2011-10-10, 05:34 | Link #2561 | |
Some say I'm the Reverse
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Seriously, it's because I think through the whole sequence. I've tried doing bullet points for stories before, it doesn't work for me--I'm better if I have a quick idea and write it up immediately. Eventually I write it into a story...and sometimes I don't. I also tend to be more prolific with writing fics and other material when I'm under stress... Also, try writing up 1200-word essays in 1 hour in class...or 18-page technical drafts on new programs in 3 hours. That'll speed up your think to write time....
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2011-10-10, 05:39 | Link #2562 | |
I am no one
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Gonna read it
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2011-10-10, 05:39 | Link #2563 | |
Titans Test Team Pilot
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Point taken for Cecilia, she'll change in Chapter 4 now that she knows the identity of the person who defended the Academy in Chapter 2 In any case, just wanna share a piece of Chapter 4 (might be subject to change that is) Spoiler for Scene:
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2011-10-10, 06:34 | Link #2569 | |||||
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*takes a looooong drag off the cigar*
Prepare for lots of fanon crack, guys, or GAS MASKS ON! Quote:
That got me to the Metroid aUtomatic greNade launCHER family of weapons, shortened to just Muncher. The most advanced Gen2 weapon series ever made that allow normal machines to fight some IS, and when used by an IS still give G3s and even poorly-piloted G4s a run for their money. Or should I say, OM NOM NOM. Of course this still needs some thought before I can produce the Wiki article. Quote:
1 IS stands out amongst all 20. This is Three Diagram. Brother (its sentience is masculine) of the Vandam Joaquim, it is a huge self-learning computer core slowly growing towards the center of the Moon. Over the last 7 years, it has reached almost 15km in height, has a working force of almost 100 IS pilot Regulators plus another 400+ pilots working in shifts to keep the IS active round the clock. As such, its area of influence spans the entire Cape of Copernicus, its automation spans every aspect of the Metroids’ lives, and its materialization processes used to create and sustain the colonies on the moon. Because of this, girls are screened annually by the nation to find new pilots in order to man the growing machine. For their child to become a Regulator, or even a Governor, it brings great honor and benefit to the family. Governors also enjoy great clout during and after their term as a Regulator, and Karon intends to use this clout to break into politics and steer her country into a new century. A Universal Century. Quote:
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On a serious note... The 3 colonies of Singapore on the moon created by Three Diagram each are called Metropolis, and are numbered in order of construction (1 is Three Diagram’s main core, 2 is the industrial/military colony and 3 is the massive residential city). People who live on them call themselves Metroid. It is hard to say that all of them are Singaporeans. In a development that reeks of Tabane's meddling, more than 75% of the Metroid population are permanent residents from all over the world, invited or self-elected to come live on the Moon. Citizens account for the rest. Which is very strange for any country. But this effectively means that being Metroid is more about being Human rather than any one nation, color or religion... (ie, whee, trippy hippy stuff!!) The Metroid Spacey (as is the one seen in Irish’s experiencing of Karon’s past) is the fleet of converted spacecraft that ply Earth and the lunar colonies. Their advanced propulsion systems and equipment are known to all countries as it is required in the Alaska Treaty, but they can only be produced using the matter transmutation processes of a sufficiently large IS... like Three Diagram. They can only be refuelled and maintained also by a sufficiently large IS... like Three Diagram. The Metroid spacenoids and the 3 colonies represent a microcosm of the Dream of Tabane, a spacefaring race of humans interlinked with IS and led by, and eventually become, ISpers. The next evolution of Humanity finally growing out of her violent adolescence taking her slow footsteps into the stars. But alas, that dream continues to be threatened by the very forces of that adolescence... And now, the stage is set for the One Year War.
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2011-10-10, 07:28 | Link #2572 | |
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So what do you think? Does it look okay to add and are there any changes you can recommend? |
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2011-10-10, 07:38 | Link #2573 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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Next, maybe you can describe some mechanics/engineers maintaining some ISes in the background, in preparation for their offensive.
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2011-10-10, 07:50 | Link #2574 | |
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So far this is what I have: Ichika vs Madoka- Brother and sister fight. Irish and Tatenashi vs Arachne/Autumn- Teamwork vs multi-melee unit. Reaper vs Squall- evil vs evil Kyuukai vs Multiple IS units- Zerg rush to try and overwhelm him. What do you think? Any changes/suggestions? I'm open to anything. |
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2011-10-10, 08:02 | Link #2575 | |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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2011-10-10, 08:10 | Link #2576 | |
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Irish's part is already full of angst He's fighting against the person who killed his brother so he might start acting irrational during the fight. Ichika vs Madoka is gonna be like Naruto vs Sasuke Ichika won't try to kill her and will try to get her to stop fighting while Madoka isn't interested. Kyuukai vs The zerg rush is gonna be pretty easy though No emotions required other than the will to fight and I can't make a personal fight for him since he's not related to phantom task at all. That's all I got so far, tell me what you think. |
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2011-10-10, 09:43 | Link #2577 |
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Oooooh I'm tingly with inspiration. I've gone over the stuff for Risielle, then realized that there was another character in her I'm going to make.
R****** Loh Shiyi. Stage name: Riz Lo. Singaporeans will puke at her name. Otakus will puke at her being voiced by Kugyu. I think you guys get the rest of the picture.
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2011-10-10, 12:27 | Link #2578 | |
The Third Runner
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2011-10-10, 14:48 | Link #2579 |
Just another Idiot
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
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Venting my Ideas.....
Main idea plus Plot?: "My radiance will outshine the stars and become brighter than the Sun!" A mysterious new girl transferred into ISA wielding a unregistered core(hence one of the reason for the title of Forbidden). Her name is Kai/Kaila Pyxis Nebula (I did mention Female Pyxis didn't I?) Her history is kind of horrifying. When she is born, her mother smashed her with a hammer and drop her into the sea, found by her father who medically treated her and gave her a name, Kai. Pyxis rename her Kaila because Kai sounded like a guy's name. Her middle name is same as Pyxis because they are name after the same star (might change it to avoid confusion though). Appearance: Two colored hair to give her a mysterious unnatural feel and of course: Scarf of Ass-kicking. Personality wise, Kaila is energetic/geki girl with a personality of a young child. Of course being an energetic girl, she came with one problem: she is a big eater. She is the reason why Pyxis is poor most of the time. She get along well with Yuu because they are both kind of full of energy(for Yuu case, it is more of Hot-blood than Geki). Kaila exhibit super human ability from time to time and always address everybody (including Ichika) as Onee-sama. In term of her piloting skill, decent at the best but she can perform rapid switch very easily. Although her IS is weaker than Uchigane but has hidden ability. Related to the story: Spoiler for Black Dragon knight:
Additional ideas: Modifying the male OC pilot..... "Ichika, trump Card should always be used at the very end." He is intended to be Ichika's foil, being a foil, he is the read-the-manual-kind of person and appear better than Ichika, because he read and memorized the instruction manual. He prefer to read up first to understand the concept and apply it practically rather than learning it on the spot. Rather than a Technician, he is more of a performer on the field (hence the quote above). As a performer, he has many hidden tricks up his sleeve, only to reveal them to entertain the crowd with a sudden table-turn on his opponent. His past is normal, no crazy weird stuff(which many OC here are kind of guilty of). A former delinquent who drop out from school, he get stuck with low-end jobs that people give little respect to. Less idealistic than Ichika, now that he finally obtain the respect and wealth, he is not willing to give them up (does help by the fact that he is currently supporting his family....he need the money). Because of his street-fighting background, he is a more competent fighter than Ichika but still less than those who are military trained. His IS unit is Black Mirage. IS that boast the Ultimate Defense (contrasting Ichika's Offense). The machine generate a variation of AIC that not only can stop Byakushiki's attack in its track but also attack it through the use of the nanomachine to slowly grind through Byakushiki's energy shield however, doing so(defending and attacking simultaneously will drain the Black IS's shield energy rapidly, leading to this situation: When the White Unit Clashes with the Black Unit, the one with the less energy will lose. More details on the machine will be added later so you can give me suggestion on how to balance out the machine. Still need to work on his nationality though.... ------ For Fun stuff: Spoiler for IF IS is a fighting game.....:
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2011-10-10, 15:04 | Link #2580 |
Tenshi's Defense Squadron
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@Zero: sent chapter 10 to you.
@agetreme: That absolute defense makes it very overpowered, in that we are sure that Byaku Shiki is almost if not always, VERY low in power, even burning it is quicker in Setsura. Appear better than ichika, wait what? You have to be very careful, because now it's setting off Stu alarms. For example, while we have all these male OC pilots, there has to be a reason, of why your male OC could pilot an IS?
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