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Chaos2Frozen · 2011-07-06, 22:11

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Originally Posted by rubix91

And so my fic is sandwiched between two layers of 'endless erotic hell' and a 'certain adult film...

maybe I should've written something risque too...

I know it doesn't sound convincing right now- but this wasn't my intended outcome

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Originally Posted by Hamazura Shiage

“W-wait!! Don’t strip!! Keep your clothes on!! Using seductive techniques with no goal is nothing more than an endless erotic hell !!”

Mr.Kyon · 2011-07-06, 22:16

Do one with Bro Shiage. He's perfect for it.

Chaos2Frozen · 2011-07-06, 22:30

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Originally Posted by Mr.Kyon

Do one with Bro Shiage. He's perfect for it.

I don't know... I'm doing this from the girls' perspective, and Hamazura is anything but oblivious to girls.

rubix22 · 2011-07-06, 23:15

Well...

You could have Hamazura in bed covering his face in embarrassment with Mugino beside him smoking a cigarette...

...

wait, no... nevermind...

Mr.Kyon · 2011-07-06, 23:20

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Originally Posted by rubix91

Well...

You could have Hamazura in bed covering his face in embarrassment with Mugino beside him smoking a cigarette...

...

wait, no... nevermind...

...

[Writes the idea down.]

To quote SuperSS Hamazura:

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Originally Posted by Hamazura Shiage

"I've made a huge mistake."

Chaos2Frozen · 2011-07-06, 23:40

You know the music video of the song "Misunderstood" by Bon Jovi? Yeah I'm thinking about he could explain that one as a "I know what you're thinking, but it's not what it looks like" scenario.

ellifeedn · 2011-07-07, 00:05

Did anyone write any stories about the gemstones?

Marcus H. · 2011-07-07, 01:51

Crafting a story about a Gemstone is hard, especially making Original Characters, because very little is known about the extent of powers a Gemstone possesses.

MrTerrorist · 2011-07-07, 05:12

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Originally Posted by TkMacintosh

Ahhh....Yare yare....After several weeks of working hard for it...I bring you....

A Certain Adult Film chapter 1

I hope you all enjoy it. I got chapter 2 pretty much written out, now I just need to transfer it and tighten it up a little more before I post that...and that'll be at least 2 weeks before that date.

Oh my God, what did i just read?

Chaos2Frozen · 2011-07-07, 07:55

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Originally Posted by Marcus H.

Crafting a story about a Gemstone is hard, especially making Original Characters, because very little is known about the extent of powers a Gemstone possesses.

Plus they're more than likely to come up with a broken as hell haxx ability that doesn't follow the Laws set by the Toaruverse.

Master Assassin · 2011-07-07, 08:08

Hey guys I'm checking out what's here since I'm on my off-day for my first job this we-- Wha?

*picks some titles, rushes through everything, not caring whether they're fun to read or not*

Well damn, now I really wish I had a certain phone so that I can type my ideas on the fly.

... Or possibly draw it instead...

julioalqae · 2011-07-07, 15:27

excuse me guys i want to ask you something..... it's about the crossover fan fiction.....did all of you know the crossover fanfiction to aru X shana??

if you know....can you give me a link?? thank you...

Flere821 · 2011-07-07, 16:27

New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.

Spoiler for Minor note:

Ilidsor · 2011-07-07, 17:18

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Originally Posted by Flere821

New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.

Spoiler for Minor note:

I thought the scene worked well enough.

Also once again that was an incredible chapter. Although I hate you for the cliff hanger of who is attacking Touma (although I'm pretty sure they are part of Misaki's faction who are angry at him). And the Kuroko part made me laugh.

Master Assassin · 2011-07-07, 18:35

... Cliff hangers...

Aw, that was no fun. But at least the whole chapter made up for it.

BUT STILL! Update quick.

tsunade666 · 2011-07-08, 06:24

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Originally Posted by Flere821

New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.

Spoiler for Minor note:

Maybe when you mean lacking because it's too bland or out of place because Touma calling a girl in his cellphone seems out of character for me. Specially if he didn't need help. The only time I remember him calling a girl is in the volume of England coup de ta. It seems really out of place when the problem isn't really that big on Touma's pov plus he didn't know about the fight unless he check the site which make it another out of character for him. He didn't strike me as that kind of character that is interested in such stuff. But when I get to the part when Misaki ask him to call Mikoto then I understand. It's not really out of character at all. Touma would help Mikoto if she needs help or in trouble that mostly mean "trouble" and not this kind of trouble of love triangle thing or love gossip thing. Touma would just ignore it just like what he did in his class in your last chapter.

Pretty decent chapter if not for a cliffhanger but I just get the feeling that the girl that attack Touma and the one Misaki is looking are the same girls. Well I will just wait to see what happens next but I'm eager to see what will happen and expecting a change of heart maybe

naaaaaah

MrTerrorist · 2011-07-08, 08:37

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Originally Posted by Flere821

New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune

Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any.

Spoiler for Minor note:

I love it. I went ROTFL about that part with Kuroko. As for the scene with Touma and Mikoto, it was very good.

I still dying to know who were those girls at the end of the chapter but i can guess what group they are.
Here's hoping for another chapter.

TkMacintosh · 2011-07-08, 17:55

Hrmmm....Not sure if I mentioned this in my previous postings about my chapters, but...

Chapter 3 will have Fukiyose confiscate a copy of the movie from a student and put it in her bag with the intent to give it to the teacher after class, but some disturbance happens and it completely slips her mind... (maybe Komoe just rushing out of the room at the end of the school day after trying her best to keep from looking at and calling on Touma the entire day). So when she gets home, she notices the case and wondering what's got the boys so hyped up, she watches the movie...

After the movie, she becomes a HUGE fan of Kamiko Touka, wanting him, having fantasies about him...all without realizing that it's actually Touma with a stage name.

What do you guys think?

Ashaman · 2011-07-08, 18:15

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Originally Posted by TkMacintosh

After the movie, she becomes a HUGE fan of Kamiko Touka, wanting him, having fantasies about him...all without realizing that it's actually Touma with a stage name.

What do you guys think?

You had me until this.

You need a reason why Komoe can recognise Touma but Fukiyose can't, though the idea of Fukiyose lusting after Touma unknowinglyamuses me.

BTW, Kamiko Touka? Sounds way too feminine.

TkMacintosh · 2011-07-08, 18:19

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Originally Posted by Ashaman

You had me until this.

You need a reason why Komoe can recognise Touma but Fukiyose can't, though the idea of Fukiyose lusting after Touma unknowinglyamuses me.

BTW, Kamiko Touka? Sounds way too feminine.

I'm working on that reasoning....Don't know what, but I'll think of something.

Maybe...Komoe helped patch up Touma more when he was younger, so she's seen more of his chest and back....That's a somewhat decent one.

Could be an old scar Touma had that Komoe helped to try and patch up in which she notices on the male actor and soon makes the connection to Touma.

Fukiyose more then likely has never seen that old scar on Touma, so she probably wouldn't know that its Touma.

Eh...like I said when I previously mentioned the name the first time around, the director comes up with it quickly on the spot, and its so cheesy, that even Touma wants to face palm at it.

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Master Assassin Portable Dude Mk. II Artist Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights. Age: 35	Hey guys I'm checking out what's here since I'm on my off-day for my first job this we-- Wha? picks some titles, rushes through everything, not caring whether they're fun to read or not Well damn, now I really wish I had a certain phone so that I can type my ideas on the fly. ... Or possibly draw it instead... __________________ I like to run portable on my dude, so I ran while running runs in my portably portable, dude-like dude. --- This line over here is a placeholder. ----

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Flere821 Lurker Join Date: Aug 2010	New chapter of Minds, Memories, and Misfortune is up: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7049587/...and_Misfortune Enjoy, and give any feedback if you have any. Spoiler for Minor note: I'm not quite happy about Touma's conversation with Mikoto. The goal here is to have him soothe Mikoto's turmoil, fixing whatever damage Misaki did to her last chapter. Something just feel lacking in how he did it, so if anyone has any suggestions to make it better I'm willing to listen

2011-07-06, 23:15	Link #1564
rubix22 On Cleaning Duty Join Date: Jun 2011	Well... You could have Hamazura in bed covering his face in embarrassment with Mugino beside him smoking a cigarette... ... wait, no... nevermind...

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2011-07-07, 18:35	Link #1575
Master Assassin Portable Dude Mk. II Artist Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: All ghillied up spying on someone ~2,000 yards away using telescope sights. Age: 35	... Cliff hangers... Aw, that was no fun. But at least the whole chapter made up for it. BUT STILL! Update quick. __________________ I like to run portable on my dude, so I ran while running runs in my portably portable, dude-like dude. --- This line over here is a placeholder. ----

2011-07-08, 17:55	Link #1578
TkMacintosh Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2010	Hrmmm....Not sure if I mentioned this in my previous postings about my chapters, but... Chapter 3 will have Fukiyose confiscate a copy of the movie from a student and put it in her bag with the intent to give it to the teacher after class, but some disturbance happens and it completely slips her mind... (maybe Komoe just rushing out of the room at the end of the school day after trying her best to keep from looking at and calling on Touma the entire day). So when she gets home, she notices the case and wondering what's got the boys so hyped up, she watches the movie... After the movie, she becomes a HUGE fan of Kamiko Touka, wanting him, having fantasies about him...all without realizing that it's actually Touma with a stage name. What do you guys think?