2012-04-05, 04:14 | Link #28281 |
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@ Senpai - Would a dynamic like that work?
Side note - it got so bad that there was a charity where people who were PO'd about the ending donated........it got 80,000 before shutting down. @ Box - Ultimately, he doesn't have the personality of Kinji. His and Kanzashi's kid, on the other hand, does. More obvious as the story goes that he's a Knight in Sour armor.
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2012-04-05, 04:33 | Link #28284 |
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@ Senpai - Well, lets be more exact on why he's not normal.
- He has to keep Aria (Kanzashi's Female kid) from doing stupid stunts. - He barely has any parental interaction since both parents are busy and one of them dotes on Aria because she's better than him in just about everything (Though he's obviously smarter in more things than her). - Has to make sure her and Tatenashi's kid don't go Aliens Vs Predator on one another when they compete. (Like Kinji does for Aria and Riko.) - Has to keep Aria in line and try to help her even if he doesn't want to. - Due to lack of parental involvement, he has to worry about things like budget and food to cook when neither parent is there and barely has time to have fun. - Has an inferiority complex regarding you know who. Kanzashi somehow fails to see this. - To top it off, the only person he looked forward to seeing everyday (Ichika) now doesn't even know who he is. @ Box - That's a dude.
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2012-04-05, 04:51 | Link #28287 |
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@ Senpai - How effective would a WTH moment even be? He's stuck in the past, so his parents don't know him yet and they have no idea what he's going through. He did do one on the draft before that I showed you, but he followed it up by saying that the person he was yelling at wasn't his mom, just a teenager who has her own problems.
@ Demi - pretty good. Only Akatasubaki can actualy catch up to it when it's running.
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2012-04-05, 05:01 | Link #28289 |
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@ eras
I mean when the future scene being shown, not WTH to the teenager. @ Demi Pretty much.... nope, it's sealed, no chance of run unless someone tampering with the security and reactivate it.
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2012-04-05, 05:06 | Link #28291 |
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Depending on which Ichika/Kanzashi you're tyalking about.
The past one would jsut confused, the future one might be disturbed. And it's either serves as realization, or they keep ignoring him and then some jerkassery.
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2012-04-05, 05:12 | Link #28292 |
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He thinks this way about Kanzashi in the future, but he keeps it to himself. He says this out loud in the story later on, btu only after Kanzashi and Ichika forgot their promise to spend time with him due to IS related stuff.
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2012-04-05, 05:25 | Link #28295 |
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They asked him to spend time together cause he seemed down, then forgot when they got news about their IS'. IS may be strong, but it has nothing to the seething despondence of a child when they realize their parents cared about it more than them. Of course, this makes their arc more somber since he's more cut off than ever and won't open up anymore.
@ Demi - Uh, yeah, they can shut it down. They did so in canon. If they couldn't, they'd never take the risks of giving them to reps who might go rogue or bother building Anti-IS weapons.
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