2010-05-10, 11:30 | Link #21 |
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@Rikimtasu the signature is nice but the text lack subtility, it big, black and overlaping the render.
@JRendell the effects are interesting but I am not sure than it's a good idea
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2010-05-10, 11:52 | Link #22 | ||
Black Dragon
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The efects are really good and the colors are perfect, quite the ideals. Hmmm... perhaps the text is juts a bit hard to read.
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A lot better, like how does this looks, try to leave the border as pure black. Hmmm... is better but I'm afraid that the pink text doesn't add good contrats to the grayscale and gradients of yellow, orange and green who're mostly at the right side, try a color of these scales for the text so it'll feet better. It's okay but the text... I don't know, feels like it's there because it needs to be there, the font doesn't help a lot either. Quote:
A lot better, hmmm... the quality feels a bit low tough.
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2010-05-10, 17:28 | Link #28 | ||
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2010-05-10, 17:55 | Link #29 | |
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BTW, JRendell's render is hearing a sailor uniform, it's just than the ''cadrage'' and the general darkness of the sig are not making it obvious.
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2010-05-10, 19:41 | Link #30 |
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That's understandable but even if that is the case none of those entries show a recognizable school uniform. Rikimatsu's entry could be any uniform or formal clothing, and JR's is far too dark to make out much. Mekdra's and katiemirmo's look like shirts any girl could wear, nothing suggests they are school uniforms.
The entries don't specifically have to be sailor uniforms, but they must be school uniforms, and viewers shouldn't have to know the series the characters are from or otherwise have to guess if the entry fits the theme.
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2010-05-10, 19:49 | Link #32 | |
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CELTY in a seifuku is GAR @Solace wow harsh this month's gonna be pretty hard
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2010-05-10, 23:01 | Link #37 | |
Black Dragon
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Still too dark, it's hard to "understand"
lol, okay, I think it looks nice this way Really cute, cute style and cute choose of colors, really good job. It's nice but the ight is too bright. Quote:
I don't see the school uniform
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