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Old 2007-07-29, 03:37   Link #5281
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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga 2.7 : Knight:


Spoiler for Future AFTER Teaser:
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Old 2007-07-29, 03:51   Link #5282
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*fangirl mode on* SQUEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!

+1 for Zafira

Were the camera's still on them when she kissed him.. that would be awkward...

WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!
No... the cameras were in the park - Mel kissed him when they were back @ Lindy's house

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EXTREME MULTI-LEVEL WIN!!!

My spells = Especially the Breaker!
Hayate's sekuhara tendencies =
Objection! Chrono =
Zafira! =
Uguu~! =
The kiss! = WIN!
Spells = TEH AWESOME ONLY B/C THE MAKER IS AWESOME!
Sekuhara = Wii~!
Objection! = Poor Chrosuke!
Zafira! = 'Nuff said.
Uguu~! = Uguu~!
Kiss = MASSIVE WIN!

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EPICSIUM OVERLOAD!!!!

This is the best of the Seven Days chapters yet! Didn't know Lindy's "Operation Phantasm Love" required that much manpower, with MS6, the Rogues and even the 21st joining in!

Air combat against a heavily armed fighter = coolness in my book, and also @ Zafira being incredibly AWESOME If not in the combat sense

And the scenes with Hayate's sekuhara attempts, Arcas and Mel's "dinner", ending with that kiss, and Caro's revelation = PURE GOLD
Operation: Phantasm Love isn't Lindy's - it's the Aces.

And re: Manpower - the Aces could end up recruiting half the Tripartite if that's what it takes.

Re: Air combat - I didn't want the Phantasms to just fight another mage...

Re: Zaffy - Doggy is Win. 'Nuff said.

Re: Sekuhara - Wii~

Re: Kiss & Revelation - Now it's time to see where it takes us...

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Hm... I like how Kha managed to keep a perfectly straight face in one of his most hilarious missions ever, not counting the various earlier crack ops from Hayate and Keroko to get him and Fate together. It was just as I expected.

And... I see Caro lent Mel Sophia's old Convent uniform. 0_0

Funny how I find myself gravitating to the crack ops rather than the real one. Save one point:

Arcas pulled a BREAKER out of his a$$?! Not even Nanoha did that, as from the Nanoha SS 02 showed! Now THAT's talent.
Thanks. I was trying to keep Kha in-character - without the benefit of much writing - DO MORE CROSYS!!!

Yep - Caro's a rather resourceful girl, ain't she?

Re: Breaker - It's not talent; it's Arcas' nature as a Dunamist that enabled him to accomplish such a feat. Remember - Dunamists have an instinctual grasp of magic, so they could whip up spells on the quickfast.

NEW MATERIAL!!!!



Thanks so much for all your reviews!

Part V should be up by Tuesday PM (local time) @ the latest.

THANKS AGAIN!!!!


<looks @ clock> I gotta sleeeeep....
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Old 2007-07-29, 04:03   Link #5283
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I think when Sophia got her stand-in device Dauer from Dr. Dauer. That means when they both were twelve. Which would make them know him for 7 years maybe? Does that contradict anything on your side?
No contradictions. Thanks!

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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga 2.7 : Knight:


Spoiler for Future AFTER Teaser:
EPICSIUM OVERLOAD!!!

On of your coolest chapters yet! Nice one Nightengale!
The Unison sequence is pretty damned bloody brilliant!

And [Null Kick!] was great! I swear, Null is starting to surpass Rein and Sakura in the MOE OVERLOAD!!! Department!

*Frozen solid and Chibi-Hikari ni Nare'd*

By the way, the par where Null forces out Zul, Null name is turned into Rein.
The next part will be about Shamal and Astra, right?

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Spells = TEH AWESOME ONLY B/C THE MAKER IS AWESOME!
Sekuhara = Wii~!
Objection! = Poor Chrosuke!
Zafira! = 'Nuff said.
Uguu~! = Uguu~!
Kiss = MASSIVE WIN!
Thanks. Can't wait for more!

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Re: Zaffy - Doggy is Win. 'Nuff said.
We need a Zaffy Channel segment!

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Re: Sekuhara - Wii~
Maybe I should start adding some more in my scena-*Ion Cannon Breaker'd*
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Old 2007-07-29, 04:05   Link #5284
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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga 2.7 : Knight:


Spoiler for Future AFTER Teaser:
Somehow, listening to "Massive Wonders" while reading this made it more epic than it's supposed to be So Isdera's one of those Wufei-types in terms of living in a peaceful world At least, he still retains his badassery Null going Akane Tendo on Isdera though is massive LAWL

But Saga suddenly acquiring, of all the abilities he can possibly have, DATA DRAIN?!?!?!
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Old 2007-07-29, 08:50   Link #5285
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COOL! Arcas'd get one, since he's served in the Squadron.
Yup, all former members get one. Wether they chose to wear it is their own decision.

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Now I don't have to squint to see the patches.

CHEESTALYST MISSILE, LAUNCH!!!

~~~New scenario timelines activated~~~

My turn for teasers! And this time I bring you all three Khas who exist in the different timelines of OC thread!

Presenting Unlimited Blade Works Kha's Counterattack, Heaven's Feel Twisted Fate, and Fate Nanoha/Hollow Ataraxia!

Spoiler for 3x Trailer:

Confused which is which?
*Holds head spinning with swirly eyes* Why do you have to keep confusing me?

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All right, at long last, here it is!

Seven Days, Part IV, hajimarimasu!

Spoiler for Seven Days, Part IV:


Spoiler for Notes on Part IV:
Nyahaha, this was fun to read. Romance, humor, and Hayate sekuhara all in one nice little package. No complaints on Keroko's apearance either.

And no Zafira shaft! Center stage even! Booya! Cheers for the Blue Guardian Beast!

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Nice patches! By the way, how're the Keroko scenario's going?
Almost done with the first part, I had to scrap and rewrite a lot of things, which was one side of the delays. The other my recent re-adiction to Yu-Gi-Oh. (I can hear my poor wallet screaming already). The rewrites were neccissary mainly because a lot of parts were screaming "Tsun!" As a flipside, the drama increased by a factor of 1000 with the rewrites, but I can deal with that.

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Hmmm... these are gonna be incredibly USEFUL, you just wait...
Oh? Now I'm curious... what are you planning?

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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga 2.7 : Knight:


Spoiler for Future AFTER Teaser:
Null going ubermoe mode there with the Baka scenario.

And you keep proving me right in my opinion that you can't stop everl33ting Saga & co when it comes to apearances.
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Old 2007-07-29, 09:01   Link #5286
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Almost done with the first part, I had to scrap and rewrite a lot of things, which was one side of the delays. The other my recent re-adiction to Yu-Gi-Oh. (I can hear my poor wallet screaming already). The rewrites were neccissary mainly because a lot of parts were screaming "Tsun!" As a flipside, the drama increased by a factor of 1000 with the rewrites, but I can deal with that.
Tsun, eh? It seems you were afflicted with the wrong impression on Keroko-chan as well... By the way, I've decided that Keroko was too good to beat by a simple illusion so I had Aurion do a lot more tricks. Deathwing-chan sure is quite a handful.:heh

By the way, my MAJORLY rewritten profile is incoming...

BLUECHEESIUM LAUNCH DETECTED...
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Old 2007-07-29, 09:11   Link #5287
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Tsun, eh? It seems you were afflicted with the wrong impression on Keroko-chan as well... By the way, I've decided that Keroko was too good to beat by a simple illusion so I had Aurion do a lot more tricks. Deathwing-chan sure is quite a handful.:heh

By the way, my MAJORLY rewritten profile is incoming...

BLUECHEESIUM LAUNCH DETECTED...
It's hard to write Keroko-chan as a streetfighter and not end up writing her too much Tsun, even for a seven year old. And Keroko-chan was too good for a simple illusion? Now really I'm curious as to how she was beaten.

*puts down a Mirror Force for the BLUECHEESIUM missile and ducks back in the creator bunker.*
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Old 2007-07-29, 09:26   Link #5288
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Spoiler for 3x Trailer:

Confused which is which?
Well, confusing a little, but the aspects of the differing Kha's work a bit. Still, EPIC though. Does this mean you're going to take up on writing how Nanoha died under the hands of Aznable?

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All right, at long last, here it is!

Seven Days, Part IV, hajimarimasu!
Long fic IS LOOOOOOOONG. >_<

EPIC. Nice parts integrated all around, though I wish it didn't feel a little jumpy at times. Maybe I'm just not used to reading long segmented parts on the go.

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The next part will be about Shamal and Astra, right?
Well, a small part of it. It's mainly going to be more of a in-betweener, to make sense in the long run.

The part after it is the more important one dealing with Hayate/Saga. The coming one is more or less necessary 'filler'.

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And you keep proving me right in my opinion that you can't stop everl33ting Saga & co when it comes to apearances.
Really now? Well, everybody loves pleasing aesthetics, do they not?

Wonder what you'll think about Astra next though...

Spoiler for Astra without blindfolds:


Spoiler for Unison Astra:


And once I'm done with the A's timeline of Saga and co, just like A's epilogue and StrikerS, I'm doing a timeskip to the current timelines. As for what happens within those blank of 10 years, it's still a secret, but the perfect picture to sum it up....

Spoiler for Saga's Blank of Ten Years:
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Old 2007-07-29, 09:32   Link #5289
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*jumps in*

Now... this is the first time I'll be returning to add to one of my OC's profiles, and in this case this next entry deals with Mai. Rather short, and somewhat a departure for our two LinebackerS...

Here's Mai's Profile: Part VIII.

Spoiler for Mai's Profile: Night:
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Old 2007-07-29, 09:44   Link #5290
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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga 2.7 : Knight:


Spoiler for Future AFTER Teaser:
I knew it'll be great! And the "Koi! Tenjyo Tenge no Ken!" return of Zul was certainly something to smile at.

But the ultimate WIN is still Null's moe in the gut act.

DBS4:GotB?!

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And [Null Kick!] was great! I swear, Null is starting to surpass Rein and Sakura in the MOE OVERLOAD!!! Department!

*Frozen solid and Chibi-Hikari ni Nare'd*
So let's see their moegaton attacks...

Null = Null Kick
Sakura = Chibi Hikari ni Nare

No wonder she's on the losing end of Saimoe. Too GAR.

Hehe... Aaron you just gave me a weird idea... A MOE competition between Null and Sakura... Who will succeed?!

Sakura: Chibi Magnum! Wii~~



Rein: What about me desu...?
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Well, confusing a little, but the aspects of the differing Kha's work a bit. Still, EPIC though. Does this mean you're going to take up on writing how Nanoha died under the hands of Aznable?

~~~~~~

Really now? Well, everybody loves pleasing aesthetics, do they not?

Wonder what you'll think about Astra next though...

Spoiler for Astra without blindfolds:


Spoiler for Unison Astra:


And once I'm done with the A's timeline of Saga and co, just like A's epilogue and StrikerS, I'm doing a timeskip to the current timelines. As for what happens within those blank of 10 years, it's still a secret, but the perfect picture to sum it up....

Spoiler for Saga's Blank of Ten Years:
1. I thot I was assigned that grisly task? And yeah that was a brief look at what I thought. Hope its not too cliche.

2. Oh he's a dichromatic like Vivio. And Axel appears?! Just when I'm about to pull a Cloud too.

3. Uchiha Itachi?
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Old 2007-07-29, 09:46   Link #5291
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Hi again everyone! I was thinking all night how I was going to finish up this chapter. I didn't feel that Minea should have the closing statements for this part of Minea's dairies since a lot of what she had to say was finished up in the diary segment of the last part. So to help close up holes, gaps, and give a better idea of what's occurring internally and emotionally to Minea I'm going to finish up this Diary segment with Celesti at the helm doing researcher's log! Enjoy!

BTW >> I just realized I've been spelling diary as dairy... Last I checked Minea wasn't writing in milk >< Gah!
Spoiler for Minea Diary Part 2 #5: Celesti:
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Old 2007-07-29, 10:19   Link #5295
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It's hard to write Keroko-chan as a streetfighter and not end up writing her too much Tsun, even for a seven year old. And Keroko-chan was too good for a simple illusion? Now really I'm curious as to how she was beaten.

*puts down a Mirror Force for the BLUECHEESIUM missile and ducks back in the creator bunker.*
There... *points up* Will that do?

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Well, a small part of it. It's mainly going to be more of a in-betweener, to make sense in the long run.

The part after it is the more important one dealing with Hayate/Saga. The coming one is more or less necessary 'filler'.
Something to look forward to.
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*jumps in*

Now... this is the first time I'll be returning to add to one of my OC's profiles, and in this case this next entry deals with Mai. Rather short, and somewhat a departure for our two LinebackerS...

Here's Mai's Profile: Part VIII.

Spoiler for Mai's Profile: Night:
Linebackers FTW!!! Poor Mai...

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But the ultimate WIN is still Null's moe in the gut act.

DBS4:GotB?!

So let's see their moegaton attacks...

Null = Null Kick
Sakura = Chibi Hikari ni Nare

No wonder she's on the losing end of Saimoe. Too GAR.

Hehe... Aaron you just gave me a weird idea... A MOE competition between Null and Sakura... Who will succeed?!

Sakura: Chibi Magnum! Wii~~



Rein: What about me desu...?
Poor Rein... At least she has 'spinning' and 'DESU~!'.

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Hi again everyone! I was thinking all night how I was going to finish up this chapter. I didn't feel that Minea should have the closing statements for this part of Minea's dairies since a lot of what she had to say was finished up in the diary segment of the last part. So to help close up holes, gaps, and give a better idea of what's occurring internally and emotionally to Minea I'm going to finish up this Diary segment with Celesti at the helm doing researcher's log! Enjoy!

BTW >> I just realized I've been spelling diary as dairy... Last I checked Minea wasn't writing in milk >< Gah!
Spoiler for Minea Diary Part 2 #5: Celesti:
This girl has been too much already!!! Where's the justice in the world??!
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Old 2007-07-29, 10:24   Link #5296
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... Give me a minute, this will take a bit more time then the average profile.
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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga 2.7 : Knight:


Spoiler for Future AFTER Teaser:
PURE EPIC WIN!!!!

That was great
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No... the cameras were in the park - Mel kissed him when they were back @ Lindy's house
Yeah I though so But as the TSAB home video's department has shown already... everything can be caught on camera... So I was just double checking..
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... Give me a minute, this will take a bit more time then the average profile.

HOLY BLUECHEESIUM...

AGREED with Keroko..

4 posts for one OC.... Oh wait, it's only three..

THIS IS MADNESS

You haven't been taking lessons on Kha on the sly have you...?

I'll get to replying soon once my head gets screwed back on..

@ AImost Pure: Woops nearly missed your post from the massive attack there...

I don't suppose you could get away from her soon.. I don't think I can take any more emotional abuse just reading about it...
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Now I don't have to squint to see the patches.

CHEESTALYST MISSILE, LAUNCH!!!

~~~New scenario timelines activated~~~

My turn for teasers! And this time I bring you all three Khas who exist in the different timelines of OC thread!

Presenting Unlimited Blade Works Kha's Counterattack, Heaven's Feel Twisted Fate, and Fate Nanoha/Hollow Ataraxia!

Spoiler for 3x Trailer:

Confused which is which?
- Quite confusing, but i can see all three of them in the same line...

- Makes me wanna put in Nonaha just to save Nanoha.

Like this:

Spoiler for Nonaha vs Aznable?:


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The trip would be nice.

OMG!!! Chacha looks incredible!!!
-IT WILL BE DONE

It's now starting as we speak

- EDIT: just change all the red to green and add more white and she look like that wearing her barrier robe. (Otome + MC tech)

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New OC? Looking good.
Imagine CC having a daughter- period.

Teaching her how to G**** people and...

WARNING... CONTROLLED DIMENSIONAL DISLOCATOR ACTIVATED...


A MASSIVE DIMENSIONAL RIFT HAS BEEN DETECTED!!!


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Holy cr**... I have that same most awesome pic for Chacha reserved in my HD somewhere for a potential future OC ... oh well, there's a lot more models out there

And also ZAKU girls... and even a Dra-C model FTW!

Hmmm wonder who's POV this is, if I ever missed it I like the descriptions on how it feels like to have a daughter, nice
- Hehehe... well you took your time and you got buried... you have your HAXX shovel with you right? dig yourself out then. ^^

- The ZAKUM (ZAKUM I VT+) model here is a slight improvement to the ZAKUM I originally built and developed by Kha- but since the Saint Church is now needing hardware- and that a forge world has been discovered, this Zakum design was now in the R&D section of the AX- thus allowing it to be improved a bit.

The Direct Reaction Assault- Magic (DRA-M) suit is a 'pure AX design' sporting even more equipment than the original Zakum I but still limited as the packs for this system are still being developed- but this model has some hellish AMF and force shielding- an A rank mage in this suit with the proper training can break even with a Number.

Why girls as models? the guys were nowhere to be found.

- It's CC's view... let's say she's jealous of the Silvana's AI having a child. and Kanala will not be like CC- she's more active and can...

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Old 2007-07-29, 11:42   Link #5299
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*Jumps onto the scenario bandwagon*

Let's kick things off again, shall we? First up, Nanoha Must Die!

Spoiler for Twist's Fate 01:


Scagletti has been putting all sorts of weird thoughts into Kha's mind. And all the numbers are still loli-imouto at that time, so pardon Sei's moe overload.

Personally, I felt that was quite bad. Very choppy, and nowhere near the l33t writing we see here.
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*Jumps onto the scenario bandwagon*

Let's kick things off again, shall we? First up, Nanoha Must Die!

Spoiler for Twist's Fate 01:


Scagletti has been putting all sorts of weird thoughts into Kha's mind. And all the numbers are still loli-imouto at that time, so pardon Sei's moe overload.

Personally, I felt that was quite bad. Very choppy, and nowhere near the l33t writing we see here.
Wait... So Kha's a Lolicon?!
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