Infinite Stratos Character Creation and Fanfiction Discussion

[Eratas123]

Wanna be co author of Future Imperfect? Flame proof and it'll be easier with the two of us

Side note - The flamers seem to have left, actually. I haven't seen them in months.

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Imagine a bad boy trying to get girls in ISA world He's ginna get his ass beat

Doesn't stop some people from trying and... err, succeed *looks at some OC in the old pages*

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - The harem would be intimidated to do anything. There goes 90% of the content

And the manga will consist of 40 pages about Chifuyu shooing the harem and curbstomp them...

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note 2 - Tell me that manga name! I'll just skip the sex scenes like I usually do.

I seriously forgot, sorry.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note 3 - They're sleeping in seoarate beds Tatenashi has her limits when it comes to stuff liek that Would this cause him to saty awake and be unable to relax? By the way, he has an aversion ti bath's since he didn't do it everyday due to being on the run. Cue dragging tothe bathroom

I don't say that, i said, sharing the room.

The rest is good though.

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

expanding on AE but probably never going to publish another chapter of it.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Demi - How about another fic? You do oretty good plots.

Well, I don't see why you have to stop. I mean, your world building skill and plotting are top notch, even so far as changing narmful conversation into something serious.

Writing another fic might give some refreshment... or maybe plain lucky, Sacred Twins NEVER meant to be a main project. It was made to promote the old TLR Stratos.

Going to sleep, see you guys. =.=

[demino_hellsin]

@zero: night dude

@eratas: I'll stick to helping you plot that one my writing skills leave much to be desired.

[Eratas123]

@ Senpai - Which OC's are you talking about?

Side note - So symptoms are insomnia and paranoia? That's it?

Side note 2 - There is one challenger. Th only person who can match her in god moding: Tatenashi

Side note 3 - Does the huge bathroom fill the same place as a spa? Might do a scene where Maya asks Irish when was the last time he took a bath. We don't hear the answer; but she's draghing him by the collar to the bathroom come the next scene.

@ Demi - Still counts as being co-author Anyway, going to sleep as well. See ya guys tom.

[demino_hellsin]

night eras

The older harem idea is probably the only thing keeping me in IS right now well keeping me actively interested.

[DarkJak2050]

I'm wondering, which gender is more "perveted"?

[ZeroXSEED]

Originally Posted by Eratas123

@ Senpai - Which OC's are you talking about?

Hmm, can't name specific... less of a bad boy and more like grumpy and cold ass.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note - So symptoms are insomnia and paranoia? That's it?

That's exaggerated, yes you can have them, but tone it down or reader will call narm.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note 2 - There is one challenger. Th only person who can match her in god moding: Tatenashi

I stand corrected

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Side note 3 - Does the huge bathroom fill the same place as a spa? Might do a scene where Maya asks Irish when was the last time he took a bath. We don't hear the answer; but she's draghing him by the collar to the bathroom come the next scene.

No need to, student's dorm has smaller bathroom too.

That aside, I don't know. Location of Sauna usually close, but not in the same place as pond.

Originally Posted by DarkJak2050

I'm wondering, which gender is more "perveted"?

You mean in I.S.-verse? Well, we can't really deduct since there's only two guys in the cast. By theory, guys are more easily provoked, but it was the girls that once provoked, they'll hard to stop.

Anyway, went to school. Ja ne.

[Eratas123]

@ Jak - Actually, males are more likely to be perverted due to testosterone. However, pervertedness between the genders nowadays is more balanced.

@ Senpai - I really don't know anyone who fits the archetypal bad boy niche.

Side note - Just insomnia then. If he adjusts way too easily it'll be unrealistic.

Side note 2 - That would be the ultimate slugfest

Side note 3 - I meant the huge bathroom that Ichika and Charlotte talked in. It seemed pretty huge

[DarkJak2050]

Originally Posted by ZeroXSEED

You mean in I.S.-verse? Well, we can't really deduct since there's only two guys in the cast. By theory, guys are more easily provoked, but it was the girls that once provoked, they'll hard to stop.

Originally Posted by Eratas123

Actually, males are more likely to be perverted due to testosterone. However, pervertedness between the genders nowadays is more balanced.

So in a way, girls tend to be more perverted...

[Eratas123]

@ Jak - There really is no way to judge. It depends on the individual rather than their gender. Ichika's a chaste hero who can't get a hint while Dan is more perverted and shows attractiok to cute girls. You can't just say one gender is more perverted than the other.

[agetreme]

Should I go for mind screw or Black Byakushiki (less dark version) plot?

Spoiler for Spoiler for spoiler:

Spoiler for Mind Screw Plot (contain spoiler):

after being "put to sleep" Ichika wake up one day in a different place.
Suddenly he gain a new sister and parents and....

Oh yea, everything he experience in life is just a dream that he experienced while he in coma.

Meanwhile Houki is looking for him....

Spoiler for Black Byakushiki Plot version 2:

The less dark version of Black Byakushiki combine with that old idea about another male IS pilot....nuff said

[blitz1/2]

Originally Posted by demino_hellsin

It's hard to find motivation to write for a population of flamers though I will consider it.

I'd say you do a very good job in writing canon based fics, especially with those ideas you came up with, and the sample dialogue you wrote. You can write that instead.

[Eratas123]

@ Demi - Any ideas for Maya talkng to Shouta Both of them are nearly exact in personality

[demino_hellsin]

So they're both klutzes?

[Eratas123]

Yup You know you're a klutz when you stress on a plan to get ypur parents together and somehow accidentally have your mom seduce you dad without knowing it

[MeisterBabylon]

Now where the heck is Jung Kari's profile? I've got enough crack to run her with Riz's next segment. However, I can't find it. :s

And yes, I can't believe I forgot that Riz had a singing maid while writing Vandam...

[Eratas123]

@ Meistah - The problem with not taking notes Good to see you're updating now

[demino_hellsin]

Shouta: Mama

Maya: Hm? What is it honey?

Shouta: Do you think I'm manly?

Maya: ... huh?

Shouta: Do you think I'm manly? Everyone in class calls me cute and the guys say that it's not manly at all.

Maya: I'm not quite sure I follow. I mean, being cute isn't a bad thing. I like you and I like cute things.

Shouta: I don't want to be cute anymore! Everyone just treats me like a kid *teary eyed*

Maya: *stareing and blushing* Okay! *stern face* Mama has a plan! We're going to make you manly overnight.

Shouta: *Shy peak* Really?

Maya: *resists urge to glomp* Really! *Takes her son's hands* Now repeat after me. My name is Shouta("Ore wa Shouta")

Shouta: O-o-ore wa Sh-Shouta.

Maya: again! Ore wa Shouta!

Shouta: Ore wa Shouta!

next morning.

Shouta: *breathes in cold morning air with only a Sarashi and shirtless gakuran get-up.* Okay ma! I'm going now.

Maya: *waves* Have a nice day! *Sees Shouta off then sighs in satisfaction* Shouta in a gakuran looks cute too.

[Eratas123]

@ Demi - Pffffft! Hahahahahahaha~ He really can't be manly with a name like Shouta Seriously, what was Maya thinking naming him off a hentai genre

[demino_hellsin]

I was afraid it wouldn't seem all that funny. Glad you like it