Thanks for the feedbacks. Now I can take a break and decide on what to do on the final chapter. On the mean time, I'm almost done with Lyrical of Time, Chapter 1. It feels kind of weird, since it almost reflects StrikerS's episode 1-- oops, I said too much.
Location: In a place of extremes. From below freezing to above boiling.
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Originally Posted by USB500
@ Fuyu no Sora:
@ Kha:
Thanks for the feedbacks. Now I can take a break and decide on what to do on the final chapter. On the mean time, I'm almost done with Lyrical of Time, Chapter 1. It feels kind of weird, since it almost reflects StrikerS's episode 1-- oops, I said too much.
Haha, Its okay. I really like the Sleeping Lyrical . One of the best parodys in FF.net
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"You wanted to say that, but you didn't have enough common sense."
Not usually interested in Satashi's story, but I'll give it a shot.
Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
Nice!!! Enfield sort of reminds me of Caro and Shin reminds me of Chrono which I really don't know why. More importantly Yuuno is in there and got 2 seconds of narration
Not usually interested in Satashi's story, but I'll give it a shot.
Attention! Lyrical of Time is updated. Charter 01 is up for reading.
Yay it's cool! And I see how it mirrors, but using Unlimited Blad- I mean, Midnight Carnival right off the bat came to me as a big surprise. Alexandra's characterization was another surprise because I was expecting a Saber type personality.
I know I'm old, and that should've been a Kamen Rider ref, but somehow "It's Morphin Time!" kicked in in my head instead.
Where's Yuuno, S_K? I didn't even read him being mentioned.
I've been thinking that Sophia might well be Alexandra's nemesis, if you see her appearance in the Nanoha CrosiS SS being broadcast in the OC thread and then catch the references... Luckily they're both on the same side.
Over all very good! Let's see where this goes next.
Yay it's cool! And I see how it mirrors, but using Unlimited Blad- I mean, Midnight Carnival right off the bat came to me as a big surprise. Alexandra's characterization was another surprise because I was expecting a Saber type personality.
I know I'm old, and that should've been a Kamen Rider ref, but somehow "It's Morphin Time!" kicked in in my head instead.
Where's Yuuno, S_K? I didn't even read him being mentioned.
I've been thinking that Sophia might well be Alexandra's nemesis, if you see her appearance in the Nanoha CrosiS SS being broadcast in the OC thread and then catch the references... Luckily they're both on the same side.
Over all very good! Let's see where this goes next.
Yuuno is mentioned at the part where they talk about that kid(sorry dont know the name) and how he wants to play with somebody but the main character is unconscious(again I forgot the name)
And Kha, I'd like to know what is Nanoha Crosis SS????
Caveats: the story is at chapter 1, untitled, and I'm not entirely happy with it. I'm willing to take suggestions for improvement, and definitely suggestions for titles. I've got the basic framework of the plot down, but I'm expecting to change it dramatically as new information in StrikerS is revealed.
Character profiles for Ivey, Rancer, Reiz, and Nova are here. I'm trying to write the story such that the profiles are not necessary, however.
For those who've been wondering what I meant about that CrosyS thing, here it is, a repost from the OC Thread:
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The OP
Spoiler for Destiny - Chiyo:
Dawn breaks over Mid Childa...
Hanarete ite mo zutto
Chikaku ni kanjite unmei dakara
A black feather drifts out of the sky and lands on the tarmac of Velka SAR Yzak Air Base. Two gray-booted feet krumps to a stop next to it, and their owner picks it up. The camera follows the feather until Kha's face is seen, and he looks into the brightening morning sky...
[Rock Guitar Instrumental]
With a bang, the music starts. The background is a high speed running shot of MC Downtown’s skyline framed against the brightening horizon, while the title “Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha” in one line phases in. At the first drum crash, Keroko leaps past, adding “The New Velka Chronicles” in big letters under the small title. On the second crash, Hikki jumps down from the top of the screen and punches, flashing it back to the title, which has now appended “: CrosyS” to the right of the “Chronicles”.
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha
The New Velka Chronicles: CrosyS
The images hangs around for a bit, then Kha’s Firehawk Stratofighter tears across, whiting out the screen with its afterburners as the last drum climax ends the instrumental.
Osanai mune no naka de
From left to right: Artei, Sophia, Kaempfer and Allison march out of the hangar and they meet their captain who greets them with a nod.
Tooku wo koto shiri sugita? Fuan da yo
We teleport to MC Honor’s Hold Air Base where the Rogue Squadron is based. Keroko, Wes and Tyco in tow, adjusts the straps on her half-finger gloves as activity goes on all around her. The camera cuts to her sealed device, which glints in reply.
Yukikau hitobito no
Blink and we’re in the Riot 6 lounge, where Shin-chan is enjoying his morning coffee with Hikki, Alexandra and Anna, who then wave at the camera.
Kao sae mienai kodoku doushite?
Phwing! We’re now aboard the “Gladius”, where Lucas, Angela, Rika and Hiro are discussing plans over a holographic war table, and Cassandra listens closely. At the “Doushite?” the image is overlaid on the left with a side profile of Cassandra’s face looking forlornly into the distance and Alex’s taking the split screen on the right.
Massugu na hitomi ni...
Shinji, Asuka and Rey in the hologram forms float behind their mother as Kaylin runs fruitlessly on the stop towards a shadowed profile of Glock in the foreground.
Tsubasa hiroge tabitatou
There is long trail of foot prints on a bright desert, and the camera pans until it shows David Brown, Bronzion Hammer on shoulder, soldiering on in the blazing heat. He’s not even bothered by the weather. But the sand shifts, and the Hammer comes off…
[Ascending music]
In rapid succession as the beat changes, Carim looks up from a video call, Kyla throws her hand out as she commands the Silvana ahead, and the 21st Trinity Optimus Velka Carryall soars into the stars.
[Chorus]
Asu e to te wo kazashita
Shinjite mite you are my precious
Hanarete ite mo zutto
Chikaku ni ite I miss you from my heart
Hikari michibiku hou e
Kimi to nara I'll be with you forever
[Destiny] Vocals by: CHiYo Originally From: Giniro no Olynssis
OC mad fight! Every single OC ever created in this thread darts left right center, hurling spells everywhere as the camera spins perspectives through dizzy curves, as the endless Necron hoard surge in the battlefield. But sometimes, something can be made out of the chaos. The Blue Flame Squad and Alex’s team combine attacks and combos the stiff Necron to pieces. There’s enough time for husband and wife to exchange glances, hook each others arms and Alex anc Cass lash out in a two-sided spin kick that crushes the skulls of two Necron Immortals. Alexandra slices through two Warriors, then sends a blast into a Flayer just as Anna throws a Meteor into an advancing platoon. Keroko and Kyla stand back to back unleashing rain of fire from their respective devices as Kaempfer, Gard Redel and his Zakum Troopers try and win air superiority against the black storm of Wraths. Artei holds his own dismembering another troop of Destroyers. Sophia launches Excalibur into the plague, then follows with an optic blast from her cyber scan unit. Arnie is behind her, both Gauss Flayers on full auto as the Friendly Necron tears through his former brethren with ease. Allie throws several fireballs, then makes quick work of her feet dodging a rabid Flayer, then spots an opening for her to tumble in and stab the machine with Parang, the magical dagger instantly dispelling all magic within the Necron and excising its soul in the process. Then David jumps in and slams the Bronzion hammer into the ground, rippling a massive shockwave throughout the desert.
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Kiseki no naka ni yadoru
Chikara shinjite unmei dakara
Kha stands alone, eyes closed, listening to the howls of machines everywhere, camera spinning around and around at the closing horde. The camera stops, and he opens his eyes; The Necron Lord steps up and raises his staff. The Cleric-knight shifts his stance such that his spear points forward, the Gotteliches Rapier buzz on, the Velka triangle spring out from underneath him, exploding with blue maryoku as the camera zooms into his eyes which go black from Avenging Zorn…
[Closing guitar instrumental]
Even more battle, this time with grainy images, of random moments taken from the OCs’ collective pasts.
Then just as the stanza closes, we flash back to Kha, who swings Tausend Kreuz back and fires thrusters to charge, freezing the image with the guitar strum with a crammed watercolor of him in his charging pose, his Trinity charging out from the flanks, and all over Ocs burst out from the crowd behind him.
Original Production Animesuki OC Thread Project
Text-based opening theme ficlets were one of my most daring but successful experiments in FF.net. But this was a remarkable challenge because of the sheer number of characters to consider. The chorus changes ever episode (There's that many OCs to feature) so even if they aren't in this one they'll be in the next, or the one after that.
I chose Destiny for its great beat. This video on j00t00b helped me get started. Hope you guys like it!
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Spoiler for Track 1 - Shadow on the Horizon:
Into a darkened office, Kha enters. Carim is holding something in her hand, and she seems agitated.
Kha: You called, Meister? Carim: Do you feel that you are on to something, Kha? Kha: ... Carim: So you really do. *turns to face the captain* Sorry for being roundabout on this case. Ever since I've heard rumors, and after that ghastly Whisper you spoke of, after I put two and two together, I've no idea who to trust anymore... Kha: Rest easy, my Cardinal. I'm sure that the inside of these four walls are safe. Carim: No. Not anymore, Kha. That's why only you were contacted by in secret. Kha: *nods* Carim: Take this. Kha: *takes the cube and instantly the images stored in the datacube flashed through his mind. A shady exchange between a cloaked figure and a Holy Velka pastor seems to be taking place.* What is this? Carim: 178th Administrated World, deep in Spinward territory. I know how much you hate inquisition missions, but you really have to check things out. And this is only between you and me. Not even the Circle knows of this. Kha: But why the intense secrecy that not even brethren are allow to hear? Carim: The fall of the Holy Velka Imperiallon... Kha: But that's with corruption and the sins of Man that broke the camel's back. Even the-- Carim: What if the corruption was literal? Kha: Huh? *the strange mechanical buzzing from his dream came into his ears once again.* You don't mean...? Carim: The situation, if true, has far graver circumstances than we can imagine. Not only is our Church in danger, all of Midchilda, no, all of the TSAB Ordered Space is at stake. This is a dangerous mission, and I wanted Hayate and Acous to be involved as well, but they are busy with the Relic smuggling so I couldn't trouble them... Kha: What are your orders, my Cardinal? Carim: Take the 21st and head out there. I'll give you an overt delivery mission that would see the Carryall there without arousing suspicion. Infiltrate that Church and find out as much as you can of what's going on out there. Report in secret when you get back. We'll be able to progress faster if we know just exactly what are we up against or what we're not up against. Kha: I hear and comply. Carim: I just hope this is just a bad dream. Kha: Me too. Bless you. Carim: My blessings to you too. Kha: *turns to leave* Carim: And one more thing. Kha: Yes? Carim: Be careful. If... anything goes wrong, just run. I don't wish-- Kha: *places hand on her shoulder, cutting her off* We will be alright, Carim. See you again soon.
Kha left the Church by the same secret channel he came in by, the image of a green sickly derivation of a cross topped by a ring playing back in his head.
Kha: The Corruption of the Holy Velka Imperiallon...
Spoiler for Track 1.5 - Keroko‘s Warning:
Originally posted by Keroko
*Once outside the church, Kha is halted by the form of Keroko leaning against a tree* Kha: Keroko, what's- Keroko: You've heard about the 178th? Kha: Yes. Keroko: You're going there? Kha: Naturaly. Keroko: *Moves away from the tree and faces Kha directly* Listen Kha, we've fought side by side against the Zerg, and Rogue Squadron helped taking down the Scrin air superiority back when, but if the enemy on the 178th is who I think it is, then you're about to face is something else entirely. Kha: You've fought them? Keroko: Yes, they- *Keroko's words are interupted by a buzzing comlink* Keroko here. Hayate: Keroko, we need you over here. Drones have been spotted and Nanoha and Fate are unavailable. Keroko: Dammit, I'm on the way. *she closes the link and turns back to Kha* Looks like I don't have the time, but remember two things Kha. If it moves, shoot it. Then keep shooting until it stops moving. Preferably until its no longer recognisable. And always keep an eye over your shoulder. Kha: Any particular reason? Keroko: Trust me Kha, it's the only way you'll make it back out again. I don't have your back this time, even though you will need it the most right now.
Spoiler for Track 2 - Down by the Service...:
Track 2: Down by the Service...
(Dialogue in German)
Sophia: *bleep and click of cyber scan unit* Looks like we're clear. No personnel in the area. Kha: Got it, Sofie. Al, you cloned the diary already? Allison: Yes I got it in my pack. Kha: Stick to Artei's plan alright? Now split up! 21st: Roger!
Foot falls as Allison and Kaempfer escape one way and Kha, Sophie and Artei head the other way.
Sofie: I hope they'll be alright. Artei: Aw cum on! Kaempfer's a big hunky dragon he'll take care of anything. Kha: They'll be fine. By the time we clear that last dungeon, the Carryall should be right above us-- Halt!
Silence. Then faint murmurs. Faint mechanical whirrings.
Sofie: Machines? Down here in the dun- Kha: *Whispers screaming* Oh no...!
Distant psychic scream.
Artei: Al! Kha: Al! Kaempfer! What happened? Kae: Under attack from unidentified machines. Dragon fire effective against targets, but target numerous. Request Meister to fall back immediately. Kha: Hang on we're on our way, and don't use your Dragon form! Kae: Will try. Sof: Looks like we've been noticed.
Mad mechanical whirrings
Artei: Run you twits!
Footfalls, then first sign of laserfire.
Sakura: [Gotteliches Schield!]*lasers zinging off barrier* Sof: Dauer! Load Cartridge! Dau: *bang and click*[Exprozion] Sof: Angel... Fire!
Bangs and whizzes, then a tremendous metallic crash.
Sof: It's down! They're ain't so tough. Keroko: *Words echoing in Kha's mind* Shoot until it doesn't resemble anything anymore... Kha: Don't stop firing! It's still alive! Sof: What?!
Mechanical whir, then laser fire.
Sof: Damn it another one! And that old one...! By the Light... Art: Lets just beat it! Kha: Stay behind me! Go go go!
Running up the stairs, without line of sight the machine's weapons cannot hit them.
With the longbow Dauer morphed into its dual sword mode, the Knights press into the fray. Green gause rattled Kha's barrier as the Cleric zipped around slicing as many of the black skeletons as he could.
Art: Let's leave in style! Kaze no... Kise! *glass shattering* Sof: Hur! *ruffling clothes as she jumps out* Sakura: [Triple ejection. Siegel von Righteousness] *clink of pins being pulled* Kha: (yells and throws) Danger!
A first explosion, followed by several others as the white magic reacted with the dark energies of the machines. The Church is blown apart.
Kha: Must've been full of them. Art: There's some here. *sword fight* Sof: Transform! Dau: [Sturmrage.] Sof: *Velka summoning circle spring out as she prepares to draw on the string* Reach beyond the Gate of Babylon. To me, Caladbolg!
As she tugs back on the string, a smaller square appears on the longbow as it is drawn back, and Sophia pulls a sword from the ethereal realms, letting it sit on the bow like an arrow.
Dau: *bowstring being drawn* [Armed.] Sof: Spiral Sword... Fire!
Twang, whiz, then a whole column of machines blow skyhigh.
Kha: Let's go! Sof: Ah! *resurrected machine trips her* Kha: Sofie! Sof: Let go of my leg you t****** p*** hentai! Art: Henma, Doryusen! *bang* Sof: You almost got me! Art: That's how you thank me? Kha: Those in the Church... They're coming out! Move now!
Footfalls as the roar of dragon flames grow louder. The occasional burst of gauss hitting the Carryall's shields ring out.
Kha: You melted all of them... Kae: Allie is inside. Get in I'll fly after you. Art: I'm outta here. *hops in* Sof: Seven rings that cover the fiery heavens, descend to me now! Materialize! Dau: [Rho Aias] Sof: Kha! Camper! This shield won't last forever! Kha: Kaempfer stand down. I'm right behind you. Kae: Roger.
More footfalls
Kha: We're in Art: Let's fly!
Whoosh of engines
Sof: One last parting shot... Dau: [Hrunting] Sof: Bite them, Hound of the Red Plains! FIRE!
More explosions.
Art: Phew. Hell yeah that was fun. Als: 5 mins to light speed. Kha: Head straight for the Grand Church. We better get these-- THERE'S ONE HERE!!! Everyone: WHAT?!
Long burst of fireworks, frantic shouts, then silence.
Sof: How did that get in here... Art: Nice inverted shield and bind, Boss. Now let me just take off a screw...
Slices head off and stabs it with Monohoshizao (Or Zao for short).
Art: And stay dead! Kha: It never died the in the first place. Look!
Faint whirring
Art: They never know when to stop... Sof: (chanting) ...I vanquish thee! Begone, Evil spirit!
Machine falls to pieces
Art: That works. So what now, we bring vials of holy water the next time we get back here? Sof: Don't start... Kha: Damage control! Als: Ano... Hull's breached, so we'll have to stay in our Armor desu kedo... ECS, CIWS offline. Shield's acting a little weird. But navigation still works. Kha: Keep flying. I'll try to patch the ship up. Kaempfer, Sofie, Artei, keep an eye on that bastard. Art: Ooh Captain's really pissed.
---End of Track 2---
Spoiler for Track 3 - The Plot Thickens:
Track 3 - The Plot Thickens
(dialogue in German)
This time, Kha came via the front door. Kaempfer as the cloth swabbed mechanoid in a fireman's lift over his shoulder marched alongside his meister as Artei and Sophia keep up behind them. Allie, having parked the smoking wreck of a Carryall on the front lawn, much to the chagrin of the landscapers, jogs up, hugging onto her pack in case more of those machines suddenly teleport in and grab it.
Carim swings her double doors open and usher them in. She immediate hugs them once the doors were shut.
Car: Oh I'm so relieved! The wires from 178th declared that an explosion had leveled the Church and I prayed hard that you all are okay. I'm very sorry for--
Kaempfer drops the machine on to the floor audibly, cutting her off.
Kha: Kaempfer, no need for that. (turns back to Carim) We appreciate you concern, my Meister, but it is ill-founded. We've returned in one piece, haven't we? No need to apologize when what we do is for the Church. Car: (nods mutely) What have you managed to find? Kha: Nothing concrete. *hands over the books* The diaries we've retrieved indicate that the head Confessor working hard to recruit individuals for the greater good of the Light, but really sounds weird, for the books also mention a "Monolith" where the Confessor leads a flock of new converts to. Car: And what is that?
Kaempfer unveils the catch, and Carim gasps.
Car: In the name of Harmonium what is this monstrosity?! Kha: This and several of its counterparts assaulted our operations as we were concluding the mission. They seem to possess an unprecedented recovery rate unless they've been completely melted down by Kaempfer's fire or by exorcising the spirit within these machines. Car: I heard of no machines. Just a very bad leyline explosion... Kha: They must have phased out. That's another of their abilities. Carim: (nods in thought) Okay I see, so far whatever these things we know next to nothing about them. I'm only guessing that they have something to do with the Monolith, if that's what they've been trying to prevent you from reporting. Kha, sorry to bother you again, but can you analyze this monster and see what makes it tick? If we could develope a way to stop these things from regenerating or by quickly excising the evil within, the Church should be able to suppress it without much issue. The TSAB and the public must not know of this. Kha: I understand the public but why the TSAB? Car: Knowing Hayate... Kha: ...she'd send her forces out there in an instant. Car: Or worse split themselves in two and put themselves in greater danger on two fronts. I can't risk that... Kha: I understand. Do you have a facility we could use? Car: I'm afraid not. None of the research labs have been scheduled for use, so if one is suddenly requested it'll be very obvious. Kha: Hmm... Sof: Miss Carim? Car: Yes, good Sister? Sof: I think we can ask Aurion. Kha: Sempai? I thought he was out of the country? Sof: He's probably gone back to his home just out of town for a rest break and cola before he drags himself on that trip to nowhere. He's got a stocked workshop there he might be able to help. Kha: We're going to have to find him first. Sof: Hey you forgot who's got the top grades for divination here? Art: As if there was anything you didn't get top for, maybe in the personality tests.
Sofie grinds her heel into Artei's foot, sending him jumping around in pain.
Kha: So it's settled then. Sophia, locate Aurion. Kaempfer, you take a buggy and head for Aurion's place. Once we find him, we'll explain then. I'll catch up with you all once I'm done. Sof: Where are you going, Kha? Kha: Keroko. She knows something about this. Car: The one they call the Black Dragon. I've heard of her. Yes I think she'll be helpful. But I don't wish to-- Kha: She knows, my Cardinal. Car: (agast) How's that possible? Kha: That's what I'm about to find out. Rogue Squadron might have some dealings with these machines in the past, and I know a detachment was operating in Spinward space as our sting went ahead. Car: I see. Art: *stops jumping* Er... Miss Carim? Car: Yes, Artei? Art: Can we just take a look at all the data we've gathered so far? All through this mess I only got the foggiest of idea of what in heck we are doing, even with Boss' description and sharing. Car: I agree.
A hour later, the Trinity has sifted through all the security videos, data feeds and transmission transcripts coming from that Church. Then, in a general database search, Artei stumbles upon a Device entry.
Art: Hey whaddaya know? Sofia's involved in this after all. Sof: I AM NOT! Art: Whoa there, hot shot. I never said it was you. Unless you're uh... guilty? Sof: (Vericose vein) You... Kha: What have you? Art: This Boss (flips the hovering display around. It is the picture of a device with a familiar looking cross) Remember this thing on the wall? Kha: Hmm... It is similar, but there's a small difference. Glock Heckler...? Art: One of the latest entries here says that he's encountered 'skeletal machines' before and somewhat got out of it alive. Interestingly, he also encountered "flayer" type skulls as well. Kha: Ah... (Still in thought) Where have I heard that name before...? (flashback)
Yuuno: Oh you mean Kaylin? She's not in at the moment. Some officer is profiling her at the moment. Kha: She got into trouble again? Yuu: No not since a long time. Just an old contact of hers really. Kha: Oh. Do I know him? Yuu: Glock Heckler from Investigations. Heard of him?
Kha: Kay! Art: What's with that Oba-san again? Kha: She knows Glock. Art: Oh. Kha: Can you go look her up at the Institute? Art: WHAT?! No way. You know how well me and her devices hit it off... Kha: I'd love to go myself, but time is of the essence, and only I can get through security into Rogue's base quickly. Art: As you command Boss. I better bring cartridges... And logic shields for Zao...
Carim gets off the phone.
Car: Sorry to hurry you all, but there's a Circle meeting in the boardroom in 15 minutes time. I can't leave my office unlocked... Kha: It's okay. We're leaving now.
Everyone starts gathering up papers.
Als: Ano... Oni-chan? Kha: (kneels down to the 12 year old's height) What is it? Als: What's my job? Kha: You are to go home and keep Fate company. You weren't home last night so she might be worried. We'll get you when we're moving out again. Als: But Nee-chan...! Kha: No buts alright? You've worked enough for the night. Go get some rest. I'm sure Fate would appreciate it. Als: (looks sad) Okay... Kha: (brushes her hair) That's a good girl. (stands up) All set? Everyone: Yes! Kha: Move out!
The 21st set out in different directions, Sophia and Kaempfer with the machine for the scientist Aurion, Artei for the archaeologist Kaylin, Kha for the Rogue Squadron Honor's Hold Base, and little Allison to her foster home at Riot 6 Base.
Carim paced about the still-empty boardroom, fretting. Her assistant wasn't about to arrive soon, but she had this feeling of unease. Something was missing...
In the end, she gave up. Just one more call...
Carim: Hello? Shin-chan? Is Miss Alexandra and Miss Anna there?
---End of Track 3---
Spoiler for Track 4 - Report to Carim:
Track 4 - Report to Carim Originally posted by Keroko
Keroko walks towards the St. Monarch Church, Kha in tow. At the moment she didn’t care one bit for discretion, Hayate’s mission had held her up longer then expected. She opens the doors to find a nervously passing Carim.
Carim: Keroko, I’m glad you could come on such a short notice. Keroko: Don’t worry about it, I was going to tell you this when I came here, but the mission intervened. Then Kha told me they encountered more of those drone zombies.
*Both Carim and Keroko’s eyes flicker to Kha for a moment.*
Carim: Yes, he told me you had encountered these things before. Keroko: Yes, but let’s take a seat. This will take a time to explain.
The trio sits down, and Keroko begins to explain. Keroko: It all began during a small scouting mission on the 178th world….
*dreamy flashback sound can be heard.*
Keroko: All green in this sector, we should head back and regroup with the others. 178th planet seems clear for now. Wes: (flying to her left) Roger that leader. Rogue 4: Still, it’s amazing that Commander Hayate allowed you to come, I thought you were to busy with the new unit? Keroko: It’s mostly training right now; and the occasional mission. It’ll be a while before we see any real action. Rogue 6: Still, it’s great to have you flying with us again. Rogue 8: Yeah, good to see Deathwing has lost none of her charm. Rogue 7: Nor her cuteness.
Keroko: *sighs and opens a mental link* [Wes, they’re doing it to me again.] Wes: [Well, you did up and leave one day after all. They’ve been bored ever since they had no-one to fuss over.] Keroko: [I’m the commander of this squadron and they still treat me like a kid. When I joined this squadron as an instructor, I worked hard to get you out of your miseries and did my best to train you-] Wes: [Torture, you mean] Keroko: [Details. Into a fine unit, which is now amongst the elite in the TSAB, and what do I get in return? Pats on the head and comments on my ‘cuteness’] Wes: [Well, you are the youngest in the squadron, even if you’re our commander. You’re like our little sister. *He looks at her with a grin* Our little Deathwing.] Keroko: [… I hate you Wes.]
*A burst of static interrupts any further conversation* Rogue 12: Commander! We have possible problems, source is unknown but it’s certainly not of this world! Keroko: Copy that twelve. Wes, Tycho, grab onto me. We need to hurry considering we’re farthest away. Wes & Tycho: Ma’am! Keroko: *checks whether the two are holding on tight before nodding* Artherion, cartridge load! Artherion: [Hyperdrive.] *A huge red aura surrounds the trio and they blast of at incredible speed.*
They soon arrive to see the rest of Rogue Squadron assembled at what appears to be a cave mound.
Keroko: *Glances around* So what do we have? Wes: Looks like a cave. Tycho: *shakes head* That cave was not made by nature. Wes: *Turns to Tycho* How so? Tycho: *Points at the entrance walls* Those walls are too straight, only intelligent hands could carve something like this out. Keroko: All right, let’s go in then.
The squadron enters into the cave. As they ascend deeper and deeper, they slowly begin to realize that this is more then just a cave. Strange pyramids seem to stand at selected places in the cavern, and the place radiated a certain aura of death.
Keroko: *murmurs* This is no cave… it’s like a tomb. Rogue 4: Commander!
*A ripping sound can be heard*
Keroko: *Reacting in a reflex* Forcefield!
*The silent cavern turns into a mixture of ripping, cracking and banging sounds as a strange bolt of green energy makes contact with the red shield.*
Keroko: Take cover! Tycho: *Ducks behind a nearby rock* What was that?! Wes: From what I saw, gray, metal, and carrying a really big gun. Keroko: Drones? Tycho: They sure didn’t look like any of the ones you are hunting.
*more cracking sounds can be heard as multiple bolts start chewing up the rocks*
Wes: Dammit, there’s more of them? Keroko: *leaps from behind the rock* Return fire! Snipe Shooter!
As one scarlet beam of energy surges forward and pierces three of the drones, many other multicolored bolts follow with a deafening roar.
Keroko: Press on! We need to know where the hell these things are coming from!
The full frontal wall of spells the Rogues weaved downed drone after drone. Despite the fat that the Rogues had no idea who they were up against, they seemed to be on the winning hand. Finally, the flow of drones seemed to stop.
Keroko: Two, Status! Wes: twelve and thirteen took shots to the arm, and by the looks of it it’s very painful. Their weapons seem to flay the very flesh of ones bones. Four took a shot to the shoulder, and six was hit in the side. He’s going to need medical attention. Keroko: *Sighs* Right, Five, patch them up for now. We need to find out where these things are coming from and get the hell out of here. Rogue 5: I’ll get right on-
He is suddenly interrupted from finishing the rest of the sentence as a green burst of energy rips through his chest, setting his body ablaze with green energy. The rogues watch in horror as the skin is torn of his charred skeleton.
Keroko: Zhar! Wes: Where the hell did that come from? Tycho: Behind us! Keroko: *Runs up to the standing metal skeleton and swings Artherion in an upward, lobbing of his head. She shifts the weight and rams the axe-like device through the side of its chest* Where was that bastard hiding! Wes: Around us!
The Rogues watch in horror as several of the machines pulled themselves back together. Holes make by accurate shots close, tears are mended, some of the mechanic monstrosities even re-attach their own limbs as if they never even left their owner.
Keroko: Run! Blast a way through their lines, towards the exit!
A hail of spells once again blasted a hole in the line, but the Rogues, tired and wounded, can not fully escape the enemies, who are now closer then ever. One of the Rogues managed to get a little close to one of the drones. He prepares for a spell, expecting the machine to level his weapon at him and fire. Instead, the metallic zombie raises his weapon high and struck. Completely not anticipating the attack, the Rogue lost half his shoulder and was send skirting backwards, where another of the strange drones puts a foot on his chest, and applies enough pressure to instantly kill the man.
Keroko: *curses* How much farther! Rogue 6: Just a little bit, around this turn and- aaaah!
A scream silences any more words, as a gigantic scythe pierces the man’s chest. Moments later he is ruthlessly tossed aside and a giant floating phantom comes into view. Cloaked in grey, the bottom tattered; a hood covers his face yet fails to hide a malicious grin, a scythe in hand.
For a moment, I was reminded of the earth tales of the grim reaper.
Keroko: *glaring at the newcomer* Wes, get them out of here. Wes: Are you sure, Keroko? He looks different from the others. Stronger, too. Keroko: That’s why I am staying and you are going. *shifts her glare to Wes* and that’s an order. Wes: …. Yes ma’am.
Keroko: *Shifts her glare back to the hooded figure* Artherion, Ethereal Mode! Artherion: [Activating.]
*The two blades on Artherion turn downwards until they’re both at a 120 degree angle, then a third blade appears at the top.*
Artherion: [Releasing seals.]
*A pattern of seals appear all over Keroko’s body, slowly they begin to fade*
*Two wrist guards appear to shield her wrist and forearm, and her skirt gains several armor plates. A diamond shaped hole appears in the cloth her back, from which two black ethereal wings sprout.*
As soon as I had finished shifting to Ethereal Mode, I immediately began casting an Ion Cannon Breaker. I was expecting the creature I was facing to attack, like its predecessors had done. I did not expect the creature to speak to me.
Hooded figure: Power… such dark power… you are an avatar, are you not? Keroko: *blinks* What? Hooded figure: Yes… I sense a power greater then yours, and yet you command it at will… identify. Keroko: Keroko… Deathwing Keroko…
It was a simple error, a slip of the tongue. Yet the creature seemed to enjoy it.
Hooded figure: Deathwing… yes, I shall remember, and we shall meet again, deathwing. Keroko: Like hell we will. Ion Cannon… BREAKER!!!!
*A huge explosion shakes the cavern as the red-black beam tears through its stone halls*
Keroko: Huff… huff… Wes: Commander! Hold on, I’ll transport you to the ship!
*In the medbay*
Keroko: Thanks Griff. Griff (Rogue 12): I’m no Zhar, commander, but I’m glad I could help. Wes: So what now? Keroko: *Sighs* Wes, you get this to the TSAB, as soon as you can. Contact Tycho, and send him to the Infinite Library. Tell Yuuno I send him. Wes: And you? Keroko: I’m going to Carim. She has to know about this too. Wes: That serious? Keroko: Wes, we just lost three Rogues! Three! Even against the Zerg we never lost three Rogues in a single battle. No, this has to go everywhere. The Velkan order has people I trust, and they need to know this too.
*Another dreamy flashback sound can be heard*
Keroko: And that’s how I came here. Unfortunately I only had enough time to warn Kha, luckily his team made it out better then mine. Carim: Keroko… Keroko: *clenching the fabric of her skirt* Three Rogues Carim. Zhar, Rutan, Reac, all three of them gone… Carim: … Kha: … Carim:*walks over to the distressed girl and pulls her into an embrace* I know it hurts, Keroko. But remember, though you may have lost three friends, you saved nine others. You are not alone. Keroko: *breaks down and starts crying on Carim’s shoulder.*
Released 9-6-2007
Spoiler for Track 5 - The 21st makes their moves:
Track 5 - The 21st makes their moves
Kha: Keroko went back to her base after we finished talking as tonight was the last day of the wake for the lost Rogue wingmen. It was a standard Mid Childa state funeral, the Velka clerics weren’t involved, otherwise I’d volunteer myself, especially when I knew several of the honorable Rogue squad men. The Light bless their souls…
Meanwhile, as Artei worked his way deeper towards the core of the Infinite Library to catch Yuuno and then shake Kaylin's whereabouts out of him, he had Zao running routines to trawl the incident reports coming into the TSAB mainframe. The device has been snagging many false leads as the boy had set the search criteria to grab any report with the keywords he specified, and he had been dismissing them without as much of a second look. Then quite unexpected, the big one bit.
Artei: Hey Boss, got a minute? There's something here you got to see...
Kha: He explained it as succinctly as possible
Kha: Mobile 13 disappeared?! Art: Yeap and they contacted "skeletal machines" as well, then according to one of the guys, one of the skulls started some mumb-jumbo with big brawns of courage there, then that was the last time the TSAB had contact with Mobile 13. Kha: Wait. How does a whole unit disappear just like that?! Art: It was a unit of 1. Kha: What? Art: This Dan Brown's some sort of walking Lost Logia, and his powers are just insane. I certain don't wanna take his Bronzion Hammer head on. Anyway's his head is on the chopping board with a big bounty now on the skin of his neck. Kha: You don't suppose he... defected? Art: I hope not. I certainly hope not... Kha: Have you reached the Library? Art: Almost there Boss. Kha: Good, go find Kaylin I'll work my way from the Grand Church.
Carim: Did I hear Lost Logia? Kha: Yes, my Cardinal. This superweapon of the higher ups went missing after contact with the skulls we ran into. Carim: That means Nanoha's unit has been informed! Kha: Oh no. Carim: Don't worry, I know what to do.
A while later...
Rein: Hayate-chan! This memo just got in. Hayate: Searching for a Type-SSS Lost Logia?! Rein: That's why the Brass are calling all the best they've got in on this mission-- Hang on, something's just in (tiny Logia listens in) Huh...? All TSAB units stand down from the case? Carim volunteers her Trinity to capture the Lost Logia...? Um... Hai, received... Hayate: That is strange...
Kha was still coordinating his Trinity from Carim's office when the Cardinal's vid screen. She answers.
Carim: ...Yes, I know Hayate. Don't worry take it as a friend's favor... Where did I get the help from? The Trinity's have been vital in aiding the Church's operations and this time the Optimus was available to take the job, especially this has something to do with the Church... We'll be fine Hayate just focus on those Drones-- Kha: Meister Hayate, I'm personally overseeing this mission, so you don't have to be involved. Hay: Kha-chan? Oh you're back! Why didn't you drop by? Fate-chan seems to miss you. Kha: I've been busy. It's alright, my Trinity is more than able to retrieve this Logia. Hay: I'll leave this matter in your hands then. But remember, all of us are in this together, alright? Any trouble just call and we'll be right over. Kha: Yes Yagami-san. Bless you. Carim: Bless you. Hay: My blessings to you all too. (terminates call)
Both of them let out a breath.
Carim: That was close. Kha: Indeed. Now to process the clues…
Psycall from Sophia.
Kha: Hi, Sofie. Sophia: Hi, Kha~~. I found Aurion. But you won’t believe where I found his sorry a$$. Kha: Where? Sof: A third grade brothel. So much for heading out on research. Kha: WHAT?! Aur: (sticks head in yelling) No way in hell! Kha-chan, what kind of a subordinate do you have?! She not only dragged me out of a good hobby store she put these binds on me and said I’m under arrest for crimes against the Church! What is going on here?! Kha: Somehow I‘m more inclined to believe Sempai here… Sofie, unbind him. He’s not a prisoner you know, what was that for? Sof: I had to make it believable to cover me dragging him off suddenly. Anyway now that we’re out of sight from the public, (turns to Aurion smirking) I suppose I could undo your manacles. I got my revenge too. ^^
Phwing of the binds disappearing
Sof: There. Aur: Thank you… Sof: (still wearing the Tohsaka smirk) Appreciate it. Kha: My apologies, Sempai. (to Sophia) Is Kaempfer at Sempai‘s lab? Sof: Yeap. So far the skulls don’t look like they are intending on collecting their little friend. Either that or they’re really scared of Dragonfire. After all, he turned them all into puddles of green and black muck back there. Kha: I hope he is safe too. Sempai, do you know what’s going on? Aur: Like I would in Hell! I know you guys didn’t drag me off without a good reason. Kha: I see. All I’m about to say is Top Secret: Ears Only, so be careful after this. Aur: I got it. The tech department’s got its fair share of skeletons in the closet anyway.
Kha: I made it brief of our encounter and how we managed to capture one of the machines
Aur: And so that’s how we have Arnie on our hands? Kha: Who’s Arnie? Aur: That machine. Kha: (incredulously) Uh-huh… Aur: Don’t worry! I’ll see if I can’t figure out what makes Arnie tick! By the way, can I do other things with him? Kha: Like? Aur: You know, make him sing “I love you”, dance the Macarena, shoot the other machines for us… Both Velka: WHAT?! Aur: Boy do I also want to make him be able to melt into mercury! Kha: Erm… That’s rather dangerous, if you try to boot him up. Aur: No fear of that! My scanners will make sure everything is safe before I attempt anything drastic. Kha: Your grinning like this is scaring me, Sempai… Sophia is it okay to accompany him for a while? In case that thing turns out not inert? Sof: I’m pretty sure that thing isn’t going to work ever again, but yeah I suppose I have to wait until the next Carryall is ready… Aur: KHA!!!!!! Are you nuts?! Her with me?! Kha: I’m sorry, Sempai, she’s the only one in the area at the moment. Kaempfer would be there to assist as well, and would be able to balance her overreactions-- Sof: Just what did you mean by that, der Kleriker?! Kha: Just trying to calm Sempai… Sof: You’re lucky I’m not there to ‘harisen’ you! Kha: Me too. At least it’s not seku-hara… Sof: Pardon? Kha: It’s n-nothing. Sof: Here we are. I’ll report in later. Wilco over. Kha: Roger out.
Car: (giggling) Kha: What’s so funny? Car: I know Sophia as a very serious person who is respectful of the higher ranks, but the way she treats you is very atypical. Kha: It was my wish that my Trinity treat me as a comrade rather than an officer. Car: No, no, no… I’m saying that this might mean something. Kha: Um… Okay. Car: You really are clueless.
Another psycall labelled urgent comes in. Kha picks up hurriedly.
Kha: Allison! What's the matter? Als: Oni-chan, have you had dinner? Kha: Huh? You called me for that…? (Checks watch.) Good Empress I clean forgot. Als: Oni-chan‘s always like that when I‘m not around to make sure you eat. Kha: Als: It‘s too late for me to cook something. Shall we have Tao‘s? Kha: That‘ll be good. Thanks Allie. Als: No problem! See ya, Oni-chan! Kha: Bless ya.
Hangs up.
Car: Both of you are really like siblings Kha: Really? I don‘t think the hair helps. Car: Yes that would distinguish the two of you a lot! (laughs) But I‘m glad she‘s doing okay now. She was such a wreck after being literally uprooted to safety. Kha: I thank you for giving me this opportunity. I hope to take her to Earth and find out what happened there, if its okay with you. Car: And I thought you never went against anyone’s wishes no matter how absurd! The Aces really have been teaching you a lot of things. Kha: I guess so… Well I got to go now. I don’t want to keep Allie waiting, or she‘ll start scolding me. Car: Enjoy your dinner, Kha. Thank you for your hard work. Kha: Don‘t mention it. We’ll set out again tomorrow, but don’t be afraid to notify us of anything new. Car: I will. Bless you. Kha: My blessings to you too.
Kha: With that I headed back to the Trinity administration office to see what else I could find. Too bad I couldn’t make it for the Rogue squadron’s wake, but I will be there for the final send-off. In the mean time, the sunset I drove home in was beautiful and I hope it was too for the servicemen who lost their lives fighting this vile scourge.
Released 11-7-2007
Spoiler for Track 6 - A Surprise Visit:
Track 6 - A Surprise Visit
Kha had his eyes closed in his quiet office meditating when he heard the door open.
Als: Oni-chan? Kha: (stretches) NNng... Yes come in. Erio: Meister! Kha: Erio? What are you--? Caro: Hello, Kha-san! Kha: Eh?! (hurriedly tidies up his table and stows the "Confidential" business away.) Erm... Hi! WHy don't you guys take a seat at the couch. I'll be right over... Fate: Don't surprise him like that. (turns to Kha) Sorry about that we should've knocked... Kha: (stands up hurriedly, looking worse for wear since he hadn't changed out from the collapse of the Hand of Danaan) Oh no bother really! Fate: No you're not! (strides over and pats his shoulders, kicking the dust free) what happened to you?! Als: (reacts quickly) Oni-chan! I'll go put the takeaway on the table K? Erio-kun, Caro-chan this way please! Chibikko: Hai! Kha: Keroko and I had a little fight and we sort of blew up one of the foundations... Fate: Over? Kha: Well she thought I built the thing that attacked Erio. Fate: Now that you mentioned it, that was a Wizard park... Kha: No. Way. Will. I. Ever. Build a pack like that. It's completely wrong! Trust me! Fate: (smiling) If I don't trust you, then who will? Kha: ... Thanks... Fate: I thought you might be hungry, and I heard Allie was getting some takeaway, so I thought maybe we could have dinner over here for once. Kha: It's okay really. Let's go.
Als: Oni-chan! Kha: Yes? Als: Ano... I can't reach that cabinet for the dishes... Kha: Grow taller then. (ruffles her hair as he passes) Als: (retorts) Oni-chan!!! Kha: Here you go.
Erio: Meister! You really should try this! The cooks Hayate hired are the best! Kha: I've never seen this before... Pink... jellyworms? Erio: Eh... it's spagetti Meister... Kha: Looks... sweet. Caro: Maybe we can have this too! Als: Caro-chan! Is that sushi?! Caro: It's my first try since Fate-san taught me how to make one so... Hope its not too bad. Fate: Oh you did make it! It look's really nice. Kha: I'm sure its alright. Caro: Ah... Erio: Shall we start Meister? Kha: Just give me a second. Quick moment of grace... (Some silence) There! All: Itadaki-masu!
Kha: Fate... Erio... Yes I have been very busy, and I've been unable to see both of you often... I'm out there protecting everyone, and this is what makes it worth it. But still... I learn that a meal, though simple, has much meaning when a family can sit down and share it. I guess I should take a break once in a while...
[Author's Note]
"Pink jellyworms" was what I thought when I saw the Forwards eating the stuff back in Epi 6 I think.
I'll be posting future SS and associated media in this thread at this post so as to keep the OC thread on topic. I might turn this into a full fic someday, if I got time.
For those who've been wondering what I meant about that CrosyS thing, here it is, a repost from the OC Thread:
Spoiler for Track 1 - Shadow on the Horizon:
Into a darkened office, Kha enters. Carim is holding something in her hand, and she seems agitated.
Kha: You called, Meister? Carim: Do you feel that you are on to something, Kha? Kha: ... Carim: So you really do. *turns to face the captain* Sorry for being roundabout on this case. Ever since I've heard rumors, and after that ghastly Whisper you spoke of, after I put two and two together, I've no idea who to trust anymore... Kha: Rest easy, my Cardinal. I'm sure that the inside of these four walls are safe. Carim: No. Not anymore, Kha. That's why only you were contacted by in secret. Kha: *nods* Carim: Take this. Kha: *takes the cube and instantly the images stored in the datacube flashed through his mind. A shady exchange between a cloaked figure and a Holy Velka pastor seems to be taking place.* What is this? Carim: 178th Administrated World, deep in Spinward territory. I know how much you hate inquisition missions, but you really have to check things out. And this is only between you and me. Not even the Circle knows of this. Kha: But why the intense secrecy that not even brethren are allow to hear? Carim: The fall of the Holy Velka Imperiallon... Kha: But that's with corruption and the sins of Man that broke the camel's back. Even the-- Carim: What if the corruption was literal? Kha: Huh? *the strange mechanical buzzing from his dream came into his ears once again.* You don't mean...? Carim: The situation, if true, has far graver circumstances than we can imagine. Not only is our Church in danger, all of Midchilda, no, all of the TSAB Ordered Space is at stake. This is a dangerous mission, and I wanted Hayate and Acous to be involved as well, but they are busy with the Relic smuggling so I couldn't trouble them... Kha: What are your orders, my Cardinal? Carim: Take the 21st and head out there. I'll give you an overt delivery mission that would see the Carryall there without arousing suspicion. Infiltrate that Church and find out as much as you can of what's going on out there. Report in secret when you get back. We'll be able to progress faster if we know just exactly what are we up against or what we're not up against. Kha: I hear and comply. Carim: I just hope this is just a bad dream. Kha: Me too. Bless you. Carim: My blessings to you too. Kha: *turns to leave* Carim: And one more thing. Kha: Yes? Carim: Be careful. If... anything goes wrong, just run. I don't wish-- Kha: *places hand on her shoulder, cutting her off* We will be alright, Carim. See you again soon.
Kha left the Church by the same secret channel he came in by, the image of a green sickly derivation of a cross topped by a ring playing back in his head.
Kha: The Corruption of the Holy Velka Imperiallon...
Spoiler for Track 1.5 - Keroko‘s Warning:
Originally posted by Keroko
*Once outside the church, Kha is halted by the form of Keroko leaning against a tree* Kha: Keroko, what's- Keroko: You've heard about the 178th? Kha: Yes. Keroko: You're going there? Kha: Naturaly. Keroko: *Moves away from the tree and faces Kha directly* Listen Kha, we've fought side by side against the Zerg, and Rogue Squadron helped taking down the Scrin air superiority back when, but if the enemy on the 178th is who I think it is, then you're about to face is something else entirely. Kha: You've fought them? Keroko: Yes, they- *Keroko's words are interupted by a buzzing comlink* Keroko here. Hayate: Keroko, we need you over here. Drones have been spotted and Nanoha and Fate are unavailable. Keroko: Dammit, I'm on the way. *she closes the link and turns back to Kha* Looks like I don't have the time, but remember two things Kha. If it moves, shoot it. Then keep shooting until it stops moving. Preferably until its no longer recognisable. And always keep an eye over your shoulder. Kha: Any particular reason? Keroko: Trust me Kha, it's the only way you'll make it back out again. I don't have your back this time, even though you will need it the most right now.
Spoiler for Track 2 - Down by the Service...:
Track 2: Down by the Service...
(Dialogue in German)
Sophia: *bleep and click of cyber scan unit* Looks like we're clear. No personnel in the area. Kha: Got it, Sofie. Al, you cloned the diary already? Allison: Yes I got it in my pack. Kha: Stick to Artei's plan alright? Now split up! 21st: Roger!
Foot falls as Allison and Kaempfer escape one way and Kha, Sophie and Artei head the other way.
Sofie: I hope they'll be alright. Artei: Aw cum on! Kaempfer's a big hunky dragon he'll take care of anything. Kha: They'll be fine. By the time we clear that last dungeon, the Carryall should be right above us-- Halt!
Silence. Then faint murmurs. Faint mechanical whirrings.
Sofie: Machines? Down here in the dun- Kha: *Whispers screaming* Oh no...!
Distant psychic scream.
Artei: Al! Kha: Al! Kaempfer! What happened? Kae: Under attack from unidentified machines. Dragon fire effective against targets, but target numerous. Request Meister to fall back immediately. Kha: Hang on we're on our way, and don't use your Dragon form! Kae: Will try. Sof: Looks like we've been noticed.
Mad mechanical whirrings
Artei: Run you twits!
Footfalls, then first sign of laserfire.
Sakura: [Gotteliches Schield!]*lasers zinging off barrier* Sof: Dauer! Load Cartridge! Dau: *bang and click*[Exprozion] Sof: Angel... Fire!
Bangs and whizzes, then a tremendous metallic crash.
Sof: It's down! They're ain't so tough. Keroko: *Words echoing in Kha's mind* Shoot until it doesn't resemble anything anymore... Kha: Don't stop firing! It's still alive! Sof: What?!
Mechanical whir, then laser fire.
Sof: Damn it another one! And that old one...! By the Light... Art: Lets just beat it! Kha: Stay behind me! Go go go!
Running up the stairs, without line of sight the machine's weapons cannot hit them.
With the longbow Dauer morphed into its dual sword mode, the Knights press into the fray. Green gause rattled Kha's barrier as the Cleric zipped around slicing as many of the black skeletons as he could.
Art: Let's leave in style! Kaze no... Kise! *glass shattering* Sof: Hur! *ruffling clothes as she jumps out* Sakura: [Triple ejection. Siegel von Righteousness] *clink of pins being pulled* Kha: (yells and throws) Danger!
A first explosion, followed by several others as the white magic reacted with the dark energies of the machines. The Church is blown apart.
Kha: Must've been full of them. Art: There's some here. *sword fight* Sof: Transform! Dau: [Sturmrage.] Sof: *Velka summoning circle spring out as she prepares to draw on the string* Reach beyond the Gate of Babylon. To me, Caladbolg!
As she tugs back on the string, a smaller square appears on the longbow as it is drawn back, and Sophia pulls a sword from the ethereal realms, letting it sit on the bow like an arrow.
Dau: *bowstring being drawn* [Armed.] Sof: Spiral Sword... Fire!
Twang, whiz, then a whole column of machines blow skyhigh.
Kha: Let's go! Sof: Ah! *resurrected machine trips her* Kha: Sofie! Sof: Let go of my leg you t****** p*** hentai! Art: Henma, Doryusen! *bang* Sof: You almost got me! Art: That's how you thank me? Kha: Those in the Church... They're coming out! Move now!
Footfalls as the roar of dragon flames grow louder. The occasional burst of gauss hitting the Carryall's shields ring out.
Kha: You melted all of them... Kae: Allie is inside. Get in I'll fly after you. Art: I'm outta here. *hops in* Sof: Seven rings that cover the fiery heavens, descend to me now! Materialize! Dau: [Rho Aias] Sof: Kha! Camper! This shield won't last forever! Kha: Kaempfer stand down. I'm right behind you. Kae: Roger.
More footfalls
Kha: We're in Art: Let's fly!
Whoosh of engines
Sof: One last parting shot... Dau: [Hrunting] Sof: Bite them, Hound of the Red Plains! FIRE!
More explosions.
Art: Phew. Hell yeah that was fun. Als: 5 mins to light speed. Kha: Head straight for the Grand Church. We better get these-- THERE'S ONE HERE!!! Everyone: WHAT?!
Long burst of fireworks, frantic shouts, then silence.
Sof: How did that get in here... Art: Nice inverted shield and bind, Boss. Now let me just take off a screw...
Slices head off and stabs it with Monohoshizao (Or Zao for short).
Art: And stay dead! Kha: It never died the in the first place. Look!
Faint whirring
Art: They never know when to stop... Sof: (chanting) ...I vanquish thee! Begone, Evil spirit!
Machine falls to pieces
Art: That works. So what now, we bring vials of holy water the next time we get back here? Sof: Don't start... Kha: Damage control! Als: Ano... Hull's breached, so we'll have to stay in our Armor desu kedo... ECS, CIWS offline. Shield's acting a little weird. But navigation still works. Kha: Keep flying. I'll try to patch the ship up. Kaempfer, Sofie, Artei, keep an eye on that bastard. Art: Ooh Captain's really pissed.
---End of Track 2---
Spoiler for Track 3 - The Plot Thickens:
Track 3 - The Plot Thickens
(dialogue in German)
This time, Kha came via the front door. Kaempfer as the cloth swabbed mechanoid in a fireman's lift over his shoulder marched alongside his meister as Artei and Sophia keep up behind them. Allie, having parked the smoking wreck of a Carryall on the front lawn, much to the chagrin of the landscapers, jogs up, hugging onto her pack in case more of those machines suddenly teleport in and grab it.
Carim swings her double doors open and usher them in. She immediate hugs them once the doors were shut.
Car: Oh I'm so relieved! The wires from 178th declared that an explosion had leveled the Church and I prayed hard that you all are okay. I'm very sorry for--
Kaempfer drops the machine on to the floor audibly, cutting her off.
Kha: Kaempfer, no need for that. (turns back to Carim) We appreciate you concern, my Meister, but it is ill-founded. We've returned in one piece, haven't we? No need to apologize when what we do is for the Church. Car: (nods mutely) What have you managed to find? Kha: Nothing concrete. *hands over the books* The diaries we've retrieved indicate that the head Confessor working hard to recruit individuals for the greater good of the Light, but really sounds weird, for the books also mention a "Monolith" where the Confessor leads a flock of new converts to. Car: And what is that?
Kaempfer unveils the catch, and Carim gasps.
Car: In the name of Harmonium what is this monstrosity?! Kha: This and several of its counterparts assaulted our operations as we were concluding the mission. They seem to possess an unprecedented recovery rate unless they've been completely melted down by Kaempfer's fire or by exorcising the spirit within these machines. Car: I heard of no machines. Just a very bad leyline explosion... Kha: They must have phased out. That's another of their abilities. Carim: (nods in thought) Okay I see, so far whatever these things we know next to nothing about them. I'm only guessing that they have something to do with the Monolith, if that's what they've been trying to prevent you from reporting. Kha, sorry to bother you again, but can you analyze this monster and see what makes it tick? If we could develope a way to stop these things from regenerating or by quickly excising the evil within, the Church should be able to suppress it without much issue. The TSAB and the public must not know of this. Kha: I understand the public but why the TSAB? Car: Knowing Hayate... Kha: ...she'd send her forces out there in an instant. Car: Or worse split themselves in two and put themselves in greater danger on two fronts. I can't risk that... Kha: I understand. Do you have a facility we could use? Car: I'm afraid not. None of the research labs have been scheduled for use, so if one is suddenly requested it'll be very obvious. Kha: Hmm... Sof: Miss Carim? Car: Yes, good Sister? Sof: I think we can ask Aurion. Kha: Sempai? I thought he was out of the country? Sof: He's probably gone back to his home just out of town for a rest break and cola before he drags himself on that trip to nowhere. He's got a stocked workshop there he might be able to help. Kha: We're going to have to find him first. Sof: Hey you forgot who's got the top grades for divination here? Art: As if there was anything you didn't get top for, maybe in the personality tests.
Sofie grinds her heel into Artei's foot, sending him jumping around in pain.
Kha: So it's settled then. Sophia, locate Aurion. Kaempfer, you take a buggy and head for Aurion's place. Once we find him, we'll explain then. I'll catch up with you all once I'm done. Sof: Where are you going, Kha? Kha: Keroko. She knows something about this. Car: The one they call the Black Dragon. I've heard of her. Yes I think she'll be helpful. But I don't wish to-- Kha: She knows, my Cardinal. Car: (agast) How's that possible? Kha: That's what I'm about to find out. Rogue Squadron might have some dealings with these machines in the past, and I know a detachment was operating in Spinward space as our sting went ahead. Car: I see. Art: *stops jumping* Er... Miss Carim? Car: Yes, Artei? Art: Can we just take a look at all the data we've gathered so far? All through this mess I only got the foggiest of idea of what in heck we are doing, even with Boss' description and sharing. Car: I agree.
A hour later, the Trinity has sifted through all the security videos, data feeds and transmission transcripts coming from that Church. Then, in a general database search, Artei stumbles upon a Device entry.
Art: Hey whaddaya know? Sofia's involved in this after all. Sof: I AM NOT! Art: Whoa there, hot shot. I never said it was you. Unless you're uh... guilty? Sof: (Vericose vein) You... Kha: What have you? Art: This Boss (flips the hovering display around. It is the picture of a device with a familiar looking cross) Remember this thing on the wall? Kha: Hmm... It is similar, but there's a small difference. Glock Heckler...? Art: One of the latest entries here says that he's encountered 'skeletal machines' before and somewhat got out of it alive. Interestingly, he also encountered "flayer" type skulls as well. Kha: Ah... (Still in thought) Where have I heard that name before...? (flashback)
Yuuno: Oh you mean Kaylin? She's not in at the moment. Some officer is profiling her at the moment. Kha: She got into trouble again? Yuu: No not since a long time. Just an old contact of hers really. Kha: Oh. Do I know him? Yuu: Glock Heckler from Investigations. Heard of him?
Kha: Kay! Art: What's with that Oba-san again? Kha: She knows Glock. Art: Oh. Kha: Can you go look her up at the Institute? Art: WHAT?! No way. You know how well me and her devices hit it off... Kha: I'd love to go myself, but time is of the essence, and only I can get through security into Rogue's base quickly. Art: As you command Boss. I better bring cartridges... And logic shields for Zao...
Carim gets off the phone.
Car: Sorry to hurry you all, but there's a Circle meeting in the boardroom in 15 minutes time. I can't leave my office unlocked... Kha: It's okay. We're leaving now.
Everyone starts gathering up papers.
Als: Ano... Oni-chan? Kha: (kneels down to the 12 year old's height) What is it? Als: What's my job? Kha: You are to go home and keep Cass and Alex company. You weren't home last night while both of them had their day off so I think they'd be worried. We'll get you when we're moving out again. Als: But Cass and Alex they are leaving...! Kha: No buts alright? You've worked enough for the night. Go get some rest. Even if it's some time, it's still time. I'm sure Cass would appreciate it. Als: (looks sad) Okay... Kha: (brushes her hair) That's a good girl. (stands up) All set? Everyone: Yes! Kha: Move out!
The 21st set out in different directions, Sophia and Kaempfer with the machine for the scientist Aurion, Artei for the archaeologist Kaylin, Kha for the Rogue Squadron Honor's Hold Base, and little Allison to her foster home.
Cassandra: (Getting ready to leave for work. Alex has already left.) Hi honey. Something happened at the investigation? Allison: Um, it's nothing... Cassandra: (kneels down and hugs the girl) Now whats the problem? Allison: Promise you won't tell anyone I told you this? Cass: Depending on what it is Alex might have to know. Allison: Erm... Okay... It's like this...
Meanwhile...
Carim paced about the still-empty boardroom, fretting. Her assistant wasn't about to arrive soon, but she had this feeling of unease. Something was missing...
In the end, she gave up. Just one more call...
Carim: Hello? Shin-chan? Is Miss Alexandra and Miss Anna there?
---End of Track 3---
Spoiler for Track 4 - Report to Carim:
Track 4 - Report to Carim Originally posted by Keroko
Keroko walks towards the St. Monarch Church, Kha in tow. At the moment she didn’t care one bit for discretion, Hayate’s mission had held her up longer then expected. She opens the doors to find a nervously passing Carim.
Carim: Keroko, I’m glad you could come on such a short notice. Keroko: Don’t worry about it, I was going to tell you this when I came here, but the mission intervened. Then Kha told me they encountered more of those drone zombies.
*Both Carim and Keroko’s eyes flicker to Kha for a moment.*
Carim: Yes, he told me you had encountered these things before. Keroko: Yes, but let’s take a seat. This will take a time to explain.
The trio sits down, and Keroko begins to explain. Keroko: It all began during a small scouting mission on the 178th world….
*dreamy flashback sound can be heard.*
Keroko: All green in this sector, we should head back and regroup with the others. 178th planet seems clear for now. Wes: (flying to her left) Roger that leader. Rogue 4: Still, it’s amazing that Commander Hayate allowed you to come, I thought you were to busy with the new unit? Keroko: It’s mostly training right now; and the occasional mission. It’ll be a while before we see any real action. Rogue 6: Still, it’s great to have you flying with us again. Rogue 8: Yeah, good to see Deathwing has lost none of her charm. Rogue 7: Nor her cuteness.
Keroko: *sighs and opens a mental link* [Wes, they’re doing it to me again.] Wes: [Well, you did up and leave one day after all. They’ve been bored ever since they had no-one to fuss over.] Keroko: [I’m the commander of this squadron and they still treat me like a kid. When I joined this squadron as an instructor, I worked hard to get you out of your miseries and did my best to train you-] Wes: [Torture, you mean] Keroko: [Details. Into a fine unit, which is now amongst the elite in the TSAB, and what do I get in return? Pats on the head and comments on my ‘cuteness’] Wes: [Well, you are the youngest in the squadron, even if you’re our commander. You’re like our little sister. *He looks at her with a grin* Our little Deathwing.] Keroko: [… I hate you Wes.]
*A burst of static interrupts any further conversation* Rogue 12: Commander! We have possible problems, source is unknown but it’s certainly not of this world! Keroko: Copy that twelve. Wes, Tycho, grab onto me. We need to hurry considering we’re farthest away. Wes & Tycho: Ma’am! Keroko: *checks whether the two are holding on tight before nodding* Artherion, cartridge load! Artherion: [Hyperdrive.] *A huge red aura surrounds the trio and they blast of at incredible speed.*
They soon arrive to see the rest of Rogue Squadron assembled at what appears to be a cave mound.
Keroko: *Glances around* So what do we have? Wes: Looks like a cave. Tycho: *shakes head* That cave was not made by nature. Wes: *Turns to Tycho* How so? Tycho: *Points at the entrance walls* Those walls are too straight, only intelligent hands could carve something like this out. Keroko: All right, let’s go in then.
The squadron enters into the cave. As they ascend deeper and deeper, they slowly begin to realize that this is more then just a cave. Strange pyramids seem to stand at selected places in the cavern, and the place radiated a certain aura of death.
Keroko: *murmurs* This is no cave… it’s like a tomb. Rogue 4: Commander!
*A ripping sound can be heard*
Keroko: *Reacting in a reflex* Forcefield!
*The silent cavern turns into a mixture of ripping, cracking and banging sounds as a strange bolt of green energy makes contact with the red shield.*
Keroko: Take cover! Tycho: *Ducks behind a nearby rock* What was that?! Wes: From what I saw, gray, metal, and carrying a really big gun. Keroko: Drones? Tycho: They sure didn’t look like any of the ones you are hunting.
*more cracking sounds can be heard as multiple bolts start chewing up the rocks*
Wes: Dammit, there’s more of them? Keroko: *leaps from behind the rock* Return fire! Snipe Shooter!
As one scarlet beam of energy surges forward and pierces three of the drones, many other multicolored bolts follow with a deafening roar.
Keroko: Press on! We need to know where the hell these things are coming from!
The full frontal wall of spells the Rogues weaved downed drone after drone. Despite the fat that the Rogues had no idea who they were up against, they seemed to be on the winning hand. Finally, the flow of drones seemed to stop.
Keroko: Two, Status! Wes: twelve and thirteen took shots to the arm, and by the looks of it it’s very painful. Their weapons seem to flay the very flesh of ones bones. Four took a shot to the shoulder, and six was hit in the side. He’s going to need medical attention. Keroko: *Sighs* Right, Five, patch them up for now. We need to find out where these things are coming from and get the hell out of here. Rogue 5: I’ll get right on-
He is suddenly interrupted from finishing the rest of the sentence as a green burst of energy rips through his chest, setting his body ablaze with green energy. The rogues watch in horror as the skin is torn of his charred skeleton.
Keroko: Zhar! Wes: Where the hell did that come from? Tycho: Behind us! Keroko: *Runs up to the standing metal skeleton and swings Artherion in an upward, lobbing of his head. She shifts the weight and rams the axe-like device through the side of its chest* Where was that bastard hiding! Wes: Around us!
The Rogues watch in horror as several of the machines pulled themselves back together. Holes make by accurate shots close, tears are mended, some of the mechanic monstrosities even re-attach their own limbs as if they never even left their owner.
Keroko: Run! Blast a way through their lines, towards the exit!
A hail of spells once again blasted a hole in the line, but the Rogues, tired and wounded, can not fully escape the enemies, who are now closer then ever. One of the Rogues managed to get a little close to one of the drones. He prepares for a spell, expecting the machine to level his weapon at him and fire. Instead, the metallic zombie raises his weapon high and struck. Completely not anticipating the attack, the Rogue lost half his shoulder and was send skirting backwards, where another of the strange drones puts a foot on his chest, and applies enough pressure to instantly kill the man.
Keroko: *curses* How much farther! Rogue 6: Just a little bit, around this turn and- aaaah!
A scream silences any more words, as a gigantic scythe pierces the man’s chest. Moments later he is ruthlessly tossed aside and a giant floating phantom comes into view. Cloaked in grey, the bottom tattered; a hood covers his face yet fails to hide a malicious grin, a scythe in hand.
For a moment, I was reminded of the earth tales of the grim reaper.
Keroko: *glaring at the newcomer* Wes, get them out of here. Wes: Are you sure, Keroko? He looks different from the others. Stronger, too. Keroko: That’s why I am staying and you are going. *shifts her glare to Wes* and that’s an order. Wes: …. Yes ma’am.
Keroko: *Shifts her glare back to the hooded figure* Artherion, Ethereal Mode! Artherion: [Activating.]
*The two blades on Artherion turn downwards until they’re both at a 120 degree angle, then a third blade appears at the top.*
Artherion: [Releasing seals.]
*A pattern of seals appear all over Keroko’s body, slowly they begin to fade*
*Two wrist guards appear to shield her wrist and forearm, and her skirt gains several armor plates. A diamond shaped hole appears in the cloth her back, from which two black ethereal wings sprout.*
As soon as I had finished shifting to Ethereal Mode, I immediately began casting an Ion Cannon Breaker. I was expecting the creature I was facing to attack, like its predecessors had done. I did not expect the creature to speak to me.
Hooded figure: Power… such dark power… you are an avatar, are you not? Keroko: *blinks* What? Hooded figure: Yes… I sense a power greater then yours, and yet you command it at will… identify. Keroko: Keroko… Deathwing Keroko…
It was a simple error, a slip of the tongue. Yet the creature seemed to enjoy it.
Hooded figure: Deathwing… yes, I shall remember, and we shall meet again, deathwing. Keroko: Like hell we will. Ion Cannon… BREAKER!!!!
*A huge explosion shakes the cavern as the red-black beam tears through its stone halls*
Keroko: Huff… huff… Wes: Commander! Hold on, I’ll transport you to the ship!
*In the medbay*
Keroko: Thanks Griff. Griff (Rogue 12): I’m no Zhar, commander, but I’m glad I could help. Wes: So what now? Keroko: *Sighs* Wes, you get this to the TSAB, as soon as you can. Contact Tycho, and send him to the Infinite Library. Tell Yuuno I send him. Wes: And you? Keroko: I’m going to Carim. She has to know about this too. Wes: That serious? Keroko: Wes, we just lost three Rogues! Three! Even against the Zerg we never lost three Rogues in a single battle. No, this has to go everywhere. The Velkan order has people I trust, and they need to know this too.
*Another dreamy flashback sound can be heard*
Keroko: And that’s how I came here. Unfortunately I only had enough time to warn Kha, luckily his team made it out better then mine. Carim: Keroko… Keroko: *clenching the fabric of her skirt* Three Rogues Carim. Zhar, Rutan, Reac, all three of them gone… Carim: … Kha: … Carim:*walks over to the distressed girl and pulls her into an embrace* I know it hurts, Keroko. But remember, though you may have lost three friends, you saved nine others. You are not alone. Keroko: *breaks down and starts crying on Carim’s shoulder.*
I'll be posting future SS in this thread so as to keep the OC thread on topic. I might turn this into a full fic someday, if I got time.
@others: Sorry I gtg uni now. I'll review them later alright?
Just wondering, where is this OC thread??? Keep going with it I like it!
Nice!!! Enfield sort of reminds me of Caro and Shin reminds me of Chrono which I really don't know why. More importantly Yuuno is in there and got 2 seconds of narration
Ehehehehe, it was done on the spot, you see. So I didn't even have the time to double-check the file.
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Yay it's cool! And I see how it mirrors, but using Unlimited Blad- I mean, Midnight Carnival right off the bat came to me as a big surprise. Alexandra's characterization was another surprise because I was expecting a Saber type personality.
I know I'm old, and that should've been a Kamen Rider ref, but somehow "It's Morphin Time!" kicked in in my head instead.
Where's Yuuno, S_K? I didn't even read him being mentioned.
I've been thinking that Sophia might well be Alexandra's nemesis, if you see her appearance in the Nanoha CrosiS SS being broadcast in the OC thread and then catch the references... Luckily they're both on the same side.
Over all very good! Let's see where this goes next.
Ahahaha, that Unlimited Blade reference was also done on the spot XD
Yuuno was briefly mentioned in the ending part of the chapter (Anna mentioned that she was bored because Yuuno was too busy working at the Infinite Library).
Well, I think Charter 2 might have to wait as my college's new term is starting in three days time, so I might be busy organizing my class schedules and stuffs like that.
Ehehehehe, it was done on the spot, you see. So I didn't even have the time to double-check the file.
Ahahaha, that Unlimited Blade reference was also done on the spot XD
Yuuno was briefly mentioned in the ending part of the chapter (Anna mentioned that she was bored because Yuuno was too busy working at the Infinite Library).
Well, I think Charter 2 might have to wait as my college's new term is starting in three days time, so I might be busy organizing my class schedules and stuffs like that.
Don't worry just take your time, because i'm looking forward to your fanfics
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New extremely interesting chapter on Satashi's story TSAB 6th Mobile Division. Chapter 4 is out. For the fans of this fic: Don't read the 'preview'. It's painfully angsty.
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