Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Silver-Throne]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

Tempest will be overwhelmed for sure, he's working, and has his own project.

As for the detail: During the rescue gone wrong, Ichika stumbled out to find four clone tank, all have a 'flawed' copy of himself. He's shocked beyond belief, but then he stole an I.S. and four of them in one go.

Don't know what to do with them, Tabane then programmed different personalities, based on Ichika's own hidden issues, but exaggerated to the point that they're basically two dimensional, genderflipped harem archetype.

> Ni-san: The most hot blooded and a bit of a delinquent, a shadow of Ichika's repressed anger. His color theme is red.
> San-dono: The most cunning and seductive clone, he's a projection of Ichika's repressed sexuality. His color theme are purple.
> Yon-san: The most polite and submissive, but also very righteous. A projection of Ichika's warrior soul. His color theme are green.
> Go-kun: The most cheerful and innocent of the clones, he's a projection of Ichika's 'missing childhood'. His color theme are gold.

Basically they're Imajin version of him, and all of them can use I.S.

Not a bad one.

What`s 'Imajin'? or is it 'Imaginary?' I`ve never heard that word.

Ah the numbers are flying in my head..damn analytic test in marketing got stuck in my head and at least it require a common sense.

[Fireminer]

Hmm... Interesting! But it's "Imagin", not "Imajin". They are the main monster (or "Kajin" of the Tokukatsu series, Kamen Rider Den-O. Each Imagin could possess a host and change the original personality into something more like them. The protagonist has four of them as you can see above.)

Let's me see whether my brother is interested in this...

DONE! He said it's a good idea, but first he needs to know the tone of this story.

Let's me guess, another Mirrorverse?

[ZeroXSEED]

It's definitely comedic and slice of life-ish. They have one I.S. shared with each other, for starter. Trying to woo the girl they like and constantly failed. And Phantom task is basically team rocket equivalent, being blasted again and again UNLESS they fought in protagonist' behalf.

Most of the drama comes from ISO standard clone angst, but additionally with Ichika's own hidden depths, being overshadowed by his clone of all people.

.... and you know my sense of humor is basically dry as bonito, that was the reason why I need co-writer.

[Fireminer]

... Sorry to say this, but he can't help you. Heck, between the twin, I'm the more humour guy, and you've already know how terrible I'm.

This is weird... None of here has a good taste on humour... Must be a curse.

[ZeroXSEED]

You're 10 times funnier than me

I guess that went to scrap again

[Silver-Throne]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

You're 10 times funnier than me

I guess that went to scrap again

Oh joy kill me, for I`ve done well in Marketing test and the last day will be on oct 22.

DOTA NA! just kidding(meh I can play WOT again)

I remembered that one of the chapters you posted almost made me laugh lol

[Fireminer]

Not yet! I could use this for my brother's idea. Basically like this:

"Ichika Orimura is the older brother of the twin Chifuyu and Madoka. With a passion for space, he voluntary to be the first IS test user under his childhood friend, Tabane. But then come the White Night - Thousand of missiles from Japan targeting China. More than a million was estimated to die. War broke out, and White Knight, the first IS was then fitted with weapons. That is where Ichika gained the name "Noir Grim Ripper". China then decided to kidnapp the twin to a space station. It's a bloddy rescue, since Ichika has been sick due to the unknown effect of 00X core. The last thing he could do is taking his sisters to the escape pod, while he slowly die in space. Although Tabane arrived on time to retreived his near death body. Then, she transfered his unconsiusness to the Core, sealed his memory and call him: "X"..."

X will get different power/armor/personality, each acording to the personal users IS.

[wavehawk]

Originally Posted by gunblade23

DOTA NA!

- Ano ka, HELLO?!? Start writing some fanfiction!

[Silver-Throne]

Originally Posted by wavehawk

- Ano ka, HELLO?!? Start writing some fanfiction!

I did but it`s posted in dA

[ZeroXSEED]

@ Fireminer
No thanks, that's the opposite of my vision. Go ahead and use that if you wish.

@ Gunblade
I don't think anyone here has problem with DeviantArt

[Silver-Throne]

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Not yet! I could use this for my brother's idea. Basically like this:

"Ichika Orimura is the older brother of the twin Chifuyu and Madoka. With a passion for space, he voluntary to be the first IS test user under his childhood friend, Tabane. But then come the White Knight - Thousand of missiles from Japan targeting China. More than a million was estimated to die. War broke out, and White Knight, the first IS was then fitted with weapons. That is where Ichika gained the name "Noir Grim Ripper". China then decided to kidnapp the twin to a space station. It's a bloddy rescue, since Ichika has been sick due to the unknown effect of 00X core. The last thing he could do is taking his sisters to the escape pod, while he slowly die in space. Although Tabane arrived on time to retreived his near death body. Then, she transfered his unconsiusness to the Core, sealed his memory and call him: "X"..."

X will get different power/armor/personality, each acording to the personal users IS.

-*grows a tick mark* fixed the homonym

Again, I feel like the corrector in homonym all the time. I don`t feel like it`s alright to do it many times *sighs*

^^The idea is not bad but I prefer the other one respectively.

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by StratoSpear

Spoiler for First Meet:

“Who's still in the arena?” Kirin asks while warning sirens wail all around. “Most of our classmates are still in there along with the Class One students!” Tsurugi answers as she anxiously looks around for other ways to open the sealed arena exits.

“Class Rep and Orimura-kun are inside as well though...” Rose, one of their classmates joins up with the two alongside another classmate, Elijah. “At the very least, they're not helpless.”

“That's good, but we still need to find a way to get them out...” Kirin begins to think. “Rose, I need you and Eli look at the locker entrances. If we can access the locker rooms, we can get to the students through there.” Rose acknowledges with a nod.

“What about you two?” Elijah asks. “We'll link up with the security team outside the main ground entrance, see if we can help them with busting the door open.” Tsurugi answers. “The trainers' hangar is still accessible so I'm going to borrow a unit to help them out.”

Rose and Elijah goes on their way, so does Tsurugi and Kirin whom makes their way to the hangar bay for the [Uchigane], the Academy's Training IS units.

“Make it quick, Tsurugi. I'll see you at the gates.” Kirin then goes ahead while Tsurugi runs for the nearest IS in the hangar.

I'll probably get reprimanded for this but... She touches the skirt of the IS. “Eh... Whatever, let's do this.” She climbs up the skirt armor and boards the IS, which activates and forms itself up on her body within seconds.

“The main gates...” Just as she exits the hangar, a loud ground impact noise robs her attention. She turns back, a huge cloud of dust some distance away partially hides a black figure within. “What's that...?”

The dust cloud gradually settles, revealing a lone [Golem].

Tsurugi recoils at its appearance, recognizing it as an identical unit to the one inside the arena. “T-That's...!” The [Golem] points its arm cannon at her and the second it does so, she dashes aside and dodges its particle beam as it blows a deep blast mark on the hangar door.

Guess I can't run away... In that case...! She draws the [Uchigane's] katana on her left hand and charges head on, using her right pauldron to shield herself while dodging its rapid-fire beam shots.

“HYAH...!” She swings the katana, cutting a shallow wound across the [Golem's] waist. As she turns, she sees its massive fist coming towards her and puts up her right pauldron to block. “AAH!” The impact threw her several meters away.

She gets up and sees the glowing muzzle on the [Golem's] arm beam cannon. Damn monster...! She cringes, bracing herself for the blast just as six small rockets fly over her head. “Eh...?”

The rockets explode in a spread between her and the Golem, dispersing clouds of sky blue mists. The jet-black IS fires its cannon but the particle beam gets dispersed the instant it enters the mists. The Golem recoils a bit then fires again, leading to beam dispersion once more.

“The beam is... dispersed?” Tsurugi looks confused as six more rockets fly over her head and towards the Golem. Unlike the previous salvo, the rockets explode on impact and knocks the IS back.

“You okay, miss?” A male voice calls out, a voice she recognizes almost immediately.

That voice...! She turns around. What soon greeted her eyes is a flight sub-unit and a metal humanoid riding it, a powered battle armor that she could barely recognize from the back of her mind, her past, the [Minerva]. Her eyes widened and her mouth gapped for she also remembers the pilot clear as crystal. Inami Arisawa.

“I...Ina-kun...?” The name escapes her mouth.

Recognizing Tsurugi, Inami quickly pulls up into a hover, zooming his view on her face. “Ts... Tsu-chan...?” His expression mirrors hers.

Continued;

Spoiler for First Meet contd.:

Recognizing Tsurugi, Inami quickly pulls up into a hover, zooming his view on her face. “Ts... Tsu-chan...?” His expression mirrors hers. Attention gets shifted to the [Minerva's] helmet interface, showing the particle dispersion rate at 20 percent.

“Oh no... Tsu-chan! Get away!” He shouts. Tsurugi dashes away and he takes aim, only to see the [Golem's] particle beam coming his way through the dissipating mist which merely thinned a fraction of the beam.

“Ina-kun, look out!” She watches as he barely dodged the beam, taking aim once more with an arm-mounted cannon on his left hand. “I'll hold it, get out of here!”

His words struck her nerve. “NO! We'll take it on, together!” She raises her sword and charges for the [Golem] while it's blocking fire from Inami. She passes by its back, slashing another wound across the back of its waist. It turns to her but Inami keeps up the barrage, pelting shots onto its back and forcing it back into defensive.

Tsurugi starts another rush, aiming for its legs. If I hit it there, it should fall...! She goes for the strike but notices its hand coming from the right side. “D'AH...!” The [Golem's] huge hand grabs her by the waist then throws her towards the arena.

“Tsu-chan...!” Inami shouts then turns his attention back to the [Golem]. “Damn it!!” He jumps off the flight sub-unit and sprints for the IS, charging up his particle arm cannon.

Detecting his approach, the [Golem] turns around and receives a hard kick in the face. It stumbles backwards clumsily while Inami aims for the elbow joint on its left arm. “Sei...!” He fires the shot, a massive blue comet-shaped particle projectile chews through the joint, severing the [Golem's] lower left arm from its body.

Picking herself up from the rubble in the arena walls, Tsurugi is shocked when she notices the [Golem's] severed arm. The bigger shock comes when she realizes something odd; there's no trace of flesh or blood at the severed part.

“It's mechanical...?” She says, seeing the searing wires and intricate machinery jutting out of the back of the [Golem's] left forearm. “...Wait, no. It's autonomous!”

Slowly strafing around the [Golem], Inami puts up a relentless rapid-fire spray of particle bolts at the IS' main body as it tries to block the shots with only one arm. “Tsu-chan, you okay?” He calls out to her as he slowly backs up to her side while keeping up the barrage.

“It's okay. I'm not hurt...” She then grabs her katana. “Looks like that thing doesn't have a human pilot. Let's go all out, Ina-kun!”

Inami nods. “Alright. Let's finish this!”

The two split up in an arc, converging on the [Golem]. Even without exchanging words, both of them knew one basic tactic; one distracts the target, the other attacks. Inami continues pelting particle shots upon the [Golem's] weakening armor while from behind, Tsurugi makes a quick dash and slices deep wounds at the back of its thighs.

Smiles beam across their faces as the [Golem] flinches from her strike. “One more!” Tsurugi yells out but both knew the battle has gone long enough that this has to be their decisive blow.

This time, the two adopts a linear formation with Tsurugi in the lead and Inami following her while charging his arm cannon. The [Golem] brings its hand down, attempting to smash its attackers but Tsurugi moves aside as the hand misses and slams the ground. “KEN!” She executes a downward slash on the elbow joint, severing off its remaining arm. Inami jumps towards the IS, aiming the cannon directly at its main body as Tsurugi breaks off to the side.

“SEI!!” He fires the charged shot point-blank. The blast knocked him back but sends the [Golem] tumbling even further.

“You okay?” Tsurugi helps him back to his feet. “I'm good, you?” He asks back.

“Good too.” She smiles. The two walked up the trail of small smoldering machine parts to the [Golem's] side. It's multi-eyes have gone dim and its body is completely stiff lifeless with a gaping hole on its chest. “We did it.”

“We definitely did.” Inami then notices a small glowing orb inside the chest. He picks it up and detects pulsating low-level energy emitting from it. “Is this... the core unit?” He examines the object, which the shape is similar to that of a typical golf ball.

“Probably... But I've never seen one before.” Tsurugi answers as she too stares curiously at the object. “...and by the looks of it, it's not even damaged by your attack.”

“Seems like it. Though that might have been the body armor taking the blast.” His sensors picks up two IS approaching their position. “Someone's coming...!” The two turns to their back and sees Kirin, in her personal IS, the [Fantom Falken] alongside Aries Leonide, one of the Academy's security troopers in a green [Raphael Revive].

“Tsurugi!” Kirin calls out. Inami takes Tsurugi's hand and places the glowing object on her palm. “Time I make my exit!”

“What...? Where are you--?” She turns back to him confused. Before she could finish, he jumps onto the flight sub-unit. “See you around, Tsu-chan!” and he flies off, leaving her stunned as Kirin and Aries lands next to her.

“Tsurugi, are you okay? I got worried when you didn't come...” Kirin says. Tsurugi simply smiles back. “I'm alright. Sorry I got you worried, Kirin.”

Kirin shakes her head. “No, it's fine. I'm glad you're okay.” She then turns to direction where Inami left. “Who's that just now?”

“A friend... A very close friend.” Tsurugi answers while smiling to herself. Aries notices the [Golem] remains, wide-eyed that it's armless and has a big blast hole at its body. “Looks like you two had a moment...”

Tsurugi chuckles to herself, looking at the glowing core in her hands. Ina-kun... Not only is he back. We even fought together... something I've always dreamed of. She looks ahead to where Inami went off. That's right... together.

[Fireminer]

Well, that is understandable! What we need now is something like SEED's idea. But you guys don't know my brother. While I prefer simplicity, he values grandness.

Anyway, let's try:

- Blue: Hey, guys, how about we assigned each girls to one of us us?

- Red: And what's the point of that, dumbhead?

- Blue: Well, each of us represents a side of Ichika-san, right? And each girls loves a specific side of him. So isn't it would be appropriate for we take on the girl that fit us?

- Green: Your point is valid. A wise man once said this: "Every girls is a delicate flower that only fit to a bee, or a butterfly".

- Purple: You got that right, Sempai!

- Red: Hmm... Sound good!

- Blue: Since everyone has agreed, this is the assignment...

(A day later)

- Red: Houki chased me around the campus for I "accidentaly" slashed open her hakama... All thanks to you, dumbhead!

- Blue: Got it, I got it! Heck, I was nearly death because of Cecilia food!

- Green: And Rin fighting Laura when I praised both of their beauty... I miss the Feudal!... But where is Purple?

- Red: That brat has to go to the hospital due to bloodloss. Who is dumb enough to assign him to Tatenashi?

[Fireminer]

Also, Strato, love has an infinite number of types, isn't that right?

[Silver-Throne]

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Also, Strato, love has an infinite number of types, isn't that right?

D-d-dd-d-d-d-d-d-Double post!

Please use edit button and add 'EDIT' something like that

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by gunblade23

D-d-dd-d-d-d-d-d-Double post!

Please use edit button and add 'EDIT' something like that

He's using cellphone

Though, I'd probably wait several minutes before responding, when my ISP being an ass

Also, chapter 6 completed...

Chapter 7 ahoy!

[StratoSpear]

Originally Posted by Fireminer

Also, Strato, love has an infinite number of types, isn't that right?

Indeed there are. For Inami and Tsurugi's case, you can also imagine them as X and Zero. You could probably tell who's based on who :P

[Fireminer]

Yeah... Anyway, SEED, is the shot good enough for you?

You know, this might be a good short fic idea. One Prologue, 4 situation chapter, one fighting and an epilouge.

[ZeroXSEED]

If I had to put bluntly, I can't really judge due to bias.

However this fits more as a part of saga or something, so multiple mini-series.

[Tempest35]

Just so that everyone knows - when I'm lurkin', I'm a workin'



I also got a story for the challenge (finally). We'll see.