Create Your Own Justsu or Naruto character

[Zaku Hyuga]

Thanks for liking my story. Your's is really well done too. When Yoshi activated the Extraction I was like man it's over already, then "Tsubashi" got out of it and I was like alright! Not that I wanted him to get away but that the fight would continue. I can't wait to hear about the betrayal.

[Sakuranbo]

Sorry guys, no new chapter yet! I've had writer's block ever since my Star Wars fanboyism rose from dormancy one night while playing KOTOR. Don't worry though, chapter 35 is underway - I've even written a couple of paragraphs!

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Originally Posted by KurayamiLeader

Sorry guys, no new chapter yet! I've had writer's block ever since my Star Wars fanboyism rose from dormancy one night while playing KOTOR. Don't worry though, chapter 35 is underway - I've even written a couple of paragraphs!

Heh, it's nice to see a fellow Star Wars fanboy. I like your new avy and sig.

I've seriously considered writing my own fanfic, but I'm still brainstorming ideas for setting and characters to use, introduce, or create. I will, in all likelihood, use my Iwagakure shinobi because i have a lot of material on them already. However, if I want to use the Tsuchikage, I'll need some information on them. I don't remember who it was, but someone earlier in this thread created character designs for the Rokudaime and Mudaime Tsuchikages. Does anyone know which page that information is on, or if even exists? If not, I'll probably do it my own way.

[Sakuranbo]

Originally Posted by Spectacular_Insanity

Heh, it's nice to see a fellow Star Wars fanboy. I like your new avy and sig.

I've seriously considered writing my own fanfic, but I'm still brainstorming ideas for setting and characters to use, introduce, or create. I will, in all likelihood, use my Iwagakure shinobi because i have a lot of material on them already. However, if I want to use the Tsuchikage, I'll need some information on them. I don't remember who it was, but someone earlier in this thread created character designs for the Rokudaime and Mudaime Tsuchikages. Does anyone know which page that information is on, or if even exists? If not, I'll probably do it my own way.

Thanks, I've been reading the Last of the Jedi series by Jude Watson, and I'm *breathes* page 17 yay! I've been so wrapped up in my Star Wars that Naruto and SW have sorta...collided

here's what I mean...

Spoiler for Emperor's Hand:

My Emperor's Hand named: "Kardaan, an Orochimaru like villain with long jet-black hair, pale skin and a knack for experimenting on captive victims (most notably Jedi). All-in-all a Sith Alchemist, heh-heh.

Well since this isn't an SW thread, has anyone gotten the 386 chapter yet? Raiu 385 will be ready....erm soon?

[Reith]

I write fanfics 4 Naruto too! But I write for www.fanfiction.net. I have 3 stories, not really long, just about 2 chapters each and no one ever reads them but my fanfic friend. Heres The Leaf Village Life http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/liv...8104&chapter=1, All I Want is Sakura http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/liv...6218&chapter=1 and The Continued Legacy http://www.fanfiction.net/secure/liv...7567&chapter=1 The 1st chapter of The leaf Village life has alot of typos cause it was my first. Read and review on here this thread because you need a Fanfiction account to review on the site.

[Reith]

Do you any of you guys have a hotmail e-mail address?

[Zaku Hyuga]

Hey Reith. I like the updates on your character he's still cool, but you didn't tell us about the super clone attack And I clicked on the links for your fanfics and it says we need to be logged in to view the page. So I'll have to make an account on there later. Otherwise you could make an account on narutofic.org create an account on there and just copy and paste your stories, so you don't have to retype everything, then other people can read and reveiw your stories. I got like 30 hits on my first story the first day I put mine on. And sorry I don't have a hotmail account.

Everyone: I'm going to try and finish then post the third chapter of my fanfic tomorrow morning, then I'm going to start working on a completely different fanfic consisting of silly stories about the original characters. Will keep you posted.

[Oruhi_Kurama]

<a href="http://s53.photobucket.com/albums/g54/Flaiiru/?action=view&current=Yasuo.jpg" target="_blank"><img src="http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g54/Flaiiru/Yasuo.jpg" border="0" alt="Photobucket"></a>

Name: Yasuo
Age: 13
Gender: male
Birthday: September 14
Height: 5'1
Appearance picture above
Clothing: Wears a light brown tanktop with a dark brown jacket over it. Underneath shirt is fishnet from the chest, sleeveless, to his waist. He has bandages covering his hands. He wears black, baggy pants with normal ninja shoes underneath
Village: Konohagakure and Sunagkaure

Combat: Close and distance. He uses puppets, like his father, Kankuro. He has mostly Kankuro's looks, but act's like his mother. He wants to become a puppet master.

History: Yasuo was born in sunagakure, but since the closer relationship between konohagakure and Sunagakure, they started transferring each other's students to the other village for training. Yasuo was one of them, and he fell in love with Oruhi at first glance. He always had a crush on her, and whenever he was near her, he would act really clumsy. But, since he was put on a team with her, he was starting to at mature, but still acted like a fool in the process.

Team: Oruhi Kurama, Yasuo, and Inacki Nara.
Sensei: Kendou Kitzamiya

[Oruhi_Kurama]

lol, guess photoshop code didn't work, here he is.. i hope

[Zaku Hyuga]

Oruhi_Kurama: Nice charcter really like the picture. He looks awesome. by the way have you read my fanfic?

[Reith]

Originally Posted by Zaku Hyuga

Hey Reith. I like the updates on your character he's still cool, but you didn't tell us about the super clone attack And I clicked on the links for your fanfics and it says we need to be logged in to view the page. So I'll have to make an account on there later. Otherwise you could make an account on narutofic.org create an account on there and just copy and paste your stories, so you don't have to retype everything, then other people can read and reveiw your stories. I got like 30 hits on my first story the first day I put mine on. And sorry I don't have a hotmail account.

Gotcha, I'll post the right links now. For The Continued Legacy, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4017567/...ntinued_Legacy

For All I Want is Sakura, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3876218/...want_is_Sakura

And for The Leaf Village Life, http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3868104/...f_Village_Life

These links SHOULD work.

[Reith]

Yeah, the links do work.

[Sakuranbo]

Originally Posted by Oruhi_Kurama

lol, guess photoshop code didn't work, here he is.. i hope

Another nice pic, along with the TenTen one. Maybe I should make you my official Raiu image expert eh?

[Oruhi_Kurama]

Originally Posted by KurayamiLeader

Another nice pic, along with the TenTen one. Maybe I should make you my official Raiu image expert eh?

ok, XD. I just started, my first original i have a bunch. maybe i should put her on here, too

[Sakuranbo]

I could send you a PM with general descriptions for my Raiu chars; Mikko, Hishegami, and Tanzou and just let you go wild with your imagination. I think that would be pretty awesome!

[Oruhi_Kurama]

Yeah, it would be. I'm currently working on my friend's characters at the moment. but i guess i can squeeze in some room.

[cojo190]

http://imvu.comcojo uchiha second cousin of itachi and sasuke uses katanas 2 and wants to kill anyone in his way later joins akatuski and raveges the villages. making him on imvu but the pics are outdated new ones comming soon. for more on cojo ask me for more. pardon my spelling

[Jabez the Fuuton War]

Originally Posted by Zaku Hyuga

Spoiler for Jabez the Fuuton War's new character:

New Character for my Fanfic in creation

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Name: Kagami Riku

Sex: Male

Village: Konoha

Age: 15

Looks: At 165.8cm (5'5'') he is easily the tallest member of his squad team. He has long, orange, straight hair that comes to his shoulders (think Yazoo from Advent Children). He also has emerald eyes. He is just as muscular as he is tall, though he hides his torso muscles with athe tanktop shirt he wears. He wears normal combat boots and cargo pants to finish upo his onsomble.

Personality: Kind hearted and simple minded enough to be considered a simpleton. Though in the heat of battle he very observant.

Ninja Rank: Genin

Skills: While he does posses enough chakra to perform B-rank jutsu, he rarely uses Ninjutsu due to his below average chakra control. His main Taijutsu style is Teiken Ryuu (Imperial Fist Style) which relies more on strength and endurance then the Gouken Ryuu which is considered a more balanced style. As such his speed, while by no means slow, isn't anywhere on Naruto's level(remember this guy is from my fanfic and in my fanfic Naruto is just shy of Lee's speed without weights). He has no genjutsu at all.

Team: Team Bright hair (Team 5)
Members:
Namikaze (Uzumaki) Naruto
Namikaze (Uzumaki) Chikai
Jounin Instructor: Murakumo Saya

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Um can you delete this please, I'm kind of had to change the characters for my fanfic and he was one of those that was scrapped.

[Zaku Hyuga]

Originally Posted by Jabez the Fuuton War

Um can you delete this please, I'm kind of had to change the characters for my fanfic and he was one of those that was scrapped.

Ok I can do that if you would like.

[Spectacular_Insanity]

Here's another missing-nin (a Swordsman of the Mist, no less). This time from Kirigakure, not Iwagakure.

Name (surname, given name): Takahashi Susumu (高橋 進)
Sex: male
Age: 22
Affiliation: Formerly Kirigakure ("Village Hidden in the Mist"), in the Land of Water , once a member of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist.
Height: 6'5"
Eye / Hair Color: Hazel / Dark Green
Clan/Additional Affiliations: Unknown, family believed dead
Sensei (surname, given name): Unknown
Squadmates (surname, given name): N/A
Class/Rank: S-class missing-nin/Jounin
Kekkei Genkai (Bloodline Limit): N/A
Elemental Affinity: Water
Contract Summoning: Electric Eel
Preferred Weapon(s): Hayabusa (隼, “Falcon”). (See below for additional information)
Usual Attire/Appearance: He wears a "slashed" Kirigakure headband around his neck, and a leather headband stamped with the symbol of an eel. He wears a blue coat and pants, and wears little armor save ribbed steel shoulder plates. His black steel-toed leather boots are knee-high and his pants are tucked into them but still very loose and fall around them. Like many of the ninja from Kirigakure, he has pointed teeth, much like a shark's.
Miscellaneous: An S-class criminal that was once of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist, he is a wanted man just about everywhere, but is not easily recognized because very few photos or drawings of him exist. His name is still on most Hidden Villages’ bingo books, however, so he never reveals his real name to anyone.

History/Personality:
Like many of the Seven Swordsmen, he grew up in Kirigakure. Not much is known about his family, except that they died in an accident some years before he became a ninja. He trained in the Kirigakure Ninja Academy and his teachers were impressed by his aptitude for water-based ninjutsu, as he had an especially strong affinity, even for a Kirigakure-nin. However, he was unruly and was often too disruptive. He had some trouble passing his first exam.

Eventually he graduated and also became a chuunin some years later, but was bitter after being an orphan and outcast for so long. Seeking some sense of belonging, he sought a sensei, but none were to be found that would train him given his reputation of being a “loose cannon” of sorts. However, one man, a recluse, gave him Hayabusa, telling him its secrets. This man disappeared shortly after giving Susumu the sword, though no one knows the motivations of his actions. Perhaps it was merely chance that brought him his weapon, but in any case, it was not long before his growing skill and unique weapon brought the eyes of the unwanted.

About a month after his had received his sword, Susumu was training and was attacked by a Kirigakure chuunin who coveted the sword for himself. Susumu killed him in cold anger, but was punished severely even though he was only defending himself. Susumu was sentenced to a prison term, and Hayabusa was confiscated. For that, Susumu killed several fellow Kirigakure ninja guarding his cell and stole back his beloved weapon. He fled the village, and after a long while, became one of the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist. Though he had hoped for some sense of camaraderie amongst his fellow missing-nin, he was disappointed and disgusted when he witnessed the general insufferableness of his “fellow” swordsmen. He returned to wandering, swearing that when he was strong enough he would return to Kirigakure and kill the ones responsible for his endless suffering.

Water Style Techniques (Ninjutsu):
Water jutsu. He's a water ninja. Not much need to explain, right?
Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu ("Water Release: Water Dragon Technique") - Sends a large body of water at the opponent, taking on the rough form of a dragon. A massively powerful attack if it connects, it has the ability to punch through wood and even stone. This technique also requires quite a few hand signs to execute. The chakra consumption is high. A-rank, offensive, all ranges. Hand Signs: Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Rat, Boar, Rooster, Ox, Horse, Rooster, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Snake, Ox, Ram, Snake, Boar, Ram, Ox, Monkey, Rooster, Dragon, Ox, Horse, Ram, Tiger, Snake, Rat, Ox, Monkey, Rooster, Rat, Boar, Monkey, Dragon, Rooster, Ox, Horse, Ram, Tiger, Snake, Rat, Monkey, Rabbit, Boar, Dragon, Ox, Rat, Ox, Monkey, Rooster, Rat, Boar, Rooster

Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu ("Water Clone Technique") - Forms clones out of water, which are much like any other type of clone technique (e.g. shadow/rock/mist clones). They are typically destroyed with one hit. Depending on how many are made (Susumu can make as many as 30 at a time), the chakra comsumption is low to high. E-rank, supplementary, all ranges. Hand Signs: Tiger, Ox, Dragon

Suiton: Mizu no Uzu no Jutsu ("Water Release: Water Vortex Technique") - This technique utilizes water to create a spinning tornado of water that surrounds the user. This technique is an effective defense and can be a powerful attack mechanism if the ninja sends the top of the vortex crashing down around him. The water rotates with enough speed to knock an enemy unconscious. Chakra consumption is average, but increases the longer the technique is held (due to the vortex eventually becoming unstable). A-rank, defensive/offensive, all ranges. Hand Signs: Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Ram, Boar, Ox, Horse, Monkey, Tiger, Dog, Tiger, Snake, Tiger, Ox, Monkey, Rabbit, Rooster

Suiton: Mizurappa ("Water Release: Violent Water Wave") – After performing the necessary hand signs, the Susumu fires a very powerful jet of water from his mouth. This attack is extremely powerful up close, and easily has the power to break bones if the target is within ten meters. It has the approximate power of a very strong punch if further away. B-rank, offensive, short to mid-range (0-10m). Hand Signs: Rat, Dragon, Rooster, Horse

Suiton: Mizu no Muchi ("Water Release: Water Whip") – A technique that utilizes water to create a whip. Susumu can also send an electric current through the whip to electrocute their opponent while they are entangled in the attack. The whip will function in the normal fashion, such as allowing the ninja to swing from tree branches or otherwise manipulate objects that are out of reach. B-rank, offensive, short range (0-5m). Hand Signs: none.

Suiton: Suirou no Jutsu (“Water Release: Water Prison Technique”) - A technique that utilizes water to imprison an opponent. The ninja forms the necessary hand seals which causes the water to form around the target into a spherical prison which only allows for very limited movement. Susumu must keep their body touching the water prison to maintain the technique. If the contact is broken, the water falls away and the target is released. When combined with a clone technique, Susumu can have the clone or himself maintain the water prison while the other attacks. C-rank, supplementary, very short range (0-1m). Hand Signs: Sheep, Snake, Tiger, Rabbit, Snake, Dragon, Rabbit, Rooster (must keep in contact with water prison to maintain technique)

Other Ninjutsu:
Kuchiyose no Jutsu ("Summoning Technique") – Susumu has the ability to summon electric eels, which he utilizes to fight when he is fighting near water. The eels are spcial in that their target(s) do not need to be in the water for them to attack with lightning-based jutsu. They can attack by arcing electricity between themselves and Susumu, who then redirects the attack towards his opponents. B-rank, supplementary, short range (0-5m). Hand Signs: Boar, Dog, Tiger, Monkey, Ram

About Susumu’s sword, Hayabusa:
Susumu’s sword is fairly unique, as he can send his chakra through it to manipulate its movement. It is a segmented blade that can elongate into a whip-like state and become up to three times as long at its maximum length, which is about three meters long. Not only can it become whip-like, but it can be controlled while it strikes much like a snake, allowing it to easily penetrate enemies’ defenses, since when they move to defend themselves, Susumu can easily change the attack’s trajectory with a flick of his wrist and a tiny pulse of his chakra. The sword is of fairly average size, but this technique is often far more effective than a single heavy blade and was what allowed him to become part of the legend that was the Seven Swordsmen of the Mist.

Other Little Factoids:
Hit: Rivers
Miss: Deserts
Favorite Food: Water chestnuts
Least Favorite Food: Snow peas
Goals: Exact revenge on Kirigakure. Preferably by destroying it.
Favorite Pasttime: Practicing with Hayabusa.