Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha Character Creation and Discussion

[LimitedEternal]

[Tesla Trooper]Backlog Breaker: 2000 wvolts coming up![/Tesla Trooper]

Originally Posted by Keroko

That it not to say we can't insert some form of Grey Knights, just... don't take the 'army of genetical super soldiers' aproach. Oh, and no high-tech Master Chief armor either.

GAH!! I was gonna make a Grey Knight reverse-engineer! My ideas are being DRAAAAAAAAINED!!!!!!!!!!!! *dramatic organ music*

*ahem*

So, ah, what's up with this Holy Belka stuff? I think I missed something way back. Sounds really awesome, I'd kinda like a catch-up though.

[Erio]

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Bringing that up gives me the idea of Nanoha versus crazed Fate. Anyone?

And post it in the FF thread..

APPROVED! Though I wonder if those guys will even pay attention to your piece, since its not NXF.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Oi oi...abandoning me already? Btw will hotlinking a pic that shows a LOT of skin but covers all the important parts get me into trouble? If so how about if I just post the link to the image instead of hotlinking? HMm...maybe I should just PM a mod about this. I need an image come back for the one FlameSparkZ smacked us with.

Haha, you'll probably get in trouble for that... though maybe if you just post the link without any kind of thumbnail it should be fine. Even the Nanoha image thread is quite unsafe sometimes, though I dont know if the very NSFW pics get deleted afterwards by mods.

Originally Posted by Nightengale

Speak of the devil, it's just released.

Of course. It's huge though.

lol Yeah, I just noticed.

I'll start downloading a few episodes to see how it is.

Originally Posted by USB500

[B]
let me do some reviews:

Spoiler for secret worlds:

• Mai's secret worlds will consist of hawt yuri action privacy, goth clothings and voodoo spells.
• Frieda's secret world is built around eyeglasses (and serious cosplay, too)
• Lulu-chan's secret world is the only place she can appreciate her fondness towards Kamen Rider universe.
• Ginga's secret world is all about bananas.

...

Bananas?!

And a small correction of Mai's secret world... it consists of hawt yuri HAREM action. ...and that would make it the same as Gwen's secret world...

*runs*

Originally Posted by USB500

Spoiler for HOLY SHI-:

OUR SECRET WORLD
CHAPTER 1

Spoiler for wild fantasy:

Ginga and Cinque were holding hands in suggestive way, their night gowns barely covering their figures, beautifully created by the Hands of the Creator. Sparkles and bubbles could also be seen filling the room, as the two women continued holding onto each other, oblivious of what happened around them.

Cinque blushed. “I’m scared…” she murmured and clung onto Ginga. “What should I do? This is my first experience, so…”

Ginga giggled at the girl’s timidity. “Don’t be afraid, Cinque-chan,” she spoke and carefully held Cinque beneath her arms. “This is just between the two of us. No one will know. Right?”

“Gin-nee…” Cinque murmured and gasped when Ginga brought her onto the bed, covering them with the white blanket as they lay down together. “Gin-nee, what are you doing?”

“I told you I’d show you my secret world, didn’t I?” Ginga spoke and traced a finger down her nose.

“Gin-nee, you’re embarrassing me…” Cinque mumbled and shivered when Ginga ran her fingers down her spine. “Ah, Gin-nee, dame…”

“Don’t worry, I’ll be gentle…” Ginga whispered and brushed a strand of silver hair that was running down Cinque’s face. “Cinque-chan… you look beautiful…”

Cinque turned away from the former Number 13 in embarrassment. “Gin-nee, mou…”

Ginga giggled. She turned so she was looking down at her, reaching for her hands so they were holding each other in intimate proximity. “Let me admire the beauty just a bit closer…” she said and bent down.

“Gin-nee…” Cinque closed her eyes, her lips automatically parted as to accept the special gift.

Nove blushed in a sudden. She never thought she would face things like “secret world” ever since she was adopted into the TSAB. It’s not that she had frequently shared her intimate moment with Cinque (the thought made her blush again), but the moment Frieda and Gwendolyn mentioned the word “secret world” when they were having their lunch (and was overheard by Nove as she headed to the cafeteria) made her go wild in pure fantasy. “Who should I talk to?” she murmured and looked around her in anxiety.

“Well, well, if it isn’t Nove herself.”

She turned around. Being the only person present in the cafeteria, she felt slightly nervous when the Wind Talker Hikki and his Unison Device approached the table. “Can we sit here?” Hikki asked.

“Err… yes, sure,” Nove said.

The Master/Servant couple took a seat next to Nove and started talking to each other in Narulian language. Nove could not understand a word of the conversation, but took the time to observe the closeness between Hikki and Widuri.

“Can I… can I ask both of you a question?”

The couple stopped talking. “Yes? What will the question be, Nove-chan?” Widuri asked as she turned to her.

Nove gulped. She took a deep breath, nodded and braved herself to ask: “Do you have a secret world of your own?”

Silence. Neither Hikki nor Widuri was saying a world. The only reaction they did was to give Nove a very deep look of ‘huh’ as an answer.

“What do you mean by secret world, Nove-chan?” Widuri asked.

“Well, you see…” Nove said and fiddled with her fingers in embarrassment. “Just now I overheard Frieda and her friend talking about their secret world, and I was kind of… wondering…”

Hikki and Widuri looked at each other. Then they turned back at Nove and said in unison: “nope, we don’t understand what you’re talking of.”

“WRRYYY!!!!!”

Widuri squealed in a sudden and jumped into Hikki’s arms. “Hikki-sama, I’m scared!!” she cried out and clung onto him.

Hikki, instead, was not amused. “Zafira, will you stop doing that?” he mumbled.

The wolf-man grinned and brushed his thumb on his nose in arrogant manner. “The same cannot be said by the most intimately in love couple ever to live in the bureau,” he said (and made Hikki twitch in dismay and Widuri blush in greatness). “Besides, brother, real men never need to have secret worlds.”

“So do you know?” Nove asked.

“Of course I have,” Zafira bolstered. “As a matter of fact, I know the darkest side of Meister Hayate’s secret world. I was thinking of telling it to Hikki, but since you’re already here-” The wolf-man twitched in horror when he felt a murderous aura enveloping him from behind. “On the other hand, I should probably drop that suggestion,” he said and scrammed before Vita chased him around the cafeteria.

Nove became ever more confused. Hikki and Widuri were not telling, and Zafira was chased after before he could spill out the secret. “If no one is willing to help,” she pondered. “Then I have to do this on my own.” She later took a look on Hikki and Widuri, the former soothing the woman who was crying in his arms. “I wonder how their secret world would look like…”

“You’re so childish,” Hikki was heard saying, “just like when you fell sick after playing in the rain. Remember when I had to spoon-feed you?”

“Mou, Hikki-sama, you’re so evil…” Widuri mumbled and slapped his chest.

Nove blinked. “Playing in the rain?”

Spoiler for wild fantasy again:

“Widuri, say ‘AA!’!” Hikki said as he was spoon-feeding a bedridden Widuri with pudding. Lazily Hikki complied and ate the pudding. “Just because you’re a Unison Device doesn’t mean you have the immunity against the weathers. Now you fell sick.”

“Mou, Hikki-sama, you don’t have to be angry at me,” Widuri mumbled and ate the pudding.

“It’s because I’m your Master. Therefore I have the responsibility over you,” Hikki replied and gave her a spoonful of pudding. “Now, Widuri.”

Widuri sighed. “Haii. Aa-”

Hikki seized her lips, pressing his mouth onto hers in a kiss that was hard as it was devouring. Widuri gasped at the bold action, and moaned in both shock and pleasure as the kiss deepened. Slowly, they sank onto the bed, interlocked in each other’s arms as they shared the sweet nectar of love that came with their kisses.

“Hikki-sama, I’m so cold…” Widuri murmured. “Please… make me warm…”

“You don’t have to say it…” Hikki whispered and seized her lips again. “You don’t have to…”

Widuri responded fully to his passion, her body moving provocatively against him…

Nove blushed. “So they like playing in the rain and getting wet together…”

// to be continued //

Damn, the wild fantasies.... Ginga & Cinque, especially.....

*plugs nostrils*

Well, that was a good start. Just hope I won't have to go that far in describing the wild fantasies...

And I think Nove's been watching too much of those 18+ anime DVDs

lol Nove's imagination is awesome. But Ginga X Cinque... And Zafira with some sweet screentime as always.

And hey, could this be that Gwen and Frieda have their own secret world as well...?

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

WWWWWWAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

But some parts are abit weird though...

Like which?

Originally Posted by Tormenk

"Bakana!"

"Banana!"

*surrounding party gradually turns white at the supremely lame pun*


Somebody stop meh from bringing Choco Love and Ryu into Outer Canaan!

Haha, and who are those two?

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Just saw episode 26 subbed
I know I shouldn't but....

Spoiler for BreakerS Epilogue:

Enforcer Maren:
After Riot Force 6 was dissolved, Maren returned to duty in the Interstellar Navigation Bureau.
But this time, she's not alone...


Agent's Aide/Knight Minawa Koji:
He became Maren's partner in the INB, their team work is highly valued among the Bureau.
The two are always seen together, there are even rumors that they plan on getting married.


Private First Class Minawa Yui:
Yui transfered back to the Air Force, and also became Nanoha's Aide.
She plans on becoming an Instructor like Nanoha, though some say it'll just be an excuse to make people cosplay...


Number 13 - Treize:
Being a fast learner, she quickly adapted to society.
While her sisters are still in rehabilitation, she chose to be with Erio and Caro in the Environment Protection Bureau and often visits Lutecia.
She is making progress in learning to express her emotions.

It doesn't spoil the end (except for that phrase ), so I guess it's okay to post it
*runs*

Treize going with Erio and Caro is WIN.

[FieryAeon]

Originally Posted by Erio

Haha, you'll probably get in trouble for that... though maybe if you just post the link without any kind of thumbnail it should be fine. Even the Nanoha image thread is quite unsafe sometimes, though I dont know if the very NSFW pics get deleted afterwards by mods.

Guess that means I should be ready to change the hotlinked image I just posted to a hyperlink. *cowers in fear of the mods*

[Erio]

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Guess that means I should be ready to change the hotlinked image I just posted to a hyperlink. *cowers in fear of the mods*

I was just going to comment about that one... That's not too NSFW... I mean...compared to Gwen and Mai's "private" pic... *ahem*

[FieryAeon]

Finally watched the fansubbed episode 26. Guess I have a little bit more material to work with.

[Tk3997]

Originally Posted by Kha

Now I really really wanna get this off the ground at least! And I got the PERFECT unison device for him!

"Do keep your head down. There's two of us in here now..."

Just want to know if you’ve read the Halo novels? Because they give a hell of allot of background and development for the MC character and a number of other Spartans. More about the AIs too, and the process is indeed almost unsion’ish in aspects in the novels the AI takes partial control of his suit and boosts his reaction time by basiclly reading his mind and bypassing his nervous system, with her installed he was so fast he could dodge the aim of guns and deflect an AT missile with his forearm. In addition to the god like hacking obviously.

Anyway got to run backlog preening later.

[Keroko]

Tired... why must project deadlines come so soon? I barely have much time for anything besides the ocasional post during boring class hours.

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

W-W-What phrase?

Err...it's in the epilogue, in Koji's section, you can't miss it

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Sonotorida!

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

What are you talking about ?

But yeah, it'll be difficult Unless you guys have MSN messenger ?

Yeah, I do...

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I'm skipping ahead of plan, I'll be focusing on Erio + Lutecia + Caro + Koji + Maren + Yui + One new non-destroyer OC of mine... Which reminds me...

*Drags LoweGear to create new OC*

Originally Posted by Keroko

I already have a Loli Keroko, remember?

Spoiler for and in school uniform, too:

Thanks for the heads up, though.

It doesn't matter how many times I see that picture, I still go "KAWAII!!!"

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Spoiler for The extreme NSFW I mentioned earlier. Risque??:

Spoiler for Ok fine not like its that bad anyway:

I got that whole image, and it's soooo cute
Fel is one of my favorites characters

Originally Posted by Erio

Treize going with Erio and Caro is WIN.

Yeah

Originally Posted by Keroko

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

WIN!

Ok, the BreakerS Halloween drawing is like 3/4 done, all that's left is to draw Treize in ******'s clothes
But that'll have to wait for tomorrow...too tired to finish it
*runs*

[Chaos2Frozen]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Chaos2Frozen. Time to snap: 17 hours, 49 minutes.

Darn, I was off quite a bit.

I didn't snap But I was very close to just spilling it all out

It's not really anything dirty, but it would made people grin till the cows come home...

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Although I have no idea what he intends to do with Lutecia and Yui in between.. >_>

You all KNOW what's going to happen to Lutecia when any of us here put her and Erio/Caro together...

As for Yui... I've already let FSZ know... Just waiting for his reply

Originally Posted by Keroko

Oh come now, we all knew what he meant by that. Why do you think he went through that spoiler madness?

I did it for fun actually

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Nonono, he was just bringing up the idea. Although to reveal any more would be spoiler-ish right now.

Not only that, I still don't have anything coherent plan Other than the characters involved...

[Tormenk]

Gotta run since lessons start at 8 and its pouring over here.

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Because I was too bored...Therefore.

Spoiler for Typemoon doujin game:

Spoiler for RAWR 1:

Spoiler for RAWR 2!! For lack of better words -_-':

Spoiler for RAWR 3:

Spoiler for RAWR 4:

Spoiler for ok enough of the stupid noise -_-':

Spoiler for The extreme NSFW I mentioned earlier. Risque??:

Spoiler for Ok fine not like its that bad anyway:

Disclaimer: I will not take responsibility if extreme crack emerges from this thread onces again. *runs*

Now I gotta post these

Vids of the FSN doujin game Fatal/Fake:

Spoiler for videos:

Originally Posted by Erio

APPROVED! Though I wonder if those guys will even pay attention to your piece, since its not NXF.

It'll be completely ignored by most while some will pick it apart and say what's wrong with the story, choppy etc.

Or I'll just throw some NF in for cheap shot and draw their attention in before move in for the kill.

Haha, and who are those two?

Ryu of the Wooden Sword and Choco Love from Shaman King.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Tired... why must project deadlines come so soon? I barely have much time for anything besides the ocasional post during boring class hours.

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

Sasuga Keroko-kun! NAISU

[Kha]

Originally Posted by Keroko

*Kha gets jumped by the corpse-camping Keroko-tan*

Well, I really wasn't planning to insert the entire gene-seed for armies thing in Legend of Ancient Belka. There is a limit to the amount of insertions we can do (While writing the Primarch background, I was initially planning to insert the chapters too, but I scrapped it because it made no sense.) and to be honest, it ruins the uniqueness of the Primarchs.

That it not to say we can't insert some form of Grey Knights, just... don't take the 'army of genetical super soldiers' aproach. Oh, and no high-tech Master Chief armor either.

Oh if the supergenes approach is out, makes no sense for the Cleric-knights to be such at least, save for the few born to lead ones like your take on the Primarchs.

I thought everyone used reasonably geared Knight Armor back then. () No survive a fall from 30,000 ft Mjolnir's, but warded power armor nonetheless.

So take the gene-seeds and immortality out, keep the rest? At least we would still see a difference between the old Cleric-knights and the modern ones.

Originally Posted by Keroko

You'd be better of borrowing Aeus' nerf bat and simply whack the holy spells themselves. These limits seem to be too easilly removed.

Ok. I'll just drop it and use the old approach. At the very least, it is Kha who doesn't want to use his skills in duels, but he'll be able to use it to teach.

Originally Posted by Keroko

So... what does that mean, exactly?

Darn the post failed. Basically, the UD will be refered to as Sak-chan while the more mature version will be refered to as Saber.

Originally Posted by Keroko

I already have a Loli Keroko, remember?

Spoiler for and in school uniform, too:

Thanks for the heads up, though.

I know. Just wanted to see if you wanted to drop that for Vivio too.

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

GAH!! I was gonna make a Grey Knight reverse-engineer! My ideas are being DRAAAAAAAAINED!!!!!!!!!!!! *dramatic organ music*

*ahem*

So, ah, what's up with this Holy Belka stuff? I think I missed something way back. Sounds really awesome, I'd kinda like a catch-up though.

They've been around ever since the thread started, with the first being my OCs Kha Alexei Testarossa and Sophia Alexei. Kha of the Licht von Belka is a Cleric-knight, which can be said to be a modern day Grey-knight with different emphasis of battlegear, lax doctrine and serves the Church rather than the Seiou. Sophia is a Knight-sister who in turn is not too unlike from a Battle Sister of the Adepta Sororitas. In fact, her whole faction, of which only the Convent survive into the modern age, used to be called Adeptae Belkarum.

The "Rebuilt of StrikerS" will bring in several of the next generation Holy Belka, namely Yui Hiro, Gimmy Milfuelle, Amuro Gray, and Foy Rokker for the Cleric-knights and Keira Yamato, Arthura Zara and Asuka Shinryu for the Knight-sisters.

Go read their profiles from this linker page. Kha's full dossier is down, but if you want to read 48 pages of cheese, I can reupload it for you. Otherwise, his summary is here. Sophia's incomplete profile is there as well.

Originally Posted by Tk3997

Just want to know if you’ve read the Halo novels? Because they give a hell of allot of background and development for the MC character and a number of other Spartans. More about the AIs too, and the process is indeed almost unsion’ish in aspects in the novels the AI takes partial control of his suit and boosts his reaction time by basiclly reading his mind and bypassing his nervous system, with her installed he was so fast he could dodge the aim of guns and deflect an AT missile with his forearm. In addition to the god like hacking obviously.

Anyway got to run backlog preening later.

Haven't yet. I guess I should once I have time.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

The corpse-camper has a form!!!

*Ion Chanon >>>>>> Creator-san*

Originally Posted by Tormenk

Ryu of the Wooden Sword and Choco Love from Shaman King.

What's stopping you? After all, we already have Asakura Yoh and Anna in the thread...

(eyes Kluize and Anita)

[FlameSparkZ]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You all KNOW what's going to happen to Lutecia when any of us here put her and Erio/Caro together...

As for Yui... I've already let FSZ know... Just waiting for his reply

You want to play with Yui...but I haven't even got to her arc yet (lol, this makes BreakerS sound like it's a visual novel )

Well...bed time...

*runs*

[Kha]

Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

You want to play with Yui...but I haven't even got to her arc yet (lol, this makes BreakerS sound like it's a visual novel )

Well...bed time...

*runs*

Don't feel alone... At least for NBC, it's quite like a Type-Moon visual, with a tame SFW main line and unlockable, mindblowing bits that make you go WTF IS THAT EVEN FANON?!

I'll leave it to your imaginations for what that means.

Belka 00 is too shounen to be a eroge visual novel. I built it like those Gundam visuals that includes playable action bits.

...but DSGK is definitely visual novel based. I've always wondered if GAR and eroge could mix... Even includes unlockable xenophilia...

[USB500]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

BTW, thanks for the send off from everyone. I'll be back sooner than expected... Around Saturday, maybe.

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Originally Posted by FlameSparkZ

Spoiler for BreakerS Epilogue:

Enforcer Maren:
After Riot Force 6 was dissolved, Maren returned to duty in the Interstellar Navigation Bureau.
But this time, she's not alone...


Agent's Aide/Knight Minawa Koji:
He became Maren's partner in the INB, their team work is highly valued among the Bureau.
The two are always seen together, there are even rumors that they plan on getting married.


Private First Class Minawa Yui:
Yui transfered back to the Air Force, and also became Nanoha's Aide.
She plans on becoming an Instructor like Nanoha, though some say it'll just be an excuse to make people cosplay...


Number 13 - Treize:
Being a fast learner, she quickly adapted to society.
While her sisters are still in rehabilitation, she chose to be with Erio and Caro in the Environment Protection Bureau and often visits Lutecia.
She is making progress in learning to express her emotions.

It doesn't spoil the end (except for that phrase ), so I guess it's okay to post it
*runs*

You know what, I think I should ask for permission to include them in my next Diary of a Wind Talker arc. Especially Treize; somehow I had the urge to write a story about her.

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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

You know... I shouldn't be saying this but...

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

Spoiler:

I've got an idea... >.>

Spoiler:

For all of them...

Spoiler:

Be it Yui, Lutecia or Maren...

But I would need to collaborate with FSZ and Tormenk...

Koji-kun has learned the secret of Sonic Move?

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Originally Posted by LoweGear

Not me

*eyes somebody else*

Originally Posted by LoweGear

... and free time for... what?

For THIS and THAT in PRIVACY, I think?

Originally Posted by LoweGear

From the DVD Special Episode 26. No raws out AFAIK.

Spoiler for Here's some... exploitable scenes from the episode::

Exploitable scenes are EXPLOITABLE.

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Originally Posted by Reiji Tabibito

<sighs; head in hands> Squash one pervert, and another takes his place - it's like trying to fight the damned Hydra.

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Originally Posted by FieryAeon

I wake up and see this!! WIN!!!

You woke up just to see that? Did your body set its alarm clock to visit this thread or something as the first thing to do?

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Originally Posted by LoweGear

More like...

When you have Bluecheesium, you draw Scrin

HAXXXX!!!!!

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Originally Posted by Keroko

I already have a Loli Keroko, remember?

Spoiler for and in school uniform, too:

Thanks for the heads up, though.

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Originally Posted by Erio

APPROVED! Though I wonder if those guys will even pay attention to your piece, since its not NXF.

Are u talking about my story?

Originally Posted by Erio

...

Bananas?!

And a small correction of Mai's secret world... it consists of hawt yuri HAREM action. ...and that would make it the same as Gwen's secret world...

*runs*

So it consists of hawt yuri HAREM action?

Let's hope Nove doesn't have to forcibly join Mai's secret world.

Originally Posted by Erio

lol Nove's imagination is awesome. But Ginga X Cinque... And Zafira with some sweet screentime as always.

And hey, could this be that Gwen and Frieda have their own secret world as well...?

I don't know about Gwen, but Frieda's world consists of glasses and serious cosplay weapons. Lots of them.

You want some hawt Ginga x Cinque?

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Originally Posted by Keroko

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

Where's the leek? Or does Keroko-tan need one?

Halloween Special: 70% complete. BTW, The Great Yuunodas is going to make his debut again.

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen

I'm skipping ahead of plan, I'll be focusing on Erio + Lutecia + Caro + Koji + Maren + Yui + One new non-destroyer OC of mine... Which reminds me...

*Drags LoweGear to create new OC*

What you need me for?

Originally Posted by Tormenk

We need a bomb to draw in the full invasion then.

A very big one

And probably K*** too

Originally Posted by Kha

I wanted to do something like since I watched the raw! Now with the subs out... I'd might be ruining everything on all 3 storylines...

...unless I'm good enough to pull a GL prologue and keep you guys on your toes all season. If not... Hmm...

26 is still on tap... Maybe when I watch it, things will change...

Both me and my OC are masters of Tracing.

Which brings me to several proposed changes to lore running in the Play Test Realms for "Rebuilt of StrikerS":

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None of the Holy Belka can use their Holy abilities in mock duels or unjustified combats.

Unjustified combats means any battle not sanctioned by the Light. While that means logically being unable to commit murder using the Light, the gray area comes in defining what "unjustified combats" mean. This brings more emphasis to what the Light is, a santified power borrowed from a mysterious higher being. Logically you'd have to abide by his rules, not yours.

This nerf is deemed appropiate for the overpoweredness Holy can be, having incredible defences, recovery and dispelling power while not sacrificing much in the DPS department. It will also shift emphasis to the characters' currently redundant side skills like Kha's Whispers and Tracing and Sophia's archery and penchant for trinkets. With this nerf, I can return some of the DPS that the Holy magic system deserved without pushing power levels too high.

This is what makes teaching Holy Belka so difficult: Few have the knack to even command a spark of Light. Also, from the get-go, the trainee has to be thrown into supervised live combat instead of fakes or on each other. As such, the Holy Belka classes teach their young via hands-on assignments and attachments to currently active Knights. They are also given greater autonomy early on, with their Meisters serving as mentors when it comes to wielding the Light. This will be reflected in how the young Knight-sisters and Cleric-knights have so much more freedom and actual missions as compared to the Forwards.

As expected, this will give me more literary freedom, and some interesting challenges for the young Belka Knights.

The reason for using Chaos to overcome the lack of nuking of Holy remains.

While point DPS will be returned as sharper energy blades and guided attacks, widespread nuking power remains solely the realm of mortal and Chaos, and so Kha's disability will force him to use Chaos and unlock more of his progression to finding meaning.

Sophia is not blind.

Arguably the most drastic change to an OC of mine, and yet it doesn't seem to have much consequences. Megane came back alive and therefore turned everything upside down for Sophia's backstory that would tie her to Lutecia. It will make her Otome arcs look better. Also, by the way I've done Sophia so far, she's practically not blind, so what's the point? Might as well drop it. I'll deal with the "living with a disability" more in the DSGK storyline (working name "Clan'z").

At least that's the idea for the lore change. The PTR is still divided in the middle regarding this somewhat drastic change. What do you guys think?

Regional Guard is institutionalized as Saint Guard

Nothing new here, just a compiled announcement of the changes so far. It will thus appear that there isn't just 1 coy defending Midchilda from attack, and it will explore the degree of autonomy of the Belka SAR. Another shot at political drama.

Sak-chan and Sakura

Just to reinforce earlier announcements to allow for differentiation between Saint Saber Sakura Zaki and UD Sakurazaki. In time, there will be a further difference as Sakura prefers being called "Saber" like other Servants to come. Bastion likewise won't be using his real name but "Aniki" or his class name "Berserker".

New Skills!

Artei and Kaempfer have their skill trees revitalized! Look out for more "HWA-TAAAA!" yodels from "Kenshiro"! The degree of their deadzone shafting will be reduced! The skills of the "Schattenjaeger" mage class will be unvealed! And first Hero Class, Death Knight, is released!

New Endgame Content!

The Black Temple Sanckt Labyrinth, or what was once the grand Sanckt Alexei Church, will be open to all comers and Knights-to-be!

Other suggestions be it changes or petitions?

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Yeah I'm bored...

I don't see Moderships flying around...

Lotsa changes there So Sakurazaki is now a full fledged Saber now And Aniki?!

And yes, we seem to have forgotten that Sophia's supposed to be blind

Originally Posted by FieryAeon

Because I was too bored...Therefore.

Spoiler for Typemoon doujin game:

Spoiler for RAWR 1:

Spoiler for RAWR 2!! For lack of better words -_-':

Spoiler for RAWR 3:

Spoiler for RAWR 4:

Spoiler for ok enough of the stupid noise -_-':

Spoiler for The extreme NSFW I mentioned earlier. Risque??:

Spoiler for Ok fine not like its that bad anyway:

Disclaimer: I will not take responsibility if extreme crack emerges from this thread onces again. *runs*

Looks SRW-ish there Chibi-Saber

And that NSFW pic

Needs more down below

*runs*

Originally Posted by LimitedEternal

So, ah, what's up with this Holy Belka stuff? I think I missed something way back. Sounds really awesome, I'd kinda like a catch-up though.

While Kha's already given the specifics for Holy Belka, basically from the time this thread started, we've imagined the Ancient Belkan empire as something akin to the Imperium of Man, and so Holy Belka was born.

Originally Posted by Erio

Haha, you'll probably get in trouble for that... though maybe if you just post the link without any kind of thumbnail it should be fine. Even the Nanoha image thread is quite unsafe sometimes, though I dont know if the very NSFW pics get deleted afterwards by mods.

Only blatant NSFW pics, like overt axion As long as it's tame, the mods won't even bother.

Originally Posted by Erio

And a small correction of Mai's secret world... it consists of hawt yuri HAREM action. ...and that would make it the same as Gwen's secret world...

*runs*

Originally Posted by Erio

And hey, could this be that Gwen and Frieda have their own secret world as well...?

WANT

Originally Posted by Keroko

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

Naisu, fits her perfectly

Originally Posted by USB500

For THIS and THAT in PRIVACY, I think?

Aaah sooouuu ka

Originally Posted by USB500

You woke up just to see that? Did your body set its alarm clock to visit this thread or something as the first thing to do?

Strangely, I find myself doing much the same thing in the mornings

Originally Posted by USB500

So it consists of hawt yuri HAREM action?

Let's hope Nove doesn't have to forcibly join Mai's secret world.

Oh, she doesn't need to be forced...

*whistles*

*runs*

[Liingo]

Originally Posted by Aaron008R

Wish I could stay and chat... But sadly, I'll be gone for about five days.()

Make sure there's mountains of backlog for me when I come back, okay?
Expect some new material when I return.

*waves*
We'll see you once you get back... Although I might not be here since exams are next week

Originally Posted by Kha

Both me and my OC are masters of Tracing.

Is that what it's called now...

Originally Posted by Keroko

Tired... why must project deadlines come so soon? I barely have much time for anything besides the ocasional post during boring class hours.

Managed to finish Keroko-tan, though:

Nice work

Originally Posted by USB500

Where's the leek? Or does Keroko-tan need one?

Leek? Like this leek?

*waves at Fuyu *
Looks like my comments in FF thread dragged you back in for a moment

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by Liingo

*waves at Fuyu *
Looks like my comments in FF thread dragged you back in for a moment

*waves back*

Hi, just in passing And yeah, I wanted to see this crazy old place again (It's insane how much one can miss this type of environement ^^)

Unfortunately, real-life matters took over once summer ended and now I'm stuck working like crazy Not really funny because I've stopped doing many things (like poking my head at my own risks in here) but at least it hasn't chaged much ^^.

*fades back into the pile of work she should've done before* I shall take my leave here...

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Liingo

Leek? Like this leek?

What the- ?! :t witch:

Originally Posted by Liingo

*waves at Fuyu *
Looks like my comments in FF thread dragged you back in for a moment

*waves at well*

Why you ain't here no more anyway?

[Fuyu no Sora]

Originally Posted by LoweGear

*waves at well*

Why you ain't here no more anyway?

*waves back too* Let me get back to work darn it! (<---- feels lazy and doesn't wanna work at all)

Look at my response above and you'll find out (><)

[LoweGear]

Originally Posted by Fuyu no Sora

*waves back too* Let me get back to work darn it!

Look at my response above and you'll find out (><)

Work? What's that? Is it tasty?