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demino_hellsin · 2012-01-13, 05:58

I thought she confirmed it in V3? At least gave an ambiguous answer

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:00

Here's the excerpt

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"...Oh yeah, let me give an example."

"Huh, Chi-chan? That's rare of you."

"For example, a certain genius deliberately made a boy mistake his high school entrance exam location and put the IS there such that it could only be activated at that time. If that's the case, the IS that shouldn't be operated by men becomes pilotable, right?"

"Hm~? But if that happens, he can't continue to pilot it, right?"

"That's right. You won't waste so much time to do such a thing anyway."

"Hehehe, because I'll get tired of it."
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Tabane might hide the truth, but she never lie XD

demino_hellsin · 2012-01-13, 06:02

So she confirmed it D: lol

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:05

Confirmed that she DID NOT rig it, Chifuyu accused something false, she denied it. But when Chifuyu asked something that is undeniable truth, Tabane is silent.

Eratas123 · 2012-01-13, 06:06

What I miss?

Side note - Just finishing up beta reading White Knight. I'm just glad it has an M rating.

demino_hellsin · 2012-01-13, 06:07

Sorry, I meant to say that

HasuMasu · 2012-01-13, 06:10

Tempest makes me jelly, he's really good at this.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:10

Well, nobody psting much since I left, Tempest read another wincest... demi asked question about the legitimate status of Ichika as male I.S. pilot.

EDIT: White Knight has M rating? Why?

Eratas123 · 2012-01-13, 06:15

@ Senpai - Wellllll: Both Sarashiki twins seem to have fallen in love with him and show signs of obsession, M wants to rape him for 12 hours straight, and Chifuyu is currently mouth raping him as he's asleep. Oh, by the way, Ichika's 10 years old while this is all happening.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:16

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Wellllll: Both Sarashiki twins seem to have fallen in love with him and show signs of obsession, M wants to rape him for 12 hours straight, and Chifuyu is currently mouth raping him as he's asleep. Oh, by the way, Ichika's 10 years old while this is all happening.

Epic win is epic, oh wait-WROOOOOONG!!!!!

demino_hellsin · 2012-01-13, 06:16

I'm amazed at how a headache developed/got worse progressively as I read erachin's post.

Eratas123 · 2012-01-13, 06:19

Lemme post the segment in a bit. Jesus Christ, when I said I needed experience writing adult material, I didn't mean re-writing a borderline rape scene!

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:21

IF you have to post it, double spoiler please.

(God-damn! At least I keep Ichika 16 in "Reaching for You", and the resulting damage is extremely horrible)

Eratas123 · 2012-01-13, 06:28

Read at your own discretion.

Spoiler:

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:30

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Goes back to read Tempest' draft*

EDIT: it was well written though, as expected from you.

Eratas123 · 2012-01-13, 06:37

How do you think I reacted when I re-wrote that scene? I certainly wasn't expecting Shotacon to crop up when I was re-writing it.

Even Shadow doesn't go into that much depth in regards to things like that.

HasuMasu · 2012-01-13, 06:46

Not sure what's wrong with that scene.

ZeroXSEED · 2012-01-13, 06:49

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eratas123

How do you think I reacted when I re-wrote that scene? I certainly wasn't expecting Shotacon to crop up when I was re-writing it.

Even Shadow doesn't go into that much depth in regards to things like that.

Yeah, that's really daring, even I would chicken out.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Detective-san

Not sure what's wrong with that scene.

Shotacon incest (and no, that's not win)

HasuMasu · 2012-01-13, 06:56

I'm okay with it.

Eratas123 · 2012-01-13, 06:57

To be fair, Shadow goes nearly goes here with Irish and his own sister (Before they find out they were related). Good thing he nearly gauged her neck off. That discouraged her from trying it again.

@ Box - It was my first time ever writing anything resembling a lemon. I certainly didn't expect it to be a 19 year old borderline raping a 10 year old.

2012-01-13, 06:00	Link #17742
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Here's the excerpt ----------------------- "...Oh yeah, let me give an example." "Huh, Chi-chan? That's rare of you." "For example, a certain genius deliberately made a boy mistake his high school entrance exam location and put the IS there such that it could only be activated at that time. If that's the case, the IS that shouldn't be operated by men becomes pilotable, right?" "Hm~? But if that happens, he can't continue to pilot it, right?" "That's right. You won't waste so much time to do such a thing anyway." "Hehehe, because I'll get tired of it." -------------------------------------------- Tabane might hide the truth, but she never lie XD __________________

2012-01-13, 06:05	Link #17744
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Confirmed that she DID NOT rig it, Chifuyu accused something false, she denied it. But when Chifuyu asked something that is undeniable truth, Tabane is silent. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:06	Link #17745
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	What I miss? Side note - Just finishing up beta reading White Knight. I'm just glad it has an M rating. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:10	Link #17747
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Tempest makes me jelly, he's really good at this. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:10	Link #17748
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	Well, nobody psting much since I left, Tempest read another wincest... demi asked question about the legitimate status of Ichika as male I.S. pilot. EDIT: White Knight has M rating? Why? __________________

2012-01-13, 05:58	Link #17741
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I thought she confirmed it in V3? At least gave an ambiguous answer

2012-01-13, 06:02	Link #17743
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	So she confirmed it D: lol

2012-01-13, 06:07	Link #17746
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	Sorry, I meant to say that

2012-01-13, 06:15	Link #17749
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	@ Senpai - Wellllll: Both Sarashiki twins seem to have fallen in love with him and show signs of obsession, M wants to rape him for 12 hours straight, and Chifuyu is currently mouth raping him as he's asleep. Oh, by the way, Ichika's 10 years old while this is all happening. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:16	Link #17751
demino_hellsin That one guy Join Date: Nov 2011	I'm amazed at how a headache developed/got worse progressively as I read erachin's post.

2012-01-13, 06:19	Link #17752
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Lemme post the segment in a bit. Jesus Christ, when I said I needed experience writing adult material, I didn't mean re-writing a borderline rape scene! __________________

2012-01-13, 06:21	Link #17753
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	IF you have to post it, double spoiler please. (God-damn! At least I keep Ichika 16 in "Reaching for You", and the resulting damage is extremely horrible) __________________

2012-01-13, 06:28	Link #17754
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	Read at your own discretion. Spoiler: “....No,” I muttered under my breath, no one will take him away from me. He belongs to me. I have no family but my brother. I only have a brother. I only have a brother. A brother that I nourished since he was a little baby, a brother that took all of my cruel methods and mistook them for tough love, a brother who stood by my side regardless of my cold demeanor and overwhelming strength, a brother who takes care of households chores because I can’t, a brother who strives to be strong because of the illusion that he has no right to stand beside me if he’s weak, a brother that I’ll never let go, a brother that I am unconditionally and irrevocably in love with, a brother that I’ve raised to be my husband, and more importantly, a brother that I’d kill and die for. I smiled at the sleeping form of my brother. He looked so peaceful and cute that I cannot resist it. I remove my top and my bra, allowing my breasts to bounce because from the lack of restrains. I don’t care if I exposed my breasts; I checked the room before hand and there weren’t any hidden cameras so doing this in this room is okay. I went to bed and cradled his head in my arms. “I'll never let you go.” I ripped my brother’s shirt before pressing my expose breast to his chest. “You belong to me.” I whispered before enveloping his lips in mine. I laid his head on a pillow and proceeded to ravage his mouth before wrapping my arms around his head and deepening the kiss. Even though my brother didn’t regain consciousness, I heard him moan into the kiss as well. I was glad; his moans and whimpers meant that I wasn’t the only one who was enjoying this sinful act. I wrapped my arms around his neck and deepened the kiss. I pinned his body and pressed my body into his even more, I moaned silently as I felt my naked chest on his. My tongue entered his mouth and entwined with his, sucking hard on it. I pulled back as the need for oxygen finally overcame me, a trail of saliva between our lips. I took a deep breath before kissing my brother again, this time longer and with more passion. This isn’t decent. This is immoral. This is a sin. A sister shouldn’t love her brother like this; siblings shouldn’t lust for each other. But frankly, I don’t give a damn about what society thinks about my affection for my brother. So what if I love my brother, not as a brother but as a man? I know for a fact that my brother’s admiration towards me surpasses that of an ordinary sister. So what if I want to keep him forever? My brother promised me to never leave my side for as long he lived. So what if I’ve been training him since he was six to be my husband? He doesn’t seem to mind my harsh treatment; in fact, he’s already a good house husband. So what if I don’t want to entrust him to other women? He is much more selfish than me in that regard. I know that he scared off all my suitors during junior high and high school. He’s so sweet. So what if I want to marry my brother and carry his children? Inbreeding was considered legal before. Me doing this to my brother - kissing him while he was sleeping - wasn’t wrong. He’s mine, he belongs to me, he’s my brother, and I’m his sister. It is my God given right to have my way with him. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:30	Link #17755
ZeroXSEED I am no one Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Inside your head	AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Goes back to read Tempest' draft EDIT: it was well written though, as expected from you. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:37	Link #17756
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	How do you think I reacted when I re-wrote that scene? I certainly wasn't expecting Shotacon to crop up when I was re-writing it. Even Shadow doesn't go into that much depth in regards to things like that. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:46	Link #17757
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	Not sure what's wrong with that scene. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:56	Link #17759
HasuMasu Senior Member Artist Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: The Middle Way	I'm okay with it. __________________

2012-01-13, 06:57	Link #17760
Eratas123 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2011	To be fair, Shadow goes nearly goes here with Irish and his own sister (Before they find out they were related). Good thing he nearly gauged her neck off. That discouraged her from trying it again. @ Box - It was my first time ever writing anything resembling a lemon. I certainly didn't expect it to be a 19 year old borderline raping a 10 year old. __________________