2004-09-29, 04:18
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2004-10-02, 04:19
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http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2066
http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2067 http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2068 |
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2004-10-02, 13:05
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here's some crits for you.
everyone has their own style for face and stuff but regarding anatomy its different. There are in some places where the head and neck look awkward, and also how the breasts and shoulders arms work together seem kind of off in some drawings. Aside from that there is no serious problem with anatomy and you have clean lines but you need to work on wrinkles on clothes. It seems you understand how they should look however, they look unnatural and stiff. Maybe its preference but I like a more looser feeling when dealing with clothes. But the drawings in general are good and clean. Have fun drawing. |
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2004-10-02, 19:56
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thanks for the constructive crit. Im definitely working to improve those areas. Here's a little something I whipped up on MSPAINT.
http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2078 |
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2004-10-04, 18:43
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here is a attempt at folds and clopthing. Shading also. Im happy with how this came out. Thats what stormy days are for ^^
http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2092 |
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2004-10-07, 00:54
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should i stay longer?
Join Date: May 2003
Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)
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some C&C:
http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2116 She's falling.. http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2115 forearms too small http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?...pe=post&id=2117 no waist? http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2118 nice pose, not too exagerated...arms too short, waist too long/missing hip, feet a bit big i think..hip looks shifted. http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2119 arms 2 short, calves 2 long i think... |
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2004-10-07, 01:07
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i think the last one is the best one. so i'll crit on that.
Again with the anatomy though, the calves are way too long its freakishly long dude. but as far as i can see its the only problen. Your wrinkles for clothes are getting better although some of the other pictures looks like you're doing too much this one was pretty good. |
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2004-10-07, 19:05
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new one. Fanart of ROD TV
http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2122 |
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2004-10-15, 17:22
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4 more.
the catgirl was a request from a friend. the other 3 were all done in about 3.5 hours while at an anime meeting. http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2189 http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2190 http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2191 http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2192 |
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2004-10-19, 19:13
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I tried to fix the "plainness" with some unique outfits.
Heres my latest 3. http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2214 http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2215 http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2216 |
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2004-10-20, 19:11
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should i stay longer?
Join Date: May 2003
Location: Hong Kong until May 6 2006.... it's paradise ;)
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http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2190
need some work with foreshortening http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2215 her right hand...looks twisted off... http://www.tmpforums.com/index.php?a...e=post&id=2155 move her right hand just a bit more to the right... cool stuff man. |
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2004-11-05, 23:24
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after taking some time off to study for 4 tests I am back with 5 more ^^
First 2 are Halloween themed, the girl with Sais is something Ive been working on and also the girl with the big gun. The biker girl was a b'day present for a friend of mine. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12042649/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12042401/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12043586/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/11643331/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/12047363/ |
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