2007-07-29, 03:37 | Link #5281 |
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Wow. Some pretty nice read. I'll address some backlogs later, but first, the final part of Isdera's side-trip.
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2007-07-29, 03:51 | Link #5282 | ||||
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Sekuhara = Wii~! Objection! = Poor Chrosuke! Zafira! = 'Nuff said. Uguu~! = Uguu~! Kiss = MASSIVE WIN! Quote:
And re: Manpower - the Aces could end up recruiting half the Tripartite if that's what it takes. Re: Air combat - I didn't want the Phantasms to just fight another mage... Re: Zaffy - Doggy is Win. 'Nuff said. Re: Sekuhara - Wii~ Re: Kiss & Revelation - Now it's time to see where it takes us... Quote:
Yep - Caro's a rather resourceful girl, ain't she? Re: Breaker - It's not talent; it's Arcas' nature as a Dunamist that enabled him to accomplish such a feat. Remember - Dunamists have an instinctual grasp of magic, so they could whip up spells on the quickfast. NEW MATERIAL!!!! Thanks so much for all your reviews! Part V should be up by Tuesday PM (local time) @ the latest. THANKS AGAIN!!!! <looks @ clock> I gotta sleeeeep.... |
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2007-07-29, 04:03 | Link #5283 | |||||
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On of your coolest chapters yet! Nice one Nightengale! The Unison sequence is pretty damned bloody brilliant! And [Null Kick!] was great! I swear, Null is starting to surpass Rein and Sakura in the MOE OVERLOAD!!! Department! *Frozen solid and Chibi-Hikari ni Nare'd* By the way, the par where Null forces out Zul, Null name is turned into Rein. The next part will be about Shamal and Astra, right? Quote:
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2007-07-29, 04:05 | Link #5284 | |
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But Saga suddenly acquiring, of all the abilities he can possibly have, DATA DRAIN?!?!?!
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2007-07-29, 08:50 | Link #5285 | ||||
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And no Zafira shaft! Center stage even! Booya! Cheers for the Blue Guardian Beast! Almost done with the first part, I had to scrap and rewrite a lot of things, which was one side of the delays. The other my recent re-adiction to Yu-Gi-Oh. (I can hear my poor wallet screaming already). The rewrites were neccissary mainly because a lot of parts were screaming "Tsun!" As a flipside, the drama increased by a factor of 1000 with the rewrites, but I can deal with that. Oh? Now I'm curious... what are you planning? Quote:
And you keep proving me right in my opinion that you can't stop everl33ting Saga & co when it comes to apearances. |
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2007-07-29, 09:01 | Link #5286 | |
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By the way, my MAJORLY rewritten profile is incoming... BLUECHEESIUM LAUNCH DETECTED...
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2007-07-29, 09:11 | Link #5287 | |
Adeptus Animus
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*puts down a Mirror Force for the BLUECHEESIUM missile and ducks back in the creator bunker.* |
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2007-07-29, 09:26 | Link #5288 | ||
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Well, confusing a little, but the aspects of the differing Kha's work a bit. Still, EPIC though. Does this mean you're going to take up on writing how Nanoha died under the hands of Aznable?
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Wonder what you'll think about Astra next though... Spoiler for Astra without blindfolds:
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And once I'm done with the A's timeline of Saga and co, just like A's epilogue and StrikerS, I'm doing a timeskip to the current timelines. As for what happens within those blank of 10 years, it's still a secret, but the perfect picture to sum it up.... Spoiler for Saga's Blank of Ten Years:
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2007-07-29, 09:32 | Link #5289 |
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*jumps in*
Now... this is the first time I'll be returning to add to one of my OC's profiles, and in this case this next entry deals with Mai. Rather short, and somewhat a departure for our two LinebackerS... Here's Mai's Profile: Part VIII. Spoiler for Mai's Profile: Night:
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2007-07-29, 09:44 | Link #5290 | |||
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But the ultimate WIN is still Null's moe in the gut act. DBS4:GotB?! Quote:
Null = Null Kick Sakura = Chibi Hikari ni Nare No wonder she's on the losing end of Saimoe. Too GAR. Hehe... Aaron you just gave me a weird idea... A MOE competition between Null and Sakura... Who will succeed?! Sakura: Chibi Magnum! Wii~~ Rein: What about me desu...? Quote:
2. Oh he's a dichromatic like Vivio. And Axel appears?! Just when I'm about to pull a Cloud too. 3. Uchiha Itachi?
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2007-07-29, 09:46 | Link #5291 |
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Hi again everyone! I was thinking all night how I was going to finish up this chapter. I didn't feel that Minea should have the closing statements for this part of Minea's dairies since a lot of what she had to say was finished up in the diary segment of the last part. So to help close up holes, gaps, and give a better idea of what's occurring internally and emotionally to Minea I'm going to finish up this Diary segment with Celesti at the helm doing researcher's log! Enjoy!
BTW >> I just realized I've been spelling diary as dairy... Last I checked Minea wasn't writing in milk >< Gah! Spoiler for Minea Diary Part 2 #5: Celesti:
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2007-07-29, 10:19 | Link #5295 | |||||
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2007-07-29, 10:46 | Link #5297 | |||
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Join Date: May 2007
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HOLY BLUECHEESIUM... AGREED with Keroko.. 4 posts for one OC.... Oh wait, it's only three.. THIS IS MADNESS You haven't been taking lessons on Kha on the sly have you...? I'll get to replying soon once my head gets screwed back on.. @ AImost Pure: Woops nearly missed your post from the massive attack there... I don't suppose you could get away from her soon.. I don't think I can take any more emotional abuse just reading about it... |
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2007-07-29, 11:00 | Link #5298 | ||
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- Makes me wanna put in Nonaha just to save Nanoha. Like this: Spoiler for Nonaha vs Aznable?:
-IT WILL BE DONE It's now starting as we speak - EDIT: just change all the red to green and add more white and she look like that wearing her barrier robe. (Otome + MC tech) Imagine CC having a daughter- period. Teaching her how to G**** people and... WARNING... CONTROLLED DIMENSIONAL DISLOCATOR ACTIVATED... A MASSIVE DIMENSIONAL RIFT HAS BEEN DETECTED!!! Quote:
- The ZAKUM (ZAKUM I VT+) model here is a slight improvement to the ZAKUM I originally built and developed by Kha- but since the Saint Church is now needing hardware- and that a forge world has been discovered, this Zakum design was now in the R&D section of the AX- thus allowing it to be improved a bit. The Direct Reaction Assault- Magic (DRA-M) suit is a 'pure AX design' sporting even more equipment than the original Zakum I but still limited as the packs for this system are still being developed- but this model has some hellish AMF and force shielding- an A rank mage in this suit with the proper training can break even with a Number. Why girls as models? the guys were nowhere to be found. - It's CC's view... let's say she's jealous of the Silvana's AI having a child. and Kanala will not be like CC- she's more active and can... *Radio Static*
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2007-07-29, 11:42 | Link #5299 |
~ I Do ~
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*Jumps onto the scenario bandwagon*
Let's kick things off again, shall we? First up, Nanoha Must Die! Spoiler for Twist's Fate 01:
Scagletti has been putting all sorts of weird thoughts into Kha's mind. And all the numbers are still loli-imouto at that time, so pardon Sei's moe overload. Personally, I felt that was quite bad. Very choppy, and nowhere near the l33t writing we see here.
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