Code geass R2Remake.

[gettogaara]

This is..........AWESOME. This alternate ending is the best. I did'nt like the ending of code geass so this kind of makes up for it. Keep up the great work.

[MrTerrorist]

@Bonzo
That scene where that little girl was beaten & was about to get raped was not cool. It disgusted me.
While I may tolerate your rather not very accurate english translations and nudity of your art, that particular scene just went too far.

[Bonzo]

I had put a advice about that story, in my comics I use always events real in our world, on purpose, because the life isn't 100% happy.

[Nobodyman9]

Originally Posted by MrTerrorist

@Bonzo
That scene where that little girl was beaten & was about to get raped was not cool. It disgusted me.
While I may tolerate your rather not very accurate english translations and nudity of your art, that particular scene just went too far.

Dude, get over it. Rape happens okay. Yes, it's a vile disgusting act, but it does happen and it's not like bonzo was glorifying it or anything. He showed it exactly for what it was. If he wants to bring that harsh reality into his work, that's his right as an artist. If you don't want to read it you don't have to.

[-Sho-]

Great job ! Good fan art ! Bravo

[Bonzo]

New comic.
A return to the past, this is the first day of their "exile" Kallen and Lelouch are suffering:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...25.3.5enga.jpg
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[Bonzo]

The new characters for the OAV:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...a_ht/chars.JPG

[Bonzo]

Next story will be...the Kalulu marriage.

[Mazryonh]

Come stai, Bonzo?

I can only think of two words to describe your work here: absolutely beautiful! You've done some amazing work here; your art's faithful to the original designs, the writing delivers some shockingly good outcomes, made elements that would normally look silly into memorable pictures, and given poignantly bittersweet endings for all.

One example of how you used elements that are usually either silly or unconvincing very well is how often Kallen gets all "bug-eyed." I'm not normally a fan of characters who get "bug-eyed" very often (in simple English it's an expression used for the action of opening one's eyes very wide in an expression of disbelief or surprise ), but the way you did it with Kallen is just classic.

You can see the horror in Kallen's saucer-sized eyes in Turn24.4enga.jpg when she comprehends just what will happen to her worldview (and possibly her sanity) if Lelouch doesn't survive, given what happened to her reason for fighting in R2R18. The abject terror you gave life to in her features is just perfect.

Your sense of "poetic justice" in dealing with each of the character's fates is also quite spot-on. Lelouch's fate in rescuing with his sister was a really gut-punching moment--enough to leave readers breathless. "Elizabeth" and her blaze of glory was one for the record as well. And Kallen; by the Geass, Kallen had it really hard in this doujinshi.

First her reason for fighting reminds her it has a will of its own, next her hero gets a brush with the Reaper, and then she has to forcibly confront the fact that the persona and skills she's been using all this time simply can't get her what she wanted. She could fight tooth and nail, inside or outside of a Knightmare Frame, until the oceans turned crimson with blood, but no amount of fighting would bring her reason for fighting back, or save her hero's life. I actually like how she begins to sincerely act in a feminine manner rather than just pretend to as she did in Ashford Academy after the ending of the war--I'm even more pleasantly surprised that you didn't make her lapse into being the "seme" of Lelouch's and Kallen's relationship.

If I ever met you at a con and you were selling physical copies of this doujin, I would definitely buy one.

[Bonzo]

Thank you very much for your judge, I received your PM too, and I gived you a answer.

[Mazryonh]

So when is the next comic going to come out? I'm looking very much forward to more of your quality.

[Bonzo]

I'm making page 5 (of 6) for next comic, the wait is short by now.

[Bonzo]

New comic 90% done.

[Mazryonh]

The wait's killing me.

I hope Kallen doesn't turn out to be a "bridezilla" (a bride-to-be who wants that her wedding is as perfect as possible, with no regards as to who gets in her way). And who will be attending? I think it'd be hard for the current "Empress of the World" to attend a "chess-playing commoner's" wedding without attracting considerable unwanted attention.

I would like to see whether or not Kallen can handle her alcohol though. There's bound to be lots of champagne flowing at this occasion.

[Bonzo]

In the truth, the ceremony will be very modest, a little christian chapel (Britannia religion is christianity), wedding dress take to rent....
Just 7 people, Lelouch, Kallen, the three children and two neighbour for the rule of best man and maitre.

[Nobodyman9]

Originally Posted by Bonzo

In the truth, the ceremony will be very modest, a little christian chapel (Britannia religion is christianity), wedding dress take to rent....
Just 7 people, Lelouch, Kallen, the three children and two neighbour for the rule of best man and maitre.

It's the two neighbors we saw from the comic with Lelouch and Kallen's, uh...first time, right?

[Bonzo]

Originally Posted by Nobodyman9

It's the two neighbors we saw from the comic with Lelouch and Kallens, uh...first time, right?

Of course.

[Nobodyman9]

Originally Posted by Bonzo

Of course.

Thanks.

Also, LOL. Don't give away too much about the comic bonzo You gotta keep it mysterious until the big reveal! Just a suggestion.

[Mazryonh]

Originally Posted by Bonzo

In the truth, the ceremony will be very modest, a little christian chapel (Britannia religion is christianity), wedding dress take to rent....
Just 7 people, Lelouch, Kallen, the three children and two neighbour for the rule of best man and maitre.

Are you sure the "Empress of the World" won't send a bottle or two to the wedding, labelled "From Our Late Father"? Charles vi Britannia must have had an extensive private collection of champagne and other liquors, some individual bottles of which must have cost more than the worth of an entire 3rd world country.

Hope you chose an appropriate design for the ring too!

[Bonzo]

The event a lot of people waited, and thanks to nobodyman9, with a decent english text this time:

LELOUCH'S MARRIAGE!

Finally, after years, that tormented soul as Lelouch finded a little happiness and the same event finally fullify totally Kallen's heart.

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Good reading, and write comments this time