2011-09-13, 18:48 | Link #1241 |
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@ZeroXSEED- Focusing on the societal regression is a good idea since the POV of Infinite Stratos is through Ichika's eyes and so we never really get to see this part of society (Will also try to focus on this when POV switches to Kyuukai and "Irish" since they aren't exempt like Ichika is) .
Will the societal regression in your fic be only focused on japan or worldwide? BTW hers a little tidbit I found - Even though females have gained dominance in the lower and middle class the Upper class males still retain their influence in things like politics. Spoiler:
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2011-09-13, 19:11 | Link #1242 | |
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Also have this crazy idea of an OC: Spoiler for Crazy idea:
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2011-09-13, 20:08 | Link #1243 |
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The 'father' thing seems more plausible since he's already an established character and it would explain why he's abandoned the siblings, adding a brother is a bit of an asspull.
Btw I'll post a draft of What lies in shadows that focuses a bit on how females act later so please comment on it when I post it. |
2011-09-13, 21:58 | Link #1244 | |
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She manipulated the documents in the school (probably via hacking) so they always been a classmate since elementary. ShiroKishi rolled out when she and Chifuyu is 15, how she accomplished it? HACKING THE MILITARY COMMAND CENTER OF 12 COUNTRIES! Spoiler for Tvtropes craziness:
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2011-09-13, 23:32 | Link #1247 | |
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EDIT: Unless we made a shared verse but alternate timeline...aka For want of a nail.
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2011-09-14, 03:40 | Link #1249 | |
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Okay... In this chapter, the guys of Alpha Squad refer to each other by their real names. Here's a little reminder: Eric Anderson: Hot Shot Eddie Garcia: Sideswipe Brian Mclurg: Ratchet Clayton/Clay Maddox: Scourge Spoiler for Project Silverback Ch. 1 Preview:
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2011-09-14, 04:14 | Link #1250 | |
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I see what you did there...and I have this premonition that this will be very-very awesome sidestory But really, I've never realized that the names are from what...Transformer? I'm not exactly well versed in non-anime/manga media... hell, I never play metal gear and all I heard about it are fanboys being gay for big boss EDIT: Taking time-off from writing fanfic while doing a research on "Social Dominance".
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2011-09-14, 14:37 | Link #1256 |
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What you said about Tabane Shinonono in the actual IS storyline Zero, well this came straight from the horse's mouth.
Spoiler for Vol. 3 Ch. 3 in the Light Novels.:
If my OCs were around and heard her say that, they would be ready to perform Thunder Crash's style of Lobotomy on Tabane *Snap* just like that. Now, reading that is making me want to do a redo on the whole timeframe of my Fanfic. Damn it... Last edited by DarkJak2050; 2011-09-14 at 18:22. |
2011-09-14, 14:55 | Link #1257 | |
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2011-09-15, 03:37 | Link #1259 | ||
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Volume 2 Epilogue Quote:
TAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2011-09-15, 04:00 | Link #1260 |
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@ZeroXSEED- Thanks for the info,can't believe Tabane built the Infinite Stratos when she was 14. Where in the hell did she get the funding and equipment to do something like that?
Here is the draft on how (some) women in society act in "IS:What lies in shadows" along with some Tatenashi and Irish humor. Spoiler:
Please comment if the imbalance is a bit too strong or not. I'll tone it down if it's overboard. |
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