2011-11-07, 20:38 | Link #6602 |
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@ Eratas: Hm... You could have some more interactions between the students after they all arrive at school.
Such as have Ichika talk to Kyuukai because he's the school supervisor/manager/representative for the school sports teams, then you could have Kyuukai talk to Maximillian because he's a teacher for whatever reason, you could have Maximillian teach and interact with Karon, who would go talk with Yuriko/Irish. Then you could have Yuriko go about his day and meet with someone else (another character such as Tatenashi), who would go and interact with another character (maybe Kanzashi), and so forth until you reach the end of the circle of people or the end of school. Basically go through out one school day, while showing how each character is somehow linked, no matter how thin the connection is. The theme being "six degrees of seperation". It would be pretty cool to read. |
2011-11-07, 20:45 | Link #6603 | |
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Side note - Not everyone is friends. Inami and Rin, for example, don't know each other.
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2011-11-07, 20:59 | Link #6607 | |
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Laura will drag Ichika around after he gets to know her and teach him the value of knives I'll make Ichika and Laura about 10-14 here.
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2011-11-07, 21:01 | Link #6608 |
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@ Eratas: For added effect (you don't have to read to this), you know how Laura has a combat knife on her when she goes to the academy? She uses it to threaten Tatenashi in later chapters of the light novel.
You could have Ichika give it to her as a present. Then again, this is just rambling advice. You don't have to put it in. |
2011-11-07, 21:03 | Link #6609 | |
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I'll do the combat knife gift scene though.
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2011-11-07, 21:14 | Link #6614 | |
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Laura: WHO IS THAT?! *Unleash knife* Chifuyu: Ahem Laura:
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2011-11-07, 21:25 | Link #6617 |
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@ Rain - What's she gonna do? Clarissa's in Germany, Charlotte's her best friend, Chifuyu is her teacher and Tatenashi is Tatenashi. She's screwed out of revenge.
@ Zero and Rain - Does taking a persons arm and twisting it behind their back make it possible to break it?
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2011-11-07, 21:35 | Link #6618 | |
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Preferably if you smack right in the elbow or shoulder after you twist it
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2011-11-07, 21:41 | Link #6620 | |
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If you done it right, there's no permanent damage except slight bruise, but done wrong and not only you'll broke your joints with the risk of irreparable damage, but also ripped out ligaments.
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