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Old 2008-07-09, 07:41   Link #7081
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Thanks for the explanation, now I want to do one for Mass Nanoha
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Old 2008-07-09, 10:10   Link #7082
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You've got some explaining to do. Nanoha needs to have a better reason to keep Vivio out of the Bureau than the usual "protect my child" excuse. Especially since it was her own mother that let her be a mage at 9.
Slight error here

I think that's wrong.
Also, Nanoha is outright lying about having "no choice". Everything she did in becoming a mage was by her own choice. I hope that's just the anger talking.
Another thing, are they living in Cranagan? If so, the tallest building is GCHQ, I doubt they'll let anyone on the roof just to sulk.
I'm actually glad you brought this up (and thanks for pointing out the roof that was a technical oversight on my part, it's been changed.)

I'm going to say this now. There is a reason. Plain and simple. No you (as in readers) don't get to know the reason yet and you won't get to know it for a while (But trust that your questions will get answered). I debated over it for a while and I came to the conclusion that there's no way Nanoha would willingly let Vivio join the TSAB.

And it was entirely anger, anger that came from a lot of places and caused things to get jumbled together for Nanoha.
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Old 2008-07-09, 10:18   Link #7083
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Sorry it took so long! Here's the Hayate/Vita post A's (I'm assuming you meant pre StrikerS when you said that?)romance short I promised for solving my color road riddle.

I would have had it sooner but I was waiting until I really hit the mood to write it so it would be worth it. I really hope you enjoy!

Spoiler for Hayate Vita!:
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Old 2008-07-09, 13:10   Link #7084
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It's that time again :3 What time is that? RebelS time of course.

You may notice that well a good amount of what was in the preview isn't in this ch ><. The chapter just kept getting longer and longer so I cut it in two. It works better this way anyhow.

Without further ado...

Magical girl lyrical Nanoha RebelS
Chapter 2
Refusal

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Thanks to Black_Wolf for helping me out with naming Slyph.

You know with all this VivioxSyn talk it's funny that's she's not in this ch ^^; (and she's in the next scene too ><)
lolz that funny special the two AI devices when they talk together when Vivio brought out Syn in the talking.

it was totally funny when Falling soul said that Syn is Vivio's girlfriend, that was so funny.
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Old 2008-07-09, 13:19   Link #7085
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VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

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Old 2008-07-09, 13:34   Link #7086
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VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

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BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA wtf HA HA HA HA
XD I must wonder though... why did shamal have a source handy :3
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Old 2008-07-09, 13:45   Link #7087
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Lolz, where that came from Satashi, lolz.
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Old 2008-07-09, 13:55   Link #7088
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VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

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....Ok you are right about going WTF even if I'm in the chatroom all the time. It was...bizarre..
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*AX facedesks*
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Old 2008-07-09, 14:29   Link #7089
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Hmm, mixed feelings. The beginning was hillarious, typical Hayate party. When we came to the serious point though, I can understand the plot base but the numbers seem off. I fully agree that Earth would provide high-ranking mages, but to say 84% of the A-rank and above mages are Earthborn is rather unbelievable. Magic on earth is supposed to be rare to the point where its almost labelled as non-existant. To say that 84% of the TSAB mages who are A-ranked and above are Earthborn is... weird.
Point taken, yet that incongruity between the stats was my desire effect. I'll drop it to a more "believable" percentage.

Edit: Forgot to add "Thank you," I do appreciate critique and the help.

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Old 2008-07-09, 14:39   Link #7090
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VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

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Reminds me of that Hayate doujin I found translated

But yes, need more magic fu-

*is shot*
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:02   Link #7091
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BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA wtf HA HA HA HA
XD I must wonder though... why did shamal have a source handy :3
So that she could unsheathe the *other* Levantine.
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:06   Link #7092
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Sorry it took so long! Here's the Hayate/Vita post A's (I'm assuming you meant pre StrikerS when you said that?)romance short I promised for solving my color road riddle.

I would have had it sooner but I was waiting until I really hit the mood to write it so it would be worth it. I really hope you enjoy!

Spoiler for Hayate Vita!:
>/////////////< so sweet... ah I hope Anon will like it, cause I sure as hell did. ^^

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VEGAS STAKES CHAPTER 1 OMAKES

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m-m-magic futa pi---*faints* m(_ _)m not the magic futa pills!!!!! rarrghh!!!

LOL Satashi XD Nanoha ahahaha.. poor girl XD XD

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So that she could unsheathe the *other* Levantine.
o////o LOL XD

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*Inserts needle* Here you have your insulin. *looks at bottle*
wops, hehe, wrong bottle *FLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES*
*looks at bottle* ... oO!!!!!
AX!!!! what the heck you gave me liquid 'shrooms!! wha----- ...... ....
...@.@
wooooooooooot BEWBIES!!
*giggles* oooh!!
*runs around and trips all over the place shouting nonsense*
awesom--*SHOT*

DX.. x_____X

(eh don't ask what a liquid 'shroom is, it doesn't exist. afaik. couldn't think of anything else. ^^;; )
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:17   Link #7093
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So that she could unsheathe the *other* Levantine.
That one sentence was more wrong than my entire short :3

(but it's true!)
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:21   Link #7094
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That one sentence was more wrong than my entire short :3

(but it's true!)
XD XD XD XD *dies laughing*
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:22   Link #7095
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That one sentence was more wrong than my entire short :3

(but it's true!)
I've fallen into the gutter, and instead of getting out, I just roll around.
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:26   Link #7096
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I've fallen into the gutter, and instead of getting out, I just roll around.
Rolling around's half the fun

Though I have a tendency to be clean :3
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:34   Link #7097
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I've fallen into the gutter, and instead of getting out, I just roll around.
*is startled as something hits her leg*
*looks down*

hey go roll on that side! you're hitting me.

<.<

(me requests for more allquall crack :3 )
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:34   Link #7098
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*is startled as something hits her leg*
*looks down*

hey go roll on that side! you're hitting me.

<.<

(me requests for more allquall crack :3 )
Guess you set up home there huh
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Old 2008-07-09, 15:45   Link #7099
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Guess you set up home there huh
I've been WanWaned! That's right, I made that a verb!
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Old 2008-07-09, 20:20   Link #7100
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Don't ask where this came from because not even I know...


Spoiler for Bump in the Night:
Just epic win!!! XD

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OMFG...........WHY? WHY did I write this!? XD XD XD

NanoFate, VivioSyn. NSFW! VERY VERY NSFW!!!!!!!!!! (but safe for AS)

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Hahaha wanwan's vision is now expanded
Good one Satashi

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Vivio Syn?

Granted. Clip from something in the works.
Spoiler for Vivio Syn NSFW (funny playful):
I do like your Vivio Satashi :P

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Satashi-sama is beyond godlike @_@
I totally agree

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I've been WanWaned! That's right, I made that a verb!
I'm in favor to add that verb in the dictionary
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