2012-01-12, 15:04 | Link #17724 |
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"Uwah~ It's hot..."
The air conditioner just had to break down now of all days - during the peak of summer. So much for relaxing peaceably at home... Even the electric fans, while they were doing their job to the best of their ability, even they weren't enough to aleviate the heat substantially. And here lay Orimura Ichika, clad in just his boxers, a half filled glass of water with ice cubes. "Why did did the AC have to break today..." "That's my line," replied an equally fed up voice from the kitchen entryway. "Hnn, now this would make a nice blackmail photo. My little brother, lying around in just his boxers." "I'm too hot to even care about that, Chifuyu-nee," Ichika regarded the elder Orimura standing at the kitchen entrance. After taking a quick look, he averted his eyes himself. "What you got on is much more scandalous anyway." "Do that and die," Chifuyu sighed, that actually came out more like a growl, holding her glass of ice water to her head. A wife beater tied and knotted just below her breasts and cutoff jean shorts. For the ten-thousandth time, Ichika cursed the fact that the woman standing at the door was his elder sister. Didn't she know that she was torturing his young adolescent male brain, among other things, with that getup? "What do you want Chifuyu-nee? You already got water..." "If this keeps up, I'm going to go over to Yamada's place. I know she's got AC at least..." Several beads of sweat distractingly flowed down her smooth chest and disappeared beneath her shirt... "Well, that's wonderful for you, but where am I going to go?" "What, you can't go to Shinanomo's place? I thought they got a pond or something..." "That's for the shrine's use! I can't go swimming in there! I'd also get attacked by I don't know how many shrine maidens..." Chifuyu actually chuckled at that. "Fine, you can come, Ichika. I'll let her know." "It won't be a problem?" Even with her back turned, Ichika could hear the smirk in his sister's voice. "Knowing her, she'd be positively on cloud nine." "As long as she's not dressed like you are right now, I should be fine." "Ooh?" Ichika gulped. That form of 'Ooh,' was usually the harbringer of some blunt force trauma...but... "Are you saying you're fine with me being dressed like this now?" Ichika had no idea how she did it, it wasn't even a pose! Just a small tilt to the side, her head leaning against the wall, her left hand resting across her bare stomach... He quickly turned away with a huff. Chifuyu's mocking chuckles only served to infuriate him even more. ~*~ ...still not quite there in regards to Chifuyu's 'voice' yet...needs more work...
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2012-01-12, 18:14 | Link #17725 |
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@ Senpai - That'll work Any idea for a place, though? I'm not that good at thinking of venue's
Then why didn't Laura join them? Also, does the whole "Call Clarissa flr Swimsuit advice" event stilp happen? Scene - Ichika's pushing determinator to an all new level. Also, Honne crying=Shit has hit the fan.
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2012-01-12, 18:32 | Link #17726 | ||
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Charles was absolutely furious when Clarissa advised that school swimsuit is okay, and Laura just need to sew a class tag on it (during this period Charles already knew about common fetish in Japan XD). In the end Clarissa advised skimpy two piece... and Charles had to pick. But then I have to ditch the mummy towel scene... or maybe have some FoeYay with Ichika, since Laura think Ichika will ridicule her in such outfit. On a slightly better/worse note, Ichika will have huge marks... all shaped like wings XD
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2012-01-12, 18:36 | Link #17727 |
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@ Senpai - I kinda feel like I'm channeling Michael Bay whenever I'm writing action scenes The plane depressurizing fight kinda makes it obvious.
But didn't Clarissa say it wasn't okay when Laura asked her in canon? How does Ichika even stand up at this point? @ Tempest - The incest implications just go up Ichika and Chifuyu's relationship here is funnier than in canon.
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2012-01-12, 18:43 | Link #17728 | ||
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Charles: "That's blasphemy!" (Ignore the fact that Charles has some boobs left....and thus have to use man-top ) ByakuShiki act as his life support. Not only act as battle armor, but also a walking hospital. So, unlike Canon where Ichika is healed fully, here Ichika still retain his injury after the battle. I agree with this.
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2012-01-12, 18:47 | Link #17729 |
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@ Senpai - Irish's segments are going to look so out of place in the story Everybody else fights IS or machines while he fights human opponents.
Doesn't Maya react to Ichika picking the swimsuit his siblings are going to wear? She is a bit of a pervert. Ichika really doesn't seem like he's a high school student at this point.
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2012-01-12, 18:53 | Link #17730 | ||
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Chifuyu: "So you already memorized your twin sister's body to such incredible detail?" What do you mean?
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2012-01-12, 19:00 | Link #17731 |
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@ Senpai - Then again, the one time he fought an IS unit seriously (Arachne) you saw the grisly results. Irish is really the weakest protag despite fighting for the longest.
Why didn't he pick Maya's? D: Most students don't ignore injuries like that. Mostnpeople train for years just so they can stand up after getting injured like that to a marginally lesser degree. Ichika has Absolute Defense in other fanfics, so he doesn't have this problem.
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2012-01-12, 19:08 | Link #17732 | ||
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Maya refused to let him despite nobody is offering (well, actually hoping that someone will pick for her put playing hard to get). :| Maya: "Iya! You don't need to pick mine.... ahh... Orimura-kun, that's sexual harrassment!" Ichika: "Wait a minute, what did I do?" Quote:
What surprised Chifuyu is that Ichika can hold the pain despite his enhanced nerve system means he felt more pain sensation from the injury.
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2012-01-12, 19:12 | Link #17733 |
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@ Senpai - He makes up for it with sheer tenacity and force of will. 9/10 times that if he goes down, his opponent is going down too.
So Maya picked her swimsuit on her own? Somebody picks for her in Shadow I was more worried about the fact that his body could still funcition at all. The body forcibly shuts down if it's in too much pain.
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Going to school, see you later.
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2012-01-12, 19:41 | Link #17735 |
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@ Senpai - Being a combat pragmatist has its uses When facing people in unarmed CQC like Tatenashi or Maya, he tends o be floored in a few minutes.
How does the beach scene go? In the original, Ichika stared at Chifuyu when she came out with her swimsuit. Is it any different here? Alright See ya later
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2012-01-12, 19:44 | Link #17736 | ||
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Final answer.
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So, come the beach scene, double the wincest fanservice.
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2012-01-13, 05:53 | Link #17739 |
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Friday the 13th seems to have affected more than just myself
A thought struck me. Ichika is supposed to be the 1st male IS pilot. But thus far, he's only piloted 2 machines. The Uchigane Tabane rigged and Byakushiki which has his sister's old core unit... |
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Tabane denied that she rigged it.
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