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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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I wonder how the Shadows-verse would have evolved from this ending? Would Lutecia, Caro and Erio have run into their own problems together, not in the romantic sense but as friends (as in, Lutecia relying on them for support but possibly not getting the kind that she needs?). Anyways, nice story ^^.
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2010-10-16, 14:41 | Link #27422 |
Queen of Tragedy
Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Place of rocks and trees, and trees and rocks...and water.
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Sorry for the double-postage! But I bring update!
What secrets are the Gallants hiding? What's Raven's side of the story? And who's really lying? Crime Never Sleeps Part 10: Trial Day 2 “The worst things we do are always by our own choice.” Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, Part 10: Trial Day 2:
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New Part 1-4A New Part 4B New Part 5: Trial Day 1A New Part 5: Trial Day 1B New Part 5: Trial Day 1C and New Part 6 New Part 7 Part 8 and Part 9: Trial Day 2
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2010-10-16, 16:29 | Link #27423 | |
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2010-10-16, 18:11 | Link #27424 | |
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Raven continues to be an interesting little challenge. I still honestly don't feel very much sympathy for her, if only because in my mind "killing a possibly innocent Shadow in cold blood because he killed Mommy and Daddy" isn't much of an excuse, especially since she holds no remorse over it. Granted, I guess she wouldn't feel remorseful because she wanted to avenge her parents, but I have to admit I'm more on Auris's side right now. I want justice for the fallen. It's sad that Raven saw what she did and lost her parents the way she did, but it doesn't justify what she did, even if the agent himself was questionable.
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2010-10-17, 11:01 | Link #27428 | ||
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2010-10-17, 11:16 | Link #27429 | |
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It's because of her and Yami doing that... It caused a shitstorm over here and I nearly quit writing on the story (I did for awhile) because of it.
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2010-10-17, 12:16 | Link #27432 | |
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As I recall, the problem wasn't that they 'consumated' but that Yuuno didn't seem to care. So it was fixed by having Yami screw with his brain. Which made it... er... worse but in a better way? I don't know, it's kind of a complex situation... |
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2010-10-17, 12:41 | Link #27433 | |
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I honestly don't know why you were so hell bent on including sex in the story, especially when at first it had absolutely no relevance, resulted in blatant OOCness, and overall just cheapened the story. Sex isn't one of those things you can just toss in for the lulz in this sort of story. But now that Yasanagi has saved his story by changing the way he handled it like he did, it isn't an issue anymore. There's no reason to hold a grudge, Nanya. Oh, and L didn't 'consumate', she outright raped him.
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2010-10-17, 13:57 | Link #27434 | |
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2010-10-17, 18:28 | Link #27436 |
Queen of Tragedy
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@vic-vic: No, I don't believe that either Auris or Hayate will be entirely happy with the ending! And it seems like fandom has made the TSAB quite an ambiguous and slightly corrupt organization....
@RadiantBeam: It's interesting, how normally I believe that most people would be sympathetic to Raven, since she's this poor girl who lost her family...it must mean that I'm doing things both wrong and right, to make the readers demonize Auris and Hayate , but yet also condemn Raven... And now for other news: Something nice for people who were waiting on the cliffhanger last chapter ... Chapter 1 Chapter 2 Chapter 3 Chapter 4 Spoiler for A Familiar Life... Chapter 5:
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2010-10-17, 18:37 | Link #27437 | |
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I do remember you mentioning at one point that you wanted to work in a Precia/Fate similarity, and you did quite an excellent job here. Really, it almost made me cry and give the poor kid a hug, because she's so torn up about it inside. I do want to argue, though, that Fate's reasoning is slightly flawed; most likely because her emotions are out of whack over the situation, but the Nanoha she brought back, at her core, is no different from the Nanoha that died. I just think it's kind of unfair of her to make that comparison when you consider the kind of situation Nanoha is in; it's not like she's notably different from the Nanoha that died (unlike Fate, who as we know was blatantly different from Alicia), it's just that her whole world has been turned upside down by what Fate did. So, I do seem some flaw in Fate's logic there, but then again, I doubt Fate is really thinking logically right now.
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2010-10-17, 18:50 | Link #27438 | |
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2010-10-17, 18:56 | Link #27439 | |
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2010-10-17, 19:06 | Link #27440 |
Under Death by College
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Curse all of you, now I have a disturbing mental image. Good chapter though, if Fate becomes the same as Precia does that mean she will meet the same end? That would be really sad (although admittedly less so if she starts torturing people).
PS: Sicne it was Fate, it was a yellow electro-whip.
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