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P.G. · 2008-09-05, 03:06

3rd trial on my entry, Like Marina-san said, tried lily & dark. (other 1st are here )

I think text fails, well for the meantime.
And as always C&C would really help & much appreciated.

markesellus · 2008-09-05, 03:24

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Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

v.0.1

C&C would be really appreciated.

Looks cool. I like the dice animation. Though what anime is that? and what does the why mean?

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Originally Posted by P.G.

3rd trial on my entry, Like Marina-san said, tried lily & dark. (other 1st are here )

I think text fails, well for the meantime.
And as always C&C are would really help & much appreciated.

Yeah definitely some work on the text but otherwise really good. I like the light/dark contrast.

Kaix · 2008-09-05, 06:52

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Originally Posted by KholdStare

I like the animation and the effects are good. The only thing I'm afraid of would be if people will relate to it, because I'm not sure what the "Why?" means or what anime it is.

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Originally Posted by markesellus

Looks cool. I like the dice animation. Though what anime is that? and what does the why mean?

Thank you both for the comments.

The picture isn't from an anime, it's from the game Little Busters!, but I never took that as an important element because I was never trying to portray something from it anyway.

(I don't even know what happens exactly in the storyline, I only know the demo).

To the 'Why?' issue - truth to be told - I have no idea. It just felt right. It was mostly aimed as a rhetorical question (Why does luck change like that? (the dice going from a 6-6 pair to a 6-1 pair), Why is the picture ripped? Why is there a 'Why?' written on the paper?) or just basically whatever whoever saw the sig felt when seeing it.

Not sure how much sense that made.

v.0.2 - No 'why?'

v.0.3 - No paper

Without it, that corner feels a little blank. But I don't know what I can put instead of the paper/write something else on it.

ganbaru · 2008-09-05, 07:15

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Originally Posted by P.G.

3rd trial on my entry, Like Marina-san said, tried lily & dark. (other 1st are here )

I think text fails, well for the meantime.
And as always C&C would really help & much appreciated.

The text is difficult too read, maybe a bigger size of characters?

Ice Climbers · 2008-09-05, 08:56

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Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

v.0.2 - No 'why?'

v.0.3 - No paper

Without it, that corner feels a little blank. But I don't know what I can put instead of the paper/write something else on it.

hmm, without the paper it sure looks the top left is empty.. but with the "why", like mentioned before, it looks weird because the supposedly conveyed idea is not passed to the viewer.

maybe you can use that space to put your username

btw, any more C&C on my possible entry will be appreciated. Thanks to those who already commented on it

here it is again:

Delitesco · 2008-09-05, 10:17

I think if you darker/lighter one of the arrow-lines at the left so that they are not the same color it would look slightly better. Your sig in general is a bit too bright in my eyes. Maybe adding a border, darkening the girls could help? Bottom left is a bit empty aswell maybe but shouldn't need much.

KasumiGirl · 2008-09-05, 10:22

Hey everyone, really nice entries so far!

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Originally Posted by Solace

Eiffel tower and croissant signatures go go go!

Oui oui...or wee wee. However you wanna spell it haha.

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Originally Posted by Solace

And holy shi-....KG I missed ya.

Where you been?

Well, not been at the computer desk since...ages? =\

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Originally Posted by Marina

KG IS ALIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (busy irl or just focused at AR?)
Nice sig entries so far everyone ^_^
I'll have to see if I'm not too busy with school starting to do something. This really is a great theme!

Irl. I haven't really been on AR either.

By next week i'll be on AnimeSuki spamming posting like I used to. ^_^

Daniel E. · 2008-09-05, 10:38

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Originally Posted by P.G.

3rd trial on my entry, Like Marina-san said, tried lily & dark. (other 1st are here )

I think text fails, well for the meantime.
And as always C&C would really help & much appreciated.

Woot, love it!

Dont have much of a problem with the text either.

KholdStare · 2008-09-05, 11:01

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Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

Thank you both for the comments.

The picture isn't from an anime, it's from the game Little Busters!, but I never took that as an important element because I was never trying to portray something from it anyway.

(I don't even know what happens exactly in the storyline, I only know the demo).

To the 'Why?' issue - truth to be told - I have no idea. It just felt right. It was mostly aimed as a rhetorical question (Why does luck change like that? (the dice going from a 6-6 pair to a 6-1 pair), Why is the picture ripped? Why is there a 'Why?' written on the paper?) or just basically whatever whoever saw the sig felt when seeing it.

Not sure how much sense that made.

No no, I didn't say take it off.

What I meant was put in more text, not to overcrowd the signature, but to at least convey something. It doesn't even have to be related to the source, but be creative. Tell us what it means to you, or give us a nudge or what you want it to say.

Vibeke · 2008-09-05, 11:38

Wow, what a great theme; actually I was thinking about the same theme in case of my victory

For start I may as well submit a sigs I've been using a while ago:

chocolate_star · 2008-09-05, 15:35

First try:

C&C please...?

bkg9990 · 2008-09-05, 16:11

Hmm version 1.5

Did some minor tweaking, it still feels a little dirty

bigdave · 2008-09-05, 16:39

GAH!! its my initial sig to be used, will fix or change later C&C PPL >>> xD

well ja ne :O

Hakuryu · 2008-09-05, 17:26

First try. I just don't know what I should add to the background. >.>

Evil Rick · 2008-09-05, 23:03

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Originally Posted by Kai the Reaper

v.0.2 - No 'why?'

v.0.3 - No paper

Without it, that corner feels a little blank. But I don't know what I can put instead of the paper/write something else on it.

I sugest to pick the one with the empty paper and add "Kai"
The trick with the idce is very good! How did you do that?

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Originally Posted by Ice Climbers

btw, any more C&C on my possible entry will be appreciated. Thanks to those who already commented on it

here it is again:

Don't see much diference from the previus one but I like it

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Originally Posted by P.G.

3rd trial on my entry, Like Marina-san said, tried lily & dark. (other 1st are here )

I think text fails, well for the meantime.
And as always C&C would really help & much appreciated.

Don't sence much problem with the text
Plus the lights and shades are well placed

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Originally Posted by Vibeke

Wow, what a great theme; actually I was thinking about the same theme in case of my victory

For start I may as well submit a sigs I've been using a while ago:

I sould took the first one

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Originally Posted by chocolate_star

First try:

C&C please...?

The girl at the right looks too small >.<

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Originally Posted by bkg9990

Hmm version 1.5

Did some minor tweaking, it still feels a little dirty

Erase a bit the purple pinture and it should look better

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Originally Posted by bigdave

GAH!! its my initial sig to be used, will fix or change later C&C PPL >>> xD

well ja ne :O

Hmmm... I don't know, the BG doesn't seems to fix well, maybe in another color, a purple one maybe?

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Originally Posted by Hakuryu

First try. I just don't know what I should add to the background. >.>

I don't see the need to add something on the BG, it looks cool this way, maybe you can just add some text

zSolaris · 2008-09-06, 09:24

Updates to my original submission. :P

v2.0

v2.1

C&C please.

chocolate_star · 2008-09-06, 13:34

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Originally Posted by Evil Rick

The girl at the right looks too small >.<

But she supposed to be smaller than Amu...
..are you saying it would look better if she were bigger?

felix · 2008-09-06, 14:02

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Originally Posted by zSolaris

v2.1

I like how you played with the font. Definetly better then other one.

Evil Rick · 2008-09-06, 16:28

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Originally Posted by chocolate_star

But she supposed to be smaller than Amu...
..are you saying it would look better if she were bigger?

I sensed her a bit dosproportionated, you don't need to make her bigger than the other girl but maybe just a bit bigger than her current size

Of course, it's just a sugestion, if you feels that she is Okay then you should not change it

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Originally Posted by zSolaris

Updates to my original submission. :P

v2.0

v2.1

C&C please.

I should take the second one, the text is really good

***CrowKenobi*** · 2008-09-06, 16:30

I think I've done all I can to this sig, so it will be my Final Entry for this month (for real this time!)

Good luck to everyone!

2008-09-05, 03:06	Link #101
P.G. Rated P.G. Superstar Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Boracay, PH	3rd trial on my entry, Like Marina-san said, tried lily & dark. (other 1st are here ) I think text fails, well for the meantime. And as always C&C would really help & much appreciated. Last edited by P.G.; 2008-09-05 at 03:23.

2008-09-05, 10:17	Link #106
Delitesco Hobby Artist Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Sweden	I think if you darker/lighter one of the arrow-lines at the left so that they are not the same color it would look slightly better. Your sig in general is a bit too bright in my eyes. Maybe adding a border, darkening the girls could help? Bottom left is a bit empty aswell maybe but shouldn't need much. __________________ . : Join Artist Alike and From Afar : .

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Vibeke ❤ Fabulous MAX~! ❤ Graphic Designer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Poland -.- Age: 35	Wow, what a great theme; actually I was thinking about the same theme in case of my victory For start I may as well submit a sigs I've been using a while ago: __________________ Currently busy studying Japaneese language and culture on Warsaw University//my animelist

2008-09-05, 16:11	Link #112
bkg9990 Singin Diamond Crevasse Graphic Designer Join Date: May 2006 Location: Philippines - The Terrorist Fortress xD	Hmm version 1.5 Did some minor tweaking, it still feels a little dirty __________________ ~bkg's Shack~

2008-09-05, 16:39	Link #113
bigdave Falling for Ginsama ^3^ Graphic Designer Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Airantou	GAH!! its my initial sig to be used, will fix or change later C&C PPL >>> xD well ja ne :O __________________ If you want to see more of my sigs go to~ bigdave's sig gallery ~

2008-09-05, 15:35	Link #111
chocolate_star Amuto follower! Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Ireland Age: 31	First try: C&C please...?

2008-09-06, 09:24	Link #116
zSolaris Don't forget your lunch! Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Somewhere Over the Rainbow Age: 32	Updates to my original submission. :P v2.0 v2.1 C&C please.

2008-09-06, 16:30	Link #120
*CrowKenobi* One PUNCH! Administrator Join Date: Dec 2005	Final entry I think I've done all I can to this sig, so it will be my Final Entry for this month (for real this time!) Good luck to everyone!