2011-07-02, 12:03 | Link #32121 | ||
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Join Date: Dec 2010
Location: Illinois
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Thanks for all the debate but in all honestly I'm probably not going to have the whole Servants vs Nanoha main cast. Mainly because I don't see Shirou bringing them along. I see him sneaking away to deal with a problem that Kiritsugu left him to deal with.
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For all of Lyrical Nanoha Shirou is going to be mostly support. And he'll hate it. He's been able to convince himself that he's helping by being the front line distraction so far, but when Fate and Arf come in he's not doing enough. Even after my plot powerup he's still going to just barely reach their level of fighting. For A's he'll be a bigger fighter, but again that lack of flying is going to bite him pretty badly. |
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2011-07-02, 12:45 | Link #32123 |
Vega, The Swooping Eagle
Join Date: Nov 2009
Location: Near Bosscha Observatory
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I haven't played Hollow Ataraxia yet (or even finish the first game proper) but wasn't there a scene of Archer versus Saber there. It wasn't mid-air fight, sure. But, unless I remember incorrectly, there is a part where Saber jumping on the about-to-shoot-Archer and somehow evaded his arrow mid-jump? And Archer is clearly capable of shooting from kilometers away, so range clearly isn't a problem for him. 'They are awesome' does have limit as explanation but that series seems really intent to give states that Heroic Spirit are defying common sense to much. Actually to me it seems only Saber (and Lancer, unless he has a way to instantly retrieve Gae bolg after it was used as projectile) will have significant problems with flying oppoenent. All other servants have some ways to handle it - effectiveness is another matter. Archer is Archer. So is Gilgamesh. Caster can fly herself. Rider have pegasus. Assassin don't exactly have a solution but if an assassin can pick his fight he is already lose anyway, flying enemies or not. Berserker... I wonders more on how MGLN cast can hurt him, baring Arc en Ciel. Since I have aready delurk may as well ask something else. I have started working on some fic about Einhalt recently. I want to explore on her background since we hardly get any. My mind boggles on how to write about her family, however. I'm tempted to make her an orphan but that sounds cliche, on the other hand I can't think of a parent who basically abandoned their children to living and training alone. I can imagine some of her family may put off with the inherited obsession, but shouldn't they send her to some dojo or something rather than letting her training alone? Some support from the side at least. What kind of life that makes Einhart 'always alone in her training? Thoughts?
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2011-07-02, 13:38 | Link #32125 | ||||
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
Age: 33
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LOL, there's a whole story as to why Morgan is blonde : I didn't want to make her a brunette, since I didn't want to accidentally mix her up with Hayate in my descriptions, so I made her blonde. Then as I had continued writing, it hit me that Morgan would look like Vivio XD--which would be a funny nod to Hayate and Vivio later in the series, so I ran with it. Having readers possibly confuse the opening scene is a bonus, hehehe .
I'm glad that people seemed to have picked up on the relationship dynamics ^^--I didn't want to say them directly, and since I tried to keep the story short I worried that bits might not have come through the way I wanted. I wanted Hayate to be cold, not a jerk, and it seems like that worked . Vivio is 9 here--this takes place after the Mariage incident in SSX. I had made a goof on Hayate's age--she's 22, not 24. That's fixed in the post now. Quote:
I had actually wanted to make Hayate and Morgan's relationship a bit more sympathetic, and show scenes where they're helping each other out emotionally, etc. But I eventually decided against doing it because the story was getting longer than I wanted, and also because I feared screwing up something so delicate . I was pretty sure that people would understand the purpose behind Hayate and Morgan's relationship, and so I chose not to get too deep into it. I saw Hayate as being...resigned, in a way, to being used for her rank. I don't quite see her as happy with it, but she's willing to let that go in her attempt to actually sustain a relationship. But of course, it doesn't help in the long run... (Of course, this is just my opinion. Any opinions drawn from the actual story itself stands just as validly). So poor Hayate closes her heart off, until as you say , 5+ years down the road... Quote:
I actually did worry about the whole "superior-subordinate" issue, which was why I made Morgan a Navy officer instead of Ground Forces like Hayate, which should eliminate most of the trouble, I think . Spoiler for possible minor spoiler for the later Hayate and Vivio stories:
LOL, yes--Hayate is 22, young, and very hormonal . And she has a hot girlfriend. No one can blame her for letting the lizard brain take over a little . Hurray! Ficcage time well spent for this! Quote:
This takes place before Vivio does her "When I grow up, I want to marry Hayate-san!". The story is mostly about Hayate's side of things, so I didn't want to clutter it too much with Vivio's subplot, although I did drop a few nods to it . It's not coming back that worries me . Mine are too exuberant! Quote:
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2011-07-02, 14:37 | Link #32128 |
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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You have a good point there. Were Amy and Chrono still actually working together after they started a relationship/got married? =O If they were then yeah, I imagine that it might not be a huge problem in the TSAB...
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2011-07-02, 14:40 | Link #32129 | |
Goat Herder
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Age: 36
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Also, IIRC, in the US military relationships between two officers are allowed if both are a high enough rank. It was a bit of a minor character plot point between Sam and Jack in Stargate SG-1, after all.
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2011-07-02, 14:43 | Link #32130 |
Beta by Accident
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Location: Maine
Age: 52
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I do note that Amy and Chrono weren't actually subordinate and superior; they served together on the Arthra under Lindy, but since Chrono was an Enforcer, he wouldn't be in the CoC of the ship itself, while Amy was a bridge-crew staffer.
In A's that gets futzed up a bit, with the way the local base in Uminari City gets established. BTW, what was Amy's rank? In the U.S. military, for example, fraternization between officers and enlisted personnel is a serious matter, while fraternization between fellow officers or fellow enlisted personnel is not subject to such close scrutiny. Edit: Partially ninja'd by Rising Dragon! |
2011-07-02, 15:05 | Link #32134 |
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Other than that, nothing. Jail stole them but they never elaborated on it. Same with what he stole from that auction.
Putting the Jewel Seeds in the drones were less of a practical reason and more of a "Hey, look what I can do!" kinda thing. He wants the Bureau to know what he can do, which is why he also wrote his name on all the drones.
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