Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[LoweGear]

-We've run into backlog the size of battle tanks, three posters died from Eyesore this week, I've wrote enough to fill a lake, my boots got sucked into a bluecheesium swamp and the posts are so thick in places you can't squeeze between them. God Empress help me, I love this place! It's just like home!-

Captain Lowe of the Midchilda IIIrd "White Devils" on Suki Prime.

Originally Posted by Kha

It's that a transformed device, or a full mecha suit able to fit 2 pilots into a standard sized cockpit?

And that emblem has shades of Teana.

More like the former, since it won't be mecha large. Perfect for I-n's

And Kay considers herself an honorary member of the Dai Gurren Dan (just because she bought a $10 patch from a local anime store ).

Originally Posted by blitz1/2

Here's mine.

Spoiler for A new group:

Group: Awakened

Name: Chrai
Affiliation: Awakened.
Magic circle: Dark orange
Gender: Male
Hair: Maroon with slight pink.
Eyes: Blue
Age: 15

Magical Device: Rage (pronounced Ra-gee) (gunblade)
Magic system: Avalon type

History: N/A according to Bureau's records


Name: Mizusu
Affiliation: Awakened
Magic circle: purple, black (if possessed or very angry)
Gender: Female
Hair: Purple
Eyes: Blue
Age: 16

Magical Device: Kyomu (A staff)
Magic system: Avalon type

History: Chrai’s older sister. N/A according to Bureau records


Name: Ayane
Affiliation: Awakened
Magic circle: Green
Gender: Female
Hair: Green
Eyes: Blue
Age: 15

Magical device: Delta (A claw + disc launcher)
Magic system: Avalon type

History: N/A according to Bureau records

I'll just add this in (I had this for 3 weeks, but keep forgetting to post). I'll edit and post more after I come back from Math class.

Needs more info badly, though I like their names.

Originally Posted by Kha

What's the age difference? Kha's 19 at the moment. How old is Carym? If she IS older, it certainly appeals to my CLAMP taboo relations loving side.

And yes ever since I've started playing around with Carym (she's got a major role in Point of Light Chap 3), I've realized how compatible they are. Looks like I AM gonna pull an Athrun Zala with regards to this!

Besides, I can also just go for PIMP and get Kha to own all 3 girls.

Gratz! Too bad I'm a little busy today, but no doubt I've got another Bluecheesium bomb waiting for this milestone.

Now shipping Kha x Carym full time huh?

And pulling an Athrun?! Damn Sagar- erh Kha, what happened to your morals?!

Although I don't think the Saint Church has any regulations regarding polygamy

Originally Posted by Liingo

You have way too much time Erio I guess all my OC's are with the TSAB Space Marines ALthough Akilae doesn't fit with any of those....

If you were to add Akilae, we'd have to bring in the Eldar into this mess, complete with a CraftWorld...

Originally Posted by KBTKaiser

Here's a little something for the Brothers.

Spoiler for Atarana Bakusou!! Part A:

Genya Nakajima recieved a buzz on his intercom as he looks up from his current document, a transfer request into his division...

Genya: ...I'm guessing that's them at the door...

Genya activates the intercom as one of his aides speaks.

Aide: Genya-san! There's two magic signatures barreling for the base entrance at high speeds on land! Orders, please!

Genya: Have Ginga report to my office immediately. Evacuate all personnel out of the shortest path to my office from the entrance!

Aide: Sir?!

Genya: Do it unless you wanna get trampled!

Aide: R-right away, sir!

As Genya shut off the intercom and reclined back for a moment, he laid back a bit thinking about the past as Ginga came into his office.

Ginga: Is there something up, father? I heard some alarms.

Genya: Have a look at who's transfering here.

Genya then handed Ginga the transfer papers. Ginga's eyes widened a brief moment before softening with nostalgia.

Ginga: It's been quite a while since we've seen them. Didn't they join the Army Training School the same time as Subaru?

Genya: That they did. They've did some pretty impressive work as an emergency response team after leaving the school.

Ginga: Then those alerts earlier were?

Genya: I'd think so. I think you'd better activate your device if you want to be able to stop them when they barge in here...

Ginga: I think that's if they don't trip over each other first...

Genya: I suppose you're ready to deal with them then. They'll be assigned directly under you.

Ginga: At least it won't be dull around here. Subaru will be happy to hear that they're around as well.

Meanwhile, outside...

Two streaks shot toward the base of the 108th Land Platoon, one red and one blue.

Red?: How's Beat Magnum holding out, Gou?

Blue?: No problems here, Retsu-aniki. Looks like Buster Sonic's working great for you too, eh?

Red?: No problems here. I've got the layout relayed as well. Ready?

Blue?: Anytime, aniki!

Red?: RETSU!

Buster Sonic: Nitro Sonic!

Blue?: GOU!

Beat Magnum: Nitro Magnum!

The two accelerating streaks began to spiral around each other's path, blending the the colors into a single purple streak that slowly turned white as they hit the entrance of the base and made a direct beeline for the administration building.

A little short, but I'm still working out their personality quirks.

Two Unstoppable Cannonballs huh? Sorta like the Juggernaut

Originally Posted by Kha

If I were to involve Kha in all 3 fully, yes, but for I-n's I've cut it short and decided to let the Phantom squad have their fun. CrosyS doesn't have to be that much shortened, for there's a one month gap at least between Epi 14 - 15 for them to insert the Soundstage. Kha would return home from Meggido somewhere during that time.

Wait a minute, there's an entire month for Crosys?!

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Graham's spell-list b4 I go to sleep. Ice spells go whee~.

Spoiler for Gil Graham's spell-list:

Gil Graham: S+ or SS- ranked, age 26
Device: Storage Device S-47 Custom (Staff-type, shortened at it's end looking more like a short staff, coloured in silver white, looking a little like S2U without the huge staff front)

Spells
====

General Spells

Barrier Jacket - A conventional Barrier Jacket that looks mildly like the Enforcer's uniform. A double-layered BJ capable of purging, the lower layer is a sleeveless black vest.

Variable Shield - A shape-able distortion shielding spell. Generally the same class as the Round Shield, but due to lack of Auto-Guard protection without an Intelligent Device, it is used as shielding in shapes to protect more than one direction through shield expansion.

Physical Heal - A healing spell that heals wounds.

Ice Bind - A ice-binding spell that materializes extremely low temperature chains to frost-bite the enemy, disabling the limbs through extreme temperature change.

Sonic Boom - A high speed-booster spell, that allows extremely high speed movement for a short amount of time. Although it leaves behind little trace of movement due to air-glide, it can only move in axis. Works in accordance to Ice Shell.

Link - Allows emphatic link to the amount of magic he's supplying to Alia and Lotte.

~~~

Offensive Spells

Frost Cannon : A midrange, wind spell of extremely low temperature that overrides BJ's temperature protection except the user's own.

SVD : A long-range, super high velocity penetration guided snipe spell that uses either magical energy or ice-formed bullets.

Durandal : Forms an cold energy blade from the edge(s) of S-47, shaped in the shape of a Zweihandler. It can alternate between a Sword-Mode, Spear-Mode, or Double-Sword Mode.

Diamond Dust : A corrosive field spell that exhumes extremely small particles of ice-shards into the air, slowly creating air bubbles in the enemy's lungs and leaving micro-wounds inside the body of those who breathed it in. Although it doesn't considerably affect the opponent in a short term basis, not getting the wounds healed within 5 hours can cripple a person permanently.

Diamond Dust Impact : An actual offensive spell, it forms hundreds of ice arrows at a time and shoots them in directions as guided by the user. It's offensive power is low, but it works as actual firearms and the magic consumption is low, thus able to release it many times.

Kholodnyi Smerch : A short-range attack spell that engulfes the opponent in a gigantic tornado of extremely cold, fast, furious, of thousands sharp ice shrapnels, trapping the enemy in a type of tornado-field-attack hybrid.

Dynamic Alchemy : Dynamic Ice Alchemy, that gives shape and movement to ice...literally creating "living ice". However, it is extremely fragile and explodes upon contact with anything physical and magical. An explosive ice forming spell that can also be used for distraction.

Aurora Execution Shift : Graham's most powerful single-target offensive spell, by summoning several hundreds to thousands of ice spears, blades, bullets and attacking the enemy. Apparently, upon the touch of even a single one, regardless of any form of protection, it can freeze a single living being in a state of absolute zero. A last resort spell due to the amount of energy it exhaust from its user. The precursor to Eternal Coffin.


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Defensive Spells

Freeze Koliso : Forms rings of ice around each arm. In this condition, all barrier spells get a repelling boost as the spinning ice ring dispels away offensive magic properties aimed towards the user.

Ice Shell : Completely enshrouds himself in a complete armor of ice. In this condition, he cannot be harmed for 1 minute, as it is impossible for him to sustain himself inside it for more than 70 seconds. Freeze Coffin applied on self. Another precursor to Eternal Coffin.

Freeze Coffin : Creates a complete mold of extremely cold, powerful and hard-to-break ice over a huge radius. At full power, it can theoratically cover the entire Ground Center of Midchilda in ice. Another precursor to the Eternal Coffin.

Static Alchemy : The form of ice formation of a static condition, where the ice is hard and solid yet flexible, capable of forming static objects from ice cages, ice nets to ice buildings. It is used as extra protection due to its solidity.

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Unique Spell

Eternal Coffin : Self-explainatory.

Eternal Coffin Full Drive : The full power of Eternal Coffin, which was supposed to flashfreeze instantly anything within a specified radius in less than 2 seconds at absolute zero, creating a spatial field of absolute theoratical standard surrounding the premise to allow absolute zero to be achieved.

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Combination Spells/Techniques with Alia/Lotte

TBA...

I'll probably do Alia/Lotte together next along with some of their combis..

Always thought that Graham was an ice user, but to have spells this freezing COLD is awesome! Although some of his spells are suprisingly brutal, like Diamond Dust (he wouldn't also happen to create illusions with them does he? )

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

This could be seen as shameless self-promotion, but I'm really just doing it in the interest for the people who never visits the Fanfic thread.

(Note that I just cut things short to their special spells.)

Spoiler for Clyde's devices and spells:

Clyde: AAA+ ranked, age 13 almost 14
Device: Beowulf (Spear-type, bears resemblance to the future Durandal)

Spells
====

Prism Viper – Fire a single high penetration magic shot that could be controlled and redirected.
Prism Slayer – Cover the head of the device with a layer of magic to increase cutting prowess.
Prism Blader – Summon concentrated magic swords for melee and range attacks, as well as defense.

Blaze Cannon – A mid range, high firepower blast cannon spell.
Force Cannon – A long range, long lasting beam cannon spell.

Break Impulse – Instantly focuses magic into the point of physical contact, shattering the target.
Surge Impulse – Sent volatile magic towards the target through magic or physical matter.

Note: Magical matters include binding chains, protective shields and barriers, as well as summoned magic weapons.

Spoiler for Lindy and her device/skill:

Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin )

Spells
====

Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.

Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.

(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)


Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).

And CHAOS makes his OC entrance... well, maybe not with Originals per se, but certainly having Clyde and Lindy's spells is gonna make it easier for future reference

Must point out that there's already an OC here with Beowulf as device name... but who says we can't share device names?

Originally Posted by Erio

You've got to be kidding me. "Randomness"?

What do you call more than half of your posts, then? Just look at the PAGES of pointless posts when you argue with Fuyu. That's what I call randomness.

If you havent noticed, we have quite a world here created. We have expanded upon everything canon has given us. It's "random" for you, I guess, because you just wont take anything that is not canon, and dont want your imagination to run wild.

Sorry, but I found your comment quite offensive.

Slow down now, this thread for all intent and purposes appears random, just with a certain amount of sense and order in it (Like... *ehem* Chaos Theory).

And I think Chaos takes more non-canon stuff than most of us

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

BTW: Did someone mention Skeith? I'm not I'd like her hanging around here (Crazy SSS+ mage that can drain your data and copy your moves? No thanks! )

Considering some of the other OC villains around here, I think Skeith would fit in VERY WELL here...

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

If you get a new one and try to point it at Satashi-san I'll make sure to be around so I can break it once again ^^

Here's the catch I'm going to lay down though. I'm now using a one metre long, reinforced titanium steel alloy cattle prod, with a leather grip handle.

Now, if you could grab that from me and break it, that means your over-protective love for Satashi would have come from the realms of the illogical, in-logical, un-logical, anti-logical and counter-logical

*Smiling evilly*

Make your move.

Originally Posted by Erio

You've got to be kidding me. "Randomness"?

What do you call more than half of your posts, then? Just look at the PAGES of pointless posts when you argue with Fuyu. That's what I call randomness.

If you havent noticed, we have quite a world here created. We have expanded upon everything canon has given us. It's "random" for you, I guess, because you just wont take anything that is not canon, and dont want your imagination to run wild.

Sorry, but I found your comment quite offensive.

Excellent.

Not as planned, but it'll do.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And CHAOS makes his OC entrance... well, maybe not with Originals per se, but certainly having Clyde and Lindy's spells is gonna make it easier for future reference

I'm just taking baby steps first. I figure to start something that I could minimally refer off from.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Must point out that there's already an OC here with Beowulf as device name... but who says we can't share device names?

Mine's 30+ years ago

If you need me to, I could change it...

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Slow down now, this thread for all intent and purposes appears random, just with a certain amount of sense and order in it (Like... *ehem* Chaos Theory).

Which is apparently too late from me to learn the rules of this world, so I'll just take it as it is.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

And I think Chaos takes more non-canon stuff than most of us

Huh? What?

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Mine's 30+ years ago

If you need me to, I could change it...

No need, just pointing something out

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Huh? What?

Pulling your leg

*runs*

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

No need, just pointing something out

Oh okay... I have 'Cortana' on standy-by for things like that anyway

Btw, whose character's device is it from then?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Pulling your leg

*runs*

That's low

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Btw, whose character's device is it from then?

Mine and USB500's. The names are Brevis and Frieda, respectively. So that makes three Beowulves now.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Mine and USB500's. The names are Brevis and Frieda, respectively. So that makes three Beowulves now.

That'll... Be a bit troublesome It's okay, I don't really mind changing though...

Just would need some getting used to.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

That'll... Be a bit troublesome It's okay, I don't really mind changing though...

Just would need some getting used to.

No! No need to change! It won't really matter since the two OC's mentioned will never get to see Clyde anyway. The name is fine as it is.

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Here's the catch I'm going to lay down though. I'm now using a one metre long, reinforced titanium steel alloy cattle prod, with a leather grip handle.

Now, if you could grab that from me and break it, that means your over-protective love for Satashi would have come from the realms of the illogical, in-logical, un-logical, anti-logical and counter-logical

*Smiling evilly*

Make your move.

Don't worry, I'll grab it from you and toss it in the MasterSmith fire and make a nice weapon so that some random and weaponless Lord Knight might use ok? ^^

*Angelic smile*

Back at you! HA HA HA HA HA

@Lowe: I'm not saying she wouldn't fit. I'm only saying I'm not sure I'd like her around here Pretty dangerous to me

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

No! No need to change! It won't really matter since the two OC's mentioned will never get to see Clyde anyway. The name is fine as it is.

Maybe not Clyde... though it begs the question of where this Beowulf is now anyways

@Fuyu:

It's already pretty dangerous, with Fangwang, The Nobles, The Necrons, the Einsts, The LRW, Reinforce, and many others

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

No! No need to change! It won't really matter since the two OC's mentioned will never get to see Clyde anyway. The name is fine as it is.

But Clyde's weapon is a spear-type like Durandal, and if your two characters, from the future, were using another type of weapon, it wouldn't even be close to making sense

Actually I should have use 'Cortana' from the start, it'll go well with the three legendary swords from our world

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

Don't worry, I'll grab it from you and toss it in the MasterSmith fire and make a nice weapon so that some random and weaponless Lord Knight might use ok? ^^

*Angelic smile*

Back at you! HA HA HA HA HA

I see... So you DO have an overprotetive love for Satashi...

Ah... Spring...

Aaron, you and Kha got the wrong man, I'm not the one you're after ...

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

@Fuyu:

It's already pretty dangerous, with Fangwang, The Nobles, The Necrons, the Einsts, The LRW, Reinforce, and many others

Exactly. So why add more into the mix?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I see... So you DO have an overprotetive love for Satashi...

Ah... Spring...

Aaron, you and Kha got the wrong man, I'm not the one you're after ...

What I have is a boyfriend and a great dislike for abusive guys, Mr "I-like-to-poke-anyone-in-my-way-because-I-think-it's-fun".

[Kha]

@Captain Lowe: HOO-AH!!!

Btw, I hear a unified cry for morality...

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

@Kha: How dare you... How dare you... HOW DARE YOU!!! Taking advantage of three innocent girls like that! <turns away in disgust> I though cleric-knights had higher standards than that; don't they teach you monogamy and fidelity at the convent?!

Seriously, though. You should just pick one girl and go with her - look at all the trouble Athrun went thru with Cagalli due to his harem. It's just not worth it, man. Even if they ARE all hot.

So, the 21st won't stay around for all of I-n's? Then who'll tell/write the story after they leave? Please remind me of the major players... 21st, Aurion & Phantoms, 82nd...

Yup at the moment Fate is well in the lead, and Kha loves Fate and even calls Vivio his "daughter", hence his super righteous emo mode during "Kha's Counterattack". But that doesn't stop the other girls from liking him. Ne?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Come to think of it, I've been setting up Fate and Kha in my scenarios as well. Houston, we have a problem.

Go ahead. Imagine how the others are gonna guess which way Kha's gonna swing. Even better, if Fate gets jealous, even more room for drama!

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Kha(creator-san) has finally influenced Kha(OC). But still, Kha, Cleric-Knight. What happened to your moral code?

Like I said, Kha currently has eyes on Fate, but ever since he started working full time at the Church since MC 0070, Carym's been noticibly close to him, though both parties insist they are just friends. Read the Codex for more info, that's provided I can finish it. 48 pages now.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Now shipping Kha x Carym full time huh?

And pulling an Athrun?! Damn Sagar- erh Kha, what happened to your morals?!

Although I don't think the Saint Church has any regulations regarding polygamy

Actually the lack of regulations have gotten me wondering. And knowing Nanoha's harem roots, I'd say polygamy's allowed.

And when I said own all 3, I meant a situation like Syaoran + Sakura, but with 2 Tomoyos always close by.

Btw, a Sagara should make an appearance soon...

Originally Posted by Erio

Hahaha. I suspected Sophia, yes. I was just scared you'd say...

Spoiler for oh no!:

Vivio

*runs*

E... EEEEEEEEEH?!

Pimp yes, but SUGAR DADDY?! NOOOO!!!

Besides, I'm holding onto the hope that Vivio is the Star Child, and during the Leryk arc the girl comes to call Kha "Da-da". Awww...

Originally Posted by Erio

I would assume he'd deploy the Numbers to counter the small threats. So far Scaglietti only has the Numbers under his command. Lulu and Zest, as well as Oswald, Gwendolyn, and their groups, will most likely not aid Scaglietti if he's in trouble.

Of course, we could always make Scaglietti "negotiate" with any of my groups to go help him, in which case they will encounter Kha. This is a good possibility. However, for now, I have different plans.

One more thing, which you'll like. I also have plans for three other characters ( I'm making way too many characters, huh?) who will be under Scaglietti's direct control. They will be LRW and not Numbers. They are in very early stages of development (I still need to write the current battle and more on Oswald later... ) but here's a hint: "Aku no 3 Heiki" (GS OST 3)

You see, Scag only sees the tanks and bikes, but there are many invisible Spiders, Avatars and Mantlerays closing in, with Silent Trinities in the air. Much of the Regional Guard force is invisible in order to provoke an attack, so that the stealthed units can literally pop up where they least expect them.

Dang, looks like I need to make the threat look bigger. I don't want to divert the Numbers from the final canon conflict with the Aces. So in order to pull the LRW out without giving the game of the large stealthed army...

Viper craft, Silhouette on!

Originally Posted by Erio

Yes yes I remember the Lambda Driver. Sounds good. Definitely they'll be more of a challenge than the TSAB Ground Forces, so assuming Scaglietti plunges through the Ground Forces and RF6 in the anime, we'll have to come up with a way of neutralizing the Regional Guard so they wont own Scag.

They do plow through GC and R6.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

After seeing your Frost-spells, I'm all so tempted to create out Durandal's ones as well I actually wanted to ask if you would consider using the name, 'Cortana' as either his device or maybe even his ship... But I guess I'l save it next time for Clyde or something.

(Durandal, Joyeuse, Cortana... Wiki it if you haven't already )

26 eh? I guess I could make a few changes... S+ ranked? Oh right, Earth...

This could be seen as shameless self-promotion, but I'm really just doing it in the interest for the people who never visits the Fanfic thread.

(Note that I just cut things short to their special spells.)

Spoiler for Clyde's devices and spells:

Clyde: AAA+ ranked, age 13 almost 14
Device: Beowulf (Spear-type, bears resemblance to the future Durandal)

Spells
====

Prism Viper – Fire a single high penetration magic shot that could be controlled and redirected.
Prism Slayer – Cover the head of the device with a layer of magic to increase cutting prowess.
Prism Blader – Summon concentrated magic swords for melee and range attacks, as well as defense.

Blaze Cannon – A mid range, high firepower blast cannon spell.
Force Cannon – A long range, long lasting beam cannon spell.

Break Impulse – Instantly focuses magic into the point of physical contact, shattering the target.
Surge Impulse – Sent volatile magic towards the target through magic or physical matter.

Note: Magical matters include binding chains, protective shields and barriers, as well as summoned magic weapons.

Spoiler for Lindy and her device/skill:

Lindy: AA+ ranked, age 10
Device: Joyeuse (Has a relation with Durandal's name's origin )

Spells
====

Angelus - A barrier specifically designed to withstand immense physical impact.
Vendetta - Spring out magical spikes all over the barrier as a counter, but it reduces the barrier’s durability
Rebellion - A temporary increase in speed as the user slams into multiple targets.

Celestial Oppress - Fire a shield at high speed straight into the target.
Celestial Sever- Fire a shield at high speed on its side to slice through the target.
Celestial Wraith- Enchant one side of a shield to magnified the force coming from that direction by several hundred times.

(Basically, it means that when Lindy hits the shield on the enchanted side, the force would multiply severals times as it passes through the shield to whatevers on the receving end)


Magna Grasp- Encase the target in a barrier that would soon explode.
Light Rave - By breaking one’s own shield or barrier, the fragments could be use as a cloud of projectiles.
Longinus Initial - Launch a large pylon-shaped barrier towards the target(s).

Nice! Looks like Chaos finally earned a spot in the Hall of Fame. Too bad no one here will ever see these 2 OCs... Save Saga.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Oh that? Not to worry too much. Blaster can be countered by at least a Triple Breaker EX amount of force fired in a very short timeframe. Though the Breaker version... Ultimate HAXX anyone? Not to worry, I don't plan on ever using it anyway. The odds are it might as well delete the user along with the target.

Say I've always wondered, if Kha tried to Trace Aurion's Blaster/Breaker, would he see something? I did remember that you said it cannot be Traced, and I'm trying to think of an explanation why.

Kha added Artherion into the Infinite Spell Forge when he Traced Ion Cannon Breaker. And the more villians he fights, the more spells he has inside the Spell Forge. Maybe this is the reason why he's h4xx...?

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

BTW: Did someone mention Skeith? I'm not sure I'd like her hanging around here (Crazy SSS+ mage that can drain your data and copy your moves? No thanks! )

Kha can copy people's moves via Tracing, though with associated balances.

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Wait a minute, there's an entire month for Crosys?!

Maybe, maybe not. I'm still scouting info on the second StrikerS SS.

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

Go ahead. Imagine how the others are gonna guess which way Kha's gonna swing. Even better, if Fate gets jealous, even more room for drama!

I'm open to suggestions.

Like I said, Kha currently has eyes on Fate, but ever since he started working full time at the Church since MC 0070, Carym's been noticibly close to him, though both parties insist they are just friends. Read the Codex for more info, that's provided I can finish it. 48 pages now. Actually the lack of regulations have gotten me wondering. And knowing Nanoha's harem roots, I'd say polygamy's allowed.

Souka...

And when I said own all 3, I meant a situation like Syaoran + Sakura, but with 2 Tomoyos always close by.

Who'll be Sakura?

Say I've always wondered, if Kha tried to Trace Aurion's Blaster/Breaker, would he see something? I did remember that you said it cannot be Traced, and I'm trying to think of an explanation why.

The way he acquired it is from deletion of individual entity limitations. Therefore, only he is capable of performing it because he is the only one who's universal limitation on that matter removed. Anyone else trying to copy it would just end up with a very powerful Buster spell. I hope that explains it. To make it clearer, let's say Kha traced it from the video footage, if he somehow manages to gather THAT much energy individually(Aurion only managed because of external manipulation of magic particles) and try to fire it off, it would just be like firing of a standard Breaker EX++++. The difference would lie in the conversion of the magical energy during the casting. For Aurion's case, he doesn't really control it for it happens automatically.

Will that do? I just had to make an exclusive spell. Sorry. I'll let you trace Tyrfing, at least.

Kha added Artherion into the Infinite Spell Forge when he Traced Ion Cannon Breaker. And the more villians he fights, the more spells he has inside the Spell Forge. Maybe this is the reason why he's h4xx...?

Perhaps. Technically, Hikki is the only Ace I can think off who can match Kha at his best.

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I'm open to suggestions.

Who'll be Sakura?

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The way he acquired it is from deletion of individual entity limitations. Therefore, only he is capable of performing it because he is the only one who's universal limitation on that matter removed. Anyone else trying to copy it would just end up with a very powerful Buster spell. I hope that explains it. To make it clearer, let's say Kha traced it from the video footage, if he somehow manages to gather THAT much energy individually(Aurion only managed because of external manipulation of magic particles) and try to fire it off, it would just be like firing of a standard Breaker EX++++. The difference would lie in the conversion of the magical energy during the casting. For Aurion's case, he doesn't really control it for it happens automatically.

Will that do? I just had to make an exclusive spell. Sorry. I'll let you trace Tyrfing, at least.

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Perhaps. Technically, Hikki is the only Ace I can think off who can match Kha at his best.

1. Not that there's much. dere-Carim only occurs when there's the 2 of them, and dere-Sophia hardly ever appears.

2. At the moment, Fate's got the highest "heartmeter", with Carym coming in second, and Sophia third.

3. Long story short, no point Tracing, as Kha doesn't have the raw mana pool, and the 1 rank nerf per Trace renders that spell useless. Might as well stick to Divine and Excellion Buster, since both can use divine mana to foot the bill, and can be pumped for more damage, though the 1 rank limit would tone down their max damage.

And not that I mind not being able to trace Blaster; I just dun wanna have Kha pull Blaster out only to have Aurion screaming "THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!!!" And Kha can't trace Tyfing; he can only Trace an attack of Tyfing's which then manifests as a Device in the Infinite Spell Forge. Something like:

Kha wants to shoot Excelion Buster. Inside the Spell Forge, he is seen to pick up Excelion RH and then fires Traced spell. But due to the spell being able to be funded by divine mana, he can also fire it from Tausend Kreuz outside, but with a 2 rank nerf.

4. Oh dear... Come on, all above average mages can fend off his copied spells... Like his copied Crossfire Shooter is just a magic vulcan with puny damage and range, being rank D having been nerfed from C rank. Kha normally Traces S and above spells, unless it has a certain use.

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

What I have is a boyfriend and a great dislike for abusive guys, Mr "I-like-to-poke-anyone-in-my-way-because-I-think-it's-fun".

Ah, what's a six letter word that sounds like a river?

*cough* What makes you think Satashi was in my way...

Originally Posted by Kha

Nice! Looks like Chaos finally earned a spot in the Hall of Fame. Too bad no one here will ever see these 2 OCs... Save Saga.

At least wait till my lone island scenario comes out first

Or are my ideas really that revolutionary?

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Kha

Btw, I hear a unified cry for morality...
Yup at the moment Fate is well in the lead, and Kha loves Fate and even calls Vivio his "daughter", hence his super righteous emo mode during "Kha's Counterattack". But that doesn't stop the other girls from liking him. Ne?
Go ahead. Imagine how the others are gonna guess which way Kha's gonna swing. Even better, if Fate gets jealous, even more room for drama!
Like I said, Kha currently has eyes on Fate, but ever since he started working full time at the Church since MC 0070, Carym's been noticibly close to him, though both parties insist they are just friends. Read the Codex for more info, that's provided I can finish it. 48 pages now. Actually the lack of regulations have gotten me wondering. And knowing Nanoha's harem roots, I'd say polygamy's allowed.

Nice! Looks like Chaos finally earned a spot in the Hall of Fame. Too bad no one here will ever see these 2 OCs... Save Saga.

Kha can copy people's moves via Tracing, though with associated balances.

- Beware of pulling an Athrun Zala... we all know what happened to Cagalli... and just because polygamy's okay doesn't mean the girls want it to be.

Then again, the thought of...Chrono Freedom-ing Kha for being unfaithful is pretty...enticing.

- Actually...no.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga:

Saga's and his knight's revival/awakening is ironically...around the same time Reinforce died.

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[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Nightengale

- Beware of pulling an Athrun Zala... we all know what happened to Cagalli... and just because polygamy's okay doesn't mean the girls want it to be.

They don't?! Uh oh...


"Erm Sir, about what I've asked of you yesterday... "

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

1. Not that there's much. dere-Carim only occurs when there's the 2 of them, and dere-Sophia hardly ever appears.

Kaleido-Sophia?

2. At the moment, Fate's got the highest "heartmeter", with Carym coming in second, and Sophia third.

So much for original plans, huh?

3. Long story short, no point Tracing, as Kha doesn't have the raw mana pool, and the 1 rank nerf per Trace renders that spell useless. Might as well stick to Divine and Excellion Buster, since both can use divine mana to foot the bill, and can be pumped for more damage, though the 1 rank limit would tone down their max damage.

So he has to be selective after a certain point.

And not that I mind not being able to trace Blaster; I just dun wanna have Kha pull Blaster out only to have Aurion screaming "THAT'S IMPOSSIBLE!!!" And Kha can't trace Tyfing; he can only Trace an attack of Tyfing's which then manifests as a Device in the Infinite Spell Forge. Something like:

Kha wants to shoot Excelion Buster. Inside the Spell Forge, he is seen to pick up Excelion RH and then fires Traced spell. But due to the spell being able to be funded by divine mana, he can also fire it from Tausend Kreuz outside, but with a 2 rank nerf.

I see. I gotts start working on Tyrfing. The full shooting mode is driving me nuts just trying to find a suitable form!

4. Oh dear... Come on, all above average mages can fend off his copied spells... Like his copied Crossfire Shooter is just a magic vulcan with puny damage and range, being rank D having been nerfed from C rank. Kha normally Traces S and above spells, unless it has a certain use.

At his BEST. Like DaemonJaeger form, in all avenging-Zorn fury.

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

At least wait till my lone island scenario comes out first

Or are my ideas really that revolutionary?

Their unique. That makes it all the more exciting to wait for because nobody really bothered doing LindyXClyde in the past. That also includes the upcoming Mahou Shonen Classical Graham series.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

- Beware of pulling an Athrun Zala... we all know what happened to Cagalli... and just because polygamy's okay doesn't mean the girls want it to be.

I'm not even sure if Carym would be available after StrikerS.

Then again, the thought of...Chrono Freedom-ing Kha for being unfaithful is pretty...enticing.

Sounds good.

- Actually...no.

Spoiler for AFTER Saga:

Saga's and his knight's revival/awakening is ironically...around the same time Reinforce died.

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AUGH! That's gotta hurt. Saga's luck really isn't working for him, huh?

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Their unique. That makes it all the more exciting to wait for because nobody really bothered doing LindyXClyde in the past. That also includes the upcoming Mahou Shonen Classical Graham series.

Ah, what am I if not the odd one out amongs the already odds?

But you know, having a single predictable relationship isn't all that fun... So like Erio/Caro, I want to make things a little more complicating

Heh.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

I'm not even sure if Carym would be available after StrikerS.

Hmm, you're right...

Better to get the affair kicking in full power soon...

[Nightengale]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

Ah, what am I if not the odd one out amongs the already odds?

But you know, having a single predictable relationship isn't all that fun... So like Erio/Caro, I want to make things a little more complicating

Heh.

Hey, I did plan to include Clyde, Lindy and Leti into my story...

It's just I didn't plan to make it acoughharemcough. Though I'll be honest, your idea is far far more enticing.