Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - CONGRATULAATIONS~! I hope this doesn't stop you from logging on here though

Anyway, did you finally think of a jigsaw trap for Kyuukai?

Ichika - Hanging from a chain and the timer continuously counts down. The more the timer goes down, the more of his clothes get ripped off. By the way, the entire trap is on live cam to EVERYONE in IS academy.

Irish - Dunno, he broke his trap (Reverse bear trap) in the beginning so Kuu's thinking of another one.

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by EthernalRain

I've had a very eventful day.

I have trolled.

I have eaten my favorite foods.

I have done my favorite things.

And I have met a girl that has way too much in common with me, she mentioned that she might be my perfect girl.



How can I not be happy?

Did I mention she's a fan of Infinite Stratos?

@ Eratas: He'd leave it be for a while, since he knows guys get their kicks in weird ways. Who's he to judge?

But he might reveal it when something happens, or the need arises.

Do you believe in love at first sight, because I think this may be happening!

[demino_hellsin]

what's the tolerance limit of violence in IS academy when in mock battle?

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas and blitz: I've managed to get her number, her email, her facebook, and a kiss on the cheek when she found out I was the author of HoTM.

I met a fan in real life! HELL YES! It really may be love at first sight!

Then again, I did spend 6 hours with her... I was snowboarding with my cousin, and she needed help with her boots. I helped her out, and we started talking on the chairlift. Then she convinced me to escort her for the day. So I ditched my cousin, and I had a date with a girl I just met.

Anyway, a SAW trap...

The Carousel Trap?

But instead of a shotgun, it's just a really long fall into a pool of freezing cold water.

And only one person can stay dry and free. So whoever takes the drop is going to hate him for a long time.

And each of the 5 people attached to the carousel, have a very important relationship to him.

[HasuMasu]

Where can I get some of that luck?


FUUKOOOOOOO DAAAAAAAAA~!!!!!!!

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - Once the shield's gone, if you keep beating up the person it's an automatic foul for the aggressor.

@ Rain - Once again: CONGRATULATIONS~! Some people get all the luck Anyway, I wish you good luck

Side note - Then who're the 6? It can't be any of the other two, they already have their own traps. By the way, Koyomi, Chifuyu and Tabane are out since neither Kuu nor Ange think they can get away with involving them.

[demino_hellsin]

no such thing as sent to the office or anything right?

[Eratas123]

@ demino_hellsin - Just look at what happened to Laura No one gets sent to the office in IS academy

[demino_hellsin]

Thanks I'll chew on that bit of information for a bit

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas: I hope I can get a Good End.

Anyway... The list of people:

- Lindy Alcott
- Akira Seisei
- Selvaria Timat
- Adam Nakashima (Adam, his PT brother)
- Yurisa Nakashima (Adam's wife)
- Koneko Illustria Tokiwa

He saves Koneko and Yurisa, but the rest end up hating him for a long time, and plot revenge in various ways, Adam's and Selvaria's punishments being the most severe, that they're practically mini versions of their ordeals.

Also, when he pushes the buttons, he doesn't get stabbed. Instead, he gets punted in the groin with a rubber chicken.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - Kyuukai only saves the girls? Lolz, it's just like William Easton from the movie Good thing there's no live or die choice at the end The rubber chicken thing sounds hilarious though

Can you help me think of one for Irish? All the one's I think of are too easy for him to get out of (Remember the beginning trap) so I need another authors suggestion. Senpai doesn't like movies like these so he doesn't know. You can involve other people in his test.

Side note - Why does he save Koneko? As a robot, she should be more resistant to water damage.

@ Meistah - When's Vandam coming out?

[HasuMasu]

Originally Posted by EthernalRain

@ Eratas: I hope I can get a Good End.

Anyway... The list of people:

- Lindy Alcott
- Akira Seisei
- Selvaria Timat
- Adam Nakashima (Adam, his PT brother)
- Yurisa Nakashima (Adam's wife)
- Koneko Illustria Tokiwa

He saves Koneko and Yurisa, but the rest end up hating him for a long time, and plot revenge in various ways, Adam's and Selvaria's punishments being the most severe, that they're practically mini versions of their ordeals.

Also, when he pushes the buttons, he doesn't get stabbed. Instead, he gets punted in the groin with a rubber chicken.

"Just think of happy stuff..."

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Stratos - That's why I made Irish have to crossdress to get in and not cause any eyebrows to be raised. Of course, this doesn't last long since Ichika and Kyuukai find him bathing and see his lack of female parts. As long as no one sees him naked it'll be fine

Haven't gotten to that part yet, for all we know, I won't really include the part where Cecilia and Chelsea meets up with the others in the Academy and focus more on Tsurugi's training.

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas: She's practically his daughter. Which causes the other 5 to panic, since when she stares at him with teary eyes and says "Daddy, save me, I'm scared...", they know she's going to be definitely picked to be saved.

So they begin making demands, calling threats and begging like they've never begged before.

Unlike the SAW version, he has no timer, and has 12 buttons to press to either drop them or save them, 2 per person. When he drops 4, a door will open and the shackles spreading his legs for the rubber chicken release, and he can leave to release Koneko and Yurisa.

So they argue and argue with Kyuukai and with each other, until Kyuukai makes the decision to drop one of them. When it's guarenteed he'll save Yurisa and Koneko, but they'll still fight over the order of who gets dropped, since they don't know it's actually a pool of water waaaaaaaaaay down there, and Kyuukai doesn't know whether the trap is the real life threatening deal or not.

I don't really know what should be Irish's other trap... Give me a minute or two to think of a good one.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - Do you want him to find out it's a non-lethal water trap or not? I really don't want to write him angsting on who he'll save since this is a crack fic.

Side note - Can you please help me think of a trap for Irish? I've got nothing so far and I was hoping you could suggest one so I can work on it already

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas: Oh, he can tell. Since after he drops the first person, he'll angst for a few seconds until wondering why the hell the person is still screaming after a few seconds and then he'll hear the splash of water, and the cussing of the person who's damning his name and the cold.

Anyway, on traps...

Competition Traps are a must, you have to at least have one.

Water box trap, but instead of water, it's carrot juice, and he's told to drink as fast as he can or else he'll drown? It comes in a steady rate, so he can drink without choking. Would be funny if he happens to hate carrot juice.

Knife chair, but instead of knives, they're rubber chickens that pummel him?

Non-lethal Competition Traps would be your most popular option.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - So he'll angst for a few seconds before stopping That'll be funny to write

Anyway, he doesn't care about his life much (As you could see from the bear trap scene where he freed the other two first) so competition traps don't work. Can you think of one where he has to help other people or one where he has to save others? He probably won't play the game seriously if he thinks only he's in danger

Side note - What do you want the order to be of who drops?

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas: He drops Akira first after he claims Kyuukai's being biased because as soon as he heard he had to save two of them he immediately presses Koneko's save button. And much to the shock of Lindy and Selvaria (which quickly turns into the "duh" feeling), Akira drops. Selvaria, he drops next, much to the ire of Lindy, who growls vengance for her adoptive mother. Then he drops Lindy after Koneko complains she's too loud. After that, he's tasked with either choosing Adam or Yurisa. He picks Adam after a Yurisa convinces him to press his button.

For Irish's trap...

Maybe something like the Hanging Room Trap? Say, have Tatenashi (for example) at one side, standing on a platform hung by her clothes, and someone else done the same. There's no pit, just floor under the platform.

He lets go of one chain in either hand, the girl falls to the ground, all her clothes stripped off her.

The girls argue over who should be spared, and who should bear all to Irish.

It doesn't matter whoever he "saves", since they will think that he wanted to see themselves naked, or if they're not picked, they'll think that he wanted to see the other person naked.

[Eratas123]

@ Rain - Akira first? So much for brothers for life Him dropping Lindy because Koneko complains she's too loud sounds hilarious too But Yurisa tells him to drop Adam? That sounds really cruel and petty

Irish's trap being the hanging trap makes sense but he'll probably find some way to break the game and save both He's practically a mary sue when it comes to traps so he'll probably find some convoluted way to bind both the chains (Which will make Kuu more interested in him).

Do you have a final trap for Irish and Kyuukai? Preferably with their LI's since it'll make them panic more and try to solve their traps faster. if you can, PLEASE don't make it a competition trap, it'll be too hard to write.

Thanks again

[EthernalRain]

@ Eratas: Yurisa convinces him to drop Adam due to him trying to convince Kyuukai of certain "truths" about being in a relationship.

And when Adam brags about wearing the pants in the relationship, and talks about his wife's flaws (since she can't hurt him and that the trap isn't deadly, just annoying), she demands that he be dropped.

For Irish's trap, he'll probably force his way to pull the two chains together, and tie them up so neither of them drop. Then he'll try to save them.

Final trap for Irish and Kyuukai...

By the way, not all competition traps end up with the other dying. They could end up working together if the thought pops up.

Something like the nerve gas room! Instead of nerve gas, it's a powerful aphrodisiac, that affects the LIs to act all yandere-like in an attempt to deflower their boys.

They're locked in a warehouse with maze like rooms, with two girls attempting to violently rape them. Two syringes of antidotes are hidden in either crates, shelves, offices, etc. The girls are chasing them with their running speed and/or IS. Multiple syringes of the aphrodisiac are hidden in the places with the antidotes. The girls start off acting OOC, which incites the guys to find syringes. When they find one, they'll inject it into their girl. If it's the antidote, they're normal. If not, more aphrodisiac goes into their system, taking them to the next level of horny and yandere.

They can work together, one person distracting the girls while the other looks for the antidotes. Or they can go foot it on their own, taking the antidote and saving their LI, and leaving the girl on their own.

Oh, and the guys have shock collars on their necks, with minor shocks that cause them to either yelp in surprise or grunt in annoyance. Which alerts the girls to their whereabouts as they try to hide and find the antidotes.

Did I also mention the girls are armed with whips and sadism equipment? No? Well, this can be edited out. But the whips must stay for the humor factor.