2012-11-17, 05:32 | Link #481 |
Extra Superior Otaku
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Meanwhile At the Extra verse
The special agent Yuuya Bridges was Ordered to protect Subject Takamura"Hime" Yui at the dastardly plot of Sandek Hakuryou's high school Yui , Cryska Inia and Cui was enjoying home economics Spoiler for Total panic eclipse Fumuffu :
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2012-11-21, 03:17 | Link #484 | |
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Join Date: Aug 2009
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I can tell that for sure because I have the show's yuri couple here |
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2012-11-23, 23:17 | Link #494 |
Extra Superior Otaku
Join Date: Sep 2008
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meanwhile at the assault Sadogahima hive Whiskey company is in trouble instead of Ikaruga his company of Type 00's to save the them
This is Urzu-7 Proceeding to assist Whiskey company ... Whiskey company Fall back and regroup Spoiler for And He brought of his buddies too:
This what i get for re watching full metal panic Votoms 08th ms play re play MLA while thinking of fanfiction |
2012-11-25, 11:49 | Link #495 | |
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: In my room
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I don't like oc characters that stands too much in the way that the original characters are being ignored. I tried to read it up to chapter 5 terminal and still trying to read it but my verdict to it comes when.... gundam from seed and gn drive comes into play........... the f*:0 when I realize that the guy collins guy has the same name as the author.... man.... it felt like the author insert himself on the story to save the world. I would love it if not for the overly perfect guy. I hate kirito for this reason. DON'T LIKE PERFECT MC!!!!! This one felt the same when I read the armored core crossover with muv luv but at least adler is a character I would love to bash and hate that I ended up managing to read the story but this one...... ugh........ I .... will..... try........ to persevere in reading it........ but darn to many plot holes and mystery or just darn plot holes that I can't understand and I would like an explanation.
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2012-11-25, 12:37 | Link #497 |
Cyberspace Traveller
Join Date: Aug 2012
Location: Lost in the road of life
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Putting too much oc character tend to be a disaster. Much worse if it was author self insert. IMHO neglecting the main character in the fanfic means the story lose its originality. Some are ok,but most tend to have a godlike oc that pretty much destroying the story.
tsunade666 was right, that fanfic tend to make the reader banging their head at the monitor screen.It was too much... a so call perfect mc it's ridiculous.I do understand the rule of the fanfic writer: my story my rules but this is too much. Read until chapter 4,but discard it afterwards. My opinion, self insert author fic Correct me if i was wrong ok.....
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2012-11-25, 13:00 | Link #498 |
Truth Martyr
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Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Doing Anzu's paperwork.
Age: 38
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I hail from Spacebattles. There's a different style of Self Insert fic there: SBer ends up in the universe, is fully aware they're where they are, and generally suffering ensues
That said, I wouldn't entirely say self insert is totally wrong. It depends on the story you're trying to tell; My Unnamed Alternative Fanfic is set a few years prior to Total Eclipse, and involves a cast based on people I know; it's partially an exploration of how we woulda turned out had we existed in that verse. Knowing the pains and evils of SI, I made sure to kill my alternate self first There's a story-ish kinda alternate timeline fic out there called Red Dawn 20 that's essentially entirely SI fanfic of Red Dawn, though it's run more or less like a roleplay of sorts, with posters saying what "they" (or rather, their roleplay Red Dawn selves) got up to. It's actually pretty interesting... But generally the reason SI gets a bad rep is because most new authors do SI and can't really control themselves and get carried away.
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