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And I want to see more of the mutual support between Sorata and Mashiro, i. e. him brining more expressions out of her and Mashiro providing the push in the back so that Sorata's new-found motivation keeps running. Something like that .
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2012-11-03, 17:14 | Link #662 |
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These scenes should be hilarious. Also I want to make it clear I didn't want a full on pervert either. Both are overdone. I said naked Mashiro but the scene that seemed saint-like in question is where Mashiro is sitting on him while he's in his boxers. A healthy young attractive girl has invited you into her room and has asked you to get naked, you've agreed to get into your boxers and then somehow she gets to sitting on top of you... good for you if you can keep your dingaling down and not have a reaction or just be paralyzed or freak out, but every ecchi anime is already like this, make it more interesting!
If he's attracted to Mashiro have him show some sort of reaction, have him narrate something from his head that shows he's a bit of a man, there should be a little bit of a conflict between him and his libido. It's hard for me to believe she's really a romantic interest when he acts like that. Even a witty comment that shows he's aware of the situation and acknowledges Mashiro. Something humourous to alleviate the tension and get him out of the situation or maybe even accidently escalate it in an ironic but comedic way before the eventual "let down". Just a little something to acknowledge he's interested in girls. E.G. While Mashiro is sitting on top of him, he could say, "Shiina, I've decided I want to take my boxers off now", she could then interpret that as the green light to take off his boxers on her own, and MC could freak out as she begins to tug down on his boxers, and he could dash out of the room or whatever sort of hilarious reaction you want. Just a small comment to show some personality and red blood would go a long way to break from the mold. |
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2012-11-03, 18:16 | Link #664 | |
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I'd say the comment about his heart beating faster filled that role.
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2012-11-03, 18:21 | Link #665 |
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Besides, it's not that Sorata showed *no* reaction. He blushed quite a bit when Mashiro touched his body and I think it was simply a point of "what to focus on" that they didn't show his hormons raging when she sat on his lap. If it were a simple fanservice/ecchi scene or the anime were ecchi-centered (which I don't think it is) it might have been different, but they focused during it quickly on the conversation of his past soccer participation. Heck, even Mashiro's out-of-the-blue question whether he already had sex was "concluded" swiftly.
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I.E. I'm more disappointed in my own reaction rather than MCs reaction. It's anime, there's naked girls, but it's kind of boring because I've seen the same scene over and over before. My reaction is, ah she's naked, no big deal, what was the purpose? make me laugh! Quote:
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Yes, and eventually you'll realize that normal naked just wouldn't cut it any more and you need more and more 'exotic material' to satisfy your evolved desires! And this would continue until you can't tell the difference between man and woman and even a cat is fine any more !! After which you would have attain true enlightenment...
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2012-11-04, 22:42 | Link #675 | |
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Perhaps she's just... leaning back a little ?
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