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ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 08:46

Where did I get it? When I re-watched Gundam SEED, the subtext between Kira and Cagalli is extremely strong. THis pairing is the one introduced me to shipping, in fact. I was so hear-broken at the reveal about their blood relation and...

When she read through V6.... Tri joked about pairing Ichika and M, and that it'll extremely funny, you can guess where this leads to

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 08:50

@ Senpai - What about her personality switch?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 08:51

Mostly thinking about the lack of Imouto character. Not as in tsundere, jealous little sister. But a spoiled sister who trying to act independent. At this point, I haven't think about drama, AT ALL.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 08:55

@ Senpai - Must admit; when I was reading the story's first chapters, it seemed more like a Rom-com than some kind of deconstructor shonen.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 08:59

Of course, it's a plagiarism of Novel chapter. When I wrote chapter 4, I was thinking about not portraying Ichika as pathetic, but not stu-ish either, and boy it delivers. Chapter 4 is the only one who is 100% original.

The rest of chapter often contain 5-10% words taken out of canon, with slight changes in terms of context and delivery.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 09:02

@ Senpai - Did you plan for it to be a serious story to begin with or just twincest antics?

Side note - What are the most noticeable physical changes for boys and girls in puberty? I'm planning another segment for a teaching class.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 09:06

I planned it as SERIOUS romantic story between the twins with a good dose of action, the comedy comes from the supporting harem antic.

Note - It's called secondary sexual characteristic, such as boy growing muscles and their voicebox went broken (feeling itch or painful, and has weird voice for a while), female growing chest and their body turned from rectangle into hourglass. Both also migth grow some hair in places.

Google it in case of mistake on my part.

Yachiyo · 2012-02-10, 09:09

Hee, back at here again. I'm nearly done in my chapter 6! Yaay I'm so happy.

Watching Angel Beats! Today

so much drama hehehe

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 09:12

@ Senpai - So everything was planned from the beginning?

Side note - Planned a parody bit: Due to required subjects, they have to teach the class about puberty. Since females were already covered, they try males. First Maya tries to use Irish as a template....but he has none of the obvious granted such as wider shoulders or muscles. Then comes Ichika....

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 09:15

"Fanservice time" indeed.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 09:17

What do you mean Fanservice time?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 09:23

Bah, you know, the expected reaction of the girls seeing Ichika naked in class (okay, half naked, but still...

Not to mention the girls who fantasize Yaoi scenes...

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 09:26

Nobody gets naked. Ichika and Maya complain about it since that would be harassment. Irish does nearly take off his pants, but he gets stopped when he was halfway done. Considering his appearance, that's not really Fanservice.

Eratas123 · 2012-02-10, 09:37

Going to sleep, so I'm leaving this here.

Senpai - If Ichika did take off any of his clothes, wouldn't he get fined or given a warning?

agetreme · 2012-02-10, 09:38

Nothing done due to Kingdom of Amalur.....

Anyway trivial information (to kick start the engine (hopefully)):
Reason for Sligis' age:
A young teacher who is close to the student's age (giving off a feeling that he is on their side/ understand them).

I tried to lower his age as much as possible but there is still a limit to how low I can go

Nationality will also be changed

====

Time for random nonsense

Spoiler for Don't have to read this unless you are bored:

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-10, 18:56

How big of an impossibility is it for a private company to own even a single IS? Assume that it is an IS arms and frame manufacturer.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 20:41

@ Eras
At worst Chifuyu dope slap him as always, and really, would Yamada DARE to tell him fully naked? Maybe just his upper body

@ Age
Erm... that's.... quite a paranoia there.

@ Demi
Assuming it's very existence is really important to the Country, such as Dunois, then they have a good chance of having one.

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-10, 21:49

And if not the main source of the country's IS research... they wouldn't have one?

ZeroXSEED · 2012-02-10, 22:02

Think like this: Tabane spread the core by herself (from the implication) to various countries, corporation AND private organization. Therefore, owning an I.S. core, they'll start their work on developing I.S., not inversely.

So, nope, a corporation showing interest of developing I.S. tech without owning one in the first place? At best they could be sub-contractors.

demino_hellsin · 2012-02-11, 00:24

is it plausible scenario for a corporation to be a sub-contractor with official field tests done using some other group's IS. However most of their tech is secretly used to support an underground group/terrorists like Phantom Task. Phantom Task agrees to obtain an IS core for the company, even just one from an uchigane. So the company has an illegal IS that no one knows about.

???

2012-02-10, 08:46	Link #21581
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Where did I get it? When I re-watched Gundam SEED, the subtext between Kira and Cagalli is extremely strong. THis pairing is the one introduced me to shipping, in fact. I was so hear-broken at the reveal about their blood relation and... When she read through V6.... Tri joked about pairing Ichika and M, and that it'll extremely funny, you can guess where this leads to __________________

2012-02-10, 08:50	Link #21582
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - What about her personality switch? __________________

2012-02-10, 08:51	Link #21583
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Mostly thinking about the lack of Imouto character. Not as in tsundere, jealous little sister. But a spoiled sister who trying to act independent. At this point, I haven't think about drama, AT ALL. __________________

2012-02-10, 08:55	Link #21584
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Must admit; when I was reading the story's first chapters, it seemed more like a Rom-com than some kind of deconstructor shonen. __________________

2012-02-10, 08:59	Link #21585
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Of course, it's a plagiarism of Novel chapter. When I wrote chapter 4, I was thinking about not portraying Ichika as pathetic, but not stu-ish either, and boy it delivers. Chapter 4 is the only one who is 100% original. The rest of chapter often contain 5-10% words taken out of canon, with slight changes in terms of context and delivery. __________________

2012-02-10, 09:02	Link #21586
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Did you plan for it to be a serious story to begin with or just twincest antics? Side note - What are the most noticeable physical changes for boys and girls in puberty? I'm planning another segment for a teaching class. __________________

2012-02-10, 09:06	Link #21587
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	I planned it as SERIOUS romantic story between the twins with a good dose of action, the comedy comes from the supporting harem antic. Note - It's called secondary sexual characteristic, such as boy growing muscles and their voicebox went broken (feeling itch or painful, and has weird voice for a while), female growing chest and their body turned from rectangle into hourglass. Both also migth grow some hair in places. Google it in case of mistake on my part. __________________

2012-02-10, 09:09	Link #21588
Yachiyo ~`Seito Kaichō`~ Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: ~`Afterlife`~	Hee, back at here again. I'm nearly done in my chapter 6! Yaay I'm so happy. Watching Angel Beats! Today so much drama hehehe __________________

2012-02-10, 09:12	Link #21589
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - So everything was planned from the beginning? Side note - Planned a parody bit: Due to required subjects, they have to teach the class about puberty. Since females were already covered, they try males. First Maya tries to use Irish as a template....but he has none of the obvious granted such as wider shoulders or muscles. Then comes Ichika.... __________________

2012-02-10, 09:15	Link #21590
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	"Fanservice time" indeed. __________________

2012-02-10, 09:17	Link #21591
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What do you mean Fanservice time? __________________

2012-02-10, 09:23	Link #21592
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Bah, you know, the expected reaction of the girls seeing Ichika naked in class (okay, half naked, but still... Not to mention the girls who fantasize Yaoi scenes... __________________

2012-02-10, 09:26	Link #21593
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Nobody gets naked. Ichika and Maya complain about it since that would be harassment. Irish does nearly take off his pants, but he gets stopped when he was halfway done. Considering his appearance, that's not really Fanservice. __________________

2012-02-10, 09:37	Link #21594
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Going to sleep, so I'm leaving this here. Senpai - If Ichika did take off any of his clothes, wouldn't he get fined or given a warning? __________________

2012-02-10, 09:38	Link #21595
agetreme Just another Idiot Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Delusion world	Nothing done due to Kingdom of Amalur..... Anyway trivial information (to kick start the engine (hopefully)): Reason for Sligis' age: A young teacher who is close to the student's age (giving off a feeling that he is on their side/ understand them). I tried to lower his age as much as possible but there is still a limit to how low I can go Nationality will also be changed ==== Time for random nonsense Spoiler for Don't have to read this unless you are bored: About why male get all offensive about the concept of female dominating the society: Because of Biology. True Gender Equality is not possible because of our body and brain.... Males are Hunter and their body is optimized for that function...(tougher skin, more muscle than women...etc). Oh yeah, because males are built that way, their lifespan is typically shorter than women.... Sine Modern society don't really need to hunt for food, there is no need for Hunters, some males became confused by their role in the society while Women has no problem, average women's brain is supposedly more capable of social interaction better than men Facing all these, some males feel threatened.... what is their role in the society? Why do they exist? what happen if nature decided that since women can do the role of men, there is no need for men to exist therefore a low number of males each generation until they became extinct completely. __________________ Ara Han

2012-02-10, 18:56	Link #21596
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	How big of an impossibility is it for a private company to own even a single IS? Assume that it is an IS arms and frame manufacturer.

2012-02-10, 20:41	Link #21597
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	@ Eras At worst Chifuyu dope slap him as always, and really, would Yamada DARE to tell him fully naked? Maybe just his upper body @ Age Erm... that's.... quite a paranoia there. @ Demi Assuming it's very existence is really important to the Country, such as Dunois, then they have a good chance of having one. __________________

2012-02-10, 21:49	Link #21598
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	And if not the main source of the country's IS research... they wouldn't have one?

2012-02-10, 22:02	Link #21599
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Think like this: Tabane spread the core by herself (from the implication) to various countries, corporation AND private organization. Therefore, owning an I.S. core, they'll start their work on developing I.S., not inversely. So, nope, a corporation showing interest of developing I.S. tech without owning one in the first place? At best they could be sub-contractors. __________________

2012-02-11, 00:24	Link #21600
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	is it plausible scenario for a corporation to be a sub-contractor with official field tests done using some other group's IS. However most of their tech is secretly used to support an underground group/terrorists like Phantom Task. Phantom Task agrees to obtain an IS core for the company, even just one from an uchigane. So the company has an illegal IS that no one knows about. ???