Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by Ryand-Smith

Why are we making parings, people. This is a TV show, and we all should be enjoying each other's writings, not making stands like a psudeo-religion, I mean, honestly now, BPHaru, please don't make this fandom like every other place on the internet full of anger, and as the meme goes "RAGE". Can we not accept difference?

I don't think that it is possible to do such a thing, as long as things are different and people have free will, there will ALWAYS be disagreements. Also I don't know if you intended on saying this but from my understanding, is seems that you are basically saying that BPHaru is not permitted to like the material which she/he does (please correct me if I am wrong on this).

Another thing along those lines is that from what I've seen people tend to have things that are "precious" to them, and which they feel they must defend against all "enemies". The "enemies" in BPHaru's case seem to be either Yuuno (especially when paired with Nanoha or Fate), and other pairings for Nanoha and Fate besides each other. (Again this is a POV from someone who doesn't know an extensive amount about BPHaru's past behavior).

Anyway basically in layman's terms of what I said above is that given any parings there will always be people who "love it to death", and others who "completely lothe, while still others will simply "not care either way".

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by markesellus

Spoiler for My take on what happens next:

"Hayate, I have to tell you something. I..."

Suddenly Nanoha walked in "Hey Hayate have you seen... WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!"

'Oh shit' Fate thought

"STARLIGHT!"

"Nanoha please!" Hayate tried to explain.

"Get your own blonde!"

"BREAKER!!!!"

Who else would qualify? Vivio? Shamal?

Originally Posted by markesellus

Obvious inspiration is obvious.

I must be "dense" then. Could you explain where this came from.

[Junkedcat]

smile...

Spoiler for L!F Ladies of the House:

Landscaper!Fate

Part 3: The Things we Do.

“Ladies of the House”

Once again Fate cursed about being on her knees. She knew that gardening was part of the job, but she couldn’t figure out why Kaden couldn’t come out for this overtime job. ‘Isn’t it a ritual to have the new meat weed all the time? Oh well, I don’t mind a one man day every once and a while.’ She took some time to get up off the kneeling pad and stretch out her legs. She decided to walk around the garden’s perimeter to help out the sore legs and to inspect where else she needed to weed as a cover to why she was not working. ‘Well, almost done, I have left to do is prune that…’ a flicker of long brunette hair interrupted her. ‘hehehe…’ the blond’s lips turned up into a smile ‘looks like I can have some fun.’ The landscaper’s intent was to hug the brunette from behind as she crept around the rose bush, but as she made her way around she realized that she made a mistake in identity. The woman gently inspecting the roses was not Nanoha, but one who had very similar and a bit more mature look. As the woman traced the petals of the flowers, Fate traced out the lines of this older image of Nanoha. She had the same figure, only slightly taller. The same face, but ever so sadder. A soft smile that lost any innocence.

“Oh, I’m sorry. Am I interrupting your work?” The older woman retracted her hand.

Fate took a moment to snap to. “No, not really…” She scrambled for something to say. “Do you like those flowers?”

The woman looked back at the roses “Yes,” she said in a shy, yet more mature voice “They are quite lovely.”

“Well then,” The landscaper walked close to the bush and inspected its proportions. “Ah.” She then pruned two of the flowers from the plant. She then exchanged her pruners for her pocket knife and carefully removed the thorns from the stems. “Here,” she held out the roses. “One for you and one for the lady that is so nice to bring us water when we are here.”

The woman took the flowers into her hand. “Thank you, but you didn’t have to do this.”

“The bush needed pruning anyways, and it’s better that such pretty flowers don’t go to waste.”

The brunette smiled and took a slight whiff of the rose’s fragrance. “The lady that brings you water?”

“Yes, she looks just like you.”

“My daughter you mean, Nanoha.” She brought the flower down and gazed upon Fate again.

“She is your daughter? Well, now I know who she got her beauty from.” The blond smiled at Nanoha’s mother ‘Don’t push it Fate, don’t want them to know the landscaper wants to do –this and that- with their daughter.’

“Thank you for the complement,” The woman blushed slightly, “and I will make sure that my daughter receives this rose.”

“Oh, where are my manners. My name is Fate Testarossa.” She took off her glove and held out her hand.

“My name is Momoko Takamachi” The women reached out her hand as well and gently shook the others. “It is a pleasure to meet you Miss Testarossa.”

“No, the pleasure is all mine. Now that I know that someone like you is enjoying this garden I’ll make sure to do an extra good job at keeping it looking beautiful.”

“Oh,” Momoko brought her hand back and blushed, “Thank you. I must say that my husband made a good choice in landscapers.”

Fate bowed politely, “Thank you. I don’t hear that that often.”

“I ought to let you return to your work, Miss Testarossa.”

Fate only politely nodded as the brunette turned and walked away. ‘God damn! She’s hot!’ She turned around and looked back at her work ‘Play time over…’

= = = = =

The blond wiped her brow as she loaded the last of her things into the back of the truck. “And… done.”

“Excuse me, Gardener.”

‘Oh I don’t know what to be pissed off about first, the term Gardener or the bitch tone of her voice’ Fate turned around and looked at the woman dressed in business attire that was standing with her arms crossed glaring at the landscaper. “May I help you?”

“You must set up the back patio for a meeting today. We want the rot iron chairs and tables that are in storage and all the extra flower pots removed.”

‘I swear I heard this arrogant tone before.’ “I’m sorry Ma’am, I can’t do that. I’ve already gone over this with the customer; I can’t do anything without a work order or a signature approving changes to a work order. Also, you don’t hire a landscaping firm to move the kinds of things you are asking for.”

The women seemed irritated by this “You will do as I say or I will have…”

“You fired?” Fate started to drop the formality out of her own speech “Last time I checked I was an employee of Harloawn Landscaping. They are the ones I’m employed too, the ones I get my paycheck from. You are just a customer; you have no power over my employment. In fact, my boss has a thing for dropping customers that harass his workers.”

“And I see they don’t mind hiring people like you.” The women smirked while looking down at Fate’s attire.

“Please tell me, what is that suppose to mean?”

“I am saying that this ‘landscaping’ company is low enough to have someone that talks like and has the attitude of a common whore on their payroll.”

“Oh, I’m sooo sorry” Fate slammed the tailgate shut and walked to the driver’s door. “I didn’t know I was using such inappropriate language in front of such an important CCD.”

“CCD? What is that street talk for?”

Fate jumped into the trucked and closed the door. “Corporate Cum Dumpster.”

The woman yelled through the open window “You are calling me what?”

“I’m calling you a nice warm hole for all those important business men that need assistance during their rough days in the office.”

“Why you little…”

“See, all that uppity ‘I’m better than you’ bullshit runs away when you’re called out on what you really are…” Fate keyed the ignition, “I bet you fuck like a sex crazed slut.” With that she drove away, leaving the scorned woman stammering in the driveway. ‘CCD…not bad for coming up with that on the spot. I think Chrono will enjoy that one.’

= = = = =

“Hello there Princess” Fate leaned forward towards Nanoha, who was approaching the lamppost. “How are you this evening?”

“Oh I’m fine,” the girl dressed in a pink tee-shirt and blue jeans replied. Once caught up to Fate, they walked in the direction of the downtown district.

“Oh by the…” Both girls stopped their sentence and looked at each other embarrassed.

Nanoha giggled and conceded the conversation to the blond. “You go ahead first.”

“Well, I saw your mother yesterday.”

“That’s what I was going to talk about! Thank you for the flower.” The end of her sentence trailed off into a blush.

“No problem, anything for my Princess”

‘My Princess…’ Nanoha played with her hands at the sound of that possessive statement.

“And your Mother is really hot”

“Really hot….? You think my Mother is hot!” Nanoha stared wide-eyed at Fate.

“Yes I do.” Nanoha continued to look at her with disbelief “Now I know where you get your good looks from… and what I have to look forward to in the future.”

“Oh… that’s what you meant. Sorry…” Princess looked down at her feet while they continued their stroll.

“Were you worried about me ogling your mother?” Fate stopped in her tracks. “Don’t worry,” She leaned forwarded enough so that Princess got a good view down the top of her black tank top. “You’re the one with the looks that gets me all hot and bothered over.”

Nanoha’s blush grew deep red. “I… am that attractive to you?”

“Yep!” The blond continued walking on, motioning towards a convenience store “I even find your shyness cuter too, compared to you mom.”

“My shyness too?”

Fate pushed the door open for Nanoha. “But I think that’s because you are still corruptible.”

“Corrup…. I give up on trying to understand you…” Princess sighed out.

“Oh that’s no fun,” Fate preceded to grab various snacks for their walk, “I was going to talk all kinds of dirty smack about your bitch sister.”

“You met my sister?”

“Oh yes I did…” Fate stopped her sarcastic voice when she reached the machine she wanted, “Slurpy?”

“Ah, no thank you, and what exactly happened with meeting my sister? I remember the day you came over to fix the garden up she came inside furious over something.”

“Oh we just had a little spat.” Fate emptied her pockets and played the cashier. “She treated me like I was her personal slave and I called her what she really is.”

Nanoha took a candy bar out of their bag and opened it up “What did you call her?”

Fate gave a look at Princess that made her stop biting her Snickers bar halfway through. “I thought you said you where going to give up on trying to understand me?”

The girl finished her bite and shrugged in response.

“Well then, I called your sister a Corporate Cum Dumpster.”

Princess contemplated this for a few moments. “What’s a… cum dumpster?”

“I knew you where going to ask that.”

“Mou… Fate! I don’t know these kinds of things.”

“Alright then,” the blond explained “lets see if you can wrap you head around this. Basically a cum dumpster is a women, or man, who exists only to be a place for men to put their ejaculate in. I figure that your sister is only in her position, whatever it is, because she sucked, fucked, and was jacked off on by every single dick in the whole company. I don’t doubt that she’s been cov…”

“Ewwww….” Nanoha cringed, “That’s disgusting.”

“So you do know a few things. How do you know these things?”

“I have had basic sex education. It is just that those kinds of things are so dirty that I don’t know all that much about them. And stuff like that I am sure I did not need to know about.”

“But now you know why your sister was so angry. I called her an office slut.”

Nanoha finished her candy bar. “Did you have to go so far?”

“Yes.” Fate dank a bit of her slurpy.

“Why?”

“Because she treated you like shit and she treated me like shit.”

“That’s why you called her that?” She couldn’t grasp all of what Fate was saying.

“Yep, when someone picks on my friends I get them back. I’m kind of cool like that. Your father, brother, and sister are all douchebags as far as I’m concerned.”

The brunette pondered this a bit, “So… that’s a good thing right?”

“It’s a good thing.”

The two continued their rounds around the town Nanoha taking in the sights of the streets while Fate took in the sights of Nanoha.

“Mou…”

“What is it?”

“I am thirsty.” Princess pleaded

“Should have gotten the slurpy. Here, have some of mine.” Fate held out the container with the straw facing Nanoha.

Nanoha stared at the straw just inches from her mouth. “But you already…”

“What’s wrong? My mouth isn’t dirty is it?” She smiled as she got closer to Nanoha “You’re thirsty, take a sip.”

She look from Fate’s eyes and back to the straw with a hint of salvia on it. “Well, ok.” With a shy movement she grabbed the tube with her mouth and called the liquid forward. Fate’s smile grew deeper with the action.

“That’s it, just like that…”

“Mou…” Princess pulled back with pink cheeks “That tone of yours sounded dirty…”

“It was dirty.” Fate pulled back the cup and brought it up to her own lips. Slowly she reached for the straw with her tongue and carefully wrapped her lips around the cylinder. She sucked the remainder of the liquid into her mouth, “Mummm…. Tasty....” She let the straw go and gazed down at Nanoha. “I just shared an indirect kiss with my Princess.”

“Mou Fate…” The now bright red girl cried out.

The blond just smiled back, “Come on… let’s get you home.”

[Satashi]

Guys, seriously. This is NOT the thread for discussing relations and ideas on such outside of fanfics. If you want to keep arguing about personal opinions and what people think, then go the the relationship board. If not. Stop posting about it here.

@Junkedcat really nice, I loved the flower scene ^_^

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

Who else would qualify? Vivio? Shamal?


I must be "dense" then. Could you explain where this came from.

Black_Wolf's pink on blond piece. Get your own blonde would be what Nanoha says to Signum

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

smile...

Spoiler for L!F Ladies of the House:

Landscaper!Fate

Part 3: The Things we Do.

“Ladies of the House”

Once again Fate cursed about being on her knees. She knew that gardening was part of the job, but she couldn’t figure out why Kaden couldn’t come out for this overtime job. ‘Isn’t it a ritual to have the new meat weed all the time? Oh well, I don’t mind a one man day every once and a while.’ She took some time to get up off the kneeling pad and stretch out her legs. She decided to walk around the garden’s perimeter to help out the sore legs and to inspect where else she needed to weed as a cover to why she was not working. ‘Well, almost done, I have left to do is prune that…’ a flicker of long brunette hair interrupted her. ‘hehehe…’ the blond’s lips turned up into a smile ‘looks like I can have some fun.’ The landscaper’s intent was to hug the brunette from behind as she crept around the rose bush, but as she made her way around she realized that she made a mistake in identity. The woman gently inspecting the roses was not Nanoha, but one who had very similar and a bit more mature look. As the woman traced the petals of the flowers, Fate traced out the lines of this older image of Nanoha. She had the same figure, only slightly taller. The same face, but ever so sadder. A soft smile that lost any innocence.

“Oh, I’m sorry. Am I interrupting your work?” The older woman retracted her hand.

Fate took a moment to snap to. “No, not really…” She scrambled for something to say. “Do you like those flowers?”

The woman looked back at the roses “Yes,” she said in a shy, yet more mature voice “They are quite lovely.”

“Well then,” The landscaper walked close to the bush and inspected its proportions. “Ah.” She then pruned two of the flowers from the plant. She then exchanged her pruners for her pocket knife and carefully removed the thorns from the stems. “Here,” she held out the roses. “One for you and one for the lady that is so nice to bring us water when we are here.”

The woman took the flowers into her hand. “Thank you, but you didn’t have to do this.”

“The bush needed pruning anyways, and it’s better that such pretty flowers don’t go to waste.”

The brunette smiled and took a slight whiff of the rose’s fragrance. “The lady that brings you water?”

“Yes, she looks just like you.”

“My daughter you mean, Nanoha.” She brought the flower down and gazed upon Fate again.

“She is your daughter? Well, now I know who she got her beauty from.” The blond smiled at Nanoha’s mother ‘Don’t push it Fate, don’t want them to know the landscaper wants to do –this and that- with their daughter.’

“Thank you for the complement,” The woman blushed slightly, “and I will make sure that my daughter receives this rose.”

“Oh, where are my manners. My name is Fate Testarossa.” She took off her glove and held out her hand.

“My name is Momoko Takamachi” The women reached out her hand as well and gently shook the others. “It is a pleasure to meet you Miss Testarossa.”

“No, the pleasure is all mine. Now that I know that someone like you is enjoying this garden I’ll make sure to do an extra good job at keeping it looking beautiful.”

“Oh,” Momoko brought her hand back and blushed, “Thank you. I must say that my husband made a good choice in landscapers.”

Fate bowed politely, “Thank you. I don’t hear that that often.”

“I ought to let you return to your work, Miss Testarossa.”

Fate only politely nodded as the brunette turned and walked away. ‘God damn! She’s hot!’ She turned around and looked back at her work ‘Play time over…’

= = = = =

The blond wiped her brow as she loaded the last of her things into the back of the truck. “And… done.”

“Excuse me, Gardener.”

‘Oh I don’t know what to be pissed off about first, the term Gardener or the bitch tone of her voice’ Fate turned around and looked at the woman dressed in business attire that was standing with her arms crossed glaring at the landscaper. “May I help you?”

“You must set up the back patio for a meeting today. We want the rot iron chairs and tables that are in storage and all the extra flower pots removed.”

‘I swear I heard this arrogant tone before.’ “I’m sorry Ma’am, I can’t do that. I’ve already gone over this with the customer; I can’t do anything without a work order or a signature approving changes to a work order. Also, you don’t hire a landscaping firm to move the kinds of things you are asking for.”

The women seemed irritated by this “You will do as I say or I will have…”

“You fired?” Fate started to drop the formality out of her own speech “Last time I checked I was an employee of Harloawn Landscaping. They are the ones I’m employed too, the ones I get my paycheck from. You are just a customer; you have no power over my employment. In fact, my boss has a thing for dropping customers that harass his workers.”

“And I see they don’t mind hiring people like you.” The women smirked while looking down at Fate’s attire.

“Please tell me, what is that suppose to mean?”

“I am saying that this ‘landscaping’ company is low enough to have someone that talks like and has the attitude of a common whore on their payroll.”

“Oh, I’m sooo sorry” Fate slammed the tailgate shut and walked to the driver’s door. “I didn’t know I was using such inappropriate language in front of such an important CCD.”

“CCD? What is that street talk for?”

Fate jumped into the trucked and closed the door. “Corporate Cum Dumpster.”

The woman yelled through the open window “You are calling me what?”

“I’m calling you a nice warm hole for all those important business men that need assistance during their rough days in the office.”

“Why you little…”

“See, all that uppity ‘I’m better than you’ bullshit runs away when you’re called out on what you really are…” Fate keyed the ignition, “I bet you fuck like a sex crazed slut.” With that she drove away, leaving the scorned woman stammering in the driveway. ‘CCD…not bad for coming up with that on the spot. I think Chrono will enjoy that one.’

= = = = =

“Hello there Princess” Fate leaned forward towards Nanoha, who was approaching the lamppost. “How are you this evening?”

“Oh I’m fine,” the girl dressed in a pink tee-shirt and blue jeans replied. Once caught up to Fate, they walked in the direction of the downtown district.

“Oh by the…” Both girls stopped their sentence and looked at each other embarrassed.

Nanoha giggled and conceded the conversation to the blond. “You go ahead first.”

“Well, I saw your mother yesterday.”

“That’s what I was going to talk about! Thank you for the flower.” The end of her sentence trailed off into a blush.

“No problem, anything for my Princess”

‘My Princess…’ Nanoha played with her hands at the sound of that possessive statement.

“And your Mother is really hot”

“Really hot….? You think my Mother is hot!” Nanoha stared wide-eyed at Fate.

“Yes I do.” Nanoha continued to look at her with disbelief “Now I know where you get your good looks from… and what I have to look forward to in the future.”

“Oh… that’s what you meant. Sorry…” Princess looked down at her feet while they continued their stroll.

“Were you worried about me ogling your mother?” Fate stopped in her tracks. “Don’t worry,” She leaned forwarded enough so that Princess got a good view down the top of her black tank top. “You’re the one with the looks that gets me all hot and bothered over.”

Nanoha’s blush grew deep red. “I… am that attractive to you?”

“Yep!” The blond continued walking on, motioning towards a convenience store “I even find your shyness cuter too, compared to you mom.”

“My shyness too?”

Fate pushed the door open for Nanoha. “But I think that’s because you are still corruptible.”

“Corrup…. I give up on trying to understand you…” Princess sighed out.

“Oh that’s no fun,” Fate preceded to grab various snacks for their walk, “I was going to talk all kinds of dirty smack about your bitch sister.”

“You met my sister?”

“Oh yes I did…” Fate stopped her sarcastic voice when she reached the machine she wanted, “Slurpy?”

“Ah, no thank you, and what exactly happened with meeting my sister? I remember the day you came over to fix the garden up she came inside furious over something.”

“Oh we just had a little spat.” Fate emptied her pockets and played the cashier. “She treated me like I was her personal slave and I called her what she really is.”

Nanoha took a candy bar out of their bag and opened it up “What did you call her?”

Fate gave a look at Princess that made her stop biting her Snickers bar halfway through. “I thought you said you where going to give up on trying to understand me?”

The girl finished her bite and shrugged in response.

“Well then, I called your sister a Corporate Cum Dumpster.”

Princess contemplated this for a few moments. “What’s a… cum dumpster?”

“I knew you where going to ask that.”

“Mou… Fate! I don’t know these kinds of things.”

“Alright then,” the blond explained “lets see if you can wrap you head around this. Basically a cum dumpster is a women, or man, who exists only to be a place for men to put their ejaculate in. I figure that your sister is only in her position, whatever it is, because she sucked, fucked, and was jacked off on by every single dick in the whole company. I don’t doubt that she’s been cov…”

“Ewwww….” Nanoha cringed, “That’s disgusting.”

“So you do know a few things. How do you know these things?”

“I have had basic sex education. It is just that those kinds of things are so dirty that I don’t know all that much about them. And stuff like that I am sure I did not need to know about.”

“But now you know why your sister was so angry. I called her an office slut.”

Nanoha finished her candy bar. “Did you have to go so far?”

“Yes.” Fate dank a bit of her slurpy.

“Why?”

“Because she treated you like shit and she treated me like shit.”

“That’s why you called her that?” She couldn’t grasp all of what Fate was saying.

“Yep, when someone picks on my friends I get them back. I’m kind of cool like that. Your father, brother, and sister are all douchebags as far as I’m concerned.”

The brunette pondered this a bit, “So… that’s a good thing right?”

“It’s a good thing.”

The two continued their rounds around the town Nanoha taking in the sights of the streets while Fate took in the sights of Nanoha.

“Mou…”

“What is it?”

“I am thirsty.” Princess pleaded

“Should have gotten the slurpy. Here, have some of mine.” Fate held out the container with the straw facing Nanoha.

Nanoha stared at the straw just inches from her mouth. “But you already…”

“What’s wrong? My mouth isn’t dirty is it?” She smiled as she got closer to Nanoha “You’re thirsty, take a sip.”

She look from Fate’s eyes and back to the straw with a hint of salvia on it. “Well, ok.” With a shy movement she grabbed the tube with her mouth and called the liquid forward. Fate’s smile grew deeper with the action.

“That’s it, just like that…”

“Mou…” Princess pulled back with pink cheeks “That tone of yours sounded dirty…”

“It was dirty.” Fate pulled back the cup and brought it up to her own lips. Slowly she reached for the straw with her tongue and carefully wrapped her lips around the cylinder. She sucked the remainder of the liquid into her mouth, “Mummm…. Tasty....” She let the straw go and gazed down at Nanoha. “I just shared an indirect kiss with my Princess.”

“Mou Fate…” The now bright red girl cried out.

The blond just smiled back, “Come on… let’s get you home.”

Yay, L!F! I did like the flower scene. Fate was funny. So it seems like Nanoha and Momoko are the only cool ones in the family. Lol, CCD. I feel like a slurpy.

[Knight of L-sama]

Spoiler for Yuuno/Fate?:

A new school, a new destiny. I pumped a fist into the air, declaring quietly to myself, "I won't be bullied anymore. Not anymore. And... I'm going to find myself... a girlfriend!"

"Four-eyes, it's time to get to school. Stop drooling over your non-existent chest hairs and let's get going already."

I growled in silent defiance. Zafira never was very nice to me. But he meant well, and in an orphanage like ours, that had to be taken for all that it was worth. Grabbing my new school bag, I shut my bedroom door behind me as I announced, "Coming!"

The foot of the stairs introduced a vibrant orange(pink?) haired older girl who was quick to give me my daily dosage of noogies* as she said, "Well, well, well, is our lil' Yuuno ready to start high school today? Better make sure to keep hold of your lunch money, kiddo. You know you ain't goin' to get reimbursed by anyone from here. Got it?"

"Ahhh, my hair!" I struggled away from her and quickly pulled out a comb to smooth back my hair. "Geez, Arf, you're so rough. You're never going to get a boyfriend if you don't declaw yourself already."

Arf snorted and returned, "And you won't be getting a girlfriend even if you /clawed/ yourself." She paused, as if trying to figure out how that retort translated, but let it go. Arf isn't exactly the smartest crayon in the box, but she can get the job done like nobody's business.

The way to school was fairly quiet. I had gone out yesterday and mapped our route to school so that we could get there in the shortest time possible. Arf and Zafira were seniors at my school this year, and both fairly popular in their own right. I trailed behind them, allowing for a reasonable distance between us. I was out to make a name for myself /by/ myself after all. If I was tagged with them, who knows what would be become of me. I still remembered that hazing incident last year where my clothes became a second flapping school flag with me still wearing them- and I hadn't even been the one trying to get onto the stupid football team.

But none of that mattered now. I was in high school. The big H.S. Things would be different. They /had/ to be different.

"Nyahaha-OOF!"

I blinked as I felt someone bump into me from the side, apparently entirely by accident. I looked at her and couldn't help but smile. Her ponytail was completely offcenter, to the point that it was practically an intentional side ponytail, but she had a very... neat look about her. Clean. Her eyes were bright and full of life as well.

She bowed and smiled apologetically. "Ah, sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going."

"It's okay, don't worry about it." I smiled at her.

She nodded and continued on her way, going back to talking to two of her friends.

I sighed happily. See, that wasn't so hard. I talked to a girl. Without stuttering. That's more than I can say for the last 16 years of my life.

Homeroom passed rather uneventfully, though I found that the girl with the side-tail was in the same class as me. I introduced myself to her before 1st period started, and she told me her name was Nanoha. Nanoha. Well, that's a nice name. I asked her if she knew what it meant and she said she didn't think it meant anything. Oh well. We got to talking and I learned I was better at English than she was and I agreed to help her out in that area whenever she needed it.

It turned out to be a very nice day indeed. Talked to a girl, became her study buddy, made her smile. It was all very well and good. Perhaps in the future, she would be my girlfriend? She didn't seem against it so far yet. That was generally a good sign. Unless she was hiding it to be polite. But she seems pretty upfront and genuine.

I looked for her during lunch, but couldn't find her, so I just went looking around for an empty spot to sit. I found a nice shady tree and sat underneath it. I was about to dig into my lunch bread meal when I heard a voice above me.

"Hey, jerk. You're in our spot. Move it or lose it."

I looked up to see a carrot-top girl who was currently glaring down at me. Her companion, a girl with short, purple hair, didn't look quite so venomous, but she seemed to desire the same thing.

Looking around, I noted all the other trees had been claimed already. "Can't we share? It's a fairly big tree." Actually, it wasn't. It was a dinky little maple that couldn't have been more than 5 years old. Shading two people was pushing it.

They seemed to realize this as well. The first girl snorted derisively. "As if I would share with a little rodent like you. Don't you know who-"

I frowned. I wasn't going to get bullied out of a lunch spot right off the bat, was I? Was everyone like this? What was it about me that attracted such negative attention?

"HEY!" She suddenly grabbed the collar of my shirt and her face was instantly far too close. "Are you listening to me, mopey boy?"

Mopey? Hey, since when was I mopey? I was just about to retort, when another voice entered the fray.

"Excuse me." We all looked over to find a girl with an angelic disposition and long blond hair tied off with a large ribbon at the very end. She smiled at the orange-haired girl, and I felt the grip on my shirt loosen in her surprise. "As part of the discipline committee, I'm afraid I can't let such violent behavior go unchecked. Is the situation really one that calls for such actions?"

"Teana, let's-"

The orange-haired girl, Teana, threw off the pacifying attempt of her friend and dropped me to glare at the new girl. Sadly, she came short by about three inches, so her intimidation factor instantly dropped. Well, technically, I was taller than her too, but it didn't seem to matter in my case. "It's the first friggin' day, Testerossa. Must you /always/ get in the way?"

"Honestly?" Testerossa smiled, as innocently as ever. "Yes. I told you, it's my job."

"So if you weren't, you'd get out of my hair?"

"Mm... maybe."

"I hate you."

"I'm sorry to hear that."

Teana growled, giving Testerossa a death glare. The blonde accepted the challenge with an unwavering smile and clear gaze. Shortly thereafter, Teana clicked her tongue and turned away. "Come on, Subaru. Let's go find somewhere to sit where there aren't stupid blondes and almost-blondes around."

I looked down at my long hair and mused that it was 'almost-blonde'. Thinking to thank the girl, I looked back up towards her, and was struck speechless by the way the sun chose to illuminate her, much like the effect of a corona during a lunar eclipse (?). It made her look darker, and yet brighter at the same time. Odd.

"Are you all right? Did she hurt you?"

"Ah, no, no, I'm fine." I smiled up at her, finding my voice again. "Thank you for dealing with her. I appreciate it."

She smiled back at me, leaning down. "As way of appreciation, do you mind if I rest under this tree for a bit? The sun is killing me."

"Oh! Of course, of course." I scooted over to make room for her and she plopped down beside me.

"Thanks. Ahh... this feels good."

As she used a folder she was holding as a fun, letting the open collar of her shirt flutter just slightly, I realized that my heartrate had suddenly picked up speed. I noticed all at once her thick, sweet scent, the gentle variations in her hair that gave it distinction, the rosy hue of her cheeks that offset her otherwise pale skin.

"What is it?" She was smiling curiously at me.

"Ah, I was, that is, I mean, you look, ah... erm... dammit." It wasn't even halfway through the first day and my stutter was already back.

I gulped. "You are..."


~Not TBC again >.<

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

Spoiler for Yuuno/Fate?:

A new school, a new destiny. I pumped a fist into the air, declaring quietly to myself, "I won't be bullied anymore. Not anymore. And... I'm going to find myself... a girlfriend!"

"Four-eyes, it's time to get to school. Stop drooling over your non-existent chest hairs and let's get going already."

I growled in silent defiance. Zafira never was very nice to me. But he meant well, and in an orphanage like ours, that had to be taken for all that it was worth. Grabbing my new school bag, I shut my bedroom door behind me as I announced, "Coming!"

The foot of the stairs introduced a vibrant orange(pink?) haired older girl who was quick to give me my daily dosage of noogies* as she said, "Well, well, well, is our lil' Yuuno ready to start high school today? Better make sure to keep hold of your lunch money, kiddo. You know you ain't goin' to get reimbursed by anyone from here. Got it?"

"Ahhh, my hair!" I struggled away from her and quickly pulled out a comb to smooth back my hair. "Geez, Arf, you're so rough. You're never going to get a boyfriend if you don't declaw yourself already."

Arf snorted and returned, "And you won't be getting a girlfriend even if you /clawed/ yourself." She paused, as if trying to figure out how that retort translated, but let it go. Arf isn't exactly the smartest crayon in the box, but she can get the job done like nobody's business.

The way to school was fairly quiet. I had gone out yesterday and mapped our route to school so that we could get there in the shortest time possible. Arf and Zafira were seniors at my school this year, and both fairly popular in their own right. I trailed behind them, allowing for a reasonable distance between us. I was out to make a name for myself /by/ myself after all. If I was tagged with them, who knows what would be become of me. I still remembered that hazing incident last year where my clothes became a second flapping school flag with me still wearing them- and I hadn't even been the one trying to get onto the stupid football team.

But none of that mattered now. I was in high school. The big H.S. Things would be different. They /had/ to be different.

"Nyahaha-OOF!"

I blinked as I felt someone bump into me from the side, apparently entirely by accident. I looked at her and couldn't help but smile. Her ponytail was completely offcenter, to the point that it was practically an intentional side ponytail, but she had a very... neat look about her. Clean. Her eyes were bright and full of life as well.

She bowed and smiled apologetically. "Ah, sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going."

"It's okay, don't worry about it." I smiled at her.

She nodded and continued on her way, going back to talking to two of her friends.

I sighed happily. See, that wasn't so hard. I talked to a girl. Without stuttering. That's more than I can say for the last 16 years of my life.

Homeroom passed rather uneventfully, though I found that the girl with the side-tail was in the same class as me. I introduced myself to her before 1st period started, and she told me her name was Nanoha. Nanoha. Well, that's a nice name. I asked her if she knew what it meant and she said she didn't think it meant anything. Oh well. We got to talking and I learned I was better at English than she was and I agreed to help her out in that area whenever she needed it.

It turned out to be a very nice day indeed. Talked to a girl, became her study buddy, made her smile. It was all very well and good. Perhaps in the future, she would be my girlfriend? She didn't seem against it so far yet. That was generally a good sign. Unless she was hiding it to be polite. But she seems pretty upfront and genuine.

I looked for her during lunch, but couldn't find her, so I just went looking around for an empty spot to sit. I found a nice shady tree and sat underneath it. I was about to dig into my lunch bread meal when I heard a voice above me.

"Hey, jerk. You're in our spot. Move it or lose it."

I looked up to see a carrot-top girl who was currently glaring down at me. Her companion, a girl with short, purple hair, didn't look quite so venomous, but she seemed to desire the same thing.

Looking around, I noted all the other trees had been claimed already. "Can't we share? It's a fairly big tree." Actually, it wasn't. It was a dinky little maple that couldn't have been more than 5 years old. Shading two people was pushing it.

They seemed to realize this as well. The first girl snorted derisively. "As if I would share with a little rodent like you. Don't you know who-"

I frowned. I wasn't going to get bullied out of a lunch spot right off the bat, was I? Was everyone like this? What was it about me that attracted such negative attention?

"HEY!" She suddenly grabbed the collar of my shirt and her face was instantly far too close. "Are you listening to me, mopey boy?"

Mopey? Hey, since when was I mopey? I was just about to retort, when another voice entered the fray.

"Excuse me." We all looked over to find a girl with an angelic disposition and long blond hair tied off with a large ribbon at the very end. She smiled at the orange-haired girl, and I felt the grip on my shirt loosen in her surprise. "As part of the discipline committee, I'm afraid I can't let such violent behavior go unchecked. Is the situation really one that calls for such actions?"

"Teana, let's-"

The orange-haired girl, Teana, threw off the pacifying attempt of her friend and dropped me to glare at the new girl. Sadly, she came short by about three inches, so her intimidation factor instantly dropped. Well, technically, I was taller than her too, but it didn't seem to matter in my case. "It's the first friggin' day, Testerossa. Must you /always/ get in the way?"

"Honestly?" Testerossa smiled, as innocently as ever. "Yes. I told you, it's my job."

"So if you weren't, you'd get out of my hair?"

"Mm... maybe."

"I hate you."

"I'm sorry to hear that."

Teana growled, giving Testerossa a death glare. The blonde accepted the challenge with an unwavering smile and clear gaze. Shortly thereafter, Teana clicked her tongue and turned away. "Come on, Subaru. Let's go find somewhere to sit where there aren't stupid blondes and almost-blondes around."

I looked down at my long hair and mused that it was 'almost-blonde'. Thinking to thank the girl, I looked back up towards her, and was struck speechless by the way the sun chose to illuminate her, much like the effect of a corona during a lunar eclipse (?). It made her look darker, and yet brighter at the same time. Odd.

"Are you all right? Did she hurt you?"

"Ah, no, no, I'm fine." I smiled up at her, finding my voice again. "Thank you for dealing with her. I appreciate it."

She smiled back at me, leaning down. "As way of appreciation, do you mind if I rest under this tree for a bit? The sun is killing me."

"Oh! Of course, of course." I scooted over to make room for her and she plopped down beside me.

"Thanks. Ahh... this feels good."

As she used a folder she was holding as a fun, letting the open collar of her shirt flutter just slightly, I realized that my heartrate had suddenly picked up speed. I noticed all at once her thick, sweet scent, the gentle variations in her hair that gave it distinction, the rosy hue of her cheeks that offset her otherwise pale skin.

"What is it?" She was smiling curiously at me.

"Ah, I was, that is, I mean, you look, ah... erm... dammit." It wasn't even halfway through the first day and my stutter was already back.

I gulped. "You are..."


~Not TBC again >.<

Aww that was cute (it's red btw) Sounds like the beginning of a Yuuno dating sim.

and based (based cause I changed some stuff up ) off that 'World' so to say and featuring one of my favorite couples here's a short short

Spoiler for confession:

"You can do it Aniki!" Yuuno cheered on his older brother by adoption, Zafira, as he slowly crossed the room to approach the lovely red head currently looking down at the letter in her hand.

Yuuno watched Zafira start to break out in a sweat, a rather heavy sweat in fact within minutes Zafira's shirt would be completely drenched it seemed so he'd better do it quickly. Yuuno fumbled around for his 'Go Aniki!' poster and held it high up in the air.

Arf looked up, "Oh Zafira did you send this?" It was lucky Arf wasn't the brightest bulb or she would have seen Zafira's utter panic. "What'd you want to tell me?"

"I-I" Zafira's face started to redden. "W-well

"Go go!" Yuuno cheered in the background waving flags around with 'confess' on them.

Arf continued to look innocently at him.

Zafira fiddled with his fingers, "I really like..."

"Hm?" She tilted her head to the side.

Yuuno's cheering grew louder.

"I-I really like..."

"Go go go for gold!"

"I really like y-y-y..."

"Y?" Arf gasped. "Yuuno!"

Zafira almost fell over and Yuuno actually did.

"N-no! That's not what I was saying!"

Yuuno gaped, "Aniki! Quick tell her!"

Arf patted Zafira's shoulder. "I understand. Forbidden love between brothers and all that."

Yuuno cried in the background, "you don't understand at all Ar-nee."

"Don't worry," she patted the shocked Zafira's shoulder. "I'll support you in your love~! I read about this kind of stuff all the time in doujin!"

Zafira cried manly tears as she walked off singing about brotherly love.

I like this world maybe I'll play in it some more XD

[Knight of L-sama]

Originally Posted by markesellus

Ooh!! Does someone feel like continuing this? Because I want to know what happens.

Spoiler for My take on what happens next:

"Hayate, I have to tell you something. I..."

Suddenly Nanoha walked in "Hey Hayate have you seen... WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!"

'Oh shit' Fate thought

"STARLIGHT!"

"Nanoha please!" Hayate tried to explain.

"Get your own blonde!"

"BREAKER!!!!"

^-^ Twould be more fun if scenes weren't interrupted all the time like they are, but still fun. ^w^ *makes no attempt to think of how I would continue it*

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

smile...

Spoiler for L!F Ladies of the House:

=snipperdoodle=

^-^ Cuuuutee. Fate has a way with all teh Takamachi ladies~ XP Amazing that she's never met the mother at that point tho. o.o And if that's part three, where are 1 and 2? (*did I just not read the titles of the other ones?*)

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Aww that was cute (it's red btw) Sounds like the beginning of a Yuuno dating sim.

and based (based cause I changed some stuff up ) off that 'World' so to say and featuring one of my favorite couples here's a short short

Spoiler for confession:

"You can do it Aniki!" Yuuno cheered on his older brother by adoption, Zafira, as he slowly crossed the room to approach the lovely red head currently looking down at the letter in her hand.

Yuuno watched Zafira start to break out in a sweat, a rather heavy sweat in fact within minutes Zafira's shirt would be completely drenched it seemed so he'd better do it quickly. Yuuno fumbled around for his 'Go Aniki!' poster and held it high up in the air.

Arf looked up, "Oh Zafira did you send this?" It was lucky Arf wasn't the brightest bulb or she would have seen Zafira's utter panic. "What'd you want to tell me?"

"I-I" Zafira's face started to redden. "W-well

"Go go!" Yuuno cheered in the background waving flags around with 'confess' on them.

Arf continued to look innocently at him.

Zafira fiddled with his fingers, "I really like..."

"Hm?" She tilted her head to the side.

Yuuno's cheering grew louder.

"I-I really like..."

"Go go go for gold!"

"I really like y-y-y..."

"Y?" Arf gasped. "Yuuno!"

Zafira almost fell over and Yuuno actually did.

"N-no! That's not what I was saying!"

Yuuno gaped, "Aniki! Quick tell her!"

Arf patted Zafira's shoulder. "I understand. Forbidden love between brothers and all that."

Yuuno cried in the background, "you don't understand at all Ar-nee."

"Don't worry," she patted the shocked Zafira's shoulder. "I'll support you in your love~! I read about this kind of stuff all the time in doujin!"

Zafira cried manly tears as she walked off singing about brotherly love.

I like this world maybe I'll play in it some more XD

^__^ Play hard now, Play harder later? I seem to like making up different AU realms. Ah well.

*dances away*

[Evil Rick]

I need your help

Spoiler for Chapter 10:

The main Station was filled with Maligno's heanchmens, all of them well armed, Vita and Gary aparently were out of suspicious thanks to the costumes they were wearing, although, Vita was really worried about be spoted thanks to Gary's try tyo imitate a female walking

"And I though that Alphonse was strange" Vita though, suddenly, the talk of 2 heanchmens called the atention of Vita

"Hey, Rage returned last night"

"Hmm... who was the poor soul that he masacred this time?"

"A young mage, the daughter of the White Devil"

"The baby devil? You are kidding, right?"

"You know that when is refering to Rage, there are no jokes, Maligno comanded Rage to torturate and liciate that girl, as a warning to the TSAB of what will hapen to them if they get in the bussines of the Brotherhood of Death"

"The cult that leads that woman? Uhmm... since Maligno formed that aliance with that woman, the things are getting pretty scary around here"

"She's the Silver Queen, and what do you mean with scary?"

"I mean about all those strange warriors taht are appearing, like that Parca Guy, I don't know who is scarier, Parca or Rage"

"You are forgeting that other warrior, the one named Freeza"

"Oh yeah, is that guy with the blue face right? Pretty scary also"

"Blue Face?" Vita inmediatly recognised that description, when she was chasing that truck in the auto parking, the driver of the vehicle had a blue face, "So his name is Freeza..." Vita though again

"Atention to all the troops" A male voice was heared through a comunicator in the big chamber that was the Main Station "The train will leave the station in 1 hour, all weaponmasters and chargo transportist report to level 4 of the station"

Vita turned and saw to one of the walls, a big number 1 was painted on it

"To reach the train I must go to the level 4" She though

She then looked for Gary to tell him that they must go to the section 4, but she stoped when she saw a big, muscle sopldier talking with Gary, Vita's companion looked quite nervous and was tring to hide his face from the other guy

"Hey babe, haven't see you in section 1 before"

"Ha... yeah, I've tranfered here from sector... uh... 4" Gary responded tring to imitate a female voice

"Damn, you probably screwed up big for been launched from sector 4 to here... well, maybe we can... know each other better, don't you think?"

"Uhmmm... yes... well, I... I... need to..."

"Bertha!" Vita screamed runing at Gary "Bertha, stop flirting around, we must go to section 4 now!" Vita grabed the arm of Gary and pulled him out of the danger

"Oh... you saved me Space Girl"

"I must admit that it would be something fun to see, but I need you and your 'spirit' intacts in order to catch Rage"

"And to save my girl"

"Yes, yes! We'll save your girlfriend, now let's move!"

Vita and Gary ran into a little chamber with stairs going down, they needed to hurry to sector 4
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TSAB Hospital

Vivio was still asleep on the bed's hospital, the machines that keeped her alive were still making their noises

The young man walked into the room without been detected, he grabed the chair in wich Nanoha was sited and he placed himself at the side of the bed, from his pocket, he pulled out a little bottle filled with a strange liquid, he removed the tap and passed the bottle beneath Viovio's nose, the girl inmediatly awake

"Ugh... wna.... were..."

"You are in the TSAB hospital Vivio"

Vivio turned to see the man that just talked to her, he was a young man, with black hair, a strange costume and yellow eyes, Vivio didn't know... but she was at the precense of the same guy who gave Vita the key in the Island

"W-Who are you...?" Vivio asked

"You look terrible, ha, even an old cloth looks better than you!"

"Uh... what hapened... I can't remember anything...."

"A warrior named Rage teached you some tricks, the so famous Baby devil is now a liciated amge unable to even grave a spoon without shacke"

"H-have you... came here just to... to mock me?"

"No Vivio... I came here to make a deal with you"

"A... a deal?"

"Yes, you see... I'm currently in a quest to help a friend, of me... you probably know her... Vita"

"Vita?... You... are friend of... of Vita?"

"Yes in a manner of Speaking" The man said, after this he grabed once more the bottle he had

"You see this? This Vivio is Dragon's Blood, if you drink this, all your injuries will heal and you'll be totally new tomorrow at the morning"

"Are... are you going to..."

"Give it to you? If you want it you must promise me that you will help me help Vita"

"Vita... Vita is my friend... I'll help her anytime..."

"Ah, well, there is another point, I'm asking the aid of you, not of your mamans or of any of your frineds, if youy acept the deal, your loyalty will be now... for the Black Dragon Clan"

"The... the Black Dragon... Clan?"

"You are a smart girl, hehe, yes, the Black Dragon Clan"

"And what is... it?"

"All at it's time, if you acept, that answer will come in the future... now, the question is... We have a deal?"

Vivio looked at the bottle and then she looked at this misterius warrior, was he tricking her? Why he said that he wanted to help Vita? Help her for what? Why ask help to her and not to Nanoha or Fate who are stronger mages? And what was the Black Dragon Clan?

"Vivio... I'm runing out of time, we have a deal?"

"I... I... I acept"

"Ah, that's a great choise, now, tomorrow, the first thing you'll do, is go to the center of Central City and be on the plaza's font at 11:00 AM, a friend of me will find you there, and she'll tell you what to do next"

The misterius guy placed on the chair in wich he was sited, some clothes

"And I'll leave you my presentation card" He pulled out a little card with a crocodile drawn on it and placed it also on the chair, over the clothes, he then grabed the head of Vivio and helped her to drink all the Dragon's blood

"Have nice dreams Vivio" He said after that,m Vivio falled totally asleep, and this misterius warrior disdapeared into the darkness of the Hospital

[Laith]

Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

Spoiler for Nurse!Hayate w/ Patient!Fate..... Non-sexual possible NSFW:

"W-what?" Fate looked around nervously. "N-no one told me about that."

Hayate giggled as she flexed her hands. "Of course they wouldn't. It's nothing too... worthy of mention. Just step forward and it'll be over before you know it."

Fate mumbled, "Where's Shamal? Wouldn't she normally do this?"

Hayate waved her hand hurriedly as she wrote off Fate's concerns. "She's off doing more critical things. Besides, I'm a perfectly good judge of a healthy body. Haven't I had enough doctor's visits in my life to know that much? Now come on, Fate-chan... I'll give you a lollipop afterward~"

"Mou..." Still blushing, Fate checked to make sure the blinds were all secured before slowing unbuttoning her dress shirt. "You're abusing your position, you know that?"

"Abusing? Nothing of the sort. I'm off duty right now." One could almost see Hayate's tail wagging in anticipation. "So how are you and Nanoha doing these days, Fate-chan?"

Fate stopped mid-unbuttoning and suddenly pulled her shirt away from herself and looked down her shirt. Relieved that she didn't find what she was looking for, she continued unbuttoning until she was able to let the shirt slip off her shoulders. "We're fine." Looking up with bright cheeks and only a simple lacy black bra to cover her chest, Fate whispered, "This... this is okay, right?"

"Mmhmm. Let's see now..." Hayate stepped forward, her hands gently cupping Fate's breasts as her voice distracted her 'patient'. "Ooh, now this is definitely a nice consistency. Not too soft... not too firm... full and round..."

"Hayate..." Fate looked away, biting her lip to keep from saying anything that might give away how good it felt to be touched.

Hayate seemed to notice anyway. Her hands slipped down to Fate's waist, moving up and down Fate's curves as she whispered, "Does Nanoha leave hickies on you? Does she leave marks on this beautiful skin?"

"Not... only sometimes... when she does it on purpose..." Fate squirmed a little. "Are you done yet?"

"Hold on, I have to check /everywhere/ to get a good measure of what your BMI is..." Hayate's lips fell against Fate's bare shoulder as a hand traced her arm. "I have to determine where the muscles start and where the fat begins... Patience, Fate. Patience."

"Nnhh..." Fate felt her legs start to give out on her, and she gripped Hayate's shoulders to brace herself. "Hayate..."

"Hmm?" Hayate carefully unzipped Fate's skirt.

Fate moaned softly as Hayate's hands found a sizable mass of flesh just south of her tailbone and her grip tightened. "I... I missed you..."

"But you have Nanoha now. You got what you always wanted."

"Mmmm...." Fate closed her eyes to gather her wits about her. "I know... but it's not the same... I miss your hands over my body as I sleep... your lips against my ear... it's just not the same with Nanoha."

"Because we're different people."

"And I love you both. Yet... differently." Fate opened her eyes, finally gathering the courage to say what she had been avoiding these last six long months. She even placed her hands over Hayate's so that they wouldn't distract either of them. "Hayate, I have to tell you something. I..."

NOT TBC...

Hayeito FTW?

btw, while writing this I remembered that Neko!Nanoha had a bit of Fate/Hayate, didn't it?

Good, Tough now i wonder about what she was going to say

Originally Posted by markesellus

Ooh!! Does someone feel like continuing this? Because I want to know what happens.

Spoiler for My take on what happens next:

"Hayate, I have to tell you something. I..."

Suddenly Nanoha walked in "Hey Hayate have you seen... WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!"

'Oh shit' Fate thought

"STARLIGHT!"

"Nanoha please!" Hayate tried to explain.

"Get your own blonde!"

"BREAKER!!!!"

Obvious inspiration is obvious.

Lol, but I can see Precia doing that. D:

[EDIT]
Page claim for happier topics!

lol. I remember that...

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

smile...

Spoiler for L!F Ladies of the House:

Landscaper!Fate

Part 3: The Things we Do.

“Ladies of the House”

Once again Fate cursed about being on her knees. She knew that gardening was part of the job, but she couldn’t figure out why Kaden couldn’t come out for this overtime job. ‘Isn’t it a ritual to have the new meat weed all the time? Oh well, I don’t mind a one man day every once and a while.’ She took some time to get up off the kneeling pad and stretch out her legs. She decided to walk around the garden’s perimeter to help out the sore legs and to inspect where else she needed to weed as a cover to why she was not working. ‘Well, almost done, I have left to do is prune that…’ a flicker of long brunette hair interrupted her. ‘hehehe…’ the blond’s lips turned up into a smile ‘looks like I can have some fun.’ The landscaper’s intent was to hug the brunette from behind as she crept around the rose bush, but as she made her way around she realized that she made a mistake in identity. The woman gently inspecting the roses was not Nanoha, but one who had very similar and a bit more mature look. As the woman traced the petals of the flowers, Fate traced out the lines of this older image of Nanoha. She had the same figure, only slightly taller. The same face, but ever so sadder. A soft smile that lost any innocence.

“Oh, I’m sorry. Am I interrupting your work?” The older woman retracted her hand.

Fate took a moment to snap to. “No, not really…” She scrambled for something to say. “Do you like those flowers?”

The woman looked back at the roses “Yes,” she said in a shy, yet more mature voice “They are quite lovely.”

“Well then,” The landscaper walked close to the bush and inspected its proportions. “Ah.” She then pruned two of the flowers from the plant. She then exchanged her pruners for her pocket knife and carefully removed the thorns from the stems. “Here,” she held out the roses. “One for you and one for the lady that is so nice to bring us water when we are here.”

The woman took the flowers into her hand. “Thank you, but you didn’t have to do this.”

“The bush needed pruning anyways, and it’s better that such pretty flowers don’t go to waste.”

The brunette smiled and took a slight whiff of the rose’s fragrance. “The lady that brings you water?”

“Yes, she looks just like you.”

“My daughter you mean, Nanoha.” She brought the flower down and gazed upon Fate again.

“She is your daughter? Well, now I know who she got her beauty from.” The blond smiled at Nanoha’s mother ‘Don’t push it Fate, don’t want them to know the landscaper wants to do –this and that- with their daughter.’

“Thank you for the complement,” The woman blushed slightly, “and I will make sure that my daughter receives this rose.”

“Oh, where are my manners. My name is Fate Testarossa.” She took off her glove and held out her hand.

“My name is Momoko Takamachi” The women reached out her hand as well and gently shook the others. “It is a pleasure to meet you Miss Testarossa.”

“No, the pleasure is all mine. Now that I know that someone like you is enjoying this garden I’ll make sure to do an extra good job at keeping it looking beautiful.”

“Oh,” Momoko brought her hand back and blushed, “Thank you. I must say that my husband made a good choice in landscapers.”

Fate bowed politely, “Thank you. I don’t hear that that often.”

“I ought to let you return to your work, Miss Testarossa.”

Fate only politely nodded as the brunette turned and walked away. ‘God damn! She’s hot!’ She turned around and looked back at her work ‘Play time over…’

= = = = =

The blond wiped her brow as she loaded the last of her things into the back of the truck. “And… done.”

“Excuse me, Gardener.”

‘Oh I don’t know what to be pissed off about first, the term Gardener or the bitch tone of her voice’ Fate turned around and looked at the woman dressed in business attire that was standing with her arms crossed glaring at the landscaper. “May I help you?”

“You must set up the back patio for a meeting today. We want the rot iron chairs and tables that are in storage and all the extra flower pots removed.”

‘I swear I heard this arrogant tone before.’ “I’m sorry Ma’am, I can’t do that. I’ve already gone over this with the customer; I can’t do anything without a work order or a signature approving changes to a work order. Also, you don’t hire a landscaping firm to move the kinds of things you are asking for.”

The women seemed irritated by this “You will do as I say or I will have…”

“You fired?” Fate started to drop the formality out of her own speech “Last time I checked I was an employee of Harloawn Landscaping. They are the ones I’m employed too, the ones I get my paycheck from. You are just a customer; you have no power over my employment. In fact, my boss has a thing for dropping customers that harass his workers.”

“And I see they don’t mind hiring people like you.” The women smirked while looking down at Fate’s attire.

“Please tell me, what is that suppose to mean?”

“I am saying that this ‘landscaping’ company is low enough to have someone that talks like and has the attitude of a common whore on their payroll.”

“Oh, I’m sooo sorry” Fate slammed the tailgate shut and walked to the driver’s door. “I didn’t know I was using such inappropriate language in front of such an important CCD.”

“CCD? What is that street talk for?”

Fate jumped into the trucked and closed the door. “Corporate Cum Dumpster.”

The woman yelled through the open window “You are calling me what?”

“I’m calling you a nice warm hole for all those important business men that need assistance during their rough days in the office.”

“Why you little…”

“See, all that uppity ‘I’m better than you’ bullshit runs away when you’re called out on what you really are…” Fate keyed the ignition, “I bet you fuck like a sex crazed slut.” With that she drove away, leaving the scorned woman stammering in the driveway. ‘CCD…not bad for coming up with that on the spot. I think Chrono will enjoy that one.’

= = = = =

“Hello there Princess” Fate leaned forward towards Nanoha, who was approaching the lamppost. “How are you this evening?”

“Oh I’m fine,” the girl dressed in a pink tee-shirt and blue jeans replied. Once caught up to Fate, they walked in the direction of the downtown district.

“Oh by the…” Both girls stopped their sentence and looked at each other embarrassed.

Nanoha giggled and conceded the conversation to the blond. “You go ahead first.”

“Well, I saw your mother yesterday.”

“That’s what I was going to talk about! Thank you for the flower.” The end of her sentence trailed off into a blush.

“No problem, anything for my Princess”

‘My Princess…’ Nanoha played with her hands at the sound of that possessive statement.

“And your Mother is really hot”

“Really hot….? You think my Mother is hot!” Nanoha stared wide-eyed at Fate.

“Yes I do.” Nanoha continued to look at her with disbelief “Now I know where you get your good looks from… and what I have to look forward to in the future.”

“Oh… that’s what you meant. Sorry…” Princess looked down at her feet while they continued their stroll.

“Were you worried about me ogling your mother?” Fate stopped in her tracks. “Don’t worry,” She leaned forwarded enough so that Princess got a good view down the top of her black tank top. “You’re the one with the looks that gets me all hot and bothered over.”

Nanoha’s blush grew deep red. “I… am that attractive to you?”

“Yep!” The blond continued walking on, motioning towards a convenience store “I even find your shyness cuter too, compared to you mom.”

“My shyness too?”

Fate pushed the door open for Nanoha. “But I think that’s because you are still corruptible.”

“Corrup…. I give up on trying to understand you…” Princess sighed out.

“Oh that’s no fun,” Fate preceded to grab various snacks for their walk, “I was going to talk all kinds of dirty smack about your bitch sister.”

“You met my sister?”

“Oh yes I did…” Fate stopped her sarcastic voice when she reached the machine she wanted, “Slurpy?”

“Ah, no thank you, and what exactly happened with meeting my sister? I remember the day you came over to fix the garden up she came inside furious over something.”

“Oh we just had a little spat.” Fate emptied her pockets and played the cashier. “She treated me like I was her personal slave and I called her what she really is.”

Nanoha took a candy bar out of their bag and opened it up “What did you call her?”

Fate gave a look at Princess that made her stop biting her Snickers bar halfway through. “I thought you said you where going to give up on trying to understand me?”

The girl finished her bite and shrugged in response.

“Well then, I called your sister a Corporate Cum Dumpster.”

Princess contemplated this for a few moments. “What’s a… cum dumpster?”

“I knew you where going to ask that.”

“Mou… Fate! I don’t know these kinds of things.”

“Alright then,” the blond explained “lets see if you can wrap you head around this. Basically a cum dumpster is a women, or man, who exists only to be a place for men to put their ejaculate in. I figure that your sister is only in her position, whatever it is, because she sucked, fucked, and was jacked off on by every single dick in the whole company. I don’t doubt that she’s been cov…”

“Ewwww….” Nanoha cringed, “That’s disgusting.”

“So you do know a few things. How do you know these things?”

“I have had basic sex education. It is just that those kinds of things are so dirty that I don’t know all that much about them. And stuff like that I am sure I did not need to know about.”

“But now you know why your sister was so angry. I called her an office slut.”

Nanoha finished her candy bar. “Did you have to go so far?”

“Yes.” Fate dank a bit of her slurpy.

“Why?”

“Because she treated you like shit and she treated me like shit.”

“That’s why you called her that?” She couldn’t grasp all of what Fate was saying.

“Yep, when someone picks on my friends I get them back. I’m kind of cool like that. Your father, brother, and sister are all douchebags as far as I’m concerned.”

The brunette pondered this a bit, “So… that’s a good thing right?”

“It’s a good thing.”

The two continued their rounds around the town Nanoha taking in the sights of the streets while Fate took in the sights of Nanoha.

“Mou…”

“What is it?”

“I am thirsty.” Princess pleaded

“Should have gotten the slurpy. Here, have some of mine.” Fate held out the container with the straw facing Nanoha.

Nanoha stared at the straw just inches from her mouth. “But you already…”

“What’s wrong? My mouth isn’t dirty is it?” She smiled as she got closer to Nanoha “You’re thirsty, take a sip.”

She look from Fate’s eyes and back to the straw with a hint of salvia on it. “Well, ok.” With a shy movement she grabbed the tube with her mouth and called the liquid forward. Fate’s smile grew deeper with the action.

“That’s it, just like that…”

“Mou…” Princess pulled back with pink cheeks “That tone of yours sounded dirty…”

“It was dirty.” Fate pulled back the cup and brought it up to her own lips. Slowly she reached for the straw with her tongue and carefully wrapped her lips around the cylinder. She sucked the remainder of the liquid into her mouth, “Mummm…. Tasty....” She let the straw go and gazed down at Nanoha. “I just shared an indirect kiss with my Princess.”

“Mou Fate…” The now bright red girl cried out.

The blond just smiled back, “Come on… let’s get you home.”

The flower scene was cute. CCD That was funny.

Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

Spoiler for Yuuno/Fate?:

A new school, a new destiny. I pumped a fist into the air, declaring quietly to myself, "I won't be bullied anymore. Not anymore. And... I'm going to find myself... a girlfriend!"

"Four-eyes, it's time to get to school. Stop drooling over your non-existent chest hairs and let's get going already."

I growled in silent defiance. Zafira never was very nice to me. But he meant well, and in an orphanage like ours, that had to be taken for all that it was worth. Grabbing my new school bag, I shut my bedroom door behind me as I announced, "Coming!"

The foot of the stairs introduced a vibrant orange(pink?) haired older girl who was quick to give me my daily dosage of noogies* as she said, "Well, well, well, is our lil' Yuuno ready to start high school today? Better make sure to keep hold of your lunch money, kiddo. You know you ain't goin' to get reimbursed by anyone from here. Got it?"

"Ahhh, my hair!" I struggled away from her and quickly pulled out a comb to smooth back my hair. "Geez, Arf, you're so rough. You're never going to get a boyfriend if you don't declaw yourself already."

Arf snorted and returned, "And you won't be getting a girlfriend even if you /clawed/ yourself." She paused, as if trying to figure out how that retort translated, but let it go. Arf isn't exactly the smartest crayon in the box, but she can get the job done like nobody's business.

The way to school was fairly quiet. I had gone out yesterday and mapped our route to school so that we could get there in the shortest time possible. Arf and Zafira were seniors at my school this year, and both fairly popular in their own right. I trailed behind them, allowing for a reasonable distance between us. I was out to make a name for myself /by/ myself after all. If I was tagged with them, who knows what would be become of me. I still remembered that hazing incident last year where my clothes became a second flapping school flag with me still wearing them- and I hadn't even been the one trying to get onto the stupid football team.

But none of that mattered now. I was in high school. The big H.S. Things would be different. They /had/ to be different.

"Nyahaha-OOF!"

I blinked as I felt someone bump into me from the side, apparently entirely by accident. I looked at her and couldn't help but smile. Her ponytail was completely offcenter, to the point that it was practically an intentional side ponytail, but she had a very... neat look about her. Clean. Her eyes were bright and full of life as well.

She bowed and smiled apologetically. "Ah, sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going."

"It's okay, don't worry about it." I smiled at her.

She nodded and continued on her way, going back to talking to two of her friends.

I sighed happily. See, that wasn't so hard. I talked to a girl. Without stuttering. That's more than I can say for the last 16 years of my life.

Homeroom passed rather uneventfully, though I found that the girl with the side-tail was in the same class as me. I introduced myself to her before 1st period started, and she told me her name was Nanoha. Nanoha. Well, that's a nice name. I asked her if she knew what it meant and she said she didn't think it meant anything. Oh well. We got to talking and I learned I was better at English than she was and I agreed to help her out in that area whenever she needed it.

It turned out to be a very nice day indeed. Talked to a girl, became her study buddy, made her smile. It was all very well and good. Perhaps in the future, she would be my girlfriend? She didn't seem against it so far yet. That was generally a good sign. Unless she was hiding it to be polite. But she seems pretty upfront and genuine.

I looked for her during lunch, but couldn't find her, so I just went looking around for an empty spot to sit. I found a nice shady tree and sat underneath it. I was about to dig into my lunch bread meal when I heard a voice above me.

"Hey, jerk. You're in our spot. Move it or lose it."

I looked up to see a carrot-top girl who was currently glaring down at me. Her companion, a girl with short, purple hair, didn't look quite so venomous, but she seemed to desire the same thing.

Looking around, I noted all the other trees had been claimed already. "Can't we share? It's a fairly big tree." Actually, it wasn't. It was a dinky little maple that couldn't have been more than 5 years old. Shading two people was pushing it.

They seemed to realize this as well. The first girl snorted derisively. "As if I would share with a little rodent like you. Don't you know who-"

I frowned. I wasn't going to get bullied out of a lunch spot right off the bat, was I? Was everyone like this? What was it about me that attracted such negative attention?

"HEY!" She suddenly grabbed the collar of my shirt and her face was instantly far too close. "Are you listening to me, mopey boy?"

Mopey? Hey, since when was I mopey? I was just about to retort, when another voice entered the fray.

"Excuse me." We all looked over to find a girl with an angelic disposition and long blond hair tied off with a large ribbon at the very end. She smiled at the orange-haired girl, and I felt the grip on my shirt loosen in her surprise. "As part of the discipline committee, I'm afraid I can't let such violent behavior go unchecked. Is the situation really one that calls for such actions?"

"Teana, let's-"

The orange-haired girl, Teana, threw off the pacifying attempt of her friend and dropped me to glare at the new girl. Sadly, she came short by about three inches, so her intimidation factor instantly dropped. Well, technically, I was taller than her too, but it didn't seem to matter in my case. "It's the first friggin' day, Testerossa. Must you /always/ get in the way?"

"Honestly?" Testerossa smiled, as innocently as ever. "Yes. I told you, it's my job."

"So if you weren't, you'd get out of my hair?"

"Mm... maybe."

"I hate you."

"I'm sorry to hear that."

Teana growled, giving Testerossa a death glare. The blonde accepted the challenge with an unwavering smile and clear gaze. Shortly thereafter, Teana clicked her tongue and turned away. "Come on, Subaru. Let's go find somewhere to sit where there aren't stupid blondes and almost-blondes around."

I looked down at my long hair and mused that it was 'almost-blonde'. Thinking to thank the girl, I looked back up towards her, and was struck speechless by the way the sun chose to illuminate her, much like the effect of a corona during a lunar eclipse (?). It made her look darker, and yet brighter at the same time. Odd.

"Are you all right? Did she hurt you?"

"Ah, no, no, I'm fine." I smiled up at her, finding my voice again. "Thank you for dealing with her. I appreciate it."

She smiled back at me, leaning down. "As way of appreciation, do you mind if I rest under this tree for a bit? The sun is killing me."

"Oh! Of course, of course." I scooted over to make room for her and she plopped down beside me.

"Thanks. Ahh... this feels good."

As she used a folder she was holding as a fun, letting the open collar of her shirt flutter just slightly, I realized that my heartrate had suddenly picked up speed. I noticed all at once her thick, sweet scent, the gentle variations in her hair that gave it distinction, the rosy hue of her cheeks that offset her otherwise pale skin.

"What is it?" She was smiling curiously at me.

"Ah, I was, that is, I mean, you look, ah... erm... dammit." It wasn't even halfway through the first day and my stutter was already back.

I gulped. "You are..."


~Not TBC again >.<

I think its better to say that is multiple choice and not only fate

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Aww that was cute (it's red btw) Sounds like the beginning of a Yuuno dating sim.

and based (based cause I changed some stuff up ) off that 'World' so to say and featuring one of my favorite couples here's a short short

Spoiler for confession:

"You can do it Aniki!" Yuuno cheered on his older brother by adoption, Zafira, as he slowly crossed the room to approach the lovely red head currently looking down at the letter in her hand.

Yuuno watched Zafira start to break out in a sweat, a rather heavy sweat in fact within minutes Zafira's shirt would be completely drenched it seemed so he'd better do it quickly. Yuuno fumbled around for his 'Go Aniki!' poster and held it high up in the air.

Arf looked up, "Oh Zafira did you send this?" It was lucky Arf wasn't the brightest bulb or she would have seen Zafira's utter panic. "What'd you want to tell me?"

"I-I" Zafira's face started to redden. "W-well

"Go go!" Yuuno cheered in the background waving flags around with 'confess' on them.

Arf continued to look innocently at him.

Zafira fiddled with his fingers, "I really like..."

"Hm?" She tilted her head to the side.

Yuuno's cheering grew louder.

"I-I really like..."

"Go go go for gold!"

"I really like y-y-y..."

"Y?" Arf gasped. "Yuuno!"

Zafira almost fell over and Yuuno actually did.

"N-no! That's not what I was saying!"

Yuuno gaped, "Aniki! Quick tell her!"

Arf patted Zafira's shoulder. "I understand. Forbidden love between brothers and all that."

Yuuno cried in the background, "you don't understand at all Ar-nee."

"Don't worry," she patted the shocked Zafira's shoulder. "I'll support you in your love~! I read about this kind of stuff all the time in doujin!"

Zafira cried manly tears as she walked off singing about brotherly love.

I like this world maybe I'll play in it some more XD

So Zafira is into those things? I knew it... jokes aside Arf being naive is fun.

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

Spoiler for Yuuno/Fate?:

A new school, a new destiny. I pumped a fist into the air, declaring quietly to myself, "I won't be bullied anymore. Not anymore. And... I'm going to find myself... a girlfriend!"

"Four-eyes, it's time to get to school. Stop drooling over your non-existent chest hairs and let's get going already."

I growled in silent defiance. Zafira never was very nice to me. But he meant well, and in an orphanage like ours, that had to be taken for all that it was worth. Grabbing my new school bag, I shut my bedroom door behind me as I announced, "Coming!"

The foot of the stairs introduced a vibrant orange(pink?) haired older girl who was quick to give me my daily dosage of noogies* as she said, "Well, well, well, is our lil' Yuuno ready to start high school today? Better make sure to keep hold of your lunch money, kiddo. You know you ain't goin' to get reimbursed by anyone from here. Got it?"

"Ahhh, my hair!" I struggled away from her and quickly pulled out a comb to smooth back my hair. "Geez, Arf, you're so rough. You're never going to get a boyfriend if you don't declaw yourself already."

Arf snorted and returned, "And you won't be getting a girlfriend even if you /clawed/ yourself." She paused, as if trying to figure out how that retort translated, but let it go. Arf isn't exactly the smartest crayon in the box, but she can get the job done like nobody's business.

The way to school was fairly quiet. I had gone out yesterday and mapped our route to school so that we could get there in the shortest time possible. Arf and Zafira were seniors at my school this year, and both fairly popular in their own right. I trailed behind them, allowing for a reasonable distance between us. I was out to make a name for myself /by/ myself after all. If I was tagged with them, who knows what would be become of me. I still remembered that hazing incident last year where my clothes became a second flapping school flag with me still wearing them- and I hadn't even been the one trying to get onto the stupid football team.

But none of that mattered now. I was in high school. The big H.S. Things would be different. They /had/ to be different.

"Nyahaha-OOF!"

I blinked as I felt someone bump into me from the side, apparently entirely by accident. I looked at her and couldn't help but smile. Her ponytail was completely offcenter, to the point that it was practically an intentional side ponytail, but she had a very... neat look about her. Clean. Her eyes were bright and full of life as well.

She bowed and smiled apologetically. "Ah, sorry, I wasn't watching where I was going."

"It's okay, don't worry about it." I smiled at her.

She nodded and continued on her way, going back to talking to two of her friends.

I sighed happily. See, that wasn't so hard. I talked to a girl. Without stuttering. That's more than I can say for the last 16 years of my life.

Homeroom passed rather uneventfully, though I found that the girl with the side-tail was in the same class as me. I introduced myself to her before 1st period started, and she told me her name was Nanoha. Nanoha. Well, that's a nice name. I asked her if she knew what it meant and she said she didn't think it meant anything. Oh well. We got to talking and I learned I was better at English than she was and I agreed to help her out in that area whenever she needed it.

It turned out to be a very nice day indeed. Talked to a girl, became her study buddy, made her smile. It was all very well and good. Perhaps in the future, she would be my girlfriend? She didn't seem against it so far yet. That was generally a good sign. Unless she was hiding it to be polite. But she seems pretty upfront and genuine.

I looked for her during lunch, but couldn't find her, so I just went looking around for an empty spot to sit. I found a nice shady tree and sat underneath it. I was about to dig into my lunch bread meal when I heard a voice above me.

"Hey, jerk. You're in our spot. Move it or lose it."

I looked up to see a carrot-top girl who was currently glaring down at me. Her companion, a girl with short, purple hair, didn't look quite so venomous, but she seemed to desire the same thing.

Looking around, I noted all the other trees had been claimed already. "Can't we share? It's a fairly big tree." Actually, it wasn't. It was a dinky little maple that couldn't have been more than 5 years old. Shading two people was pushing it.

They seemed to realize this as well. The first girl snorted derisively. "As if I would share with a little rodent like you. Don't you know who-"

I frowned. I wasn't going to get bullied out of a lunch spot right off the bat, was I? Was everyone like this? What was it about me that attracted such negative attention?

"HEY!" She suddenly grabbed the collar of my shirt and her face was instantly far too close. "Are you listening to me, mopey boy?"

Mopey? Hey, since when was I mopey? I was just about to retort, when another voice entered the fray.

"Excuse me." We all looked over to find a girl with an angelic disposition and long blond hair tied off with a large ribbon at the very end. She smiled at the orange-haired girl, and I felt the grip on my shirt loosen in her surprise. "As part of the discipline committee, I'm afraid I can't let such violent behavior go unchecked. Is the situation really one that calls for such actions?"

"Teana, let's-"

The orange-haired girl, Teana, threw off the pacifying attempt of her friend and dropped me to glare at the new girl. Sadly, she came short by about three inches, so her intimidation factor instantly dropped. Well, technically, I was taller than her too, but it didn't seem to matter in my case. "It's the first friggin' day, Testerossa. Must you /always/ get in the way?"

"Honestly?" Testerossa smiled, as innocently as ever. "Yes. I told you, it's my job."

"So if you weren't, you'd get out of my hair?"

"Mm... maybe."

"I hate you."

"I'm sorry to hear that."

Teana growled, giving Testerossa a death glare. The blonde accepted the challenge with an unwavering smile and clear gaze. Shortly thereafter, Teana clicked her tongue and turned away. "Come on, Subaru. Let's go find somewhere to sit where there aren't stupid blondes and almost-blondes around."

I looked down at my long hair and mused that it was 'almost-blonde'. Thinking to thank the girl, I looked back up towards her, and was struck speechless by the way the sun chose to illuminate her, much like the effect of a corona during a lunar eclipse (?). It made her look darker, and yet brighter at the same time. Odd.

"Are you all right? Did she hurt you?"

"Ah, no, no, I'm fine." I smiled up at her, finding my voice again. "Thank you for dealing with her. I appreciate it."

She smiled back at me, leaning down. "As way of appreciation, do you mind if I rest under this tree for a bit? The sun is killing me."

"Oh! Of course, of course." I scooted over to make room for her and she plopped down beside me.

"Thanks. Ahh... this feels good."

As she used a folder she was holding as a fun, letting the open collar of her shirt flutter just slightly, I realized that my heartrate had suddenly picked up speed. I noticed all at once her thick, sweet scent, the gentle variations in her hair that gave it distinction, the rosy hue of her cheeks that offset her otherwise pale skin.

"What is it?" She was smiling curiously at me.

"Ah, I was, that is, I mean, you look, ah... erm... dammit." It wasn't even halfway through the first day and my stutter was already back.

I gulped. "You are..."


~Not TBC again >.<

But why isn't it going to be continued!!!! Why do you do this to me! I want my Yuunate!(?) Lol. I agree with TSS it would be really cool if it was a choose your own path dating sim thing. Anyways nice job, I love the beginning, Yuuno's such a nerd.

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Aww that was cute (it's red btw) Sounds like the beginning of a Yuuno dating sim.

and based (based cause I changed some stuff up ) off that 'World' so to say and featuring one of my favorite couples here's a short short

Spoiler for confession:

"You can do it Aniki!" Yuuno cheered on his older brother by adoption, Zafira, as he slowly crossed the room to approach the lovely red head currently looking down at the letter in her hand.

Yuuno watched Zafira start to break out in a sweat, a rather heavy sweat in fact within minutes Zafira's shirt would be completely drenched it seemed so he'd better do it quickly. Yuuno fumbled around for his 'Go Aniki!' poster and held it high up in the air.

Arf looked up, "Oh Zafira did you send this?" It was lucky Arf wasn't the brightest bulb or she would have seen Zafira's utter panic. "What'd you want to tell me?"

"I-I" Zafira's face started to redden. "W-well

"Go go!" Yuuno cheered in the background waving flags around with 'confess' on them.

Arf continued to look innocently at him.

Zafira fiddled with his fingers, "I really like..."

"Hm?" She tilted her head to the side.

Yuuno's cheering grew louder.

"I-I really like..."

"Go go go for gold!"

"I really like y-y-y..."

"Y?" Arf gasped. "Yuuno!"

Zafira almost fell over and Yuuno actually did.

"N-no! That's not what I was saying!"

Yuuno gaped, "Aniki! Quick tell her!"

Arf patted Zafira's shoulder. "I understand. Forbidden love between brothers and all that."

Yuuno cried in the background, "you don't understand at all Ar-nee."

"Don't worry," she patted the shocked Zafira's shoulder. "I'll support you in your love~! I read about this kind of stuff all the time in doujin!"

Zafira cried manly tears as she walked off singing about brotherly love.

I like this world maybe I'll play in it some more XD

Ouch, poor Zafira. ~brotherly love!!

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I need your help

Spoiler for Chapter 10:

The main Station was filled with Maligno's heanchmens, all of them well armed, Vita and Gary aparently were out of suspicious thanks to the costumes they were wearing, although, Vita was really worried about be spoted thanks to Gary's try tyo imitate a female walking

"And I though that Alphonse was strange" Vita though, suddenly, the talk of 2 heanchmens called the atention of Vita

"Hey, Rage returned last night"

"Hmm... who was the poor soul that he masacred this time?"

"A young mage, the daughter of the White Devil"

"The baby devil? You are kidding, right?"

"You know that when is refering to Rage, there are no jokes, Maligno comanded Rage to torturate and liciate that girl, as a warning to the TSAB of what will hapen to them if they get in the bussines of the Brotherhood of Death"

"The cult that leads that woman? Uhmm... since Maligno formed that aliance with that woman, the things are getting pretty scary around here"

"She's the Silver Queen, and what do you mean with scary?"

"I mean about all those strange warriors taht are appearing, like that Parca Guy, I don't know who is scarier, Parca or Rage"

"You are forgeting that other warrior, the one named Freeza"

"Oh yeah, is that guy with the blue face right? Pretty scary also"

"Blue Face?" Vita inmediatly recognised that description, when she was chasing that truck in the auto parking, the driver of the vehicle had a blue face, "So his name is Freeza..." Vita though again

"Atention to all the troops" A male voice was heared through a comunicator in the big chamber that was the Main Station "The train will leave the station in 1 hour, all weaponmasters and chargo transportist report to level 4 of the station"

Vita turned and saw to one of the walls, a big number 1 was painted on it

"To reach the train I must go to the level 4" She though

She then looked for Gary to tell him that they must go to the section 4, but she stoped when she saw a big, muscle sopldier talking with Gary, Vita's companion looked quite nervous and was tring to hide his face from the other guy

"Hey babe, haven't see you in section 1 before"

"Ha... yeah, I've tranfered here from sector... uh... 4" Gary responded tring to imitate a female voice

"Damn, you probably screwed up big for been launched from sector 4 to here... well, maybe we can... know each other better, don't you think?"

"Uhmmm... yes... well, I... I... need to..."

"Bertha!" Vita screamed runing at Gary "Bertha, stop flirting around, we must go to section 4 now!" Vita grabed the arm of Gary and pulled him out of the danger

"Oh... you saved me Space Girl"

"I must admit that it would be something fun to see, but I need you and your 'spirit' intacts in order to catch Rage"

"And to save my girl"

"Yes, yes! We'll save your girlfriend, now let's move!"

Vita and Gary ran into a little chamber with stairs going down, they needed to hurry to sector 4
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TSAB Hospital

Vivio was still asleep on the bed's hospital, the machines that keeped her alive were still making their noises

The young man walked into the room without been detected, he grabed the chair in wich Nanoha was sited and he placed himself at the side of the bed, from his pocket, he pulled out a little bottle filled with a strange liquid, he removed the tap and passed the bottle beneath Viovio's nose, the girl inmediatly awake

"Ugh... wna.... were..."

"You are in the TSAB hospital Vivio"

Vivio turned to see the man that just talked to her, he was a young man, with black hair, a strange costume and yellow eyes, Vivio didn't know... but she was at the precense of the same guy who gave Vita the key in the Island

"W-Who are you...?" Vivio asked

"You look terrible, ha, even an old cloth looks better than you!"

"Uh... what hapened... I can't remember anything...."

"A warrior named Rage teached you some tricks, the so famous Baby devil is now a liciated amge unable to even grave a spoon without shacke"

"H-have you... came here just to... to mock me?"

"No Vivio... I came here to make a deal with you"

"A... a deal?"

"Yes, you see... I'm currently in a quest to help a friend, of me... you probably know her... Vita"

"Vita?... You... are friend of... of Vita?"

"Yes in a manner of Speaking" The man said, after this he grabed once more the bottle he had

"You see this? This Vivio is Dragon's Blood, if you drink this, all your injuries will heal and you'll be totally new tomorrow at the morning"

"Are... are you going to..."

"Give it to you? If you want it you must promise me that you will help me help Vita"

"Vita... Vita is my friend... I'll help her anytime..."

"Ah, well, there is another point, I'm asking the aid of you, not of your mamans or of any of your frineds, if youy acept the deal, your loyalty will be now... for the Black Dragon Clan"

"The... the Black Dragon... Clan?"

"You are a smart girl, hehe, yes, the Black Dragon Clan"

"And what is... it?"

"All at it's time, if you acept, that answer will come in the future... now, the question is... We have a deal?"

Vivio looked at the bottle and then she looked at this misterius warrior, was he tricking her? Why he said that he wanted to help Vita? Help her for what? Why ask help to her and not to Nanoha or Fate who are stronger mages? And what was the Black Dragon Clan?

"Vivio... I'm runing out of time, we have a deal?"

"I... I... I acept"

"Ah, that's a great choise, now, tomorrow, the first thing you'll do, is go to the center of Central City and be on the plaza's font at 11:00 AM, a friend of me will find you there, and she'll tell you what to do next"

The misterius guy placed on the chair in wich he was sited, some clothes

"And I'll leave you my presentation card" He pulled out a little card with a crocodile drawn on it and placed it also on the chair, over the clothes, he then grabed the head of Vivio and helped her to drink all the Dragon's blood

"Have nice dreams Vivio" He said after that,m Vivio falled totally asleep, and this misterius warrior disdapeared into the darkness of the Hospital

Hmm things have gotten very interesting. I love how that guy was hitting on Gary, space girl saves the day! Lol. Dragon's blood, I see reference to NROTU. But what the hell is the black dragon clan!?! I wonder why this guy wants to help Vita as well. So many questions, not too many answers.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by markesellus

But why isn't it going to be continued!!!! Why do you do this to me! I want my Yuunate!(?)

Yuunate? Yuuno and Hayate?

Originally Posted by markesellus

Lol. I agree with TSS it would be really cool if it was a choose your own path dating sim thing. Anyways nice job, I love the beginning, Yuuno's such a nerd.

Personally I would like to see a yuri dating sim where the player = Nanoha. The player then can set up "dates" with Nanoha and other girls (Fate, Hayate, Arisa, etc).

@Knight of L-sama: Pretty nice story.

[TheShinySword]

I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. You know when I said I thought it'd make a good dating sim... well I ran with it.

Spoiler for Trailer:

It's been said that weird things happen in Uminari city.

*The screen flashes to show an empty lot, rubble covering the ground, Yuuno and Hayate stand in front of it*

Yuuno: Wasn't there a building there yesterday?

Hayate: Heh Fast construction and all you know

*It changes to show a blinding flash of light followed by Yuuno and Nanoha looking up*

Yuuno: What the hell was that!

Nanoha: Let's get out of here

*The screen shows Yuuno and Fate, Yuuno is holding up a crazed man.*

Man: Monsters! Everywhere!



*The screen turns black*

But that's housewives' gossip isn't it?

*The screen shows Yuuno with the caption Yuuno Harlaown by him*

*Across the screen flashes “I'm Yuuno I hope we'll get along since I'm new here and all.”

*His expression changes to a panicked one “T-that's dangerous you might fall!”*

*He becomes determined “If I can't protect you then I'll help you!”*

*It switches to Nanoha, reading Nanoha Takamachi next to her*

*Beside a coy looking Nanoha it reads “If you get hungry make sure to stop by our bakery okay~”*

*She's puffed out her cheeks and looks slightly annoyed “Mou~ Thinking that you have to protect me and all is kind of archaic”*

*She's crossed her arms, “If you're going to be like that then at least treat me to some ice cream”*

*The image changes to Hayate reading Hayate Yagami next to her*

* She has her hand on her hip “Well I am welsh you know. Raised there til my mum and dad died... but it's okay! I'm being raised by some relatives so I'm fine!” *

*She holds her hand up into the air with a knowing grin “You'll have to be more careful, Uminari's full of potholes”*

*She looks like she's giggling, “You know if you're mean to me I'm sure my fan club will take you on.”*

*The image again changes to Fate reading Fate Testarossa next to her*

*Fate has her hand placed on her heart “Mother is kind! T-that's why it's hard on her...”

*She looks exasperated, “It's not for her! I like doing this!” *

*She blushes and is fidgeting with her uniform's tie, “W-well you see I really do like it honest.”

*Images flash across the screen*

*Zafira flashes by “Even if you can't protect someone you can do everything in your power to support them!”*

*Chrono grins, “What my little brother and a girl? I wouldn't believe it if I didn't see it!”*

*Arf winks, “Yuuno be wary of cute girls~They'll be the end of you.”*

*Arisa and Suzuka stand back to back, “Don't think you'll get too far with Nanoha!” “Honestly Arisa-chan.”*

*Vita scowls, “Hayate's mine! Hands to yourself!”*

*Tiana points a pistol at the screen, Subaru hides behind her, “Get out of my way now!”

*Lindy looks sympathetic “Yuuno... there's something you should know.”

Everyone has a secret...

*All the images flash at once, finished off by a new one, it's an instant photo of Yuuno surrounded by Nanoha, Hayate and Fate*



...and every secret can be unraveled.

Secret Ambition

~Coming soon~

Spoiler for Details:

As you may have figured this will be a dating what would you call it... fic? starring Yuuno. Secret Ambition will be a fantasy/romance type of thing. In the tradition of, unfortunately discontinued it seems ,Lyrical Days and Keroko's which unfortunately I can't remember the name of, at the end of each part there will be choices, and the choice with the most votes will be the one taken. Please read and Vote! And Please look forward to it

Btw VH: Keroko's starred Nanoha.

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. You know when I said I thought it'd make a good dating sim... well I ran with it.

Spoiler for Trailer:

It's been said that weird things happen in Uminari city.

*The screen flashes to show an empty lot, rubble covering the ground, Yuuno and Hayate stand in front of it*

Yuuno: Wasn't there a building there yesterday?

Hayate: Heh Fast construction and all you know

*It changes to show a blinding flash of light followed by Yuuno and Nanoha looking up*

Yuuno: What the hell was that!

Nanoha: Let's get out of here

*The screen shows Yuuno and Fate, Yuuno is holding up a crazed man.*

Man: Monsters! Everywhere!



*The screen turns black*

But that's housewives' gossip isn't it?

*The screen shows Yuuno with the caption Yuuno Harlaown by him*

*Across the screen flashes “I'm Yuuno I hope we'll get along since I'm new here and all.”

*His expression changes to a panicked one “T-that's dangerous you might fall!”*

*He becomes determined “If I can't protect you then I'll help you!”*

*It switches to Nanoha, reading Nanoha Takamachi next to her*

*Beside a coy looking Nanoha it reads “If you get hungry make sure to stop by our bakery okay~”*

*She's puffed out her cheeks and looks slightly annoyed “Mou~ Thinking that you have to protect me and all is kind of archaic”*

*She's crossed her arms, “If you're going to be like that then at least treat me to some ice cream”*

*The image changes to Hayate reading Hayate Yagami next to her*

* She has her hand on her hip “Well I am welsh you know. Raised there til my mum and dad died... but it's okay! I'm being raised by some relatives so I'm fine!” *

*She holds her hand up into the air with a knowing grin “You'll have to be more careful, Uminari's full of potholes”*

*She looks like she's giggling, “You know if you're mean to me I'm sure my fan club will take you on.”*

*The image again changes to Fate reading Fate Testarossa next to her*

*Fate has her hand placed on her heart “Mother is kind! T-that's why it's hard on her...”

*She looks exasperated, “It's not for her! I like doing this!” *

*She blushes and is fidgeting with her uniform's tie, “W-well you see I really do like it honest.”

*Images flash across the screen*

*Zafira flashes by “Even if you can't protect someone you can do everything in your power to support them!”*

*Chrono grins, “What my little brother and a girl? I wouldn't believe it if I didn't see it!”*

*Arf winks, “Yuuno be wary of cute girls~They'll be the end of you.”*

*Arisa and Suzuka stand back to back, “Don't think you'll get too far with Nanoha!” “Honestly Arisa-chan.”*

*Vita scowls, “Hayate's mine! Hands to yourself!”*

*Tiana points a pistol at the screen, Subaru hides behind her, “Get out of my way now!”

*Lindy looks sympathetic “Yuuno... there's something you should know.”

Everyone has a secret...

*All the images flash at once, finished off by a new one, it's an instant photo of Yuuno surrounded by Nanoha, Hayate and Fate*



...and every secret can be unraveled.

Secret Ambition

~Coming soon~

Spoiler for Details:

As you may have figured this will be a dating what would you call it... fic? starring Yuuno. Secret Ambition will be a fantasy/romance type of thing. In the tradition of, unfortunately discontinued it seems ,Lyrical Days and Keroko's which unfortunately I can't remember the name of, at the end of each part there will be choices, and the choice with the most votes will be the one taken. Please read and Vote! And Please look forward to it

Btw VH: Keroko's starred Nanoha.

Epicness is epic! I can't wait for this!

@VT: Its not Yuuno/Hayate (though I never realized it could work that way) It's Yuuno/Fate. Looks like I have to come up with a different one. Fatuuno? Kinda looks like Fat Yuuno to me.

[Evil Rick]

Preview Time!

Here comes a preview of the next chapter of NROTU lol
I'll just say, Zaphira and Arf!



@TSS: I need to ask, Can I use Falling Soul in my fic, Vita shadows of the past?

[markesellus]

Hey guys, please go read this story. It's some pretty good writing. Angst with a happyish ending. It needs some reviews.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4494937/...teel_Gray_Soul

They have also written a number of other cool stories for MGLN so go check out their author page.

@EvilRick: OMG! YES!

[Kaix]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Dedicated to Wanwan :3

Spoiler for Drunk!Vivio/Syn:

-cut-

Somehow it's not hard to imagine Nanoha and Fate doing that. Poor Syn and Vivio.

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

That it is . I have yet to touch a drop myself .



Hmm...is that crack I smell?

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Vivo and Syn groaned in the bathroom. Right now they figured it was best not to make any sudden movements. To them that meant no moving at all as they rested their heads on the rim of the toilet. Vivio's head lifted up a bit as she heard her mothers outside the bathroom door.

"Oh great Porcelain God, we humbly offer thee sacrifice this day from these two maidens. May their offerings please you until you have had your fill~"

The blond turned her head towards the snickering and opened her mouth to protest. However, it seemed that the Porcelain God demanded more offerings from her.

The.... Porcelain God? Demanding offerings? That was great crack!

Originally Posted by Nya~n

Hi guys, I'm new here, and I'd like to say, I love your fics.


I'm here to present a Yuunoha one-shot that I'd recently completed.

Spoiler for Cuddles:

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Yuunoha! That was a rare and good story!

Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

Spoiler for Nurse!Hayate w/ Patient!Fate..... Non-sexual possible NSFW:

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Hayeito FTW?

btw, while writing this I remembered that Neko!Nanoha had a bit of Fate/Hayate, didn't it?

The White Devil must be behind the corner waiting to befriend anybody who touches Fate.

A continuation would be nice though.

Originally Posted by markesellus

Ooh!! Does someone feel like continuing this? Because I want to know what happens.

Spoiler for My take on what happens next:

"Hayate, I have to tell you something. I..."

Suddenly Nanoha walked in "Hey Hayate have you seen... WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!"

'Oh shit' Fate thought

"STARLIGHT!"

"Nanoha please!" Hayate tried to explain.

"Get your own blonde!"

"BREAKER!!!!"

Obvious inspiration is obvious.

Lol, but I can see Precia doing that. D:

[EDIT]
Page claim for happier topics!

And there she is! Good thing remembering that fic.

Originally Posted by Knight of L-sama

Spoiler for Yuuno/Fate?:

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Great start for a dating sim with Yuuno as the leader. Where Teana and Subaru appeared I somehow though it would be Arisa and Suzuka at first (although the described appearance didn't match).

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Aww that was cute (it's red btw) Sounds like the beginning of a Yuuno dating sim.

and based (based cause I changed some stuff up ) off that 'World' so to say and featuring one of my favorite couples here's a short short

Spoiler for confession:

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I like this world maybe I'll play in it some more XD

Poor Zafira.

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

The Name's Love, Gary Love

Spoiler for Chapter 8:

-cut-

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Trains depo

Spoiler for Chapter 9:

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Originally Posted by Evil Rick

I need your help

Spoiler for Chapter 10:

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WAAAIIIT! There's been a LOT of interesting things going on in these chapters. Third War War? I'm rather curious why Maligno would be interested in that. And Russia? That guy Gary didn't seem like much at the beginning, but his 'space girl' thing is starting to get funnier and when that guy was trying to hit on him, Vita was great with the Bertha part. What's with all these mysterious people appearing out of nowhere?

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. I couldn't help it. You know when I said I thought it'd make a good dating sim... well I ran with it.

Spoiler for Trailer:

-cut-

Spoiler for Details:

As you may have figured this will be a dating what would you call it... fic? starring Yuuno. Secret Ambition will be a fantasy/romance type of thing. In the tradition of, unfortunately discontinued it seems ,Lyrical Days and Keroko's which unfortunately I can't remember the name of, at the end of each part there will be choices, and the choice with the most votes will be the one taken. Please read and Vote! And Please look forward to it

Btw VH: Keroko's starred Nanoha.

THIS is going to be gold! The wait is going to be deadly now...

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Preview Time!

Here comes a preview of the next chapter of NROTU lol
I'll just say, Zaphira and Arf!



@TSS: I need to ask, Can I use Falling Soul in my fic, Vita shadows of the past?

Zafira and Arf? ZARF!
What is that thing? Looking forward to it.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Preview Time!

Here comes a preview of the next chapter of NROTU lol
I'll just say, Zaphira and Arf!



@TSS: I need to ask, Can I use Falling Soul in my fic, Vita shadows of the past?

Zaphira, was that an intentional mispelling of "Zafira"? Either way, it's pronounced the same so..

[markesellus]

Actually I've asked the question on which way it's supposed to be spelled, but it can be Zaphira or Zafira. Or maybe even Zaphila. >.>

{EDIT} ZOMG! Second page claim! Page claim for Yuuno. Because he needs appreciation, even if he is only the friend.