2008-03-12, 20:15 | Link #22061 | |
Sleep beneath the flowers
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Lording above all of humanity >;3
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Chaos thinks he has acolytes!? MADNESS.
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2008-03-12, 21:09 | Link #22063 | |||||
Nuclear Fusion
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Sky of stone, floor of flame.
Age: 37
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Guess who else's free time is being eaten by Brawl? Quote:
Keroright? What you been smoking? So does that mean if you forge it, it's a Kerowrong? *runs* Quote:
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*hugs Fuyu, then runs very fast* Madness? This! IS! CADIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! *throws self down pit of death, screaming "CADIAAAAA!*
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2008-03-12, 21:37 | Link #22065 | |
Nuclear Fusion
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Sky of stone, floor of flame.
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So, a character with a prominent weakness, as opposed to a strength. Interesting.
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2008-03-12, 22:22 | Link #22066 | |
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Join Date: Jul 2007
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As for bad blood, I have no bad blood with you. I'm sorry if you have bad blood with me for daring to analyze in this board's dedicated analysis thread. Anyway, relax, I never debate FanFiction. If I see something wrong and I'm in a commenting mood, I'll mention it ... once. I hope to get an explanation, or at least to get the author to be a bit more careful next time, but if they don't it's not like I'm going to get into a war. And if I assume that every other person on this thread except for me is your peer, a great problem with "letting your peers pick at it" is that ... uh, they basically aren't. Maybe they hadn't noticed. Maybe they just think it isn't very important. Maybe they think you don't take criticism well, and decide that harmony is more important. I can't know. Anyway, it leaves me to be "bad cop" and say something, doesn't it. |
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2008-03-12, 22:31 | Link #22067 | ||
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2008-03-12, 22:46 | Link #22068 | |
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However, I'd rather not hear your comments because I do not appreciate your approach on the subject. Unless it was something of a dire that contradicts with canon due to me being sloppy, then I can see the reason of such a direct, and somewhat...court-room like approach. While comments are appreciated on my part, I'd rather it be done in a casual manner, rather than some form of a formal hearing of sorts. That's just my personal opinion and preferences from those who comment on my works.
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2008-03-13, 03:45 | Link #22070 | |
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
Age: 38
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Good start! You might want to develop more on how she got that Feedback curse, and shed a little more light on how that injury is affecting her as a person psychosocially? Such an injury means that she wouldn't be considered for a combat vocation, so her future division would most likely be in support, with combat-support being the most she'd ever see in terms of hot action, unless it is fixed. I guess that would mean that her "barrier and unusual LL incidents" division is involved in containing/sealing off contaminated/dangerous areas due to Lost Logia effects? I think it might go through. Will she be setting up that unit in StrikerS? If so, I believe her work is very cut out for her. Lastly, no OC is an island! Hope to see more of her teammates in future. ...does Kagerou-kun/-chan come with his own boxing tsukikomi that goes "Kagerou no BAKAA"? *adds Kagerou to Outer Cadia Shock Troopers*
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2008-03-13, 05:16 | Link #22071 |
Adeptus Animus
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Age: 36
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Oh no, you did not use Kyonko for this!
*Ahem* I remember 'reserving' Kyonko a while back when I introduced Cadia to the Haruhi genderbend. However, after many hair pulling atempts at a conversion, I came to a realization, one supported by Aaron. I already had a Kyonko. Aaron noted something I had stumbled across as well, when he was writing pieces for the genderbend thread, he noted how much Kyonko was like Tesla, and how easy it was to write her down because of it. As such, I will leave you with this: Spoiler for A change of hairstyle...:
Kyonko never needed to come to Cadia. She was already here. Last edited by Keroko; 2008-03-13 at 10:28. |
2008-03-13, 07:09 | Link #22074 | |||
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Even if I rarely ever write them, my brain produces crack easily. :3 Quote:
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A past one would obviously be tragic, while a present one would be easier to 'feel' with. Spoiler for past possible crack:
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2008-03-13, 07:16 | Link #22075 | |||
Love Hina?
Join Date: May 2007
Location: Kangaroos live in my backyard =P
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Nice shop BTW. @Lowe Omni-Slash... @Toran Welcome to the thread! It'll be interesting to see how she get's around her problem. Looks good so far XD. |
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2008-03-13, 07:57 | Link #22076 | ||||||||
Adeptus Animus
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And the shop was really simple. Recollor hair, recollor eyes, ad a typically Tesla 'what?' and done. |
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2008-03-13, 08:49 | Link #22077 | |||
the "Z" is for "Zeta"
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: Portugal
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You'll find out soon ~~~~ Now...I was wondering if I should make Maren accompay Koji when he goes talk to Jail, using as an excuse the "an Enforcer/Special Investigator must be present" due to Koji's low rank in the TSAB or just have him talk to Jail alone... That's because I don't if the title of 'Knight' has much value in the TSAB Feel free to comment *goes back to work*
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2008-03-13, 09:24 | Link #22078 | |||
~ I Do ~
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Join Date: Apr 2007
Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
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I have to agree with Keroko, I'm not the boss, I just got somehow voted into presidency in an election that we never knew was running...
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Griffith = Nagato? Simon = Haruki. :3 Now for that last Trap... Kerokun himself? And... Chatline Khrack thanks to Ghaz: Spoiler for :3:
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2008-03-13, 09:51 | Link #22079 | ||||
Adeptus Animus
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I've been saying it since forever.
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2008-03-13, 09:59 | Link #22080 | ||
~ I Do ~
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Location: In the XV-8A Spartan "00"
Age: 38
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Then we'll just need to OC-fy him. In that timeline, possibly. It's all in the extension. :3
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