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ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-01, 05:24

Nah, Fujin has the same theme as me accidentally, some other author also share the same tech wank, it's all just coincidence (because I never told anyone about them out loud)

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 05:25

@'Jak - Care to elaborate?

DarkJak2050 · 2012-04-01, 05:34

They both basically describe how IS Society is like for guys in the IS Universe, almost in the same way.

I have a feeling that my Fic is the first of it's kind in the archive, with it being an OC story mainly set in IS Society, outside of IS Academy. And then came Limited Dreams.

There's another one...

Another Day at IS Academy

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 05:37

Another one? OC fic or not?

DarkJak2050 · 2012-04-01, 05:38

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Another one? OC fic or not?

Canon Fic, from a quick glance.

Speaking of fics. Major progress on Chapter 5 is done for mine. Not complete, but still in progress.

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 05:50

I reccommens this to everyone: Read the fic Jak just posted. It's hilarious

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-01, 05:59

OH FUCK IT! I'm going to review first! ROFLMAO!

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 06:01

Too late, already did

MeisterBabylon · 2012-04-01, 06:17

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

THAT was MPIS?!

With a ton of equalizers perhaps. Anyway bunso shinki is great for ideas just completely impractical!

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 06:23

I thought you wre updating Vandam?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-01, 06:27

@ Eras
He was talking about Busou Shinki, they're similar with I.S. in design so I think he will use that for Vandam's inspiration.

@ Meister
Blitz was proposing several BS unit as PT mook design. I'm kinda worried about the transforming mechanism

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 06:34

No, I meant thought he was going to update it a few days go.

StratoSpear · 2012-04-01, 07:08

Completed the Praxie scene:

Spoiler for Scene:

Was playing Extreme's revised theme while typing this.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-01, 07:48

^ Quite a tense foreshadowing there

Spoiler for Sacred Twins 12 Part 7:

Spoiler for Sacred Twins 12 Part 8:

Good lord Rin, double serve of Chekhov skill

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 08:10

Is that Ichika?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-01, 08:12

The first one is THird person, the second one is Charles.

Forgot to mark POV.

When I realized, Chapter 12 is filled with human-based fighting

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 08:25

Charles x Rin Ship tease?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-04-01, 08:28

Definitely...

Eratas123 · 2012-04-01, 08:35

Of course it ends up amounting to nothing :/

StratoSpear · 2012-04-01, 08:42

Quote:

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

^ Quite a tense foreshadowing there

That and it also shows a bit of Gerald's good side, so to say.

Notice how he ordered for the drones to divert instead of attacking and clearing out a populated area that's residing above one of their launch sites.

2012-04-01, 05:24	Link #27881
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Nah, Fujin has the same theme as me accidentally, some other author also share the same tech wank, it's all just coincidence (because I never told anyone about them out loud) __________________

2012-04-01, 05:25	Link #27882
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@'Jak - Care to elaborate? __________________

2012-04-01, 05:37	Link #27884
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Another one? OC fic or not? __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I reccommens this to everyone: Read the fic Jak just posted. It's hilarious __________________

2012-04-01, 05:59	Link #27887
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	OH FUCK IT! I'm going to review first! ROFLMAO! __________________

2012-04-01, 05:34	Link #27883
DarkJak2050 Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2011	They both basically describe how IS Society is like for guys in the IS Universe, almost in the same way. I have a feeling that my Fic is the first of it's kind in the archive, with it being an OC story mainly set in IS Society, outside of IS Academy. And then came Limited Dreams. There's another one... Another Day at IS Academy

2012-04-01, 06:01	Link #27888
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Too late, already did __________________

2012-04-01, 06:23	Link #27890
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	I thought you wre updating Vandam? __________________

2012-04-01, 06:27	Link #27891
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras He was talking about Busou Shinki, they're similar with I.S. in design so I think he will use that for Vandam's inspiration. @ Meister Blitz was proposing several BS unit as PT mook design. I'm kinda worried about the transforming mechanism __________________

2012-04-01, 06:34	Link #27892
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	No, I meant thought he was going to update it a few days go. __________________

2012-04-01, 07:08	Link #27893
StratoSpear Titans Test Team Pilot Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: The Elysium	Completed the Praxie scene: Spoiler for Scene: ========== Somewhere, in Praxidike HQ ========== The main hall’s holographic widescreen shows the world map, littered with various indicators and blips marking specified spots on Japan’s neighboring countries, China, Korea and the eastern part Russia. Facing the screen is Gerald, standing with his arms crossed as he examines the map. “Bastion-san, most of the drone vanguard teams are in place.” A man reports via the intercoms. “What about the rest?” “Moving into position, sir. Another thing, one of our underground catapult positions in Korea has population on its topside, please advise.” “Divert the drone team that’s assigned to that catapult to another.” “That would take some time. Are you sure you don’t want to just clear them out, sir?” “Confirm my previous order.” “…Understood, sir. Delay projection for Operation Styx, ten minutes.” “Status on the replicas?” “Cloaked and stationed according to plan, sir.” “Show me.” The screen zooms out, showing the overview of the whole globe. Several blips then materializes on-screen, marking out the locations of seven IS replica units spread all over the world. The screen also shows the units being stationed close to military bases. Gerald steps forward, holding his hands behind his back as a small smile grows on his face. “Positioned as shown, sir. But… Is it really all right to be deploying the crimson unit at such state? We switched out the Tempest for it and we don’t have much data on that unit to begin with.” “We may not. But we do know that the original unit belongs to an Academy student. That alone is good enough.” “But she’s not just any Academy student… She’s the sibling of the IS’ creator.” “Matters not. Once Styx kicks in, there’s only one place the blames will fall upon. There’s a reason why all our replicas’ appearances are based on the Academy’s personal units.” “I see… There’s also something about these pods.” The screen then sweeps off the overview map, showing what would seem to be a near-spherical cargo drop pod. Various indicators mark the pod’s exterior to show its stealth capability, warping radar waves around the pod without reflecting back any. “While these drop pods work against standard military grade radar, something tells me that the Academy has a better eye on these pods.” “I would doubt so. Then again, even if they do, the drones shall still serve as a diversion according to plan.” “For the Carnage, sir?” “The Carnage is nothing without its master unit…” A holographic keyboard appears next to Gerald, who then walks over and types in a combination of keys which then brings up the view of a security camera in what would appear to be a hangar. Residing in the faintly-illuminated hangar is a construction cage holding what would seem to be another Minerva-type unit sporting a crimson red-black color scheme. Gerald frown his eyes slightly at the sight of the unit as his smile grows into a smirk. “...The second PRX unit, Minerva Pallas.” Was playing Extreme's revised theme while typing this. __________________ "You cannot be bad at watching a movie. You cannot be bad at listening to an album. ...But you can be bad at playing a videogame, and the game will punish you and deny you access to the rest of the videogame."

2012-04-01, 07:48	Link #27894
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	^ Quite a tense foreshadowing there Spoiler for Sacred Twins 12 Part 7: PATA PATA PATA PATA TAP BLAM “Haaa… Haaa… haa… finally… I get it” Everyone in the dojo shrugged at how fierce the Chinese Cadet Representative stroke the training dummy, so fierce they can only saw the blur of her arms in motion every time she deliver a barrage of palm, fist, and chop. “Rin-san, are you sure you’re not working too hard?” Takatsuki Shizune fixed her Gi, shortly before flailing her tonfa at the training dummy “Nah, I’m fine, I’ve just finished this morning share of training” Rin laughed and straightened her back, as well as letting her arms relaxed. The key of her martial arts is flexibility and relaxation, or else she will strain herself. “But it’s kinda ironic isn’t, my I.S. were optimized for strength” BAT BAT BLAM “But thanks to that technique, you can achieve such high awareness that partial release become a child’s play for you, right?” “Kind of” Rin sneered, shown her protruding fang. Odd teeth were one of her distinct feature, and oddly, a charm point, according to most people. “Your tonfa technique seems to get squared in quality” “Nah” Shizune blocked the rotating dummy’s ‘retaliatory strike’ with her weapon I’m never been too friendly with a sword, but being barehanded made me very afraid” Anyone else would laugh at her back-story regarding her choice of martial arts, it was back when she’s a little teen and some… drunk perverts scared the hell out of her. Her savior? A humble policeman and his baton. True, unlike Tonfa, Baton was designed to stun, not breaking bones or cause internal bleeding. However, in shape and usage principle, they’re the one and the same, T-Baton as they call it, are derived directly from Tonfa. In spite of her claim, she’s knowledgeable in hand-to-hand fighting, karate. While Black belt doesn’t indicate mastery at the slightest, it’s safe enough that she’s at least conquered the basic. This is because the most common Tonfa Technique in Japan are that of Okinawan origin, Okinawan Karate to be precise. Spoiler for Sacred Twins 12 Part 8: SWOOOSH Rin-san suddenly swung her hand and then- TAP TAP BAP TAP TAP BAP TAP “Huff… huff… What was that?!” I wailed in response as I regain my footing, my chest was numbed and my breath stopped for a moment due too five hits out of seven I failed to block. Sequence of punch and palm strike I can’t even SEE, seven hit in one second! Not that it’s unrealistic or anything, but… “….Why don’t you go down?” she seems ticked off seeing her rapid strike, for some reason panting and gasping for breath. “… Because you don’t put enough power in it?” I laughed, now I just realized that she’s using the legendary Wing Chun, combat style originally developed for Yim Wing Chun by Shaolin monk Ng Mui. “…Maybe I’m just that inefficient” Truthfully, had I not letting myself fall behind slightly, and had Rin-san more prepared and serious, I’ll took a lot of blunt damage, and the result wouldn’t be only shock… it’ll much worse than that. “Rin-san” “Moh…” “Your arms, did they hurt?” “… A little cramp maybe…” That’s because you didn’t do any warm up… her arm continuously shivering for the subsequent hour… Good lord Rin, double serve of Chekhov skill __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	The first one is THird person, the second one is Charles. Forgot to mark POV. When I realized, Chapter 12 is filled with human-based fighting __________________ Last edited by ZeroXSEED; 2012-04-01 at 08:23.

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Charles x Rin Ship tease? __________________

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ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Definitely... __________________

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Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Of course it ends up amounting to nothing :/ __________________