2007-08-21, 10:08
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Rosa Gigantea
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: France
Age: 33
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Alas, Sachiko goes farther away, she's getting away from Yumi who is sitting on the ground, crying.
"SACHIKO!! SACHIKO-SAMA!!" Yumi yelled. "You do not call me that, you call me onee-sama.. In fact, don't you dare call me onee-sama anymore." Sachiko said in a harsh tone as she walked away. It started to rain again. Yumi thought, "I really hate the rain." This time, Sei wasn't around, nor was her blue umbrella. She was alone in her world, in her despair. Yumi cries endlessly in the ground for what seemed eternity. If only she has kept her mouth shut. If only she didn't tell Sachiko her feelings, this wouldn't have happened. There, I tried! 
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2007-08-21, 11:31
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Going Bonklers
Join Date: Jul 2007
Age: 34
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Bonjour tell me why you decided to suck my happiness away and made me feel like im going to kill somebody???
altered ending... Yumi cries endlessly in the ground for what seemed eternity. If only she has kept her mouth shut. If only she didn't tell Sachiko her feelings, this wouldn't have happened. Then Disney72 arrives, tugging sachiko along.. in an amazing speed, she tied the two lilian students together and put them inside the green house. (which mean i carried them inside coz yeah i have super human strength) "you two seriously need to talk.. you can go against the writer's wishes you know, especially if that writer has french sounding name and the petite soeur of stephanie :lol:" disney72 said. and with that she exited the greenhouse and locked the door. as surprisingly as she came into the scene, the girl from animesuki forum vanished into thin air.. "im sorry Yumi, i have given you nothing but sadness, i was too afraid to admit my true feelings for you.." "onee-sama" "but now, i am sure on how i really feel about you.. Yumi..." Sachiko took a deep breath and look into Yumi's eyes.. She could feel her heart beat faster and heat started to rise on her face.. blushing furiously, she placed her hands on the younger girl's cheeks and said "Yumi, i love you".. Wahahaha Banzai!! now i can sleep peacefully... (and by the way steph.. this is just a temporary ending for you fanfic, this doesnt mean that you are (in anyway) exempted from completing it. *kaya tapusin mo na fanfic mo*) PS: no kiss eh...strictly General audience.. hehe |
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2007-08-21, 12:30
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Rosa Gigantea
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: France
Age: 33
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Wow, Disney-san, you sure are incredibly hyper!
Yes, I'm French, you must be Chinese? (I can't understand some of your post) Since your so hyper, I'll include you in my next fan-fic. AT THE ROSE MANSION: Disney is alone with Rei and Yoshino. "WHAT!? ARE YOU CRAZY!? KISS REI-CHAN ON THE LIPS!?" Yoshino reacted. "Well, it's normal!" Disney said, "Back in China, me and my cousins kiss on the lips for greetings* and since Rei is your cousin, it's practically normal!" (*Note, Disney72 said that she kisses her cousins on their lips as greetings, real fact) "Well, we're not Chinese.." Rei said, blushing. "We're Japanese women!" Yoshino added, also started to blush. "Tsk, look how it's done!" Disney said. She leaned in for Rei and kissed her. "HEY!! WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING TO MY REI-CHAN!!??" Yoshino shouted angrily. Disney stopped. It seems Rei was blushing. "Your 'Rei-chan' huh?" Disney said, smirking. "M.. M.. GAAHH!!" They kiss! Then Sachiko left Yumi to marry Suguru! Joke (Is being sarcastic, lol, though it's just intended for pun, don't get angry  )
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2007-08-21, 12:34
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Rosa Gigantea
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: France
Age: 33
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"Continuation of Leaving Yumi"
Sachiko locks herself in the Rose Mansion. She crosses her arms in disappointment. "Yumi, you idiot.. You shouldn't say things like that!" She sees her hands, it's trembling. She could hear her heart pounding. She could feel deep loneliness pouring in. "Why? Why is it I feel lonely? Is Yumi such a dear soeur to me?" She mumbled to herself. "Sachiko-sama!" Shimako called to her. It seems that Shimako was at the room the whole time. "Are you alright?" Sachiko stares at her. "Could you please fix some tea?" "Um, okay!" Shimako fixes tea while staring at Sachiko in secret. --- "Here's your tea!" Shimako places the tea at Sachiko's table. "Why thank you, Yumi!" Sachiko said as she sipped her cup. "Y-Yumi?" Shimako looks at her. "Sachiko-sama, it's Shimako.." Sachiko's eyes opens wide. "Ah, yes.. Sorry Shimako-san." --- "Yumi-sama?" Kanako approaches Yumi. *To be continued. (wahaha! I never knew writing was fun!  )
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2007-08-22, 09:01
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Going Bonklers
Join Date: Jul 2007
Age: 34
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WOW.. I just kissed Rei, and im positively sure that im going to die in Yoshino's hand.. but.. i still get to kiss Rei! hahaha...
Bonjour, im not chinese by the way.. im filipino.. your grand soeur is filipino too.. the part which you dont understand was written in tagalog. And the kissing thing, its our family greeting, i dont know if other people do it too. im thinking were more on the weird side.. hahahaha! ohhh i like your fanfic.. @steph- where's the ending?? |
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2007-08-23, 01:21
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You can reach for my hand
Join Date: Jul 2007
Location: Philippines
Age: 34
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Sorry!! College life's been hectic
 But I've been managing to take a look here too! (Too addicted to MariMite )@Bonjour Please continue! More Doujinshi? (In another language, but still funny as heck! )http://yurisekai.exteen.com/20051016...-maria-sama-th Which Marimite Character are you? Quizilla Quizes |
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2007-08-24, 10:42
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Junior Member
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: ogasawara estate^^;
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hmm..i see try dis and maybe you'll get yoshino...
answers: 1.rei 2.she is easily angered..etc.. 3.i have an older female cousin 4.well, i don't think so, but i got jealous blah..blah... 5.yellow ...and you're yoshino...if not well better luck next time!^^; (sorry i think this post is off-topic) |
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2007-08-25, 01:18
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Rosa Gigantea
Join Date: Aug 2007
Location: France
Age: 33
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“Yumi-sama” Kanako called, walking in the rainy grey day, bending down to a girl soaked in either tears or rain, so that the girl may share Kanako’s umbrella.
“Sa..” Yumi stopped herself, for a moment Kanako looked like Sachiko. Why on earth do they have the same length of hair, almost the same height and same aura it seems. “Kanako-chan..” “Sa..?” Kanako asked. “Yumi-sama, are you alright?” For a moment, Yumi wanted to shout, “Does it look like I’m alright!?” but calmed herself, as she is Rosa Chinensis en bouton after all. “Would you help me.. stand up..?” “Of course!” Kanako hastily said as she pulled one of Yumi’s shoulder’s up. It was only at that moment that Kanako saw Yumi’s red teary eyes. She was stuck gazing at them for a few seconds until she finally managed to push some words in her mouth, “Come, let us go into shelter. Honestly, Yumi-sama needs looking after!” -0-0-0-0-0- “What will the literature club announce, Sachiko-sama?” Shimako asked in her usual gentle tone. “Ah, I’m confident you know what to do there Yumi, so I’m gonna leave everything up to you…” Shimako stares at Sachiko as the girl sipped her tea. The girl is very lady-like and gentle in her actions. The tea slowly made it’s way back into the saucer as the girl puts it down. “Yumi, remind me to tell Shimako to be in-charge of the up coming garden competition being held at school, my mind is already swirling with headaches on all these responsibilities, really!” Shimako who was staring at her, just let out a gentle, “Yes, I will.” and does Yumi’s work at her table. To Be Continued.. |
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