her abdomen, those strong fingers slowly weaving patterns that could be anything at all, applying just enough pressure to have her on the edge of writhing. And then Signum’s palm is over her breast and she almost forgets to breathe as-

*yawns* That's all, folks. Don't stone me? ^^''

That was a devilish cliffhanger Can't wait!
XD

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by Naolin

...Mmhm, I really should be getting to that sleep.

Spoiler for citrus of...wha?:

‘Testarossa…’

Signum’s breath hits her ear, hot enough to make her shiver and light enough to set all her nerves on end. She half-unconsciously moves her neck further to the side, distantly wondering if her hair is going to end up tangled and keenly aware of the older woman’s hand tracing achingly soft lines on her stomach. The other hand, the right, is currently occupied with holding her wrists against the bed, shaking minutely; whether from nerves or excitement is unclear to her, but driven to distraction as she is by the hand not holding her down the thought seems vastly unimportant.

That teasingly unsteady left hand is following its own path over her abdomen, those strong fingers slowly weaving patterns that could be anything at all, applying just enough pressure to have her on the edge of writhing. And then Signum’s palm is over her breast and she almost forgets to breathe as-

*yawns* That's all, folks. Don't stone me? ^^'' I really have no idea if I can write that at all... *winces*

*twitch* That was EVIL!!!!!

Must have more, the suspense! whats going to happen! don't put yourself down, you did that while tired and out of thin air, its really good! I wish i could write something like that without blushing like crazy and mind wandering off somewhere even darker!!

EDIT:

Realised you were grumbling about the presentation, that was good too! lol *runs and hides in embarrassment due to un-needed pep talk of above post*

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Naolin

...Mmhm, I really should be getting to that sleep.

Spoiler for citrus of...wha?:

‘Testarossa…’

Signum’s breath hits her ear, hot enough to make her shiver and light enough to set all her nerves on end. She half-unconsciously moves her neck further to the side, distantly wondering if her hair is going to end up tangled and keenly aware of the older woman’s hand tracing achingly soft lines on her stomach. The other hand, the right, is currently occupied with holding her wrists against the bed, shaking minutely; whether from nerves or excitement is unclear to her, but driven to distraction as she is by the hand not holding her down the thought seems vastly unimportant.

That teasingly unsteady left hand is following its own path over her abdomen, those strong fingers slowly weaving patterns that could be anything at all, applying just enough pressure to have her on the edge of writhing. And then Signum’s palm is over her breast and she almost forgets to breathe as-

*yawns* That's all, folks. Don't stone me? ^^''

Ah my goodness!! Now I'm positively sure Enraptured will foam at the mouth after reading this!! XD LOLOL Well written lemon is always welcome. (though if it gets too lemony it's not allowed to be posted here, try FF.net or somewhere else) Ah that was..what's the term? Titillating? oO;; Well only for that little post I'm cheering Fatenum on!! Any chance of that continuing as a one-shot or a full pledged fic? And get some sleep Naolin, we don't want you getting sick.

[NorthernFallout]

Update on Detective!Nanoha:

I've finally started writing and it's about 25% complete. Expect it tonight, hopefully.
And I think I've never seen Nanoha so serious as in this >_>

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Ilya

Update on Detective!Nanoha:

I've finally started writing and it's about 25% complete. Expect it tonight, hopefully.
And I think I've never seen Nanoha so serious as in this >_>

Ah, so it isn't a crackfic? Now I'm even more curious. Good luck with the writing.

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Ah, so it isn't a crackfic? Now I'm even more curious. Good luck with the writing.

I seriously don't know what to call it It might suck or it might not

[Naolin]

Originally Posted by Black_Wolf

EDIT:
Realised you were grumbling about the presentation, that was good too! lol *runs and hides in embarrassment due to un-needed pep talk of above post*

Actually, I meant what you thought I meant, so thanks for the pep talk. *so very relieved* I could hug you right now, but I'm so tired I'd probably fall on you instead. XD;;

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Ah my goodness!! Now I'm positively sure Enraptured will foam at the mouth after reading this!! XD LOLOL Well written lemon is always welcome. (though if it gets too lemony it's not allowed to be posted here, try FF.net or somewhere else) Ah that was..what's the term? Titillating? oO;; Well only for that little post I'm cheering Fatenum on!! Any chance of that continuing as a one-shot or a full pledged fic? And get some sleep Naolin, we don't want you getting sick.

O-o I converted someone to Fatenum? A little bit, anyway. Go me~! *grins* Well-written, really? *giddy* Thanks for the rating heads-up, though 'too lemony' wouldn't really be a problem for me. ^^' one-shot possibly

Detective!Nanoha

I'm definitely reading that one when it comes out. Mmmm...if Fate were the suspect... *fantasizes* Well, bed time for me. Er, no...good morning to me...gaaah. When I get back I predict 7-10 pages of backlog...

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Naolin

...Mmhm, I really should be getting to that sleep.

Fignum

Spoiler for citrus of...wha?:

‘Testarossa…’

Signum’s breath hits her ear, hot enough to make her shiver and light enough to set all her nerves on end. She half-unconsciously moves her neck further to the side, distantly wondering if her hair is going to end up tangled and keenly aware of the older woman’s hand tracing achingly soft lines on her stomach. The other hand, the right, is currently occupied with holding her wrists against the bed, shaking minutely; whether from nerves or excitement is unclear to her, but driven to distraction as she is by the hand not holding her down the thought seems vastly unimportant.

That teasingly unsteady left hand is following its own path over her abdomen, those strong fingers slowly weaving patterns that could be anything at all, applying just enough pressure to have her on the edge of writhing. And then Signum’s palm is over her breast and she almost forgets to breathe as-

*yawns* That's all, folks. Don't stone me? ^^'' I really have no idea if I can write that presentably at all... *winces* Here's hoping no one's eyes bled.

Edit: page claim for Fignum (hah, again), which is what I'll steadfastly call it until someone comes along with something more catchy. XP

Snaa? OMG its Fignum! It was the best out of all the others I came up with. That was pure evil. As evil as Satashi's teasers. I want more of this please! Very well written. I like your descriptions of things. Get some sleep Naolin!

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha

Haha, you guys clearly need an irc channel as well, i came to check who's commented on my new chapter and it took me 5 minutes just to find my post since this thread had already piled 9 pages on it

It seems so. I was away for about 10 hours and I had to read 5 pages. But it was worth of it.
I'm too lazy to write all names, but to all writers: good fics, I enjoyed them.

btw tags are changing every day?

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by KoSSa

btw tags are changing every day?

Seems that way. I'll get Detective!Nanoha on it so we can found out who it is and when we find him/her/them....

"STARLIGHT-BREAKER!" Server crash.

[Keroko]

This feels like coming home. The fanfiction thread has turned into what the OC-thread used to be.

Originally Posted by TeleIce

OH SHEESH FINE I'LL POST IT

That 'one of us' did kind of scare me XD Tag made me laff, though. Really, the only reason I'm insecure to post is because I'm surrounded by awesome people who I've been e-stalking for a while o-o; *blinks at Satashi*

Warning: Short little drabble-thing is short. I'm rusty at writing. Don't expect epicness. Obviously I'll continue...uh, maybe. I should shut up now.

Spoiler for I don't know what to call this:

It was evening when Vita finally worked up the courage to go ask Nanoha the things she had been mulling over for a day or two. And Vita wasn't the kind of person to mull over anything.

“Um...Nanoha?”

The older looking female raised her eyes up from the novel she was reading. “What's up?” she asked, smiling.

Vita played with her fingers in nervousness. “Uh...F-Fate's out on a mission for a couple of days, huh?”

Nanoha nodded. That sickeningly sweet smile was still on her face.

Vita twitched with annoyance. I shouldn't feel like this! She mentally scolded herself. It's not like I'm going to ask anything weird! “Er...um...I w-was wondering, well, uh,” she blushed as she stumbled over her words, “It's just that I-...I kind of feel maybe just a little bit lonely...and...a-and...”

Nanoha's smile kept growing more cat-like and playful by the second. For a moment of absolute horror it reminded Vita of the expression Hayate had when she wanted to try out her weird outfits on people. “Vita-chan.” Nanoha laughed, “Spit it out already.”

“O-Okay.” Vita gulped. “I w-was wondering if...”

“Yes?”

“Can I sleep with you tonight?!” Vita shouted, covering her face in embarrassment afterwards.

Nanoha's smile softened and she brought up a hand to pet the shorter girl. “Of course you can.”

I...I did it! Vita realized, grinning on the inside. I really did it! She blinked. “Nanoha, you can stop petting me now.”

“Oh! Right.” Nanoha giggled, withdrawing her hand. “Right.”

She's...she's probably going to snuggle with me in bed like a stuffed bear, isn't she? Arg... Vita sighed. What had she gotten herself into?

I REALLY SHOULDN'T HIT THAT REPLY BUTTON BUT -- *starts to self-loathe*

Cuuuuuuuuute.

This Vitoha fan aproves!

Originally Posted by Enraptured

Okay fine, I shall try my hand at writing some crack. xD
This takes place some time after A's.

Spoiler for Fate's First Time.:

(This is thoughts)


Fate: Ano... Signum-nee san?
Signum: Ahh, Testarossa.
Fate: Um... -shuffles about
Signum: ?
Fate: Ehh... -twiddles thumbs and looks down.
Signum: Spit it out already, Testarossa.
Fate: Um.. You know.. I'm d-developing um, faster than Nanoha or Hayate, right? -blushes horribly
Signum: -blinks, coughs and looks anywhere but at Fate's chest.
Fate: So um.. I was wondering.. (Oh my god I'm going to die of embarrassment ;_; )
Signum: (Testarossa is going to die from all the blood rushing to her face ;-; )
Fate: Um, as a knight, you're still human, right? I mean, do you get... womanly.. problems?
Signum: -almost falls over- W-what!? (I want to be anywhere but here!!)
Fate: Um.. What I want to say is.. What I'm trying to say is...
-at this point, Fate's ears are positively glowing-
Fate: Um. DO YOU HAVE A PAD. ;_;

Really sorry about that one. I was just wondering who Fate would go to if she experienced her er, first time? xD

Aaawkwaaard. And cute too.

Originally Posted by Naolin

I blame the joke about the bed a while back and the massive amounts of pairing mania around here lately. *hides*

Uber-Bed

Spoiler for ...the hell?:

Fate: *fidgeting* You know, Nanoha, I was thinking...
Nanoha: Hmm?
Fate: *hesitant* It's just...I know you said Vita could stay under our bed, but did Rein and Agito have to come too?
Nanoha: *tilts head* But they're small, so they fit.
Fate: *blushing heavily* Yes, but- at night, I can hear-
Nanoha: *blissfully cutting her off* And when Shamal pointed out it wasn't fair to leave her and Signum out, especially if Vita-chan's already there, I said they could come too!
Fate: *horrified* You mean- that was them last night?
Nanoha: *rambling on* And you know the Forwards were saying they wanted to visit too-
Fate: Is there anyone who isn't currently under the bed!?
Hayate: *pokes head out from under bed* Keep it down or come down, Fate-chan!
Vita: Hey, Hayate! Your elbow's hitting-
Signum: Vita, you're getting in the way of-
Shamal: Aah, Signum, not there~!
Fate: ...*twitch*

Quote of the day is won by Naolin:

Hayate: *pokes head out from under bed* Keep it down or come down, Fate-chan!

Originally Posted by illidan182

lol, yeah that helped some. As far as story goes, Fate, Signum know Natsuki form streetracing with their streetbikes, so they do have leather outfits. The two try to get Natsuki to try dirtbikeing, which she does and finds its much diffrent then her street bike.

You know how streetbikers wear the skin tight outfits? (natsuki in anime) The dirtbike outfits are diffrent (Pic of my own dirtbike bike I have, Kawasaki 250 2-stroke, then a pic of the gear the riders wear while... rideing) So this is just an imiging thing so you can picture what she'll look like

Spoiler for Diffrence between street and dirt outfits/bikes:

EDIT: As i was downstair cooking dinner, ym stove erupted in flames... And it gave me an idea about Agito trying to cook dinner for Rein for an Agito/Rein fic >.>

Nuuuuuuu~ the fic ideas! They won't stop!

Spoiler for Biker!Nanoha:

Ding-dong-ding, the sound of the school bell signaling the end of the last period rang. Students pushed back their chairs as they left for home. I too put the last of my books in my bag and left the classroom. Walking down the corridor I felt a tap on my shoulder, and I turned to see one of my best friends smiling at me.

“Meet you at six?” Fate-chan asked me “Hayate already said she could come.”

“Of course!” I answered. I wouldn’t want to miss this for anything.

Fate-chan smiled and waved as she hurried towards her own home, I waved back as I continued walking.

Arriving home, I casually announced my return, knowing that at this time there wouldn’t be anyone but me home. My parents would be too busy managing the store, and my brother and sister would be off studying or working.

A quick glass of milk and a small sandwich were enough for now. We were bound to eat together anyway. I hurried upstairs to get changed and meet my friends.

I know that some may be getting the wrong idea, and imagine me coming down in fancy clothes suited for a night into town.

Heh. As I pulled my blue-white Jersey over my head I couldn’t help but grin. I’d like to see the looks on their faces when they realize what ‘a night out’ means for my friends and myself.

Walking downstairs and into the garage, I smiled at my pride and joy. My dirtbike, white with yellow-white paintjob, a few touches of pink to finish it.

Taking the bike out of the Garage I stepped on and started the engine, I gave a testing boost to the gas and was rewarded with a satisfying whine of the engine.

I smiled as I put on my helmet and stared down the road. The engine was warm, and I was eager to hit the road.

“Let’s go, Raising Heart.”

I yanked my wheel backwards as I took off, the sound of Raising Heart’s engine filled the streets as I was off to meet with my friends.

My name is Takamachi Nanoha, and I’m a biker.

[wanwan1203]

Originally Posted by Keroko

This feels like coming home. The fanfiction thread has turned into what the OC-thread used to be.



Nuuuuuuu~ the fic ideas! They won't stop!

Spoiler for Biker!Nanoha:

Ding-dong-ding, the sound of the school bell signaling the end of the last period rang. Students pushed back their chairs as they left for home. I too put the last of my books in my bag and left the classroom. Walking down the corridor I felt a tap on my shoulder, and I turned to see one of my best friends smiling at me.

“Meet you at six?” Fate-chan asked me “Hayate already said she could come.”

“Of course!” I answered. I wouldn’t want to miss this for anything.

Fate-chan smiled and waved as she hurried towards her own home, I waved back as I continued walking.

Arriving home, I casually announced my return, knowing that at this time there wouldn’t be anyone but me home. My parents would be too busy managing the store, and my brother and sister would be off studying or working.

A quick glass of milk and a small sandwich were enough for now. We were bound to eat together anyway. I hurried upstairs to get changed and meet my friends.

I know that some may be getting the wrong idea, and imagine me coming down in fancy clothes suited for a night into town.

Heh. As I pulled my blue-white Jersey over my head I couldn’t help but grin. I’d like to see the looks on their faces when they realize what ‘a night out’ means for my friends and myself.

Walking downstairs and into the garage, I smiled at my pride and joy. My dirtbike, white with yellow-white paintjob, a few touches of pink to finish it.

Taking the bike out of the Garage I stepped on and started the engine, I gave a testing boost to the gas and was rewarded with a satisfying whine of the engine.

I smiled as I put on my helmet and stared down the road. The engine was warm, and I was eager to hit the road.

“Let’s go, Raising Heart.”

I yanked my wheel backwards as I took off, the sound of Raising Heart’s engine filled the streets as I was off to meet with my friends.

My name is Takamachi Nanoha, and I’m a biker.

More, more!! *explodes* The last line was so cool. :3

*rave mode on*
I'm so happy for the thread. It is like it's having a sugar high! I'm loving the way new ideas and fics are being churned out. The new writers/authors are, ehem, not that bad (very good even!), if I do say so myself. I hope the results of these exchanges will be positive; more epic stories/one-shots, more unique plots. Lord knows the Nanoha section needs them. So thanks to all the authors! I appreciate your efforts in writing. -happy-
*rave mode off*

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Naolin

*hums* Enraptured, I'll have you know this is almost entirely your fault. So...2nd chapter? Of sorts. It got worse towards the end, but I'm tired. ^^' As for exactly what's going on, there can be hints of whatever one wants.

Operation: Love Love Infiltration flashy title go~!

Spoiler for shoot me now:

At exactly five past twelve on Saturday afternoon, Fate Testarossa poked wearily at her food for the fourth time.

Signum sat across from her, silently contemplating the oddness of the situation. Fate had contacted her an hour earlier to ask if they could have lunch, but instead of their usual routine of stopping at the nearest casual restaurant they had somehow ended up in the park. On a picnic blanket.

And instead of their usual conversation, the younger girl was staring, seemingly transfixed by her food. Her hair was down today, which was out of place considering the summer heat, and tied by the habitual black ribbon.

After three or so minutes of silence, Signum decided enough was enough and ventured forward with a word.

“Not hungry?”

Fate started, having almost forgotten about the need for conversation due to the voices in her head. Voice the 1st was Arisa, who had insisted on Fate wearing a small communication device in her ear so she could give ‘interrogation pointers’. The second was Nanoha, who was radiating amusement even over their current mental link but trying admirably to hide it.

“A-ah, yes, sorry.”

She half-heartedly impaled a piece of meat with her chopsticks, then dropped it back to her plate with a barely audible sigh.

“I- I was wondering, Signum…”

The knight looked back at her questioningly, and she cursed the situation. “That, um…are…”

‘Get on with it already!’ Arisa’s voice buzzed in her ear. ‘It’s too hot to be wearing camouflage gear!’

Good, then let’s all go home, she thought but didn’t say for fear Signum would think she was losing her mind. She fought the urge to make sure her hair was covering the earpiece, instead prodding her unresisting lunch.

Signum blinked. Number five.

‘Fate-chaaaan…’ Nanoha whined, almost making her yelp. ‘I know it’s hard, but could you maybe hurry? It’s really uncomfortable in here…’

Fate chanced a glance at the nearby clump of bushes. She had to hand it to Arisa- that camouflage gear was certainly effective. The only thing stopping her from envying Nanoha her easier job of surveillance was the almost oppressive heat.

“Do you- are you-”

‘IS SHE PART OF HAYATE’S HAREM!? ASK HER!’ came through the earpiece so loudly she winced. She could hear Nanoha apologising profusely, but it didn’t make her feel much better.

Signum was growing increasingly uncomfortable, not to mention worried about Fate’s health. Could the heat be getting to her head?

“This, um…sounds strange, but- no, I am not going to say it like that! Ah, n-no, I mean-”

The Velkan eyed her as if she’d grown a second head. “Testarossa…?”

She can’t be in trouble, can she? No, she wouldn’t come to me… That was an oddly disappointing thought.

Fate clenched her fists, resolved to get the sentence out if it killed her. “P-People…were wondering, if- rather, what…goes on, in your- Hayate’s house-”

Was it just her, or did Signum look awfully apprehensive…?

‘Move the picnic basket to the left, please, Fate-chan. Arisa thinks we don’t have a good enough view of her face.’

And that was Suzuka. Wisely deciding not to question the apparent need for a surveillance camera, she nudged the basket to the right with the side of her hand.

“There’s been some speculation- wild speculation, and, well, would-”

She was certain her face would catch fire if it grew any redder. She steeled herself, finally blurting out: “Does Hayate have a harem?”

The next few seconds, it seemed to her, were impossibly long, and she waited in agonised tension until Signum spoke.

“What put such an idea in your head?”

An almost overpowering relief flooded her, so much so that she was almost taken aback.

“Then…you aren’t…”

The blue eyes looking back at her seemed to hide quiet amusement. “I can say truthfully, Hayate does not have a harem.”

There now, that wasn’t so terrible.

‘Good job, Fate-chan!’

Fate exhaled.

‘Thanks, Nanoha. You should probably wait a while before you try coming out of the bushes-'

“Testarossa…”

Getting a sudden feeling of foreboding from the tone of Signum’s voice, she looked up slowly.

“Is there a monitoring device in the basket?”

I hate today.

Omake
the real end...?

Spoiler for this is why I should be sleeping instead:

Signum: So that's how it was.
Shamal: You're sure?
Signum: Yes, she thought Mistress Hayate was behind it.
Shamal: *smirking* Should we enlighten her?
Signum: *worried* You can't mean to-
Shamal: I'm sure she and Nanoha would love to join. And if I'm not mistaken, you wouldn't mi-
Vita: *hopeful* Nanoha's joining?
Shamal: *ominously kindly* Did I give you permission to speak, Vita-chan?
Vita: No...
Shamal: *smiling devilishly* So it's settled. We'll invite them over for tomorrow?
Hayate: I'll get the phone, Shamal-sama~!

Oiiii. I need caffeine. 3:39am here, so forgive any horrible typos of death.

Edit: in case anyone missed the first kinda-chapter and wants to know what on earth is going on. Even though quotes seem to kill italics, so...it might be a bit hard to make sense of when someone's thinking... ^^'

*laughs. Sees Omake...* Oh I see Shamal's the real mastermind XD (I guess she threatened to make them food

Originally Posted by Naolin

...Mmhm, I really should be getting to that sleep.

Fignum

Spoiler for citrus of...wha?:

‘Testarossa…’

Signum’s breath hits her ear, hot enough to make her shiver and light enough to set all her nerves on end. She half-unconsciously moves her neck further to the side, distantly wondering if her hair is going to end up tangled and keenly aware of the older woman’s hand tracing achingly soft lines on her stomach. The other hand, the right, is currently occupied with holding her wrists against the bed, shaking minutely; whether from nerves or excitement is unclear to her, but driven to distraction as she is by the hand not holding her down the thought seems vastly unimportant.

That teasingly unsteady left hand is following its own path over her abdomen, those strong fingers slowly weaving patterns that could be anything at all, applying just enough pressure to have her on the edge of writhing. And then Signum’s palm is over her breast and she almost forgets to breathe as-

*yawns* That's all, folks. Don't stone me? ^^'' I really have no idea if I can write that presentably at all... *winces* Here's hoping no one's eyes bled.

Edit: page claim for Fignum (hah, again), which is what I'll steadfastly call it until someone comes along with something more catchy. XP

I say we call it Sigate

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Biker!Nanoha:

Ding-dong-ding, the sound of the school bell signaling the end of the last period rang. Students pushed back their chairs as they left for home. I too put the last of my books in my bag and left the classroom. Walking down the corridor I felt a tap on my shoulder, and I turned to see one of my best friends smiling at me.

“Meet you at six?” Fate-chan asked me “Hayate already said she could come.”

“Of course!” I answered. I wouldn’t want to miss this for anything.

Fate-chan smiled and waved as she hurried towards her own home, I waved back as I continued walking.

Arriving home, I casually announced my return, knowing that at this time there wouldn’t be anyone but me home. My parents would be too busy managing the store, and my brother and sister would be off studying or working.

A quick glass of milk and a small sandwich were enough for now. We were bound to eat together anyway. I hurried upstairs to get changed and meet my friends.

I know that some may be getting the wrong idea, and imagine me coming down in fancy clothes suited for a night into town.

Heh. As I pulled my blue-white Jersey over my head I couldn’t help but grin. I’d like to see the looks on their faces when they realize what ‘a night out’ means for my friends and myself.

Walking downstairs and into the garage, I smiled at my pride and joy. My dirtbike, white with yellow-white paintjob, a few touches of pink to finish it.

Taking the bike out of the Garage I stepped on and started the engine, I gave a testing boost to the gas and was rewarded with a satisfying whine of the engine.

I smiled as I put on my helmet and stared down the road. The engine was warm, and I was eager to hit the road.

“Let’s go, Raising Heart.”

I yanked my wheel backwards as I took off, the sound of Raising Heart’s engine filled the streets as I was off to meet with my friends.

My name is Takamachi Nanoha, and I’m a biker.

All that was missing was born to be wild playing in the background xD.


Now excuse me I'm off to life ... oh Snap the backlog's going to kill me TTATT. (I'm terrified of what I'll find when I go away for a month*

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

All that was missing was born to be wild playing in the background xD.

Next part. Nothing like a trio riding the road on that song.

[Kha]

*sniffs the air*

Yes, this is what the old thread smelt like. Musty, cheesy, Khracky. And most of all, no animosity, since there seems to be no more radical shippers, or holier-than-thou attitudes.

Gimme some time while I read through all that is being done. And it looks like I might have a fic idea after all. :3

[Black_Wolf]

Originally Posted by Ilya

Update on Detective!Nanoha:

I've finally started writing and it's about 25% complete. Expect it tonight, hopefully.
And I think I've never seen Nanoha so serious as in this >_>

Looking forward to detective Nanoha!! Shes Serious?? O.o hmm interesting, i want to know how all the other characters are involved, like maybe Zafira and Arf as her tracking dogs looking for clues in cases *Sorry TSS - hes a wolf *

Originally Posted by Naolin

Actually, I meant what you thought I meant, so thanks for the pep talk. *so very relieved* I could hug you right now, but I'm so tired I'd probably fall on you instead. XD;;

Hehe, no problem, I enjoy the fics you write, so get some sleep and write more!!!!

Originally Posted by Keroko

Spoiler for Biker!Nanoha:

Ding-dong-ding, the sound of the school bell signaling the end of the last period rang. Students pushed back their chairs as they left for home. I too put the last of my books in my bag and left the classroom. Walking down the corridor I felt a tap on my shoulder, and I turned to see one of my best friends smiling at me.

“Meet you at six?” Fate-chan asked me “Hayate already said she could come.”

“Of course!” I answered. I wouldn’t want to miss this for anything.

Fate-chan smiled and waved as she hurried towards her own home, I waved back as I continued walking.

Arriving home, I casually announced my return, knowing that at this time there wouldn’t be anyone but me home. My parents would be too busy managing the store, and my brother and sister would be off studying or working.

A quick glass of milk and a small sandwich were enough for now. We were bound to eat together anyway. I hurried upstairs to get changed and meet my friends.

I know that some may be getting the wrong idea, and imagine me coming down in fancy clothes suited for a night into town.

Heh. As I pulled my blue-white Jersey over my head I couldn’t help but grin. I’d like to see the looks on their faces when they realize what ‘a night out’ means for my friends and myself.

Walking downstairs and into the garage, I smiled at my pride and joy. My dirtbike, white with yellow-white paintjob, a few touches of pink to finish it.

Taking the bike out of the Garage I stepped on and started the engine, I gave a testing boost to the gas and was rewarded with a satisfying whine of the engine.

I smiled as I put on my helmet and stared down the road. The engine was warm, and I was eager to hit the road.

“Let’s go, Raising Heart.”

I yanked my wheel backwards as I took off, the sound of Raising Heart’s engine filled the streets as I was off to meet with my friends.

My name is Takamachi Nanoha, and I’m a biker.

The last line got my hook line and sinker, love it!!!! i like motorbikes, i like MGLN girls.....WIN!

*eagerly awaits next update*

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by markesellus

That was pure evil. As evil as Satashi's teasers.

Oh? Someone as evil as me?

I think I should reclaim my spot before people start getting any closer.

Spoiler for NSFW text:

"More," the word was whispered fleetingly as the warm water of the shower beat down on her. Nanoha's wet hair pooled around her, encircling her wet, naked body that Fate hovered over. The warm liquid rolled over the blond's body, dripping heavily down onto her skin as she moved.

A warm, wet hand, sliding over moist skin. A gentle pressure trailing her sides, deep red eyes peering into her soul. Bodies shifted, water trailed more, the sound of the shower drowing the soft moan that escaped the girl on bottom's mouth. Her legs were shaking softly, breath catching as Fate's fingers trailed lower.

Nanoha exhaled again, breathing broken as the excitement mounted. Slippery wet legs were around her, heavy blond hair sticking to her front, and now the feeling of suction was on her neck just as her lover's fingers touched-

How about that?

[Kha]

Allow me to add a small zinger that I'm far more attracted good storytelling rather than risque content.

[Master Kosa]

Originally Posted by Keroko

This feels like coming home. The fanfiction thread has turned into what the OC-thread used to be.

Nuuuuuuu~ the fic ideas! They won't stop!

Spoiler for Biker!Nanoha:

Ding-dong-ding, the sound of the school bell signaling the end of the last period rang. Students pushed back their chairs as they left for home. I too put the last of my books in my bag and left the classroom. Walking down the corridor I felt a tap on my shoulder, and I turned to see one of my best friends smiling at me.

“Meet you at six?” Fate-chan asked me “Hayate already said she could come.”

“Of course!” I answered. I wouldn’t want to miss this for anything.

Fate-chan smiled and waved as she hurried towards her own home, I waved back as I continued walking.

Arriving home, I casually announced my return, knowing that at this time there wouldn’t be anyone but me home. My parents would be too busy managing the store, and my brother and sister would be off studying or working.

A quick glass of milk and a small sandwich were enough for now. We were bound to eat together anyway. I hurried upstairs to get changed and meet my friends.

I know that some may be getting the wrong idea, and imagine me coming down in fancy clothes suited for a night into town.

Heh. As I pulled my blue-white Jersey over my head I couldn’t help but grin. I’d like to see the looks on their faces when they realize what ‘a night out’ means for my friends and myself.

Walking downstairs and into the garage, I smiled at my pride and joy. My dirtbike, white with yellow-white paintjob, a few touches of pink to finish it.

Taking the bike out of the Garage I stepped on and started the engine, I gave a testing boost to the gas and was rewarded with a satisfying whine of the engine.

I smiled as I put on my helmet and stared down the road. The engine was warm, and I was eager to hit the road.

“Let’s go, Raising Heart.”

I yanked my wheel backwards as I took off, the sound of Raising Heart’s engine filled the streets as I was off to meet with my friends.

My name is Takamachi Nanoha, and I’m a biker.

* thumbs up * MOAR

Well but the idea of using dirt bike at city is somehow strange.

Originally Posted by Kha

*sniffs the air*

Yes, this is what the old thread smelt like. Musty, cheesy, Khracky. And most of all, no animosity, since there seems to be no more radical shippers, or holier-than-thou attitudes.

Gimme some time while I read through all that is being done. And it looks like I might have a fic idea after all. :3

So the good ol' thread was like this ^___^ It seems I've missed a lot.
Ideas are concentrated here.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Oh? Someone as evil as me?

I think I should reclaim my spot before people start getting any closer.

Spoiler for NSFW text:

"More," the word was whispered fleetingly as the warm water of the shower beat down on her. Nanoha's wet hair pooled around her, encircling her wet, naked body that Fate hovered over. The warm liquid rolled over the blond's body, dripping heavily down onto her skin as she moved.

A warm, wet hand, sliding over moist skin. A gentle pressure trailing her sides, deep red eyes peering into her soul. Bodies shifted, water trailed more, the sound of the shower drowing the soft moan that escaped the girl on bottom's mouth. Her legs were shaking softly, breath catching as Fate's fingers trailed lower.

Nanoha exhaled again, breathing broken as the excitement mounted. Slippery wet legs were around her, heavy blond hair sticking to her front, and now the feeling of suction was on her neck just as her lover's fingers touched-

How about that?

This isn't bad, but teasers for SbtB was far more evil. But still I want to read whole text.

Originally Posted by Kha

Allow me to add a small zinger that I'm far more attracted good storytelling rather than risque content.

Same here ><

[nictory]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Oh? Someone as evil as me?

I think I should reclaim my spot before people start getting any closer.

Spoiler for NSFW text:

"More," the word was whispered fleetingly as the warm water of the shower beat down on her. Nanoha's wet hair pooled around her, encircling her wet, naked body that Fate hovered over. The warm liquid rolled over the blond's body, dripping heavily down onto her skin as she moved.

A warm, wet hand, sliding over moist skin. A gentle pressure trailing her sides, deep red eyes peering into her soul. Bodies shifted, water trailed more, the sound of the shower drowing the soft moan that escaped the girl on bottom's mouth. Her legs were shaking softly, breath catching as Fate's fingers trailed lower.

Nanoha exhaled again, breathing broken as the excitement mounted. Slippery wet legs were around her, heavy blond hair sticking to her front, and now the feeling of suction was on her neck just as her lover's fingers touched-

How about that?

O_O More! Please MORE! Is it possible to drool over a written text?... oh wait... yes it is... *wipes herself*