Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[Kha]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

Ah, found it. Well, they don't necessarily have to be X ... Maybe SSS+ Or like Nobles with a wider range of abilities ... I'm not the one who created them anyway They can be very limited in numbers, and if some are physically immortal (like possessing infinitely regenerating life force) they'd be perfect hosts for AT

EDIT:

They should also have some distinctive names and titles to be able to say:

???: Before you die, stubborn girl, I will tell you my name - I am *XXXXX*, Prince of *something*.

[unleashes his ultimate attack]

1. I see.

2. They most likely ARE immortal, considering that FW is (though like Precia its running on magic alone) until his battery runs out (and thus we join FW in Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle having almost bled dry). So yes, I think they'll be perfect hosts.

Further queries & points:

Does AT drain the mage's lifeforce all the time, or just some of the time, ie, when it's active?

If it's the latter, it would be perfect for Kha, having a Chrno overdrive timer device, if you watched Chrno Crusade.

Though if its the former, I would still be able to go ahead, but be considered rather cheap.

Scenario: Situation desperate, and Kha considers this to be his last quest, and thus bonds himself with the weapon. He's then able to clean FW and his armies' clocks much more faster (and more effectively, with that Catalyst spell included with his False Schneiderform).

Then he drags himself back home dying, everyone emos, Kleriker says his goodbyes, dies, then the Naaru resurrect him two days later because his job in the mortal world ain't finished, thus giving the Velka their first Easter Sunday.

It'll be even more cheaterbug to have the Naaru fuel the AT post resurrection.

Originally Posted by Erio

Thinking in terms of regular magic/dark magic/divine magic, AO has absolute power over regular magic, right? What would be AT's field?

Hmm... Not that I'm catching the ball here, but my understanding is that AT is basically AO's opposite; instead of creating magic particles, it can convert them to matter.

Control wise, I'm not too sure...

[Erio]

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

That's currently being discussed. My point of view regarding the power over magic particles: AO has the powers of Manipulation and Creation (though Creation is somewhat twisted - since it's impossible to create magic particles out of nothing now it needs to trade an equivalent amount of regular matter and/or energy to do this, thus the process would look like destruction for anybody who can't see magic particles; I've shown it in use once, the ability requires much more effort than manipulation); AT has the powers of Interdiction and Destruction (the first means it can make magic particles kind of inert, thus preventing any usage of them - the levels of effect may be different: from countering AO's manipulation to total ban on any regular magic being cast; the second initially was meant to turn magic particles into nothing, but now turns them into equivalent amount of regular matter and/or energy instead, thus the process would look like creation for anybody who can't see magic particles; may have combat and non-combat uses). So basically they both work around regular magic, but have different fields of influence. SaintX has another idea, which involves Antimagic; I won't be posting it without permission yet. Both AO and AT have no powers over divine or dark magic, as this kinds of magic appeared after their creation and are independent from Terran magic. Nevertheless both Devices can stand their own against divine/dark-users using indirect effects of their abilities.

Very interesting. You know? I've had, since the creation of my characters a month ago, the idea of Interdiction, however the character who uses it (you'll know soon) does not has absolute control over all the magic particles as does AT. I know you guys are trying to make AO and AT the absolutes in terms of magic particle usage, so I wont step into that area.

I certainly want to know what you guys are planning with Antimagic, though. Because for now it just seems like AT's Destruction... it would just nullify all the magic particles in an area.

As for dark/divine magic, I had been discussing it with Lowe, and I'm glad to know that you have a similar definition of them. What I believe, too, is that Dark and Divine energy are from a different realm of reality... something like the Netherworld and Heaven. Of course, Kha has much more complex ideas, such as his Naaru and ... I forgot that other thing. However, at least he plans to use the Naaru and the War4k stuff for his Belkan Chaos magic, and not "regular" Chaos/Dark magic, which Lowe refers to as Midchildan Chaos magic.


As for the talk about Nobles, Dukes, Royals... you guys are crazy. Who's gonna fight against them? If not even Kha, the character, can handle a single Duke, and Kha is probably the most powerful and versatile character in all of TSAB, WHO THE HELL CAN?!

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Kha

Scenario: Situation desperate, and Kha considers this to be his last quest, and thus bonds himself with the weapon. He's then able to clean FW and his armies' clocks much more faster (and more effectively, with that Catalyst spell included with his False Schneiderform).

Then he drags himself back home dying, everyone emos, Kleriker says his goodbyes, dies, then the Naaru resurrect him two days later because his job in the mortal world ain't finished, thus giving the Velka their first Easter Sunday.

It'll be even more cheaterbug to have the Naaru fuel the AT post resurrection. Hmm... Not that I'm catching the ball here, but my understanding is that AT is basically AO's opposite; instead of creating magic particles, it can convert them to matter.

Control wise, I'm not too sure...

Thus ending AlternateS, Fangwang arc, right? Though I'm wondering how AT's kind of power will help Kha's style.

Originally Posted by Erio

As for the talk about Nobles, Dukes, Royals... you guys are crazy. Who's gonna fight against them? If not even Kha, the character, can handle a single Duke, and Kha is probably the most powerful and versatile character in all of TSAB, WHO THE HELL CAN?!

Kluize and the Riviera + AX + some more.


You guys are awesome when it comes to these kinds of theories.

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Kha

Does AT drain the mage's lifeforce all the time, or just some of the time, ie, when it's active?

They both do it all the time. When they're inactive the drain isn't very strong though, for example simply wearing AO would shorten a regular human's life approximately in half. The boost to wielder's abilities is free (at least for AO, I'm not sure if AT has the same feature or something different; I'm leaning to make it somehow related to weakening instead of powering up, but not the user in this case), but usage of the Devices' own powers increases the drain manifold. Both can drain the life force excessively and store it as long as they have spare energy capacity.

If it's the latter, it would be perfect for Kha, having a Chrno overdrive timer device, if you watched Chrno Crusade.

Though if its the former, I would still be able to go ahead, but be considered rather cheap.

Scenario: Situation desperate, and Kha considers this to be his last quest, and thus bonds himself with the weapon. He's then able to clean FW and his armies' clocks much more faster (and more effectively, with that Catalyst spell included with his False Schneiderform).

Then he drags himself back home dying, everyone emos, Kleriker says his goodbyes, dies, then the Naaru resurrect him two days later because his job in the mortal world ain't finished, thus giving the Velka their first Easter Sunday.

It'll be even more cheaterbug to have the Naaru fuel the AT post resurrection.

So I see you're determined to snatch AT from FW Good luck with that.

The scenario with somebody dying due to overuse of one of the Devices' power crossed my mind too. It may work quite well with AT/Kha. Also go ahead with fueling any of them from some infinite source - they have the plans of their own and are actually waiting for something like this to happen. Do you think AO tries to prevent the collapse of the Multiverse solely out of altruism?

Hmm... Not that I'm catching the ball here, but my understanding is that AT is basically AO's opposite; instead of creating magic particles, it can convert them to matter.

Control wise, I'm not too sure...

I've kinda explained it from my point of view in previous post. It's not arranged with SaintX yet though. Control wise AT can't bend the particles to its will, but prevents others from doing so.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Thus ending AlternateS, Fangwang arc, right? Though I'm wondering how AT's kind of power will help Kha's style.



Kluize and the Riviera + AX + some more.


You guys are awesome when it comes to these kinds of theories.

No kidding. This stuff is way out of my league.

I think Kha has planned an encounter between Kha, the Aces, and the others, against my Relic weapons... I by no means am against this, but I think I'll have to overpower my characters (leaving them without any of the weaknesses shown in my fic) so they can prove to be a challenge to Kha.

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Arcas as the glue of the 82nd huh? Talk about politics (Lise is QFT), and Dunamists finally appearing in mention here. It this a setup for Crosys by any chance?

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

So were finally going to go deeper into the Dunamist matter? Can't wait!

Originally Posted by Liingo

Interesting. I like how it's going

Originally Posted by Kha

Rabbi Policy works like something that keeps military independent of politics deshou? Interesting thought... Oh and there might be a little problem with the Tripartite idea. I'm worried that canon might reveal that the 3 Legendary Admirals are in charge of the entire of Ordered Space; if that's the case, I would have to completely overhaul the sociopolitical model of the fanon universe like I did for Kha early in the thread, but this time it'll affect your guys as well. If nothing's wrong, I'll keep the status quo and life goes on, but I'm just notifying you of the potential changes I might have to make.

Okay, first round of Q&A.

@LoweGear: Arcas really isn't the glue of the 82nd; the glue is the combination of all four of them - it's kind of the StrikerS Principle extended. Sevasti can make the hard command decisions w/o worrying too much; Mel keeps up the spirits of the 82nd; Arcas serves as the conscience of the 82nd; Boomer keeps the peace between the others. The point I'm trying to make is that the reason the four of them are so effective is because it's THEM - any other team would be less effective, even if they had more magic power. And WTH does QFT mean? Let's hope it's not what I think it is...

@LoweGear & Aaron008R:
For now, Dunamists will only be mentioned here and there in shorts, and only ones containing Sevasti. The Dunamists will have their own subplot when I begin to roll out LegendS, which happens after CrosyS and I-n's.

@Kha: The Rabbi Policy works something like that - it's a way for the RAF to remain immune to the political complexities of Secretariat. And Re: Adms. - understood. If things need changing, then they'll be changed.

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Hopefully, I'll get the bladepoint scenario at Saturday. I'll have to review for a rather difficult exam first so I can't write my scenarios right now.
Sorry.



Now that's a problem. Well, the Aces have their own unique way around that. I guess I'll post it now. This is right after the explanation of what makes Keroko and Kha uncomfortable around Aurion...

Spoiler for A Visit to RF6: Part 4.4 : Revelations~Actions Behind a Name:

After I finished my story, I let the four reflect in silence about the new information.

“…………………”

“……………”

“…………”

Really now, is that really too much to swallow?

Clearing my throat, I broke the silence, “Well, that’s about it. I might be staying here for a day or two before going back to the facility to rework my design on the new equipment.”

“… New… Equipment?”

I felt a drastic change in atmosphere at the moment I mentioned ‘new equipment.’ Wait, I’ve felt this before… I looked at Keroko apprehensively.

“Ano… Oji-chan?”

Crap! She only calls me that nowadays whenever she-

“CAN I TEST IT?!”

“Eh?”

I knew it.

“Can I? I promise I’ll be careful!”

“Wai-”

She was literally glowing right now, advancing towards me as if her discomfort a while ago was just a stupid ruse. Despite myself, I took an unintentional step backward from the excited girl.

“Please? I promise I won’t break them!”

“Now jus-”

“Can I? Oji-chan?”

Great. She’s using the puppy-eyes tactic! Just what’s with her and new gadgets? I glanced at the others. They were gaping speechlessly at Keroko’s 180 degree turn in mood. Well, everyone except Nanoha, who was smiling in embarrassment.

“PLEASE?!”

“H-hey.”

“muuu~”

Now to making cute sounds? And she’s levitating now! Does excitement really does this much to her? Wait. Does this mean she’ll do the-

“Pleeeaaaase?”

“Well, you see…”

After a few more moments of awkward silence from me, she put on a cute pouting face. Realistic forced tears starting to form on the sides of her eyes.

“Hmph! If you don’t, I’ll-...I'll-" *sob*

The crying tactic now?! I don't think I want to know what she's going to do next!

“ALRIGHT! Alright! I give up! I’ll give you a call when it’s finished! Just don’t start crying and make everyone come running after my neck!” I put my hands on her shoulders, pushing her downwards to make her land on the ground.

“Yay! Thank you, Oji-chan!”

I planted my face on my right palm with a big sigh if defeat. Why is it harder to say “No” to them when they are no longer children? In addition, just WHY are they acting like this when they are already young adults? Am I losing it? Ah well, I guess it’s forgivable. Just look at her. Like a kid who’s been given the best birthday present. I guess we can continue the discussion now.

“Anyway, before I go back, I would like to use some of the facilities here for some training. I need to exercise a bit.”

“No, you musn’t.”

“Huh?”

Nanoha was suddenly looking at me with that stern instructor’s glare. What’s going on?

“After what you’ve been through… Aurion-san… Oji-chan...”

If it’s Nanoha calling me that, that means-

“That’s a definite no-no!”

“Nanoh-”

“You have to REST!”

Her tone and stare made me gulp involuntarily. Yup, she’s a top class instructor, alright.

“Now see here. I wasn’t going to-”

“NO! You told me to stop stressing myself too much six years ago, but what are you doing now?”

“It’s not that bad.”

“You’ll get yourself killed!”

She was glowering cutely at me right now. Honestly, this girl. She’s actually scarier when she’s worried about you. The cuteness somehow amplifies the impact.

“Nanoha, I’m perfectly fine!”

“I’ll see to it myself! Let’s go to the clinic, Oji-chan!”

She went behind me and started pushing me towards the facility.

“Now wait a second, Nanoha! Listen to me! Whoa!”

“I’ll listen when we get there!”

“Hey, everyone! Don’t just stand there! Do something!”

It took a while, but we were somehow able to calm Nanoha down to avoid the unneeded medical check-up. It actually included Raising Heart asking if she was needed to set up!

Geez. Why do my ‘nieces’ aside from Hayate get weird when they call me Oji-chan? No wait, maybe just Nanoha and Keroko. Fate is still definitely normal.

My hand automatically sought out Fate’s head and gave it a pat. Don’t start copying these two, all right? Fate looked up at me with a strange expression. Huh?

“…Oji-chan…”

I felt my body stiffen when she mentioned that. The others all paused to watch. Taking a deep breath, I replied, “What is it, Fate?”

“… Well… It’s just… Uhmm…” She looked slightly nervous but determined nonetheless.

What’s going on? Don’t tell me you’ve been infected too! What are you going to do? Ask me to help you with paperwork?!

“How did you get Bardiche to speak with you using four sentences this time?”

“………..”

For the first time in several years, I wanted to drop facedown on the floor.

“Fate… I don’t know. Why don’t you ask him?”

There you go, Keroko-kun. Did it match your expectations? I'm sure Keroko-chan just made some jaws drop! And THAT's how the Aces deal with Aurion's seeming immunity to fanservice.

@Aaron008R: Keroko-chan... being cute?! <shivers> AND LEVITATING? Kowai yo... And Instructor Mode Nanoha - almost impossible to resist - you'd have to be a real jerk to beat that. WHY is it that girls seem cuter when they're oh so concerned about you, Onii-chan? (inside joke)

Originally Posted by Kha

1. I see.

2. They most likely ARE immortal, considering that FW is (though like Precia its running on magic alone) until his battery runs out (and thus we join FW in Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle having almost bled dry). So yes, I think they'll be perfect hosts.

Further queries & points:

Does AT drain the mage's lifeforce all the time, or just some of the time, ie, when it's active?

If it's the latter, it would be perfect for Kha, having a Chrno overdrive timer device, if you watched Chrno Crusade.

Though if its the former, I would still be able to go ahead, but be considered rather cheap.

Scenario: Situation desperate, and Kha considers this to be his last quest, and thus bonds himself with the weapon. He's then able to clean FW and his armies' clocks much more faster (and more effectively, with that Catalyst spell included with his False Schneiderform).

Then he drags himself back home dying, everyone emos, Kleriker says his goodbyes, dies, then the Naaru resurrect him two days later because his job in the mortal world ain't finished, thus giving the Velka their first Easter Sunday.

It'll be even more cheaterbug to have the Naaru fuel the AT post resurrection. Hmm... Not that I'm catching the ball here, but my understanding is that AT is basically AO's opposite; instead of creating magic particles, it can convert them to matter.

Control wise, I'm not too sure...

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Thus ending AlternateS, Fangwang arc, right? Though I'm wondering how AT's kind of power will help Kha's style.



Kluize and the Riviera + AX + some more.


You guys are awesome when it comes to these kinds of theories.

Originally Posted by An Hero in Disguise

They both do it all the time. When they're inactive the drain isn't very strong though, for example simply wearing AO would shorten a regular human's life approximately in half. The boost to wielder's abilities is free (at least for AO, I'm not sure if AT has the same feature or something different; I'm leaning to make it somehow related to weakening instead of powering up, but not the user in this case), but usage of the Devices' own powers increases the drain manifold. Both can drain the life force excessively and store it as long as they have spare energy capacity.



So I see you're determined to snatch AT from FW Good luck with that.

The scenario with somebody dying due to overuse of one of the Devices' power crossed my mind too. It may work quite well with AT/Kha. Also go ahead with fueling any of them from some infinite source - they have the plans of their own and are actually waiting for something like this to happen. Do you think AO tries to prevent the collapse of the Multiverse solely out of altruism?



I've kinda explained it from my point of view in previous post. It's not arranged with SaintX yet though. Control wise AT can't bend the particles to its will, but prevents others from doing so.

So lemme get this straight... you're planning on having Kha pull a Gandalf @ the end of Alternates II? <gives dubious look> Is this REALLY the way you want things to pan out, or is it still just talk right now. BTW, while you're busy talking about this, Shouldn't you be working on CrosyS?!

[An Hero in Disguise]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

So lemme get this straight... you're planning on having Kha pull a Gandalf @ the end of Alternates II? <gives dubious look> Is this REALLY the way you want things to pan out, or is it still just talk right now.

Dunno if Kha is serious about the "Gandalf" part but if he's going to keep AT for himself he'll be rivaling Kluize in h4xx level: divine AND chaos magic AND absolute dominance over regular magic AND ability to create regular matter and energy out of magic particles AND ... did I miss something?

But there's one more thing to be revealed about AO, and respectively AT, which will probably make Kha never use any of them again after experiencing "death" from their drain once. It'd be quite fun, Kha's "death" could even be the moment this thing is revealed if he's really going to make it happen. Otherwise I'll use Serge, or maybe the current wielder of AT.

[Saint X]

@ all latest queries:

Antimatter, Antimagic, Antienergy - they are just the inverse of the known foundations of our material world - matter, magic and energy...

- it's just a simple fact: something has a counterpart- even the multiverse has an inverse - only the fine line called 'relativity' is keeping the two from ever turning back the multiverse into nothing.

Originally Posted by Erio

As for the talk about Nobles, Dukes, Royals... you guys are crazy. Who's gonna fight against them? If not even Kha, the character, can handle a single Duke, and Kha is probably the most powerful and versatile character in all of TSAB, WHO THE HELL CAN?!

Spoiler for WHO CAN? - SAMPLE PREVIEW OF THE FINAL BATTLE IN ALTERNATES II:

Subaru and Ashton (In Level 3, Glowing): WE CAN!!!

Fangwang (Last two Saiga out - Idaric Armor and Inselion Blade - armor protecing AT): This is the same as the last time... THIS IS NOT THE TIME THAT I'LL BE BEATEN BY SOME FATED COUPLE AGAIN!!! I WILL WIPE THIS MULTIVERSE CLEAN AND DESTROY ALL OF YOU FOR IT!!!

Ashton: he's going nuts... that punch we dealt him a few months ago must still be stinging...

Subaru: really... looks like he's still feeling the impact to me...

Both partners laugh.

Ashton: You know Subaru, since we might die, i might as well confess something to you.

---

And yes, after Fangwang and his level of minions are pushed back into the red zone, Kha can go back to being the top magi...

And for now, since FW is still not spotted inside the green zone, you can relax.

- Why did i have the feeling that i just shook the Nanohaverse apart?

to keep us back on track- and keep our minds off the unknown dangers of the Red Zone...

UP NEXT SOON!: The Nanohaic Version of 3 Toraha Combat Waitresses!

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Saint X

@ all latest queries:

Antimatter, Antimagic, Antienergy - they are just the inverse of the known foundations of our material world - matter, magic and energy...

- it's just a simple fact: something has a counterpart- even the multiverse has an inverse - only the fine line called 'relativity' is keeping the two from ever turning back the multiverse into nothing.

Spoiler for WHO CAN? - SAMPLE PREVIEW OF THE FINAL BATTLE IN ALTERNATES II:

Subaru and Ashton (In Level 3, Glowing): WE CAN!!!

Fangwang (Last two Saiga out - Idaric Armor and Inselion Blade - armor protecing AT): This is the same as the last time... THIS IS NOT THE TIME THAT I'LL BE BEATEN BY SOME FATED COUPLE AGAIN!!! I WILL WIPE THIS MULTIVERSE CLEAN AND DESTROY ALL OF YOU FOR IT!!!

Ashton: he's going nuts... that punch we dealt him a few months ago must still be stinging...

Subaru: really... looks like he's still feeling the impact to me...

Both partners laugh.

Ashton: You know Subaru, since we might die, i might as well confess something to you.

---

And yes, after Fangwang and his level of minions are pushed back into the red zone, Kha can go back to being the top magi...

And for now, since FW is still not spotted inside the green zone, you can relax.

- Why did i have the feeling that i just shook the Nanohaverse apart?

to keep us back on track- and keep our minds off the unknown dangers of the Red Zone...

UP NEXT: The Nanohaic Version of 3 Toraha Combat Waitresses!

Subaru and Ashton, huh? So... Subaru and Kha are the last hope of humanity? THAT'S NOT ENOUGH!!! lol

I mean, these two are going to kill, what, 20 or so Dukes?

Interesting thought you have there, about Antimagic.

And no, you didnt JUST shake the Nanohaverse... Ever since Kha was created it was shaken!!

Well, I guess you guys know what you're doing.

[USB500]

Am I missing something here?

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Originally Posted by Kha

And I gotta stop thinking of Carim in terms of Gundam Stateswomen. I've made her cry like Cagalli, sing like Lacus, preach meaningless peace like Relena, and have the strict side of Lady Une. Bottomline: I NEED MORE SUBS! Episode 2 is not enough for Carim characterization!!! And dkellis caught the bug too.

NO!

Let Carim be herself!

though being a songstress looks kinda of good :3

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Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Spoiler for A Visit to RF6: Part 4.4 : Revelations~Actions Behind a Name:

After I finished my story, I let the four reflect in silence about the new information.

“…………………”

“……………”

“…………”

Really now, is that really too much to swallow?

Clearing my throat, I broke the silence, “Well, that’s about it. I might be staying here for a day or two before going back to the facility to rework my design on the new equipment.”

“… New… Equipment?”

I felt a drastic change in atmosphere at the moment I mentioned ‘new equipment.’ Wait, I’ve felt this before… I looked at Keroko apprehensively.

“Ano… Oji-chan?”

Crap! She only calls me that nowadays whenever she-

“CAN I TEST IT?!”

“Eh?”

I knew it.

“Can I? I promise I’ll be careful!”

“Wai-”

She was literally glowing right now, advancing towards me as if her discomfort a while ago was just a stupid ruse. Despite myself, I took an unintentional step backward from the excited girl.

“Please? I promise I won’t break them!”

“Now jus-”

“Can I? Oji-chan?”

Great. She’s using the puppy-eyes tactic! Just what’s with her and new gadgets? I glanced at the others. They were gaping speechlessly at Keroko’s 180 degree turn in mood. Well, everyone except Nanoha, who was smiling in embarrassment.

“PLEASE?!”

“H-hey.”

“muuu~”

Now to making cute sounds? And she’s levitating now! Does excitement really does this much to her? Wait. Does this mean she’ll do the-

“Pleeeaaaase?”

“Well, you see…”

After a few more moments of awkward silence from me, she put on a cute pouting face. Realistic forced tears starting to form on the sides of her eyes.

“Hmph! If you don’t, I’ll-...I'll-" *sob*

The crying tactic now?! I don't think I want to know what she's going to do next!

“ALRIGHT! Alright! I give up! I’ll give you a call when it’s finished! Just don’t start crying and make everyone come running after my neck!” I put my hands on her shoulders, pushing her downwards to make her land on the ground.

“Yay! Thank you, Oji-chan!”

I planted my face on my right palm with a big sigh if defeat. Why is it harder to say “No” to them when they are no longer children? In addition, just WHY are they acting like this when they are already young adults? Am I losing it? Ah well, I guess it’s forgivable. Just look at her. Like a kid who’s been given the best birthday present. I guess we can continue the discussion now.

“Anyway, before I go back, I would like to use some of the facilities here for some training. I need to exercise a bit.”

“No, you musn’t.”

“Huh?”

Nanoha was suddenly looking at me with that stern instructor’s glare. What’s going on?

“After what you’ve been through… Aurion-san… Oji-chan...”

If it’s Nanoha calling me that, that means-

“That’s a definite no-no!”

“Nanoh-”

“You have to REST!”

Her tone and stare made me gulp involuntarily. Yup, she’s a top class instructor, alright.

“Now see here. I wasn’t going to-”

“NO! You told me to stop stressing myself too much six years ago, but what are you doing now?”

“It’s not that bad.”

“You’ll get yourself killed!”

She was glowering cutely at me right now. Honestly, this girl. She’s actually scarier when she’s worried about you. The cuteness somehow amplifies the impact.

“Nanoha, I’m perfectly fine!”

“I’ll see to it myself! Let’s go to the clinic, Oji-chan!”

She went behind me and started pushing me towards the facility.

“Now wait a second, Nanoha! Listen to me! Whoa!”

“I’ll listen when we get there!”

“Hey, everyone! Don’t just stand there! Do something!”

It took a while, but we were somehow able to calm Nanoha down to avoid the unneeded medical check-up. It actually included Raising Heart asking if she was needed to set up!

Geez. Why do my ‘nieces’ aside from Hayate get weird when they call me Oji-chan? No wait, maybe just Nanoha and Keroko. Fate is still definitely normal.

My hand automatically sought out Fate’s head and gave it a pat. Don’t start copying these two, all right? Fate looked up at me with a strange expression. Huh?

“…Oji-chan…”

I felt my body stiffen when she mentioned that. The others all paused to watch. Taking a deep breath, I replied, “What is it, Fate?”

“… Well… It’s just… Uhmm…” She looked slightly nervous but determined nonetheless.

What’s going on? Don’t tell me you’ve been infected too! What are you going to do? Ask me to help you with paperwork?!

“How did you get Bardiche to speak with you using four sentences this time?”

“………..”

For the first time in several years, I wanted to drop facedown on the floor.

“Fate… I don’t know. Why don’t you ask him?”

There you go, Keroko-kun. Did it match your expectations? I'm sure Keroko-chan just made some jaws drop! And THAT's how the Aces deal with Aurion's seeming immunity to fanservice.

Am I missing something here?

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Originally Posted by Liingo

Oni-chan breaker version 2?? This can't be good..

It's even worse.

Apparently they have learned the skill from von Einzbern family.

[Kha]

[Satashi]I knew my comments of making Kha = Jesus would rile everyone up! [/Satashi]

Btw, I was thinking that what if AO and AT ended up on the same person? Imagine the amount of power he'll have. And that's how I intend to drag Serge into the FW conflict; the Nobles target him to extract AO from him; And the Rukia trial came to mind as to how to go about that.

As for Kha + AT, it's responsible for most of the possible phyrric endings of the New Velka harem game fic series, so it'll depend on how I play things out.

Originally Posted by Erio

No kidding. This stuff is way out of my league.

I think Kha has planned an encounter between Kha, the Aces, and the others, against my Relic weapons... I by no means am against this, but I think I'll have to overpower my characters (leaving them without any of the weaknesses shown in my fic) so they can prove to be a challenge to Kha.

You sure?! I'm still needing more data, but my plans for the first conflict with the Numbers (which I've compared to GMs and mass production cannon fodder) ends in a stalemate. Remember, Kha's the lowest ranked of the Aces, at S, when everyone else is S+ and above.

His team is ranked below him - Kaempfer would've been S if not for his illness, current rank A; Sofia A+; Artei A-; Allison is C+.

Now against the Vaste Lordo Lutecia and the other 4 Relyckers, it's going to take all 5 of the 21st, and they'd still be unable to defeat the Vaste Lordo even then; only at the parallel battle during the final episodes of StrikerS do I have such plans. I'm studying Erio's Relic girls to ascertain their fighting styles and stuff, but no doubt Kha's going to need more upgrades if he is going to defeat the girls.

And... which Kha shook the Nanohaverse apart? Not the one assigned to protect the OC thread's. Not yet at least, no concrete plans.

A poll:

How do you guys find Artei X Teana?

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Kha

[Satashi]I knew my comments of making Kha = Jesus would rile everyone up! [/Satashi]

Btw, I was thinking that what if AO and AT ended up on the same person? Imagine the amount of power he'll have. And that's how I intend to drag Serge into the FW conflict; the Nobles target him to extract AO from him; And the Rukia trial came to mind as to how to go about that.

As for Kha + AT, it's responsible for most of the possible phyrric endings of the New Velka harem game fic series, so it'll depend on how I play things out.
You sure?! I'm still needing more data, but my plans for the first conflict with the Numbers (which I've compared to GMs and mass production cannon fodder) ends in a stalemate. Remember, Kha's the lowest ranked of the Aces, at S, when everyone else is S+ and above.

His team is ranked below him - Kaempfer would've been S if not for his illness, current rank A; Sofia A+; Artei A-; Allison is C+.

Now against the Vaste Lordo Lutecia and the other 4 Relyckers, it's going to take all 5 of the 21st, and they'd still be unable to defeat the Vaste Lordo even then; only at the parallel battle during the final episodes of StrikerS do I have such plans. I'm studying Erio's Relic girls to ascertain their fighting styles and stuff, but no doubt Kha's going to need more upgrades if he is going to defeat the girls.

Hmm, if you put it that way... I have a better picture of how things are.

Well, its not that I'm saying Kha owns everything right now... the thing is, where do the Nobles, Dukes, etc, fit in, and how powerful are they compared to Numbers and stuff? They sound way too overwhelming in power that I just go

And... which Kha shook the Nanohaverse apart? Not the one assigned to protect the OC thread's. Not yet at least, no concrete plans.

lol Dont worry, that was more of a joke

A poll:

How do you guys find Artei X Teana?

That sounds... interesting...

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by Kha

[Satashi]I knew my comments of making Kha = Jesus would rile everyone up! [/Satashi]

Btw, I was thinking that what if AO and AT ended up on the same person? Imagine the amount of power he'll have. And that's how I intend to drag Serge into the FW conflict; the Nobles target him to extract AO from him; And the Rukia trial came to mind as to how to go about that.

As for Kha + AT, it's responsible for most of the possible phyrric endings of the New Velka harem game fic series, so it'll depend on how I play things out.
You sure?! I'm still needing more data, but my plans for the first conflict with the Numbers (which I've compared to GMs and mass production cannon fodder) ends in a stalemate. Remember, Kha's the lowest ranked of the Aces, at S, when everyone else is S+ and above.

His team is ranked below him - Kaempfer would've been S if not for his illness, current rank A; Sofia A+; Artei A-; Allison is C+.

Now against the Vaste Lordo Lutecia and the other 4 Relyckers, it's going to take all 5 of the 21st, and they'd still be unable to defeat the Vaste Lordo even then; only at the parallel battle during the final episodes of StrikerS do I have such plans. I'm studying Erio's Relic girls to ascertain their fighting styles and stuff, but no doubt Kha's going to need more upgrades if he is going to defeat the girls.

And... which Kha shook the Nanohaverse apart? Not the one assigned to protect the OC thread's. Not yet at least, no concrete plans.

A poll:

How do you guys find Artei X Teana?

@Kha: Okay, so Kha using AT and pulling a Gandalf isn't permanent yet - good. I'd like to be the first to say that I hope it doesn't have to come to that.

And Artei x Teana... 20 vs. 16

<counts off relationships... Yuunoha, KhaFate, ErioCaro (w/poss. Lutecia), AshtonSubaru, Arteana, ArcasMel> <nods>

Okay, I approve. It gives Tea, at the very least, a possible romantic partner for when I write LegendS (like I said, there'll be enough romance and matchmaking going on so that people'll need a scorecard).

Re: Dukes & Viscounts - who all will be fighting them in Alternates II?

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Kha

[Satashi]I knew my comments of making Kha = Jesus would rile everyone up! [/Satashi]

A poll:

How do you guys find Artei X Teana?

1: if Kha is Jesus, then who's Moses?

Okay, I better quit making fun of religions.

2: that looks very intriguing.

Note:
I have finished writing profiles for the triplet sisters. Now I just have to type it down and do proper corrections.

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by USB500

1: if Kha is Jesus, then who's Moses?

Okay, I better quit making fun of religions.

2: that looks very intriguing.

Note:
I have finished writing profiles for the triplet sisters. Now I just have to type it down and do proper corrections.

Why, who would lead an EXODUS but an RAFer?

Arcas: LET MY PEOPLE GO!!!

[Kha]

Originally Posted by USB500

1: if Kha is Jesus, then who's Moses?

Okay, I better quit making fun of religions.

2: that looks very intriguing.

Note:
I have finished writing profiles for the triplet sisters. Now I just have to type it down and do proper corrections.

1. Carim, since she's the one leading the people to the Promised Land. Makes prophesies too; Kha's only a speaker and healer, and gets resurrected after dying; more similar to Jesus.

Fanon theory regarding Prophecy making: The Voice of the God Empress, otherwise known as the Melody of Oblivion. Can you catch the ref?

Okay I should stop this before it gets out of hand.

EDIT: And maybe Arcas.

2. I see this is getting rather well received. But I'll need ideas to kick things off.

[Reiji Tabibito]

Originally Posted by Kha

1. Carim, since she's the one leading the people to the Promised Land. Makes prophesies too; Kha's only a speaker and healer, and gets resurrected after dying; more similar to Jesus.

Fanon theory regarding Prophecy making: The Voice of the God Empress, otherwise known as the Melody of Oblivion. Can you catch the ref?

Okay I should stop this before it gets out of hand.

EDIT: And maybe Arcas.

2. I see this is getting rather well received. But I'll need ideas to kick things off.

Nah, 's okay. Arcas isn't really a leader like Carim is - if we're going to go by religious analogies, King David is probably the closest Bible figure to Arcas. He's a highly competent warrior, loved by his 'people' (aka friends & acquaintances), and has a righteous heart. Realistically, it's either him or Joshua - but I wouldn't mind Moses...

[LoweGear]

WHOA...

This is some crazy backlog here, if not in numbers then in content... we even have Kha as Jesus and Arcas as Moses talk now!

Originally Posted by Saint X

Spoiler for WHO CAN? - SAMPLE PREVIEW OF THE FINAL BATTLE IN ALTERNATES II:

Subaru and Ashton (In Level 3, Glowing): WE CAN!!!

Fangwang (Last two Saiga out - Idaric Armor and Inselion Blade - armor protecing AT): This is the same as the last time... THIS IS NOT THE TIME THAT I'LL BE BEATEN BY SOME FATED COUPLE AGAIN!!! I WILL WIPE THIS MULTIVERSE CLEAN AND DESTROY ALL OF YOU FOR IT!!!

Ashton: he's going nuts... that punch we dealt him a few months ago must still be stinging...

Subaru: really... looks like he's still feeling the impact to me...

Both partners laugh.

Ashton: You know Subaru, since we might die, i might as well confess something to you.

---

Subaru and Ashton, the fated couple and the multiverse's hope? I like where this is going, with the confession at the end

@ Reiji Tabitito: QFT Means Quoted For Truth And thanks for clearing up regarding Arcas' role there.

@ Artei x Teana idea: Melike

@ USB500: Better get those triplet's profile up soon

[Satty]

What's this, religion, ship wars, and other stuff... anyway...

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Spoiler for A Visit to RF6: Part 4.4 : Revelations~Actions Behind a Name:

After I finished my story, I let the four reflect in silence about the new information.

“…………………”

“……………”

“…………”

Really now, is that really too much to swallow?

Clearing my throat, I broke the silence, “Well, that’s about it. I might be staying here for a day or two before going back to the facility to rework my design on the new equipment.”

“… New… Equipment?”

I felt a drastic change in atmosphere at the moment I mentioned ‘new equipment.’ Wait, I’ve felt this before… I looked at Keroko apprehensively.

“Ano… Oji-chan?”

Crap! She only calls me that nowadays whenever she-

“CAN I TEST IT?!”

“Eh?”

I knew it.

“Can I? I promise I’ll be careful!”

“Wai-”

She was literally glowing right now, advancing towards me as if her discomfort a while ago was just a stupid ruse. Despite myself, I took an unintentional step backward from the excited girl.

“Please? I promise I won’t break them!”

“Now jus-”

“Can I? Oji-chan?”

Great. She’s using the puppy-eyes tactic! Just what’s with her and new gadgets? I glanced at the others. They were gaping speechlessly at Keroko’s 180 degree turn in mood. Well, everyone except Nanoha, who was smiling in embarrassment.

“PLEASE?!”

“H-hey.”

“muuu~”

Now to making cute sounds? And she’s levitating now! Does excitement really does this much to her? Wait. Does this mean she’ll do the-

“Pleeeaaaase?”

“Well, you see…”

After a few more moments of awkward silence from me, she put on a cute pouting face. Realistic forced tears starting to form on the sides of her eyes.

“Hmph! If you don’t, I’ll-...I'll-" *sob*

The crying tactic now?! I don't think I want to know what she's going to do next!

“ALRIGHT! Alright! I give up! I’ll give you a call when it’s finished! Just don’t start crying and make everyone come running after my neck!” I put my hands on her shoulders, pushing her downwards to make her land on the ground.

“Yay! Thank you, Oji-chan!”

I planted my face on my right palm with a big sigh if defeat. Why is it harder to say “No” to them when they are no longer children? In addition, just WHY are they acting like this when they are already young adults? Am I losing it? Ah well, I guess it’s forgivable. Just look at her. Like a kid who’s been given the best birthday present. I guess we can continue the discussion now.

“Anyway, before I go back, I would like to use some of the facilities here for some training. I need to exercise a bit.”

“No, you musn’t.”

“Huh?”

Nanoha was suddenly looking at me with that stern instructor’s glare. What’s going on?

“After what you’ve been through… Aurion-san… Oji-chan...”

If it’s Nanoha calling me that, that means-

“That’s a definite no-no!”

“Nanoh-”

“You have to REST!”

Her tone and stare made me gulp involuntarily. Yup, she’s a top class instructor, alright.

“Now see here. I wasn’t going to-”

“NO! You told me to stop stressing myself too much six years ago, but what are you doing now?”

“It’s not that bad.”

“You’ll get yourself killed!”

She was glowering cutely at me right now. Honestly, this girl. She’s actually scarier when she’s worried about you. The cuteness somehow amplifies the impact.

“Nanoha, I’m perfectly fine!”

“I’ll see to it myself! Let’s go to the clinic, Oji-chan!”

She went behind me and started pushing me towards the facility.

“Now wait a second, Nanoha! Listen to me! Whoa!”

“I’ll listen when we get there!”

“Hey, everyone! Don’t just stand there! Do something!”

It took a while, but we were somehow able to calm Nanoha down to avoid the unneeded medical check-up. It actually included Raising Heart asking if she was needed to set up!

Geez. Why do my ‘nieces’ aside from Hayate get weird when they call me Oji-chan? No wait, maybe just Nanoha and Keroko. Fate is still definitely normal.

My hand automatically sought out Fate’s head and gave it a pat. Don’t start copying these two, all right? Fate looked up at me with a strange expression. Huh?

“…Oji-chan…”

I felt my body stiffen when she mentioned that. The others all paused to watch. Taking a deep breath, I replied, “What is it, Fate?”

“… Well… It’s just… Uhmm…” She looked slightly nervous but determined nonetheless.

What’s going on? Don’t tell me you’ve been infected too! What are you going to do? Ask me to help you with paperwork?!

“How did you get Bardiche to speak with you using four sentences this time?”

“………..”

For the first time in several years, I wanted to drop facedown on the floor.

“Fate… I don’t know. Why don’t you ask him?”

There you go, Keroko-kun. Did it match your expectations? I'm sure Keroko-chan just made some jaws drop! And THAT's how the Aces deal with Aurion's seeming immunity to fanservice.

Poor Aurion, getting hit from 3 sides....

Satoshi:Man, sucks to be him....

Cipher:Yeah...everyday, too

Satoshi: I wouldn't last that long.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

More Joseth trivia this time round.

Spoiler:

- Although he isn't too anti-social within his extremely small circle of colleagues, his infamous response to non-friends who try to start a conversation with him generally end up hearing...

Joseth : I don't answer meaningless questions.
Joseth : Is that supposed to be a meaningful question?

Those who crossed the line of being annoying to being VERY annoying gets this 2 variations.

Joseth : Ever heard of shotgun reaction. *a kick to the groin*
Joseth : Shut. your. wapping. bitch. *deep throats her*

- He doesn't drink, he doesn't smoke, he never indulges in tomfoolery, and he never takes drugs, even non-lethal ones that's supposed to help him. In fact, he ONLY drinks mineral/boiled water.

- He goes out to the undergrounds and black-markets weekly to gather information from various sources, like hookers and stuff, but he never had sex with anyone of them, and rather gives them enough money to live a good life a whole 3 years in exchange for information, telling them to go fix their pitiful lives. However, when he goes back and see the same hooker he gives the money to still working there, he brutally beats them up and breaks every single finger to calm himself down.

- He's not weak towards alcohol, being able to drink when needed to as part of his work, but whenever he starts to get drunk, his character pulls A TOTAL 180. He turns very very social, to extents where people gets freaked out by it. Very few knows of it, and it never spread out beyond those few because...

- He's got a special book that specifically list down all the threat-worthy/bad-gossip material things of every "mildly important individual" he's met. Like how he once got Yuuno drunk and learned that he once slept and bathed together with Nanoha...stuff that would get the Air Force rookies ferret-crazy. Some are not even considered threat-worthy, but he keeps something for everyone anyway.

- The 3 things he hate the most are :
3. Stuff that cannot be explained by science and technology. AT. ALL. (( like Carim's prophecy, which he considers to be bullshit. ))
2. Artificial Intelligence (( Programs, A.I))
1. People who don't learn to help themselves.

- The 3 things he like the most are :
1. Himself.
2. Himself.
3. Technology.

- His OOC (( SUPER DERE DERE )) side when drunk... well, it's best seen and heard.

- He's only been in OOC mode twice in his life. Those who know consider it to be an exhaust of bottled up tsun-ness that occupies 99% of Joseth's social life.

- He doesnt' get TSAB's anti-conventional weapon phobia. In fact, he considers them to be works of art so much, he secretly retrofits some of his discovered weapons (( from his information webbing )) like missiles and cannons to his jets, helicopters, cars, and bikes, hidden like a true James Bond/Knight Rider vehicle.

- I am fond of the technological side of the human evolution/MACHINES are a man's romance!!! ~ TSUN/DERE

- Even in OOC mode, he's still as vain and arrogant as ever. Just expressed...differently.

He's an oxymoron....and James Bond cars FTW!

Originally Posted by LoweGear

Spoiler for Like this?:

...

*runs*

That's pretty funny....

Originally Posted by Kha

[Satashi]I knew my comments of making Kha = Jesus would rile everyone up! [/Satashi]

Btw, I was thinking that what if AO and AT ended up on the same person? Imagine the amount of power he'll have. And that's how I intend to drag Serge into the FW conflict; the Nobles target him to extract AO from him; And the Rukia trial came to mind as to how to go about that.

As for Kha + AT, it's responsible for most of the possible phyrric endings of the New Velka harem game fic series, so it'll depend on how I play things out.
You sure?! I'm still needing more data, but my plans for the first conflict with the Numbers (which I've compared to GMs and mass production cannon fodder) ends in a stalemate. Remember, Kha's the lowest ranked of the Aces, at S, when everyone else is S+ and above.

His team is ranked below him - Kaempfer would've been S if not for his illness, current rank A; Sofia A+; Artei A-; Allison is C+.

Now against the Vaste Lordo Lutecia and the other 4 Relyckers, it's going to take all 5 of the 21st, and they'd still be unable to defeat the Vaste Lordo even then; only at the parallel battle during the final episodes of StrikerS do I have such plans. I'm studying Erio's Relic girls to ascertain their fighting styles and stuff, but no doubt Kha's going to need more upgrades if he is going to defeat the girls.

And... which Kha shook the Nanohaverse apart? Not the one assigned to protect the OC thread's. Not yet at least, no concrete plans.

A poll:

How do you guys find Artei X Teana?

If Kha was Jesus.... anyway, Artei X Teana....DO WANT!


@USB: Triplets? What's next, quadruplets?.....you know what, forget I said that *takes out sunglasses while I use a Neutralizer* ....so, how was today?

[Aaron008R]

Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

@Aaron008R: Keroko-chan... being cute?! <shivers> AND LEVITATING? Kowai yo... And Instructor Mode Nanoha - almost impossible to resist - you'd have to be a real jerk to beat that. WHY is it that girls seem cuter when they're oh so concerned about you, Onii-chan? (inside joke)

Who knows...
And THIS is why I portrayed Keroko-chan like that. She gives of the impression of being tsun-tsun when she really isn't. I'm trying to help Keroko-kun with this problem.

Originally Posted by Saint X

@ all latest queries:

Antimatter, Antimagic, Antienergy - they are just the inverse of the known foundations of our material world - matter, magic and energy...

- it's just a simple fact: something has a counterpart- even the multiverse has an inverse - only the fine line called 'relativity' is keeping the two from ever turning back the multiverse into nothing.

Spoiler for WHO CAN? - SAMPLE PREVIEW OF THE FINAL BATTLE IN ALTERNATES II:

Subaru and Ashton (In Level 3, Glowing): WE CAN!!!

Fangwang (Last two Saiga out - Idaric Armor and Inselion Blade - armor protecing AT): This is the same as the last time... THIS IS NOT THE TIME THAT I'LL BE BEATEN BY SOME FATED COUPLE AGAIN!!! I WILL WIPE THIS MULTIVERSE CLEAN AND DESTROY ALL OF YOU FOR IT!!!

Ashton: he's going nuts... that punch we dealt him a few months ago must still be stinging...

Subaru: really... looks like he's still feeling the impact to me...

Both partners laugh.

Ashton: You know Subaru, since we might die, i might as well confess something to you.

---

And yes, after Fangwang and his level of minions are pushed back into the red zone, Kha can go back to being the top magi...

And for now, since FW is still not spotted inside the green zone, you can relax.

- Why did i have the feeling that i just shook the Nanohaverse apart?

to keep us back on track- and keep our minds off the unknown dangers of the Red Zone...

UP NEXT SOON!: The Nanohaic Version of 3 Toraha Combat Waitresses!

Your AlternateS principles are way more extreme compared to the relatively above-average power Nanohaverse. Thanks for the 'relativity' discussion, by the way. You gave me even more ideas!

Originally Posted by Erio

Subaru and Ashton, huh? So... Subaru and Kha are the last hope of humanity? THAT'S NOT ENOUGH!!! lol

What about the other Haxx characters?

Originally Posted by USB500

Am I missing something here?

Aurion is immune to conventional fanservice and moe (Even DERESignum going MOU YAMETE! AH!~~~~~~ DAME!!!). The most he'll do is make a comment saying how cute the subject is and just plain smile like there're no problems in the world. (Well... He still does get into trouble with the audience charging in shouting, "HOW DARE YOOOUUUUUU!" Sleeping Lyrical style.) Only the female Aces (and perhaps Tesla) seem to be capable of dealing with this. It's a lot more subtle and concise. The bastard is just soooo resilient! Though he gets rather Kyon-like in times of ridiculousness.

Originally Posted by Kha

Btw, I was thinking that what if AO and AT ended up on the same person? Imagine the amount of power he'll have. And that's how I intend to drag Serge into the FW conflict; the Nobles target him to extract AO from him; And the Rukia trial came to mind as to how to go about that.

Who'll be Ichigo then? Keroko?

As for Kha + AT, it's responsible for most of the possible phyrric endings of the New Velka harem game fic series, so it'll depend on how I play things out.
You sure?! I'm still needing more data, but my plans for the first conflict with the Numbers (which I've compared to GMs and mass production cannon fodder) ends in a stalemate. Remember, Kha's the lowest ranked of the Aces, at S, when everyone else is S+ and above.

His team is ranked below him - Kaempfer would've been S if not for his illness, current rank A; Sofia A+; Artei A-; Allison is C+.

Like the UBW scenario?
By the way, when will you release those endings!!! I want to see!

How do you guys find Artei X Teana?

Sounds good!

Originally Posted by Satty

Poor Aurion, getting hit from 3 sides....

Satoshi:Man, sucks to be him....

Cipher:Yeah...everyday, too

Satoshi: I wouldn't last that long.

He had that coming for quite a while.