2011-10-02, 03:11 | Link #2041 | |
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...You know, maybe you should read Dune---there's some description as to why people in that universe still use swords and knives---mainly because personal shields protect against most firearms. It's not quite the same for IS, but you could probably get some ideas from that.
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2011-10-02, 04:03 | Link #2042 | |
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2011-10-02, 04:13 | Link #2043 | |
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At risk of spoiling things, <Ren>'s story happens between the end of Vol.3 and the start of Vol.5 EG once Tatenashi appears on the scene, she won't be guarding Ichika anymore. ...though reading ZerXSeed's story makes me wonder what would happen to the <Ren> of that alternate universe...(Shudders) Anyway, I have at least two more chapters to write about <Ren> that will hopefully explain her character a bit better. I won't post it to FF.net until all three chapters are done, because I'll have to revise the current chapters and fix inconsistencies as they progress.
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2011-10-02, 04:18 | Link #2044 | |
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My story starts at the end of volume 1 and diverges from there, canon events still happen but mixing the events of both Kyuukai and Irish in which will expand more on them. |
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2011-10-02, 04:22 | Link #2045 |
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Then I might have to ask you to check with me when adding her--since you guys are unfamiliar with the Arashikage ninja clan (and their protrayals in various series of G.I.Joe differ greatly). Plus, <Ren>'s own secrets.
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2011-10-02, 05:15 | Link #2047 |
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Alright, Ch. 2 of Project Silverback is up.
Project Silverback Ch. 2 Goddamn it... [Crashes on bed, face first] |
2011-10-02, 06:08 | Link #2049 |
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Damn it still struck at chapter 9
Decided to have a two rounder match at the very least 1. Yamada-sensei vs Rin & Cecil (short) 2. Yamada-sensei vs Ichika & Char (long) Ichika & Char, while has no experience working together, last longer cause they trust each other and paid attention to their teammates.
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2011-10-02, 06:18 | Link #2050 | |
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BTW- Just thought of a new draft thanks to agetreme's help, will post it later so can you please read and review if you're not too busy? |
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2011-10-02, 06:18 | Link #2051 |
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Another small part of my fic's latest chapter,
still working on it, feedback would help at this point so I can make the necessary changes. Spoiler for Phase 4:
Well, I guess I should say, even though this is my self-insert challenge entry fic, unlike the past chapters, this isn't written in my POV, rather, from here on out it will be in Rin's POV most of the time, the first 3 chapters you could consider a prologue I guess, since this is where the real story starts. Btw, Chapter 4 is narrated by Rin years after the story happened, hence why she sounds a bit more mature than usual.
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2011-10-02, 06:33 | Link #2052 | |
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As I said before, Rin and Cecil isn't weak, they're just too stubborn to work together. Anyway, when I said physical, it's not really a slab of blunt iron, but a high frequency sword that generates a field of plasma due to the friction with air (hence their glowing orange appearance). If you can count the damage delivered it's like: Spoiler for Lol:
Beam Saber is more effective at sapping shield, HF sword however has the advantage that it has better attribute as defense tool and parrying weapon (Since it has reasonable mass), you can say knockback effect.
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2011-10-02, 07:12 | Link #2054 | |
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*Deploying Sentries around Blitz' house using orbital launcher* Seriously though...why?
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2011-10-02, 07:20 | Link #2055 |
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Because me writing a fanfic based on another writer's fanfic has only happened ONCE before...needless to say it was VERY well liked, to my surprise:
http://wavehawk.weebly.com/fan-work.html file: Illomk.zip Thing is, I'm not even finished with <Ren> in her regular story yet, and now I have to deal with ideas...I blame Gundam Evolve #8 for this, dammit. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GzrifKdrEss Watch that. Now replace the Ginns with Drone IS and the Strike Gundam with <Ren>-chan and you'll see what I mean. "But <Ren> can't pilot an IS, right? Right. She won't be in an IS. "Oh crap..."
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2011-10-02, 07:27 | Link #2056 |
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@ Box- Good so far! Mature Rin is definitely better than Yandere jelly Rin Keep up The good work.
@ZeroXSEED- Draft I just thought of and cost nearly all my sanity to complete. Mood whiplash and Ho-Yay trope activated. Spoiler:
*Pukes on the floor* Please read and review! *Faints* |
2011-10-02, 07:28 | Link #2057 | |
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@ Eratas: urp-BLAAAAARGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2011-10-02, 07:33 | Link #2058 | |
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I ended up collaborating with Fred on "Silent Storm", and some other guys who read it said they loved how I made my fic a Reconstruction of Cyberpunk--which is weird, because I wrote it while heavily inspired by Rainbow Six and Metal Gear Solid. IMHO it's not too bad, it's one of my favorites in terms of writing thriller/future fantasy...
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2011-10-02, 07:33 | Link #2059 |
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PHASE 4: Happy Ending
See? I told you I'd be updating more often from now on, well at least I hope it can continue like this, I certainly don't want to repeat the 1 month gap between Chapter 1 and 2.
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