...So when its a girl doing that to a guy - like Senpai's story - its fine, but a guy doing it is somehow more morally repugnant based on gender alone? There wasn't even any affection: He bit her ear like an asshole.
Like I said, I am ignorant, sorry. Besides, I should've burn that story with incenerator (it's a literal thrash bin of my depression). By the way, i already erase the master document already.
other people do the inverse, it's okay for girl to do it on girl, and it's NOT okay for guy to do it on the girl. I'm not saying it's okay based on gender alone, but... well, look at my reaction in previous page.
Its supposed to be bad: Chifuyu acts disgusted during the entire thing and Madoka (male) acts like a guy doing the creep. Besides, Tatenashi went nearly the same way with Chifuyu in an earlier draft and everybody thought it was amusing/tolerable. Most likely because Tatenashi's funny.
Spoiler for Quick proofread - actually busy at work today @_@:
Two months later, I am finally standing here.
As I walked out of station, all I can see is vast, boundless sea of people, endless sea of girls, all dressed in white blazers with red trim and black collars. There are countless variations of them, although majorities still use the same standardized model with hip-covering white short skirt.
I can see foreigners everywhere; in fact, more than half of them are decidedly not Japanese. Girls of all kind, from every corner in the world gathered here to study and train themselves in the way of Infinite Stratos industry.
Am I the only one wearing literal pants? Maybe, whatever… it’s not like I have much choice but to spend three years of my life here. Although I’m somewhat full of doubt… the very fact that this is an all-girl school, made my stomach turned upside down. However, protection from foreign powers and malicious conspiracy aside, the career progression of its graduates would make most men drool.
What with the social regression ever since I.S. introduced to the world formally nine years ago, everything had changed. In some places, the position simply deviate a little, in other places, its like men’s position in everyday life decreased a notch, with the women raised by one notch. And then there are places where men are treated as slaves, usually countries where women are flat out oppressed to a degree, implicitly or explicitly.
This almost caused societal collapse, because radical feminist spread like kudzu, and the arrogance of men, who has been cultivated since the beginning of human history did not phase out easily.
The ensuing riot full of bloodbath seven years ago helped to accommodate it somewhat… I still remember it vividly.
Flames ensuing in the capital of China, and no less than one thousand and five hundred human casualties during Kyoto riot.
Back then I have yet to understand, I can’t honestly say I feel their pain, but despite that, I feel like I owe them. Call it a man’s pride.
No matter what happened in the past, you can’t change it, but the past shaped the present society.
Speaking of Japan, the societal shift also caused negative population growth. The younger generation, already pressed by unforgiving society, collapse into self destruction after the Kyoto incident.
Chifuyu-nee told me that the men in her generation acted like a bunch of woman-haters or as if they were simply devoid of testosterone. And no matter what a typical ‘woman supremacist’ mother will say, most girls didn’t take such extreme reactions lightly. As the result, the girls rebelled as well; the result weren’t pretty.
Thanks to aggressive social campaign and political counter-maneuver, middle ground had been reached, though in most cases I need to take that with face value. Laws and regulations still skewed heavily toward women, but so far nothing of it actually threatened my safety (just my masculinity).
Breaking me out of my self-contemplation is a soft tap on my shoulder, I turned on my back and greeted by a confident smile, full of superiority.
“You’re late” I mumbled.
My precious twin sister, Orimura Madoka.
“Meh. Sorry if I need to pack more stuff and handle the useless doodad documents” she unapologetically jeered.
I laughed in response; she thought handling school transfer is hard? “Oh? There is always accompanying me during that meeting with butt-kissing bureaucracies.”
She made a face, one that I found to be pretty cute. “I take it back, you win.”
Although she’s probably afraid being dead out of boredom, in her words “Fat, greedy smart-asses don’t interest me”. ((Confused. This sentence here; is she talking outloud to Ichika? or is this something that she mentioned before hand?))
Well, of course, I won’t like that happen either. Chifuyu-nee probably even worse, she HATES politicians with a burning passion that could torch entire city blocks if unleashed, not counting collateral spread.
“Well, Chifuyu-nee probably use the ‘marriage meeting’ excuse again.”
She stopped walking and huffed, her eyes shining with amusement. “And how exactly can you guess what I am thinking?”
Easy answer that. “Nothing amuses you more than the prospect of Chifuyu-nee getting married”
Less about sharing happiness, more like… chances of it happening. I can’t help but sighed when she used ‘omiai’ as excuse of overworking. “Tell me the possible candidates you know,” she pointed at me with a dramatic flair.
“Two… one of them is no longer with us, and the other one is plain disinterested.” I can't imagine why anyone wouldn't be interested in Chifuyu-nee at least based off of looks, she certainly is pretty enough. We keep telling her that her Ice Queen mode shouldn't always be on but what do we know as siblings?
“Indeed” she smiled, “That makes it zero isn’t it?”
Despite how she said it, even Madoka is not heartless. It’s as if she shared Chifuyu-nee’s loneliness.
Even if, for example, Chifuyu-nee had a boyfriend that she'd hide from us, she would put us as her top priority first and foremost… and that’s without counting the fights we often had due to the sheer difference in principle and total miscommunication.
A hellish road paved with noble intention and heavenly goal probably describe the way Chifuyu-nee raised us. Yes, we Orimura twins are selfish and immature like that. Knowing it and forcing ourselves accept it is different can of worms. I feel kind of sad, but rekindling those past memories allowed us to move forward anyway, I am very sure Chifuyu-nee thought the same… even if she said otherwise. All we need is to graduate from here and grew to be independent… that way, Chifuyu-nee will have all the time to enjoy her life without us being her burden.
“Anyway, Ichika, what’s your plan?” She placed her hands behind her back as we walked, playing her part of the imouto perfectly.
“What plan? Other than excelling at studies, Nothing much really.” Apparently that wasn’t enough because Madoka sent a playful scowl at me.
“Eh? That simple? Nothing about conquer the school with the strength of your charm?”
I laughed again; on the other hand, she knew how much of an idiot I am, on the other hand…. She tends to overstate my excellence too. No more conquering for me, thanks.
“Nay, what makes you think I’ll be popular?”
“Wha? What makes YOU think that girls, in one-gender school separated from mainland, only able to get out one day out of seven per week, not trying to get into your side for comfort?” As if for emphasis, she latched herself onto my arm and smirked smugly at me. “One guy in an all-girls school, this is the stuff that boys your age dream of.”
Am I that fortunate? Sure, she’s right to a degree and I can’t fight against that logic, but I’m not interested having a girlfriend so early either, so I kept silent and admit my defeat.
Touched up a bit more, but yeah, I won't go any more than this.
What do you guys think Nagisako's charm point is? The reporter girl's elder sister. She's only mentioned once. But what do you imagine that charm point as?
2013-05-22, 10:25
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